Hi everyone here is chapter 3 of naruto the black cat. frist of all and before the reviews I will like to said 3 things
1: I am looking for a beta beacuse as you can see my english is far from perfect, so if you thing you are up for the challeng then answer to point two.
2: I am not realy good whit descriptions an to show that your opinion is important for me i am asking you the readers to help me out. I need to descript Narutos new house and i will need help on the lemons so i am asking you that if you could send deacriptions of the house and same littel lemon scene between Naruto an same of the girls that have appear till I will or will not use them. also from them i will choose my beta and, if he or she wants, while have alot of power over the way this story will go from now on. so please if you are intrested please email me to alecortonacostahotmail with your lemon or description of the house
3: remenber of voting for the girls that you want to be paired up wiht Naruto but right now i thing that it will be a harem fic in the end. even then it will be a small harem 3-4 girls
REVIEWS:
Terror of Death Skeith: thanks man i hope you like this chapter too
Rubius: well pale is a free world if you don like the gender bender there is no problem wiht that. about Rinslet inthis time line she is dead so sorry about that, guest saya, i already chouse a girl how will be Naruto's Saya but i told you this now it will end like the anime for the one how is saya, try to guess hoe it is. a especial price for the first one how answer corectly.
Redgold: Thanks man. about what you said I got two things to tell you. frist anko and kurenai will be paired but not wiht naruto, if you want to know how just PM me ok? good. then about Sakuya, she will get out of Sakura,alright you got me there, but if you want to know how or when just keep reading. and I got plans for tayuya so don worry.
Random person: who ever you are, thank you for understanding the end note on every chapter that say "there are no bad reviews just constructic ones" i put them because i lnow my english sucks and i write on the wordpad so you can see my probem. then thanks for the compliment you are right there are no many of Femneiji but as i said before I didnt found what i was looking for on ohters work so i made my own fic
Phnxfyr1: thanks alot for reading even wiht my horribel spelling
Lastly some parts of this fic are based of ' fg7dragon's Naruto Chaos Mage' so a special thanks to him and al the ones tha put this story on your alerts and favs.
i hope not letting you down.
story starts now
Chapter Three: The Working Cat
After a short walk Naruto reach the mission room, and he wasn't trilled at all. there was only an half slept chunin and a desk wiht scrolls on top of it. the chunin lift his eyes from the weapon magazin he was readding to take a look at the newcommer.
"can I help you Uzumaki-san?" the chunin asked, obiously surpriced that a gennin was there on the team selection day.
"Yes, Hokage-sama has put make me a solo team and said that i could start missions right away, he also told me to give you this" Said Naruto iving the note to the chunin. Taking the note he read it asnd after that hand the scroll on top of the D labbed pile.
"Here you go, you can came to take ohter mission when you are done wiht that one" said the chunin waving naruto off. after a quick "thank you!" Naruto get out of the building and lean against the tower's wall to read the mission scroll.
D-rank mission scroll
Client: Maddam Shinichi, wife of the fire daymo
Mission: capture lost pet cat, tora. upon capture the cat must be given to the client on her house after reporting on the tower.
Info: last time the objective was seen was on the forest bordening the training grounds.
Reward: 15.000 ryus (A.N.: convercion 150 ryus = 1 dollar)
"Well how ironic a stray cat chaising an ohter" Train laught inside Naruto's mind
"Ironic in deed". said the new balck cat. standing off the wall, Naruto started his mission rofthoping to the trainning grounds.
30 minutes later
The door of the mission room open to reveal Naruto standing there wiht a boord exprecion on his face.
"So giving up on that acursed cat already, well I understand you, geez frist time I got that mission me and my team spend the night on the woods just for giving up the next morning. There are teams that can get the mision done in less than a day, infact there is a record of how fast the teams get that littel piece of hell, the curent record is ..."
the chunin said upon seeing Naruto enter trought the door
"What the hell are you talking about man?" asked Naruto lightly, you could hear the smirk on his voice literaly.
Only then the chunin notice the littel cat purring on Narutos shoulder. Not only he cached the darn thing but the littel fucker was purring like it was a normal cat.
"who, when, how, what, I, you".
"I read the note, it said that i could take as much D-ranked missions as I like so I think I will just get some of this scrolls here, then went to the fire daymo wife to return littel tora-chan here, do my missions and reports and then came to hand them in and call it a day; is that alright?".said Naruto to the stunned chunin wiht a smile that made train honors.
"y-yes" that was the last thing the chunin could said before Naruto take colse to 20 D-ranked mission scrolls and left the bilding. Ones outside the tower naruto put his hands in his favorite handseal and wiht a wishper of "Kage bushin no jutsu" 60 shadow clones appear infront of him in 20 lines of 3 each.
"Alright peopleyou know what to do, each team leader will take a scroll then take his team to do the mission, afterwards the support clones will dispel themselfs and the leader will made the report wiht Trains help, then go home, drop the scroll and the report and go practise the jutsus we were working on till you dispel from chakra exaustion. If you need help or support for your mission just contact me and the ohters trought Trains mindlink wiht us". After that the clones take the scrolls and leave to their missions.
"well tora-chan lets get you home then" Said the black cat to the kitty
An hour later on the daymos mansion
After an hour of asking for directions and going all over half the village, the idiot that write the mission scroll will have a close meating wiht his partner, and he didn't mean Hades.
Finaly, reaching the mansion of the daymo of fire he introduce himself to the gatekeepers.
"State your name and reason of your visit" Said one of the guards to Naruto
"I am Naruto Uzumaki and my reason to came here is to return tora-chan to his owner, Shinichi-sama".Said Naruto politely. one of the things Naruto learn after his upgrade, as he like to call it, was to learn the how the world and the underworld works and proper etiquets where part of it.
"wait right here Uzumaki-san" Said the ohter guard before entering the household.
"So where is the rest of your team kid?" Asked the only guard left in the door to the blond.
"I don't have teammates or sensei the hokage make me konoha's frist one man team. the only partner I need is this one". Said the black cat while patting Hades.
"woo, You must be the first shinobi I ever see using a gun as his primary weapon, thats for sure"
"Yeah if you said so"
In that moment the ohter guard came back out.
"Kid, Shinichi-dono has asked that you came in to handel the cat personaly and join her and her daughter wiht a cup of tea"Order the guard to Naruto. Knowing that refusing to the daymos wife in such a trivial thing will be rude Naruto decide to agree to the offer.
Entering the mansion Naruto was lead to the inner garden. the frist thing he notice upon reaching the garden was the beuty of it, diferent kinds of flowers grow there and the sakura trees were bloosoming wiht white and pink petals. in the middel of the garden was a tabel were two women were having a cup of tea. the frist ona was on her mid 30s, she had black raven hair and a slender frame, her caramel eyes focus on him and a serene smile grace her face, she was Lady shinichi
"Ah who wonderful of you to join us Uzumaki-san, please came here and have a seat." She said waving her hand to the chair at the right of the second woman. the second one was a teenager like him, she was the daughter of the fire daymo, here eyes were of a caramel brown like her mother's but here hair was a firely red that contrast perfecly wiht her snow white skin, she had a figure that girls here age (and even some older women) would kill for, it was obiouse to Naruto that she take care of here figure training regulary
"I will like to present you my daughter Kyoko"said the mother will her daughter sat up from her chair.
"it's a pleasure to meet you Uzumaki-san and thank you for bringing Tora-chan back home" she said wiht a littel bow and a smile on her face. Naruto, remenbering all the classes of etiquet that Train take whille in cronos, went down on one knee, take her right hand on his and giving it a light kiss he said.
"The pleasure is oviously all mine Kyoko-oujosama" a blush made his way on Kyoko's face at his actions. all the while her mohter was smiling at them.
'he sure is minato's son, always the gentelman. If I play my cards nicely they will end up tougeter. I hope you are seeing this Kushina my dear friend, I can already listen the weadding bells' tought the lady of fire.
"well, shall we eat?" reasiving a nod from them, the youngsters took a set on the tabel.
"Was tora-chan any problem to you Naruto-san" Asked Lady Shinichi after a littel while.
"Not at all, she is realy a nice littel girl, even when my fellow shinobi make her seam like the devil incarnate" said the black cat wiht a grin and a laught. meanwhile Kyoko was on here own world.
'God why the sexxiest guy I have ever sees has to be a commoner. I mean just look at him. His hair, his eyes, his body every part of him screams GOD AMOND LOWLY HUMANS, but mohter seams to like him maybe there is a chance for me. But then father would never alowe me to go out much less marry wiht anyone less than a clanhead or a nobefrom some far away land.'
"well being hokage is a big dream Naruto-san"
"yeah I know but I'm up for the challenge" aparently Kyoko must have spaced out for a long time, it always happens to her and she was cursind herself for it now.'But if he manage to be a hokage then there is a chance' Kyoko tought wiht a smile on her face
"Jajajajaa, you are just like your parents" Said lady Shinichi before realizing what she had said. Silence follow after that settelment.
And cut. So what will happen know?
a littel side comment i sure i only realise of the irony beind Kyokos name after writing the chapter, it wasnt planed at all, infact i just open one of my evangelion mangas and select the first female name that apeared (kyoko's is the name of Asuka's mother, if you were wondering)
The next chapter will be THE PARTY CAT not even think of not reading it.
see you next time and remenber there are no bad reviews only contructive ones.