As I continue to brainstorm ideas for future harem stories, various bits of future plans are being brainstormed.
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Leaf Ranger; Danzo's plan was more or less to strengthen the Leaf Village in some way or form. Naruto gaining the Hatake scrolls is one way to do that. At the same time, Hinata is under guard
Chad; Not bad, but I'd have to wait until I actually write the story to use them.
ManXome; Her plans require a female Jinchuriki, and now two are in the area. So while Naruto is going to be high strung, its not irreparable. And yes, Danzo is walking free for now.
Godzilla; He he
Gold Testement; Have you ever met anyone with abilities over the dead that doesn't creep you out?
Naruhina; More like how easy you can run up on Naruto, Harry Potter and Bleach. The idea of a Family Restoration Act is from you, but I have some idea of how to work it in, a law that works only on 'Ancient and Noble' houses with no other members. I plan to have it drafted by Lucius, as insurance for his son should he end up the only Malfoy...and if he should end up inheriting the House of Black...which I plan for Harry to myself. Note how I plan to keep Lucius a decent man...well he won't be made into a wife abusing jerk like he is in a lot of fanfics. Also, Sakumo thought Kakashi was his son...his wife had an affair.
Hektols; Well with their main ninja gone, they are weakened considerably
Fer Pein; I'd be disturbed
Anatomous; That is correct
Scorpion; Yes, he will now be able to use Ninken dogs from the summoning contract
Miles; Well, I might write it one day
Tobi; Its more of the Nibi doing it and telling her. Sort of like how Naruto can now sense negative emotion
Nexus; That will come up if I ever try to write lemons...tried once in my first story...don't read it, its not pretty. I only keep it around for vintage reasons.
Elemental; Hinata is slowly being turned. Because Neji and her father and on extreme protective mode right now
Epicjargon; Ever meet a kid named Nico Di Angelo? Well his ability to sense death is similar to hers
You know, I was just wondering, why is Bellatrix Lestrange insane? Speaking of Harry Potter, it appears J.K Rowling is up to something. Look up Pottermore dot the com.
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Hokage's Office, Naruto's POV (A few days later)
"Jiji...HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE! THEY WERE DEAD, NO PULSE, A GIANT WOUND IN BOTH THEIR CHESTS AND THEY HAD THE COLD OF THE DEAD! BUT...ALIVE?" Naruto was pacing back and forth, in a frenzy over this odd development. The hokage, having seen the entire thing via his crystal ball of all seeing wisdom...for both protecting the villages and ensuring 'tranquility in the womans hot springs'
"Well, there is a jutsu, created by the Nidiame, that allows for the dead to be revived" he offered "However, the way they are revived is practically a half death, zombie like state. I know little of the Nibi's inherent abilities, but I do not believe that particular aspect is at play here" the Hokage frowned.
"What ever the girl implied, we can only guess. The way she was talking, however, didn't suggest deceit" Naruto frowned.
"Hey...the way Fu-san and Yugito-san were talking, it sounded like they were treated pretty badly...worse than I was. Do you think that's true?" The elderly Hokage sighed.
"It's likely, I hate to say this, Naruto-kun, but compared to most Jinchuuriki, you were treated like Royalty" Naruto's eyes were wide.
"Here, we have a policy to try and treat those with tailed beasts inside of them like containers of great evil, while elsewhere they are seen more as weapons. Of course, most people see those with tailed beasts sealed in them, the tailed beasts themselves, so it appears those terms offer little help..." he paused for dramatic effect.
Such methods helped to keep Naruto's somewhat limited attention span.
"But in reality, it does. Konoha has played host to three separate Jinchuurki in its history, and none of them turned out as murderers, serial killers, serial rapists, insane freaks, demons in human form or psychopaths...which every other village has done to their Jinchuriki" Naruto looked pale.
"Yikes" the Hokage sighed.
"Its a self fufilling prophecy. They treat them like monsters, they eventually snap and act like monsters, and they use that as justification. Even if they don't, they end up being anti social and disliking other people" Naruto frowned.
"Well, that sounds a lot like Fu-san, but Yugito-san seemed different somehow. I mean, she doesn't seem to hate people like Fu-san does...I'd bet if I never heard about her cat problem, I'd never of guessed" Hiruzen smiled sadly.
"Kumogakure used to be pretty good for Jinchuurki. The Hachibi's Jinchuuriki, Killer Bee, was a ninja of renown and power equal to that of the Yondiame, part of the infamous A-B duo"
"Used to..."
The Hokage turned towards the window as he lit his pipe "Their was a coup recently, where a dissedent assasinated the Sandiame Raikage and took control, framing the crime on Killer Bee, so both he and Yugito have taken a fall. The true successor, A, is currently planning a rebellion to try and take control back, and I have sent one of my old students to act as liason and provide aid to the campaign if possible"
"Wait...you mean like a Sannin!" Naruto had huge eyes.
"Yes, my student, Jiraiya is seeing if he can provide aid to A's forces as we speak. While we hardly get along with Kumo, A would lead the village in a less problematic way for Konoha then the current leadership. I have already delayed recognition of the new government...though sadly that's all I can do."
"I haven't been able to get the idea of sending ninja to A's aid beyond Jiraiya, who works outside the authority of both councils. Hiashi, Tsume and Inoichi are hesitant to be involved with Kumo, unless it involves killing A in Hiashi's case...don't ask its personal"
"Okay Jiji" Naruto said dead panned. The elderly Hokage smiled was now large.
"Only 10 more days until the Exams begin, I'd ready yourself Naruto-kun, show the village that your you, and not an overgrown fox..." he then turned serious.
"Naruto-kun, I'm not going to stop you if you run into them again if you want to talk" he referred to Fu and Yugito "But do not take any lessons in using the Nine Tailed Fox's power. That sort of power is far to dangerous for a 12 year old, and even the slightest hint of it will set the village into a panic. You must succeed with only your power if possible, and not the Foxes"
Meanwhile, The Forest of Death (Fu's POV)
Fu and Yugito were sleeping in a large tree hollow, deep in the deadly forest. Normally, this would ensure their death, but the chakra from their tailed beasts that was released normally was enough of a deterrent for the two to rest peacefully.
They stayed for several reasons. One was that they highly doubted that any place they could get to from here with Jinchuuriki would let them walk away.
Second was that they were close to Taki, so they'd be looking for Fu, so it would be best to avoid passing by their ninja's way.
Third, was that they were curious about what was going on with Naruto. The undead issue that Yugito had heard from Naruto intrigued her, and the Nibi, so she wanted to see if she could get any more information on it. Having her Hiate hidden, they could hide out in the village and procure supplies here in addition to information.
They were mildly worried about the up coming chunnin exams, but Fu commented that Taki's current Ninja crop was rather hopeless, and had virtually no chance of getting that far in the exams. In all likely hood, only 1 team out of the 9 they'd likely send could hope to get to the second round.
Anko's Lair (Anko's POV)
"You know, I think I might need to expand the place" Anko frowned, looking around. The room seemed spacious, but with the arrival of two Jinchurriki, and the transformation of Hinata that would be finished around the Chunnin exams at some points, it probably would get cramped.
"You know, it might be more spacious if we had regular beds, and not that coffin" Ino commented with a groan, in her transformed 'true' appearance. "I sleep perfectly fine in my own bed, so why do you need a coffin" Anko shrugged.
"I just think its cool, and I can do a lot more kinky things to Naruto-kun..." Ino shivered, though bushing.
"Please don't" Ino still somehow was managing to hold onto prudity even after so long...
Oh, how she'd love to break that down.
"So what, are we going to capture those two or what? I mean, that Yugito person could cause trouble if Naruto-kun..." not that she was ready to say that in public "If she somehow figures out what really happened" Anko smirked.
"Even if she gets the idea, she's not exactly going to say it out loud. She's not the type if I've managed to gleam enough on her" they were briefly interrupted as Mei shadow traveled into the room.
"Haku-chan's taken on the Hinata watch for now, yawn..." Mei appeared woozily tired. Anko grinned compassionately.
"Coffin's all yours" Mei smiled thankfully as she dragged herself to it. Ino shook her head.
"A bed's perfectly fine, you could just move a few cots down here or something?" Anko again grinned perversely.
"Just wait Miss Mindy" Ino frowned at the joke "I have an odd feeling that once we have Naruto-kun, you would be just itching to get into a nice warm...bed or coffin, with the lot of us" Ino frowned...she disliked it when the snake lady was right.
It also gave her a shivery reminder to many of Hinata's 'dreams' she saw when monitoring her psyche.
Flashback (A little ranchier than I normally do, but not to much)
Ino was frozen, in a combination of shock, minor disturbance...and lust, as she ended up in the front seat of one of Hinata's 'Tamer' dreams...
"Oh, harder Naruto-kun, Harder!" Ino seemed to be viewing the future 'true' appearance of Hinata, who was a lot taller then before, about her height actually, but with a lot more chest.
The chest was bigger than even Mei's...which should be illegal. As should be the wild...inhuman moaning...and stretching...
Even as she watched, Hinata somehow put her legs on Naruto's shoulders, over them more on the sides of his head.
She couldn't really see Naruto that well, lust had a bad effect of messing up a Yamanaka's mind jutsu, but the blond hair was still quite visible.
She then made the mistake of pressing into...older dreams. After which, she was blushing for hours.
I've extended it far enough, up next is the Chunnin Exam start up arc...and I still haven't chosen between Temari and Kin. Make your voices heard and decide!
