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Josh; Don't worry, Taisune may have a role, but its only a small one, nothing major. As to what it exactly is, its for more 'legal' reasons then anything else
Tobi; My lemon skills, are lacking. I may change, but don't bet on it
Godzilla; Because some might read this fic before Mysterious power and then may choose to read Mysterious, I'd keep it hidden
Doppler; Did it last fic...but it really depends on the fics flow and the requests of my fans
Bigdog; You caught Anko mentioning interest in using the female Jinchuurki to test her plan for Naruto? Well, that will come into play at the time
Killjoy; I might do that, once his wind release is shown to be what it is
Viewer; Lets not forget the Hachibi also made them go Kablowee. Also, vampires are immortal, and not really needing constant reproducing like say, Humans or cats. And Males can reproduce like Humans, its just a female limitation
Reishin; You read Mysterious Power, right? If so, you'd have seen 1000 years Lightning, Fire, Wind, 'Youthal', Ice and mentioning of the 'ultimate 1000 years of death', which was used to destroy the moon.
Hektols; As you might know, I try to drop hints slowly but surely, and as to Madara there, it helps open up plot options
Y H C; I do agree that the concept of harem fics needs some restraint. For instance, I've read the Harem War Harry fic, where Naruto has 25ish wives...and thus thanks god for his time tuner. Hence, I don't plan of ever writing such a large harem fic. To my numbers, if I write a harem i'd say the numbers would stick to a more managable region between 3 and 12 (Aside for the funny ending to Mysterious Power that is)
You know, I've been looking at several Harry Harem stories, and for some reason Theodore Nott is always shown to be a arrogant jerk and Malfoy minion. So untrue
If anyone can point this out differently, say a story where he is mentioned, and not a jerk, please do. If not, perhaps I should try my own Harry Harem...
The only issue is, how can I justify it. You can't write Harem stories for Harem sakes, they need justification. Hence the CRA here, where the most Harem stories exist in all of Fanfiction, according to the search button
And anyway, by my views you need three things for a Harem story
1; Either several, understandably compatible females, or good OC making skills to make the harem (Unless your doing a Yaoi harem, insert terrified scream)
2; You need a character who can actually handle that many people, decently (Unless you want a rape fic, which usually gets removed quickly from this sight)
3; An actual reason to have the harem (CRA for Naruto for instance...can't find a contingent reason in any other fic verses)
4; The females have to have a reason to bond with the person (For instance, my destined mate thing here, or just being a nice guy)
5; That you cannot expect to ask your wife to have other wives, and expect to stay married and unbeaten, unless your culture has a reason (I pity a Mormon who gets another wife)
If any of you are Mormons, I was referring to the more conservative end of your religion who still does this. I mean no offense
Now back to actual story writing
ROOT HQ (Danzo's POV)
"Sir, the Roku-Tora assassination mission has failed" a ROOT agent commented in a dead sort of tone "Our team wasn't able to act as the target had been captured by several Genin, the students of the one with the unholy eyebrows. As this shinobi was one you specifically told us to avoid, we were unable to move to take it out" Danzo sighed.
"Understood ROOT, dismissed" the ROOT left.
Despite his, many oddities, Guy was a powerful shinobi, who ROOT would be unable to deal with in a quiet manor. Also, if Guy got any hint of ROOT activity, it would go straight to the Sandiame.
Guy was three things; Eccentric, Odd and Loyal. And that Loyalty was to the Hokage above all.
If he was more normal, he'd be the perfect Shinobi model. And despite his behavior, he had three of the best Genin currently in Konoha; the Hyuga prodigy, the most skilled Kunoichi (sadly, out of perhaps 20 girls to come out of the Academy in the last two years, only Hyuga Hinata had a remote chance against her, offset by her nervous nature) and perhaps most remarkably, Rock Lee.
The boy, once a dead last who lacked Ninjutsu and Genjutsu abilities, had become a future Guy in the making, in both skills and mannerisms. His Taijutsu was now at Chunnin, near Tobektsu level, and he could even perform the dreaded Sunset Genjutsu, the very Genjutsu that Guy's Grand Father, Might Man, and Guy's father, Might Heart, had used to defeat his father and himself in a battle of honor.
He had tried to use his stolen Sharingan eyes, all of them on his arm and his covered eye, to copy it, but instead he required his Yamanaka ROOT to have to mind wipe his attempt out of his mind.
Trying to merely imitate it had cost him a few ROOT
Speaking of loosing Ninja...
Several squads of ROOT ninja appeared before him and bowed.
"You know what to do" they nodded and vanished.
Danzo had heard rumors of a group. While hardly inconspicuous in their black cloaks, with many red clouds, this group was said to consist of many S rank Shinobi.
Missing Nin S rank Shinobi
He had heard rumors they had plans for a new world order. And Danzo found such thoughts, unbecoming of them...
For only he would bring forth the new world order
A week later, Anko's lair (Anko's POV)
Anko sighed, nibbling on a dango stick half heatedly, annoyed because her mission had ended. And with that, her actual ability to legally keep an eye on her destined mate.
The Sandiame had originally put her on a elongated S rank mission to watch Team 7 for Naruto's security, and had done so for their last 5 missions. In all of them, not only had she seen that damned Hatake and that Screamicus Flatchesticus ignore and abuse Naruto, respectively, but 5 of the mission contractors doing a mixture of the five.
Of course, the only one to be physical was their last mission, where Tora the demonic cat of doom was captured, and Naruto was left holding the struggling beast.
But then, some rat, possibly Hatake, somehow took notice of her, and reported it the Council, who in turn confronted the man.
The Sandiame had defended his doing by stating it was to make sure that Naruto wasn't being mistreated, which he was. When he confronted them about it, they began ranting on and on about 'civilians rights' and all that garbage.
The Hokage, and with the aide of Danzo and the Shinobi Council, had stood firm against the complaining council, they eventually came upon a very stretched, very hard to debate set of legal phrases
'The Hokage cannot use Shinobi to spy on civilians' because it took place during missions to aid civilians
'The Hokage cannot deliberately put civilians at risk with non war related policy' referring to Naruto completing D rank missions
and 'Ninja not on injured or maternity leave cannot remain mission less for a period exceeding two months.' to build a case for the Daiymo
The last two days had been spent with the Fire Daiymo receiving messages and sending them, in heated political nonsense. Until the damnable Daiymo came back saying
Due to what has been reported, as the head authority of all non Shinobi of the Land of Fire, I hereby proclaim that one, Uzumaki Naruto, cannot serve in any mission that directly involves the Citizens of the village of Konohagakure no Sato, and that the Hokage, for going beyond his limit of authority to illegally spy on the civilians of the same village, must hereby grant 20 Million Ryo from the village funds to Civilian needs.
Basically, the shinobi were now weakened, the civilians could do a lot more of their stupid little activities, and her life mate was virtually trapped, because of that idiotic Daiymo, and his civilian viewpoint.
Though he still payed her for a C rank
Idiocy like that was the reason that Kumogakure lacked a Civilian Council. Perhaps that old Sandiame Raikage wasn't that bad a guy after all, even if he did kill her father during the last war between them, if he could get rid of any form of the old clowns. (Mysterious power-this story difference, just pointing it out)
However, that wouldn't be able to really do anything for Naruto-kun now. With 5 D rank missions, he couldn't hope to enter the Chunnin Exams, and would be legally voided from the shinobi forces in two months. Once he was a civilian again, he'd be no longer free of the civilian council's direct influence.
While there were laws against banishing kids, banishing adult civilians was a whole other animal. Once out of the shinobi course, Naruto would still be legally an adult, and thus in the civilians capacity to remove.
And they couldn't legally get rid of it, because while the Hokage was the Executive head of the government here, albeit without the overruling veto, it was up to the Shinobi council to deal with new legislation as the legislative branch. (Note, no Judicial, if a court was around to void or reinterpret laws, Naruto would be dead by now)
And they'd be hesitant to try and remove that direct ability, because the civilains could use it to try and worm their way into their own rights involving Shinobi, which would be disastrous for all, including Naruto.
The Hokage and her, each separately of course, had tried other options to stop this possibility. Anko had thought about seeing if he could be taken on as an apprentice as an infiltrator, but he lacked the experience the job required to be even considered.
The Hokage had tried to set up D rank missions outside the village, but that tree didn't bear fruit. No one lived within D rank mission distance of the village
She'd had considered kidnapping him and holding him somewhere until she had Hinata, but she didn't want to mentally damage him.
The last thing she wanted was for her destined mate to hate her.
Similar mental damage could come from the loss of his shinobi rank, she didn't have any idea what to do...
For killing the old bastards wouldn't work, the damage it could do would be 100 times worse.
Sighing, she slump down into her coffin, a half finished plate of Dango outside it, the fox plushy covering her eyes as her dreams, instead of involving her, Naruto, and far too Orochimaru like things (For she could only see Naruto as he was now age wise), involved various painful, bloody deaths to the Daimyo
She particularly liked Number 4, crushing him under his wife, Number 12, getting Tora into his pants while the creature was clawing, number 17 where he was impaled with Dango sticks, and number 51, when he suffered at heart attack at the hand of being hugged by Guy and that student of his with that sunset Genjutsu active)
Next Day, Mission Room (Kakashi's POV)
'Perfect, the power of the honored civilian councils has been shown, and that demon is going to be stopped. I can't wait to see its face' Kakashi was glowing with evil glee.
He hadn't felt this good since he found out Rin wouldn't be able to stop his plans. Oh how he remembered that day, so wonderful. Only the Uchiha massacre and his Sensei's death made him feel happier.
He and his team, soon to loose its inhuman link, were about to get another mission, when they were confronted by the idiot Hokage, where things went downhill.
The man, was .?docid=21377227
"JIJI!" Naruto yelled happily. The Hokage nodded.
"Greetings, Kakashi-san, Naruto-kun, Sasuke-san, Sakura-san. I'm here to say, I'm most impressed in your latest work on your D Rank missions..."
'What the hell is he getting at?'
"So, I've awarded you a C rank mission!" Kakashi's eyes were wide
'HOW DARE HE! HE FOUND A LOOPHOLE!' The Hokage was a cautious man about C rank distribution among Genin. He never, ever, IN HISTORY, gave a C rank so easily.
He would suffer when the time came, oh he would suffer so, so much
(Naruto's POV)
A C RANK! Naruto was ecstatic, and that was an understatement. He seriously thought that something bad was going to happen, if Hatake-teme's grin had anything to say about it
Naruto may not be the brightest person, but he had developed one skill, a skill that was arguably as important as the healing abilities he gained from his, condition. He was good at picking up hidden emotions
Naruto, had from many years of tricks while at the same time seeing people like Jiji and Iruka, developed the ability to detect someones true intent. For instance, he knew the Ichiraku's were generally nice to him, while the guy who offered him chocolate, wasn't.
It was only wrong once, with Mizuki
Thus, he could tell what Hatake-Teme was hoping for. He obviously had something up his sleeve, probably related to missions if his reaction to Jiji was anything to judge.
It probably related to D rank missions, which he would be glad to be rid of. Not only was he disliked by the clients, despite the fact that he did most of the work, with Sasuke the rest of it.
Sakura was just leeching off the already limited D rank mission rewards, and Hatake-Teme wasn't doing anything about it
So thus, what appeal he once saw in Sakura was now fading, while respect for Sasuke had started, if ever so slight
"THANK'S JIJI!" Naruto yelled, hugging the old man, to the huge grin on the man's face.
"BAKA, LET GO OF HOKAGE-SAMA..."
Naruto detached "I have a name, you know" he said cooly, to Sakura and Kakashi's shock, and Sasuke's slight impressed look. The Hokage also looked relived for some reason, as if glad to see him annoyed at her.
"Anyways, your client is waiting for you, he will fill you in with the mission details"
Later, in Anko's Lair (Anko's POV)
Anko haven't left her coffin, instead sending a shadow clone to deal with her job here. She was depressed, her destined mate was in a fix she couldn't aid him in...
KNOCK, KNOCK
"I do believe, one Mitarashi is in here? I do have something to say to here" A voice said from outside her coffin, even knocking on it like a door. Shocked, Anko burst out of her coffin, to find that odd stranger from before sitting on a apple tree branch, that appeared out of nowhere, with his arms held back in a laid back manor, chewing on an apple.
"HEY, YOUR THE JERK! FIRE RELEASE: PHOENIX WAVE SURGE!" Anko breathed in, before launching the flame ribbons. The stranger sighed
"Ninja Art; Apple Shurikan" from the tree, apples flew off, and after being covered in chakra flow, began dividing, finally they begin to spin like Shurikan into the fire attack, breaking it. Anko's eyes were wide.
"Water Release Chakra Flow!" The man smiled.
"Quite true. Hope you don't mind the tree, I need Oxygen after all" he commented off handildly. Anko glared at him.
"What the hell do you want" he smiled.
"Oh, this is only my 513th stop on my grand adventure, and wherever I go, I seek to aid those I meet, should they deserve it" he stood up on the tree branch "And seeing as though my companion isn't fit to leave the nearby hospital after a nasty alteration with a orange masked man, I'd recommend you watch that guy, and isn't due to leave for a few weeks, and thus being stuck here, I'd thought I'd give you some advice" he commented before jumping down to Anko's ground level. "As well as some information you'd be happy to here" Anko was furious.
"HAPPY! MY DESTINED MATE'S ABOUT TO HAVE HIS DREAMS CRUSHED..."
"Yet he's on a C rank mission" Anko stopped mid cry fest, before smiling relieved.
"Thank you Sandiame"
"However, during the mission he will find his life hanging on by a mere thread, and one could easily sever it" he turned away, letting a look of shock cross Anko's face.
"At the same time, I understand your looking for help? Well, I believe that your find, two useful aids during this mission. Well, that's all I have to say" he vanished via that yellow warp that made her feel like something was on the tip of her tongue. She eyed the tree, before growling...
"THIS ISN'T TWILIGHT!" she destroyed the thing with a full powered fist, before shadow traveling to near her Destined Mate's location.
If that odd man was to be believed, this could end either really well, or really badly.
Unknown locationGato's POV)
Gato, a short and overconfident banker with a dark side, observed the three who he had hired to deal with that bridge builder who was a threat to his control.
The first was a tall, dark haired man with a large sword and no eyebrows. One of the Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist, Momoichi Zabuuza.
The Second was a black haired girl, in conservative battle robes. Her name was Haku.
Finally, there was a red head, whose robes showed off more, a lot more, named Mei.
"You know what to do, kill the bridge builder, and whoever is guarding him
Meanwhile
Orig Moves
Ninja Art; Apple Shurikan
Rank; E
Description; One of my best Mysterious Power Jutsu, with it apples are ones to control like Shurikan