Yes I know, I haven't posted in a while, mainly because I didn't have a computer. I mean, how can I upload this shiz if I don't have my beautiful computer? I swear if this mother fudging computer breaks... anyway, I has been feeling many feels, so I decided to make this chapter the best way possible, mainly with a good guy introduction, wait, before you read guess who is coming in the story? ill give you a hint, it isn't Hiccup haha. this is chapter that I really want feedback on. thanks
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Hiccup leads a few men to the ship, where Snotlout is waiting right there for them. Hiccup feels all the anger rushing inside him just wanting to slice his head off, kill him right there. Him and Stoick land on the ship where Hiccup whips his blade out and walks to Snotlout.
"Wait!" A loud voice booms right before Hiccup wants to run. A large man with a mask covering his face, a large jacket covering his body, and no sword of any kind in the holster. Hiccup just stares blankly at the man, who at first thought to be drago, but this voice isn't deep enough to be him. plus Drago always carries his staff or at least Stoick says that. and wouldn't drago take advantage of this moment and try to kill them?
The man walks in front of snotlout, and Snotlout prepares to attack this man, because he knows it isn't his ally.
"Who the hell are you?" Snotlout asks, as he begins to draw his sword out. the man pushes his sword down back into his holster and snotlout growls at the man. now Hiccup knows he would stand up to Snotlout because a desperate man with nothing to lose needs to be stopped, but he wouldn't expect a total stranger to come and stand up to snotlout as well.
"Snotlout my son, end this nonsense at once" The man says, and everyones eyes open wide, Stoick surprised the most. a few months before Hiccup and Astrids awkward encounter, Snotlouts parents went out on a hunt for a few gronkles and stuff like that, because of all the cattle they stole fro them. during one trip a Whispering Death came and attacked the couple. as the dragon was going to kill his wife, he jumped I front of the blast and took it, and the dragon took him down his already made hole.
"Your not my dad, my dad died years ago" Snotlout says, and the man takes off his mask, revealing that it really is him. he shows the birthmark the two share of the left side of the neck, and Snotlout puts his head down, unknown of what to do.
"After I heard of your little plans with berk, I set out to come stop it" he says, and Snotlout just looks at him. Hiccup can only think of the ways it could go south with the snap of a finger, but he knows to keep his mouth shut, snotlout isn't dumb enough to notice it.
"Where have you been... dad?" Snotlout asks, and Hiccup wants to show a little sympathy, but after the recent history, he cant.
He sighs hoping not to have to answer any question like this, even though it was the most obvious question to be asked. "After the dragon took me down, I gained focus and took my sword and sliced its head off. ever since then, ive been a freedom fighter" He says and Snotlout smirks, freedom fighter, that sounds catchy.
"Im a freedom fighter too!" Snotlout says, somehow believing the words coming out of his mouth, but Hiccup and everyone else knows what he is, hes a dickhead.
"You are not a freedom fighter, if your trying to take the freedom away from others. that is why you must end this, before matters get worse" Truth is, matters actually aren't that bad compared to what Snotlout wants it all to be. Snotlout growls, not liking that answer.
"That's what you do don't you?" Snotlout asks him, and he laughs at his confusion. really, where is the comedy in all this? war upon us, a boy who needs to be locked for good and an unknown threat coming its way, where does someone get to laugh in this?
"No, I fight to give people freedom, and I cant allow you to take theirs, so just end this and lets go home" He says and Snotlout thinks for a second, and nods slowly. Snotlouts father turns around to face Stoick, who is still really shocked.
"Im so sorry about this , he just wasn't in the right mind s..." Right before he finishes Snotlouts sword goes right through the mans stomach, which everyone gasps. Snotlout lets go of his sword, as his father turns to face his son.
"You are worst fucking father I could ask for, kissing everyones ass for money, and thought I was bad" Snotlout starts, "And you left me and mom because of your selfishness" Snotlout pulls his sword out of him, which makes him bleed faster. Snotlout stands up as his father is on his hands and knees gasping for air and all everyone can do is watch or they get shot. fucking guards.
"Snotlout... I left you and your mother because you both hated me" He says and Snotlout laughs,"And all I ever wanted was you to be happy, so I never came back"
"if only I cared" Snotlout says as he raises his sword over his own head, ready to wing on his fathers neck. "Id say what happy memories we had, but we never fucking had any you useless bastard" Snotlout says as he swings down very slowly,
"Hiccup, don't let him win". his final words, then the sword cuts his head off.
"Now, all of you get the fuck off my ship before I kill you all here" Snotlout says, his guards still pointing bows at them. Stoick, crying, orders everyone to leave.
This time, its personal
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As a boat sails, with the remains of Snotlouts father, heading farther away as Stoick sits there with a bow, and says the ceremony speech.
"We all have lost a great warrior, trying to help our cause, and stop his own son for us. he always cared about all of us, and fought for what eh thought was right. if only I knew he was still out there, then maybe this would have never have happened, for a great warrior has fallen. may the angels sing so we know you made it t the gates of Valhalla, and take your rightful place at the table of kings. rest In peace"
valdis, his wife, lights up her arrow, and shoots it at the boat. then Stoick, Hiccup, Astrid, Gobber, Ruffnut, Fishlegs and Erit light their arrows and shoot them.
Astrid hugs Hiccup and starts crying because Sveinn was like an uncle to her, because he always thought her and Snotlout were going to get married. they were until Hiccup came along. Hiccup holds her tight, and kisses her head, because he just keeps thinking this could be the last time he hugs her. After all this war talk, he just wants to stop thinking that hes going to die, hes Hiccup, he doesn't die for nobody.
He thinks on it, he survived the Red Death, he survived the Outcast invasion three years ago, when he was left to die in a falling building. he thinks to himself as invincible, but he also thinks thinking that will be the death of him. He remembers the good times he had with Sveinn and snotlout and all that, he was a perfect role model, but Snotlout always thought otherwise.
but Hiccup knows Snotlout must be stopped, or its his family that gets to pay, and he sheds a tear thinking about it.
after an hour of being alone sitting there, staring at the water, Hiccup finally gets up. everyone left a while ago, so he walks home alone. he takes this moment to just think of his life, because he might not have a chance later. his favorite moment was three years ago. Astrid recently had Brenda and Hiccup was on a mission with Stoick. it was a rough day, and it was his birthday, making it all the more worse. he thought everyone forgot about it, but when he came home Astrid had a cake and Fishlegs was there, and he got to see his baby for the first time.
then he thinks about Snotlout...
He made things personal...
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ok so the battle is coming soon! tell me what you all think, I really need to know. I wanna know if I did good or I did bad. and when I showed my friend this he didn't get the point of the "Personal" part. but you guys should. well I hope you enjoyed I will be posting tomorrow, hopefully. I did get a lot of PM's saying things like "I hope snotlout dies" or "Great job" or "WTF!". I read every PM and review you send, and ill always reply as soon as I see it, so please do review/PM. any questions you can ask or anything. see ya soon!