Ok so I read Nickstar1991's review and I think he was right :P I guess I am sort of rushing and I haven't given any outside information it just starts and ends somewhere SO I have a few options I am willing to take
1. Explain backdrop, etc. in next chapter
2. Stop the story
3. Stop the story and completely re-write
4. Start a new story
5. Fix up the first seven chapters
6. Give up story and drop it, delete it and start new (kind of like option 2)
So review your opinion at this chapter! I know my writing sucks :P So I'm willing to take everyone's advice.
P.S Thanks Nickstar1991 for giving me the review. Wasn't expecting it to be that straightforward but that is what I wanted I guess. So thank you, and I will probably put everything on hold for a while :P
And thanks everyone for the reviews, (keep reviewing I need to know what you think)