Another chapter today, yay for me...go on read read
I almost forgot, I put a new cover for the story, the base isn't mine but I added the hair, ears, colour, clothes...you know, I'm not really sure where I found the base but I'm just saying it isn't mine...
She was about to yank open the door when they burst open, a fat old man, red in the face and breathing heavily almost ran into her. She would've been a pancake had she not jumped out of the way in time for the doors to bang on the walls. She glared at him and he managed to gulp between his heavy breaths. He bowed deeply and then scurried over to the king. Amu recognized him as one of the many associates of her father.
„M-my lord, one young maiden from the eastern village was found m-murdered little ways from the Great Chapel." He stopped to take a gulp of air and Amu rolled her eyes. „S-she was r-ripped apart, m-my master, t-the family barely recognized h-her. Blood, my lord, there was s-so much b-blood." The man then promptly fainted and the family doctor came and with the help from a few butlers carried him away.
The king was pale and his hands were shaking, beads of sweat formed on his forehead and he tightly gripped his chair. Nobody noticed when she left the room, vowing revenge.
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It was few hours later when a maid came to her quarters. The young girl knocked on the door and entered, without waiting for permission, to inform the princess of the good news. She opened the door with a smile on her face, not noticing the danger she just put herself in. „My princess, your father wishes to see y..." A thin red streak appeared on her cheek and her face went chalky white. She sprawled over the floor, her hands still clenched over her heart. A dagger was sticking out from the wall right next to the place her head had been just a moment ago. Few drops of blood dripped from its silver surface and glinted in the light as they fell.
Amu sighed. I can't believe how they just barge in. She was still lying on her bed, perched in the position she was in before the noisy maid came barging in. Not even a few minutes later an older one came in and froze at the sight. She screamed thinking that the monster of a princess had finally snapped. Guards rushed in and stopped short when they realized what had happened. Lucky for Amu though the girl hadn't died of shock.
After they carried away the young girl an older lady came to her room and asked her to dress properly for a meeting with the king. Amu refused at first but the lady had been so adamant about it she decided to just go. The maids left her room after bringing out the ugliest dress she had seen. They said she needed to meet someone important and that she must dress nicely and properly, also chaste.
She smirked to herself. This will be fun. She glided to her walk-in closet and went to the far back of it. There lay the most beautiful yet innapropriate dress she had ever seen. She purchased it while her father was distracted and had it brought to castle incognito.
She took the dress and examined it. It was still as she remembered it.
It was a black corset with little hot pink frillies at the top showing rather much of her cleavage with the rest of the silky dress getting wider from the hips. Her back was almost bare, covered in crisscrossing strings of the corset. There was a cut on one side going from the hip to the floor. There was another hot pink layer of see through material over the black satin and big hot pink bow tied around her waist. Her shoulders were bare but one arm was covered in a bell like sleeve from shoulder to fingers and around the other shoulder she had an armband made of silver. Around her neck was a choker with a silver pendant hanging from it. She put some black high heels on her legs and was ready to go. When she exited the closet the maid that was waiting for her almost had a heart attack. She forgot who she was talking to.
„Princess, what is this?" She didn't even let Amu open her mouth before she continued. „Why are you wearing this...this atrocity, you cannot meet anyone looking like this, like...like a common whore...change this moment or so help me..."
„You're gonna do what?" She circled the maid that paled slightly, realizing what she had said to the princess. „What can you do?" The maid trembled. „Answer me!" The maid bowed her head. „My sincere apologies p-princess." Amu nodded her head. Her eyes glinted madly."Now lead me to meet this...special... person."
They walked a good fifteen minutes before they arrived at their destination. The maid before her trembling more and more, looking back every minute to see if she was going to get gutted.
„W-we have a-arrived, m-my princess." The maid bowed low and left her in front of the great entrance doors to the throne room. A guard bowed to her, his eyes lingering a moment too long on her chest, but she would let it slide.
„I shall announce you now, my princess." The guards opened the door and the one that spoke to her boomed.
„Princess Hinamori Amu, the heir to the Hinamori kingdom." She walked in slowly and noticed almost immediately who was the guest.
He was standing next to her father who was sitting on his throne, dressed in the royal colours of Hotori kingdom. The boy was her age, with longish blonde hair and ruby eyes. She instantly knew he was, a member of the royal family, those eyes were a mark of the Hotoris. He had a slight girlish look to him though. She saw her father splutter when he laid eyes on her dress and the Hotori boy tinge a nice shade of red. She came before them and bowed low. She smiled as the boy went even more red, if that was possible.
„Father, you wished to see me?" He caught himself before he could yell some obscenities at her.
„Yes, I would like you to meet Hotori Tadase, the prince and heir to the Hotori kingdom." He ground out. The boy composed himself slightly and bowed.
„It is an honor to meet you princess." She bowed back. She looked back at her father when he cleared his throat.
„And your new fiancé." Her mind went blank.
She saw red.
Yaay, I managed to write another chapter today, who knows maybe I'll even write another one, this one is not quite long as the other one only about 1000 words though, I would've continued but I really wanted to stop at that part, you know...
As I said, I have school no more so you should really check often cause I'll probably write more than one in a day and I promise I'll try to make them all at least a 1000 words. Hope you like it and R&R I'm really interested in what you think of the story...
Love ya all...
Now for that unnecessary review
sslover*something* I'm not really sure what you meant by 'It's just stupid' but there isn't any explanation for it that can be counted as 'not a flame' (if you meant that rewriting is stupid then I'm really sorry for what I'm about to say next and don't take it to heart)
You fu*king stupid little fu*king cocroach, flame me one more time and I'm gonna find you and gut you alive
Now that that's resolved...I must say I have a very short temper and please any of you that are nice people don't be offended by my language, any nice and helpful criticism is ok but flames(and I count saying something is stupid as a flame) will be dealt with and punishments given to those who deserve them, I when I find a story I don't like don't go and flame the author, I just politely leave, and you didn't even have the guts to log in psh...coward
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