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A/N Okay so this lesson was about getting the right amount of spice. The assignment was to write the same scene with different levels of spice. So many thanks to kitchmill for the excellent lesson which can be found on the PTB blog and the challenging assignment. Please leave me your constructive criticism :)
~bland~
He kissed his way down my body leaving goose bumps in his wake. The pace was slow, languid and teasing. I trembled for him. The desire within me pooled between my legs as I watched that pretty head work it's way down my body. By the time he fastened his lips around my cotton I was like a live wire waiting for the water to fire me off. Edward licked and sucked me higher and higher into the heavens where I exploded for him.
~medium~
He kissed his way down my body leaving goose bumps in his wake. The pace was slow, languid and teasing. I trembled for him and moaned when his tongue dipped into my belly button giving a scintillating clue as to what was to come. The desire within me pooled between my legs as I watched that pretty head nip and suck at the skin above the waist band of my boy shorts.
He smirked up at me and growled, "Are you wet for me, Bella?"
I nodded my head—too turned on to form a coherent sentence—as he kissed along my pubic bone and inner thighs. By the time he fastened his lips around my wet cotton I was like a live wire waiting for the water to fire me off.
Edward sucked at my lips through the soft fabric as I bucked my hips against him. He licked and sucked at my flesh through my panties. I climbed higher and higher into the heavens where I exploded for him.
~spicy~
He kissed his way down my body, with wet lips and nipping teeth, leaving goose bumps in his wake. The pace was slow, languid and teasing with soft brushes of his lips and flicks of his tongue driving me crazy. I trembled for him and moaned when his tongue dipped into my belly button giving a scintillating clue as to what was to come. The desire within me pooled between my legs as I watched that pretty head nip and suck at the skin above the waist band of my boy shorts.
He smirked up at me and growled, "Are you wet for me, Bella?"
His voice dripped sex and the look in his eyes floored me, but it was the rough texture of his voice and the way he bit his lip that had me crying out for him.
I nodded my head—too turned on to form a coherent sentence—as he kissed along my pubic bone and inner thighs. Edward sucked the creamy flesh of my inner thighs into his mouth marking me as his. The pleasure pain of his teeth pulsed in my pussy as he touched me everywhere but where I wanted him the most. Finally unable to stand anymore of his teasing I fisted his unruly auburn hair and pulled him towards me. By the time he fastened his lips around my wet cotton I was like a live wire waiting for the water to fire me off.
Edward sucked at my lips through the soft fabric as I bucked my hips against him. I was desperate for him. My body had turned into one big nerve ending that Edward caressed over and over. He licked and sucked at my flesh through my panties. I climbed higher and higher into the heavens where I exploded for him, completely drenching my underwear and his beautiful mouth.