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Naruhina; I know what your saying...I just try to stay somewhat realistic in my fics if possible. I at least thought I was generous with the busts both here and in Mysterious Power...and for Mrs. Weasley, when bashed she becomes much more overbearing then in canon, and is usually a Pure Blood Supremacist in a bashed Dumbeldore's 'Greater Good' view of a pureblood society. I wouldn't call her evil as to say like bashed Kakashi's, Sarutobi's or such end up, but a bashed her usually leeches money from the Potter accounts to pay her children through Hogwarts and tries to use potions to get Harry and Ginny together...
Maxome; My email updates are a little off too
Anatomous; Well...its complicated. Read Mysterious Power for further information
Scorpion; I did that when Haku and Mei became vampires a few chapters ago
Chad001; I saw two fics of that nature myself (I don't know about Slash fics of this genre, there type is something which I avoid)...neither really good. The second involves Percy...and half the gods turned into females...
Tobi; I think I'm getting better at least. As to Kakashi...your see. And I plan to show them soon, also don't forget that it took a while for Samui and her team to get to Konoha in canon.
Death Vamp; Thanks
As many people have requested, I am continuing my other harem brainstormings...
Basic ideas,NOT FINAL;
Percy Jackson;
Hades, the God of the Underworld, as many of you know in Greek Myth, is married to Persephone, the Goddess of Spring, who he abducted and eventually won the heart of. However, in myth they seem to lack children. If I ever make this Harem story, Demeter would have gained the aid of Hera to render it impossible for children to be conceived from their marriage, as petty revenge, and also in hopes it will drive the two apart.
However, Hades and Persephone found out of a method to prevent this, a powerful bond that can only be forged by three way love. As Hades is shown to have few demigod children, he'd have only had them with females Persephone agreed he could be with and could also love. The children of such a union were more powerful then normal demigods, and should the child reach the age of 16, the bond would give the other wife immortality.
However, sad to say, no mother of a Hades Demigod had ever lived long enough.
However, at the words of an Oracle, Poseidon is forced to seek a mortal female in order to fulfill the great prophecy. Though what happens when he manages to stumble upon this bond on his own?
As does later his Son, Percy.
Likely Bashings; Hard to say...the only bashings I've really seen are Annabeth (Leaves Percy as soon as the prophecy is over or cheats) Artemis (Her love hating really, really overplayed) and Rachael (Evil Third Wheel)...none of which I really like
Harem Size; 3 (Reason, In Greek Myth you have three to a quest, three fates, three sons of Kronos, three furies, three ages...so on; Likely Annabeth, Thalia and Artemis)
Harry Potter;
During the Order of the Phoenix, instead of Marriet Edgecombe joining the DA, they are instead joined by two Slytherin, Theodore Nott and Daphne Greengrass. As the admission of two Slytherin's causes issues with Ron Weasely, Daphne manages to reveal to Harry and Hermione secrets that Dumbedore doesn't want revealed.
Manipulations that led to his parent's deaths, the unfair trail of Sirius, ignoring the issues with the Dursely's and stealing money from his vaults.
Thus Harry Potter begins to enter the complicated world of Magical Politics...while dealing with evil toad ladies, manipulated headmasters, he who must not be named...and the Ministries new 'Family Restoration Act'
Likely Bashings; Draco, Ron, Molly, Snape, Ministry and Wizarding Society in general.
Harem Size; 7 (Reason, the magic properties of 7; Likely Hermoine, Susan, Ginny, Parvati, Padma, Luna and Daphne)
Bleach;
Why does Ichigo have so much spirit energy, as do his sisters? Where does his inherent skill come from? Could this be the trailings of something different...
The Seireti stagnant and decaying, the hollows on the rise, while at the same time nasty divides begin forming in the Gotei 13.
As it is revealed that Ichigo is destined to replace the Spirit King's line with his own and change the state of the Soul Society, squads and Shinigami begin to take sides.
Some, such as Kenpachi, Yachiru, Toshiro Renji and Jushiro side with Ichigo, meanwhile others such as Sui Feng, Sajin, Yamamoto and Mayuri back the spirit king.
How will such a civil war end?
Likely Bashings...is there Bleach Bashing? But anyway...expect their society itself to be bashed)
Harem Size; 13 (Gotei 13...thanks for the idea Animeman; Likely Orohime, Rukia, Yoroichi, Isane, Tia, Nemu, Retsu, Nelliel, Rangiku...still thinking on the rest.
Begin
Konoha Hospital (Hiashi's POV)
Flashback...
"She's loosing consciousness, ready the E.R, Stat!" Medical nin were yelling as a stunningly beautiful 'bluenette' with a figure to die for despite being twice a mother was rushed through on a stretcher, with a grievous chest wound. Running after her was a younger, and shockingly tearful Hiashi.
"AMI!"
End Flashback
Hiashi shook himself from that horrible scene before his wife's death before that, as his eldest daughter lay in a hospital bed, with a weak but steady pulse. Hinata would live, but she was definitely out of the running for the Chunnin Exams in a few weeks.
The Kunai had been dipped in a moderately powerful toxin, probably chosen because he suspected Uzumaki-son's condition wouldn't be able to stop it.
There were a few poisons of that style around . This particular one cauterized chakra flow...and in males caused certain organs to implode...which wasn't a problem on females, luckily for Hinata.
However, Uzumaki-son and Team's 8 and 10 managed to get her to the hospital quickly enough to begin neutralizing the poison. Though her healing was a little quicker than normal...
Uzumaki-san...the boy who had won his daughter's heart. His daughter may not likely be the type to take charge of the Clan, but married to the heir of the Yellow Flash...
Oh, he knew about that, for the Byukugan knows all. That, and he bothered to think it over a few times.
The boy had been in hysterics when Hinata was brought in...he actually even got down on his knees and begged hm for forgiveness, thinking he was the reason she was injured.
Hiashi then pointed out he wasn't...for someone must of performed a swap jutsu during his fight with the fiend who did this...
Noting with a small grin, seeing as no one could see it, get well gifts ranging from a gift basket from her sensei and the Dango Nutcase, to a bug deterrent lamp from the Aburame (Not bug killing, obviously, but they at least could tell why others would find mosquitioes bothersome), and even Uzumaki managed to somehow get something, 7 'Free Day at the Hotsprings' coupons (Poor boy probably couldn't even use them...he'd have to talk to those who ran it, after all they were his clansmen)
Even Neji had left her a Get Well card, without him having to threaten him with the caged bird seal. Speaking of which...
Without turning around, he could already sense that Guy and his team, including his nephew, were here.
"Good, your here" Hiashi commented formally "Guy-san, you know what you have to do. Someone tried to get my daughter killed, and while I'm deciding his" Guy and Hiashi scowled at the same time, mildly disturbing the sane head of the Hyuga "fate, so I want to ensure nothing happens. As it is, my clan is, unavaliable" he quietly noted Neji, who noted him back in an unspoken conversation.
'While I have no proof, I have an odd suspicion that the elders are somehow involved. For that reason, I can't take a risk with my clansman, hence why I am using this idiot'
'But what about me, I'm one of the clan...'
'Yes, and again the idiot, his mini clone, and the weapons girl can knock you down should you try something' With that finished silent conversation, Hiashi was off.
Training Ground, Naruto's POV
Naruto sent a beast wave palm straight into a target, olbliterating it instantly.
Did it have to be that people hated just him! Now because of that, his friends were being hurt...that just wasn't right. First Mei and Haku...and now Hinata nearly bit it.
He was rather shocked that her father didn't kill him.
The Chunnin Exams were only in 13 days, he had to get stronger. During the exams, he probably had to keep his team safe for a time, and while he could care less about Sakura, he wouldn't see Sasuke injured or killed because some idiot wanted him dead...
"DIE DEMON..." Out of nowhere, some civilian Genin in his 20's flew at him with a kunai. The main reason he was out here and not at home was because he was worried that what happened with Hinata could set something up, and it looked like he was right.
Luckily for him, the Sandiame had his viewing crystal ball on so when he took care of the idiot...
"Wind Release; Beast Wave Palm!" the Genin was sent flying into a tree, where he crumpled to the ground...
'YOU STRIKE AGAIN YOU FOUL DEMON, HOW DARE YOU MURDER AN INNOCENT MAN...DIE!" now about a dozen Civilian Genin in their twenties were flying out of the brush around him, all wanting to kill him...
"FIRE RELEASE; Blue Fire Ball Technique!" a ball of blue fire flew out of nowhere, engulfing 11 of the 12 attackers, as a purple blur with a pale blond tail of hail landed next to him.
While the 12th was smashed into by a tan and white blur with a green top of hair, and sent 6 feet into the ground.
Naruto blinked, as he found two attractive girls right in front of him...
"Whoa...um, who are you?" The purple one smiled.
"I'm taking it your a Jinchuuriki?" Naruto had a odd look on his face
"Jin, what?" the green haired sighed violently.
"Do you have a tailed beast sealed inside you!"
"Um...yes" Naruto said meekly.
"Then, your a Jinchuuriki. I'm Yugito Nii, container of the Nibi, and this is Fu, container of the Nanabi..."
"Naruto Uzumaki, I'm the container container of the Kyuubi" the two girls had pleased smiles.
"So, how's your life?"
Meanwhile, the Council Chambers, Hiashi's POV
"HE DESERVES DEATH!" Hiashi said loudly but controlled. "THE HYUGA CLAN WILL ACCEPT NOTHING LESS! HE PUT A CLAN HEIR IN THE HOSPITAL WITH NEAR FATAL INJURIES"
"Injuries that also prevent my son, as well as the son of Inuzuka-san, from participating in the Chunnin exams" Shibi added in.
"BUT HE WAS JUST TRYING TO ATTACK THE DEMON, WHO SWAPPED PLACES WITH HER..." Saya began, before Danzo shook his head, as Inoichi began.
"If you'd bother to pay attention to the Flashback no Jutsu that I played from the memories of Nara Shikamaru, Uzumaki Naruto, Inuzuka Kiba, Akamichi Choji, my own daughter Yamanaka Ino, Yuhi Kurenai and Mitrashi Anko, you would have plainly seen that the swap jutsu used was not of his casting"
"Bah, your evidence is inconclusive" a walking fossil civilian hoarsely spoke "I see you didn't check the bug hive..."
"The Yamanaka jutsu are ineffective against my clan" Shibi said plainly.
"I do believe that Hatake is deserving of punishment..." Danzo began
"NO HE ISN'T!"
"BE SILENT YOU PINK HAIRED MONSTROSITY, BEFORE I DECLARE A BLOOD FEUD!" that shut her up.
"And here is what I suggest. He is to put on trial for the full extent of his punishments after the Chunnin exams, to ensure his students can enter. After all, dropping two teams will look suspicious in the eyes of the other nations. Until then, except for parts requiring his presence, he is to be incarcerated. Only medical attention necessary to his survival is to be given, and his gall bladder, lung, index finger, thumb, middle toe and right ear ar not to be reattached. Also, as per Konoha law; attacks on Clan Heirs or other figures of importance..."
"So, just the Hyuga, right?" A fat business man grunted. Danzo shook his head.
"No, it also includes Council Members, visiting Dignitaries, Doctors, Manga Store Owners, Ramen Chefs, Morning Talk Show hosts and Jinchuriki, for example, as outlined in Article 9 of the Konoha charter" the Shodai had, a varied view of important people. "So Uzumaki-san is also to be compensated. As he is now incapable of continuing his line, the properties and bank accounts of the Hatake Clan are to be absorbed by the Hyuga Clan."
Hiashi nodded, he could do that. The Hatake family had a house in the land of Nude Beaches after all
"And Uzumaki-san, who I'd have given the properties to, if not for the 'Codes of Inheritance of Konoha Clans', which prevents a person of under Jonnin rank from taking possession of Clan Residences aside for inheritance, shall receive the man's summoning Contract and Scroll of Jutsus" with that statement, the Civilians and other elders attempted to prevent this via a lot of red tape and FIllibuster threats, before being overruled after 3 hours of debate.
Meanwhile, Back in the Training Field (Naruto's POV)
Fu shrugged, both the girls having listened to Naruto's life story "Sad to say, your life is a lot better than mine" Naruto blinked in shock. How bad could her life had been...
Yugito appeared to be contemplating something "This, Haku and Mei you mentioned...they were stabbed, right?" Naruto nodded grimly
"Chidori into the heart" Yugiot blinked.
"No" Naruto was shocked.
"What..." what was she getting at, she wasn't there. He buried them himself. They both were dead!
"Naruto-san, one of my abilities as the Nibi's Jinchuuriki, I can sense the deceased. Not like a cheap ghost hunter on TV sort of thing, but I can tell when a person is dead. And neither of those two are dead, they are still alive"
"WHAT!"
Orig moves
Fire Release; Blue Fire Ball Technique
Tailed Beast Skill (C)
Description; Two tails version of Fire Ball Jutsu