hey guys how are i am very sad due to less reviews on first and second chapter i get good response but on third chapter i do,nt get a good response if you don,t like it so tell me kiya main yeah story stop kardo yah agay continue karo because woh response nahi mlie raha jo first aur second chapter mila tha but yeah chapter main sirf unkay liya leakh rahi hu jin ho nay mujhe review kiya agher ise chapter kay liya bhi achay review na mileay to main story ko yahi stop kardo gi
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PURVI (scared tone )ap p...p...ppapa papa ap
purvi father =pf
pf;(come closer to her and slap her in angry tone )kiya karahi ho itni raat ko is ladke kay saath ha zara bhi sharam nahi hai tum main apnay ghar kay baher isay hug karahi ho kiya yahi sanskar diya hai meanay tumhay
purvi (crying ) papa woh main
sachine :uncle deakheya main aur purvi ek dusray say piyaar kartay hai aur shaadi karna chahtay hai ap galath samagh rahay hai
pf;(shouted )tum hotay kon ho meri beti saY piyaar karnay walay aur shaadi ka faisla karnay walay tu konho ha'
purvi :papa main bhi insay piyaar karti hu aur shaadi karna chahti hu
pf ;tumhare shaadi main wahi hogi gaha main chahta hu chalo ander (hold her arm )aur tum jao yaha say dobara kabhi meri beti kay pass bhi nazar nahi ana (he move inside the house with purvi )
after some sachine left from their
IN PURVI ROOM
his father through her on the bed she is crying badly
pf ;tum ab yahi raho gi aur bureau nahi jao gi main 2 weeks kay liya di kiya gayia tum to meri sanskaro ko hi bhol gayi meri hi parvarish koi kami hogi jo aaj mujhe yeah din deakhena padh raha hai
purvi :papa main usay boht piyar karti hu nahi ji saakti uskay bina
pf ;uskay bina nahi ji saakti per apnay baap ki izzat ka koi khiyaal nahi tujhay teri shaadi rohit say ho hogi bus
purvi ;papa rohit sirf mera bachpan ka dost hai main shaadi nahi karo gi kabhi nahi
pf ;apnay bape kay liya tumhay shaadi karni hogi
purvi ;papa apko kiya hogiya hai ap to humesha meri khushi chahtay ho na to aaj kiya meri khushi kay liya ek rishtay inkar nahi karsakty
pf ;kardeta teri khushi kay liya inkar agher yeah aaj ki baat hoti teri shaadi mainay teray bachepan main hi rohit say tay kardi thi meray yaday ka sawaal hai aur shaadi ki date bhi fix hogayi hai next week teri shaadi hai kaal rohit ajay ga usay is baray main khuch bhi pata nahi chalna chahiya
purvi :papa plz main shaadi nahi karsakti
but he leave the room without listening her and lock the door
the whole sachine and purvi pass by crying and remembering the moments they spent together and they can,t sleep whole night
NEXT DAY IN BUREAU
sachine enter in bureau with red eyes no one is present at that time after half an hour nikhil enter in bureau sachine toward him '
nikhil (worriedly )kiya hua sir ap boht perishan lag rahay hai kiya hua hai saa theak to hai na
sachine :khuch theak nahi hai tell him every thing
nikhil ;sir yeah kiya hogiya main uncle say baat karta ho and he leave for purvi house
IN PURVI HOUSE '
nikhil enter and move to purvi ,s room he look at her she is crying badly he go near she look at him and hug him
purvi (teary tone )nikhil plz help me main apnay piyaar ko paker nahi kho sakti plz khuch ker na
nikhil (remove her from hug )main uncle say baat karta ho to phikar na kar okay
and he go to pf
nikhil ;namaste uncle kisay hai ap
pf (with smile )theak ho acha hua tum agay aray purvi ki shaadi hai uskay best friend ka to hona zarrori hai boht say hai tumhare madat chahiya aur ha tum is purvi ko bhi samjhao kay fresh ho kerr thoda trayaar hojay rohit ata hi hoga
nikhil :uncle main apsay kahena chahta hu kay sachine sir aur purvi ek dusray say boht piyaar kartay hai plz ap unko samjhay
uncle :beta main is baray aur bahes nahi karna chahta hu so plz close this topic and he move
nikhil go to bureau all are present nikhil enter and sachine run towards him
sachine :kiya hua purvi kay papa say baat hui bolo kiya kaha unho nay
all notice it and go closer to them
daya;kiya hua tum dono itnay tense kiyon ho main time acp enter
acp ;kiya hua kon perishan hai
daya ;sir woh
acp ;woh kiya ha khuch hua hai kiya nikhil tum batao kiya baat hai aur purvi kaha hai saab a chokay hai per purvi nahi hai
nikhil ;sir usi waja say hum perishan hai tell them every thing
acp;yeah tum kiya kahe rahay per purvi kay papa aisa kiyon karahay hai
abhi :sir ap ek baar karay shaahid woh manjay
they all go to purvi house and tarika and shreya go to purvi room to console her
acp ;deakhiya dono bachay ek dusray say piyaar kartay hai to ap kiyon purvi ki shaadi kahi aur kara rahay hai
pf ;acp sir mainay boht samajh ker yeah faisla liya hai ap saab shaadi per zarrore ana usse ladke kay ilava saab plz main aur baat nahi karna chahta woh meray dost ka beta hai aur purvi ko boht khush rakhay ga
acp ;ap uskay baap hai acha hi sochay gay uskay baray main hum saab zarrore aye gay per ap bhi isse baray main dubara sochiya all leave in restaurant all are tensed
abhi ;acp sir khuch nahi karnay walay humay hi khuch karna hoga
daya;ha boss tum theak khae rahay ho
nikhil ;per hum kiya karay
daya;ek idea hai tell them something
nikhil ;sir idea to boht acha hai
sachine ;per yeah saab kiasay hoga hojay ga
abhi ;per isse plan ko shuru karnay say pehelay humay rohit say baat karni chahiya
nikhil ;ap sahi kah rahy hai main purvi say baat karta hu he dial purvi number and tell her every thing
IN PURVI ROOM
rohit come and hug her from behind purvi release her self
rohit ;kiya hua ab to humar i shaadi bhi honay wali hai
purvi ;main tumsay shaadi nahi karsakti main kisi aur say piyaar karti hu usse say shaadi karo gi
rohit ;per main tumsay boht piyaar karta ho
purvi;per main nahi karti
rohit (come closer to her cup her face )koi baat nahi main tumhay itna piyaar do ga kay tum bhi piyaar karnay lagao gi mujhe say aur bhol jao gi usay
purvi ;na main tumsay piyaar karo gi na hi usay bholo gi
purvi father call him
rohit ;sasur ji bula rahay hai main ata hu abhi and he move out purvi sit down on the floor and start crying
A/N so kiasa tha kiya hoga agay kiya plan hai cid ka sachvi ko ek karnay kiya unka plan kamiyaab hoga sachvi ek hogay ?so if you want to know the answer of this question you have to review kiyon kay aher isse per bhi kaam review mileay to main story continue nahi karo wahi per stop kardo gi main ok sorry for spelling mistakes don,t foreget to review '
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