Okay, I've kind of abandoned this story; I admit it. and I'm really really sorry. I know that that's bad etiquette. But it was my first story, and now I've matured a bit, and I can see… it pretty much sucks. There's no plot or anything to keep it moving.
However. This does make it easy to mold into a real story. It's a beginning. So, if there are any writers out there who are still just venturing into the writing world, and need something to get started with…. Knock yourself out.
You can take this and do whatever you want with it. Butcher it. Beat it. Turn it into a decent story; whatever. Just let me know first, kay? I wanna see how yours comes along. :)
Alrighty then, that's about it! Byes!
-michelle
ps: my other stories are all oneshots or on temp. hiatus, but if you wanted to drop by and check 'em out and maybe throw a review my way, it'd be greatly appreciated!