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All; The ideas are all being considered, so keep your eyes out for this stories end, and the story that follows it.
Leaf; Its the same thing that was done with Yugito and Fu
Hektols; It was that long?
Harliquin; I just realized, I forgot to torture him in the Harry story, NO! (In the PJ story his cart got destroyed and he disappeared mysteriously
Naruhina; The challenge I have shows an example of what I want, not what they have to do...and unfortunately I have a lack of people taking my challenges, one of them being Hanyou Naruto and his vixens by
Elemental; He's destroyed and will reform somewhere else...eventually
Guy who doesn't give a name; Some people do...and again I had no idea it would be that long
Begin
Demonic Waiting Room (Kyuubi's POV)
The giant and fearsome Nine tailed Fox was in a really dull looking waiting room, the sort of thing you see everywhere.
A few chairs (Demon sized however), several old magazines, out of date music, carpeting...and agonizing waiting time.
"Wait...this can't be the waiting room!" the fox whimpered in disbelief.
He thought it was just a myth
"Yes, it is" Shukaku, who was sitting on one of the giant chairs, with a old edition of 'National Gorographic', said darkly "Your first time here if I recall...well then I hope you enjoy its, entertainment.
"Oh, don't be so hard on him" a flaming blue cat meowed, reading a 'Cat Fancy' "We all fear this place" after all, the sheer boredom the demonic waiting room creates was the reason that Bjjuu tend to rampage...to let out the stress "After all, only I actually chose to come here"
"YOU CHOOSE THIS HELL NIBI!" the giant beetle Nanabi, who was reading 'Beetle's beer magazine', snapped "This place is torture! The average wait time is 200 years! Why would you choose this!"
The cat purred "Simple really, I gave my host permission to. I always feel bad about ruining her life..."
"THEY RUIN OURS...!" Kyuubi howled
"You've seen how they are treated" she hissed "She deserved a better life than what I gave her, so I let her go. I did need to check the times" she purred "Oh, so Salmon's the big thing now...I'm still into Tuna"
Kyuubi growled, as Shukaku waved him off' "Oh sit your ass down and read a magazine, we're not getting out of here for a while, if you may notice the timer" The fox looked up to see a giant electric countdown clock.
Kyuubi 1200 years (NO!)
Hachibi N/A
Nanabi 1230 Years (Ha ha)
Rokubi N/A
Gobi N/A
Yonbi N/A
Sanbi N/A
Nibi 30 Years (WHAT!)
Shukaku 132 Years (WHAT!)
"Why do you guys get out so quickly!"
Shukaku grumbled "One benefit of being one tailed"
Nibi purred "Brownie points anyone?"
Kyuubi tried to create a tailed beast ball, but found that it shorted out like a low power phone. He whimpered when he saw the sign
No tailed beasts ball, thank you and please wait your turn
The Kyuubi began crying "WHY! FIRST THE BRAT, NOW THIS!"
The Nibi got a photo of the sorry fox, before she returned to modern grooming techniques.
The Lair (Mei's POV)
Mei looked over the slow, shallow breathing of the girl they had recovered the same time as their changing destined mate..
They had found no one else
"She's not going to last forever" Mei commented as she used fire chakra to cauterize some of her wounds "Where's Anko-Sama?"
Haku frowned, she was leaning against the wall "She's fighting that snake..."
Mei had wide eyes "We should help her..." Haku rose her hand up to silence her buxom friend.
"No...Anko-sama told us to watch Naruto-kun, and also the others" she looked around at the exhausted and bloodied fellow vampiresses or hanyou's, aside for Konan who had only just joined.
The blue haired girl had her eyes closed as if concentrating "Haku-Chan's right, we can't leave our posts...or else we will face, punishment"
"Well...Anko-sama wouldn't kill us..." Mei began
Haku snapped her head back to her "Of course she wouldn't...that would be far too merciful if she was in a punishing mood!"
They shivered...they saw her at work a few times...that was cruel and unusual.
"Wait...the guy who employed you never..." Konan was surprised.
"No, he'd never! Other people, yes...though he never would punish me like that for some reason"
Amegakure (Nagoto's POV)
A tall man, dressed in the robes of the same organization as Itachi, with vibrant orange hair like that of a famous Shinigami substitute, with purple, rippling eyes and piercings, frowned as he looked at a painting of three young people.
A orange haired, cheerful boy, himself, a red headed, solemn boy, and a slightly older blue haired girl. He frowned
"Hanan, Yahiko...I'm sorry" long ago, the three of them had been the best of friends, all of them orphans of war. Jiraiya of the Sannin had trained them in Ninjutsu, and helped him understand how to use the Rinnegan.
Of course, he still was finding out more and more things these eyes could do every day...the six bodies, the soul removal, the perfect milkshake blending...
Eventually, they had gathered anti war, and anti Hanzo supporters around them to defeat the dictator...Akatsuki.
However, then came that day...
Hanzo had killed both his friends, and he had begun his transformation into the god he was today...and Konan suffered the most.
She was Hanan's daughter with Yahiko, and so he had raised her. She had inherited their skill, and despite her young age he had trained her into his most powerful and loyal servant.
However...
She hadn't replied in a while...and his agents had reported a full on invasion going on in the cursed Konoha.
Did she...die?
Nagato looked into the heavens, tears in his eyes "Hanan, Yahiko...forgive me" his last link to his friends...were they gone forever?
"Nagato-kun, obsessing over the past again" a body appeared in a spiraling wind vortex. Nagato turned around, his Rinnegan eyes narrowing, as the orange masked Madara Uchiha appeared before him.
"You!" he growled.
"Me?"
"Yes...you! You the person who convinced me to send the last memento of my friends...to her death" he didn't know why, but he could practically feel that to be the truth...
But still, something about the feeling was off...like the death, was only partial
"You must feel pain to learn, did you not once say that?" Madara said diplomatically
Nagato glared at the leader of the Akatsuki, as five similar bodies in eyes, piercings and hair burst through various doors, surrounding the Uchiha.
"Because of you, I have lost my friends legacy forever! YOU BASTARD!"
Madara frowned "Humph...you rebel against me, after all I've done for you? You Uzumaki's...perhaps now is the time, to figure out which is stronger" his single eye hole revealed a Sharingan, that morphed, like Itachi's, but somehow different.
"Which is stronger, the Rinnegan or the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan!"
Meanwhile in Konoha (Anko's POV)
Immense waves of chakra force were emmiting from Anko, as Orochimaru clenched his arm to block them (A/N, similar to Sasuke when he brought up initial Jinchuriki Naruto in their fight)
"What have you become? You were nothing when I left you...and now this" She smirked darkly.
"This is your own creation, Sensei! Your little mark awakened my distant blood, dissolving the damn thing away with it. Now, your one true immortality success, the one you never even intended, shall bring you down once and for all!"
"Dramatic much, aren't you...but who say's I'm giving up" the snake heads reappeared
"Wind Release; Snake Dragon Dandelion Meadow!"
"Wind Release; Gust Force!" the two wind jutsu collided with the force of impacting tornados, ripping the buildings apart between them.
As civilian houses were ripped apart by the powerful wind moves, Orochimaru's snake heads reloaded
"Earth Release; Snake Golem Laurel Flora!"
"Earth-Wind Dual Release; Dust Tornado!"a giant, brown tornado was created by Anko and sent spiraling into Orochimaru's jutsu, tearing apart the nearby buildings, before slamming into Orochimaru and sending him spiraling out of control.
"What...Chakra..." he said in awe "So...powerful" so this was the power of a coven of vampires.
They, and those who were bonded to them, saw their powers increase with every new member. With that, the members could gain all five basic elements, as Kekkei Genkai could not be gained.
He would be in a goldmine of knowledge if he could obtain one for study.
He pressed his hands together "Ninja Art; Storm Breaker!" the tornado he was in burst apart as he landed on an intact house, as Anko shadow traveled into range for attack.
"Wind Release; Great Breakthrough!"
"Fire Release; Dragon Flame Jutsu!" a dragon of fire collided into the wind, engulfing its power to make itself stronger...
The flames engulfed Orochimaru, who ku ku kued, and poofed.
Anko growled as Orochimaru proper appeared behind her, the sword of Kusangi glinting for blood.
Before Anko grabbed it back handidly.
Orochimaru's eyes were wide...how could she...
Anko chuckled "Releases aren't the only thing that I picked up" she smirked, glad she had asked Ino for some mind reader training.
While she was not good enough yet to read individual memories, she could detect up front, immediate ones...such as sword attacks.
Anko used her strength to knock Orochimaru to his side, on the ground, as she shadow ported the blade of Zabuza to her
She rose it over her head like a butcher to a chicken...as Orochimaru blocked the blade with the Kusanagi sword.
As another Anko waved from the other side of the street.
"What...?" the clone Anko and the clone sword exploded, just like her destined mate had a tendency to do with his own clones, as a burnt and broken Orochimaru reformed himself by shedding his skin.
"You know, I may be a vampire, but your a real monster" Anko commented from her high perch. Orochimaru ku ku kued
"You flatter me, Anko-chan. Your strength is truly magnificent...and yet still just a tint of my own chakra is in you. Perhaps, it is time to reclaim it, and take your body as interest" Anko frowned.
"What..." Anko was then seriously grossed out, as Orochimaru's body shed...revealing a giant snake, made of many other, smaller, white snakes, with a really ugly head at the end.
He chuckled darkly "Now, prepare Anko-chan...for while I wanted the Sharingan, I can wait a few years, and start with taking your immortal body for myself!"
Cliffhanger no Jutsu!
Yeah...I did
Orig moves
Earth-Wind Dual Release; Dust Tornado
Rank; A
Description; A vicious dust cyclone is fired at a foe
Ninja Art; Storm Breaker
Rank; B
Description; Powerful wind users once used this jutsu to stop freak storms. A lost art until Orochimaru found it in his studies