A Charmed MisConception

Chapter 10

Ok my faithful reviewers this is for you. A lot of you were fairly close with your guesses. I hope that you enjoy chapter 10. I have added a review and my reply to the review at the end of the chapter. Please read it.

At supper Harry and Severus were talking about the different plans and Harry thought that if they had a potion like the Belthazor Potion to rid Voldemort of the evil inside of him then turned him into a baby they might have a better chance.

"Piper, could we talk to you and the girls in the morning?" Harry asked.

"Sure thing, before or after breakfast?" Piper asked.

"After is fine with me." Harry replied then turned to Leo. "You said you had something to show us." Harry said.

"Yes, Ok guys you can come down now." Leo said and 3 people orbed down. It was Lily, James, and Sirius. "Here is the surprise Lily, James, and Sirius are white lighters." When he finished Harry fainted in shock. Severus caught him before he hit the floor and carried him to the couch in the living room. Piper went and got a wet cloth to wipe Harry's face with and Madam Pomfrey went to check up on Harry.

When Harry woke up he saw his parents and Sirius stand there like a dream come true. He started crying and Severus held him until he fell a sleep. When Severus noticed that Harry fell asleep, he carried him to his room. He laid him on the bed and transfigured his clothes into pjs. Severus didn't want to leave Harry alone so he lay with him. Sometime during the night Harry had a nightmare.

~Nightmare~

Harry is walking along a beach and he sees his family. "We never wanted you. The only reason we died for you was because you were the only one that can get rid of Voldemort. If it wasn't for the prophecy we would have aborted you." His parents said.

"No one wants you or loves you. You should have died when Voldemort first came after you." The voices said.

The faces of Cedric, Lily, James, and Sirius came floating around chanting you should be dead.

~Nightmare~

Harry was tossing and turning from his nightmare, and Severus tried waking him up. When Harry woke up he was crying.

"If they were white lighters, why didn't they come back for me? Why did they leave me to be raised by Aunt Petunia?" Harry asked.

"I don't know. We will ask them later this morning but for now try to get some more sleep." Severus said.

"I can't sleep right now. My mind is in to much turmoil to sleep." Harry said.

"Why don't we plan a little to see what we come up with. Maybe that will help." Severus said.

"I know that I want to use the Potion created by Salazar, but I was thinking that maybe we could use the Belthazor Potions to make sure that he wasn't evil anymore." Harry said.

"That sounds good to me. We should talk it over with Piper tomorrow. How about we think up some baby names. We'll need at least 3 unless you keep Tom's the same. One girl and two boys" Sev said.

"Ok I'd like that." Harry started, "How about Bonnie Elizabeth, Nicholas Galen, and Patrick Ian for names? They are Scottish and Irish names. I've been researching for when I might have kids."

"They are good, strong names. I like them. Let's try to get some more sleep before we confront the masses in a couple of hours." Sev said as he gathered Harry into his arms.

"Ok." Harry said as he snuggled in to Sev.

I'm going to end the chapter here. I would like your impute on the names I have picked out. I spent over an hour looking through at least 5-baby name books lol. How would you like to see Harry handle Lily, James and Sirius? Next Chapter breakfast and lots of talking and planning. Now that I have a laptop I hope to update faster.

I looked at your profile because I was curious of your age and I must admit that I am shocked that you could be 29 and write something so childish. This has got to be the most absurd, unrealistic "story" that I've ever read. It's like you just wrote this... thing to indulge some stupid fantasies but didn't
even bother to worry about logic or sense. And I think what I find saddest is that your so old, I've read better and more quality stories coming from 14-year olds. Actually no, what I find saddest is that there are actually people with such low standards that they'd read this story and review it
positively 131 times. Wow

Reading your profile makes me think that you are a hypocrite. "No, I don't write fanfiction but it doesn't mean that I don't write."(From your profile) You sit at your computer like some high and mighty thing and spew your opinions like they are worth gold, yet all you do is show how immature you can be. Do you stop to ask an author why they write the story the way that it is? No, you just assume that the author is a species lower than you are. Tell me do you have a goddaughter or a daughter you spend time with? I have a goddaughter. Let me tell you a little bit about her. She loves Harry Potter, Charmed and the movie Junior with Arnold Schwarzenegger. We came up with the idea that Harry gets pregnant and meets the Charmed Ones, and I went forward with the story.

As for criticism I usually put that I welcome constructive criticism. Here is my disclaimer down below:

I don't own Harry Potter. I don't want to own Harry Potter either. Now Severus Snape (Alan Rickman) I wouldn't mind owning him, but sadly I don't own him either. I also own the plot of the story. I started this story with my Goddaughter. I posted this fic on my web groups. If you would like to check out the groups go to my profile. I would also like to suggest if you like Flaming then light a match. No one is perfect so please be nice constructive criticism is one thing but to be rude is not.

Thanks,
Serena (Rena)

Your right guideline #3 states: Respect the reviewers. Not all reviews will strictly praise the work. If someone rightfully criticizes a portion of the writing, take it as a compliment that the reviewer has opted to spend his/her valuable time to help improve your writing. I guess you didn't read #4 though because it states everyone here is an aspiring writer. Respect your fellow members and lend a helping a hand when they need it. Like many things, the path to becoming a better writer is often a two way street. You have not shown me any respect with your review. If anything you have shown me contempt.

Back to my age if you had looked closely to my profile you would see that my age is really 31 instead of 29. I guess you don't have the head for math. I have thought about changing the age I put in my profile. That is why I put my birthday on it month date and year. Your right a person doesn't have to be a good writer to know what good writing is that's because they are too nit picky to put a story line together. I bet you couldn't write a good story if your life depended on it. That doesn't matter to you though does it as long as you can criticize something? That's all you seem to be good at. Do you even enjoy life at all? Do you even know life at all? I have to wonder because you seem to think that FICTION is real life. Fiction is supposed to be unrealistic and about fantasies. I think I will post your review and my reply with my next chapter so that my loyal readers can read about how low you think of them.