I'm so sorry to do this, but I was just rereading my story and noticed that my character is a Mary Sue. So I'm redoing it and hopefully it will be better when I finish it. I'm trying to immediately start this, but my schedule is so busy it might take a while. Hopefully my next attempt won't disappoint both you and I, but I give you no promises. Again, I'm sorry about the need for an author's note.
