Unforgiving

Rated M

Pairing: NarutoXHinataXTentenShion

Summary: Cold hard truth came out the night of forbidden scroll incident. Naruto learned more than he bargains for changing his views. With new powers he will do what ever it takes to reach the top. Dark and somewhat evil Naruto. Main pairing NarutoXHinata, NarutoXharem. Dracohalo117 challenge.

An: I like to thank Kyuubi123 for checking this over.

CH. 10

WITH NARUTO

Rushing through the trees at a fast pace, lost in his thoughts Naruto looked for a safe zone where he could study the scroll across his back. As he traveled across the trees, he looked down and saw a lot of bodies. His thoughts were on a battle that may have happened here. Judging from the position of each of the bodies, he took a guess that it was a frontal attack. These shinobi fought to the death and Naruto wished he could have seen it. His thoughts were broken when he blocked a kunai with one of his own.

Naruto landed on top of a tree branch and a few feet away from him, he saw three Iwa ninja before him.

"Hello there Namikaze Naruto or Hakkyou Naruto as you may be called." said the serious looking male Iwa genin.

"Earlier we ran into your sister's team, but they got away like the rats they are. So we came to a decision. If we cannot catch your sister than let's try out our luck on you." Said the smug looking male Iwa genin.

"Any last words yellow flash cutie?" asked the blond Iwa kunoichi as her teammates by her sighed.

"What are your names so I can tell you guys my last words?" Naruto replied back calmly.

"My name is Alita cutie." she said winking at him but her smile held sinister motives.

"The name is Bankosu loser" said the smug looking male Iwa genin.

"I am Jinko" said the serious member of the Iwa team.

"Well Alita, Bankosu and Jinko, you three should look out because you're about to be attacked from behind." Naruto said smugly right back at each of them.

Right on cue Neji showed up. Using his juken style he attacked Bankosu first, cutting off his chakra points while knocking him out. The other two members were going to counter attack, but Alita fell from the tree branch unconscious, where she stood in place was now replaced by Naruto who took the moment of distraction to attack Alita. Jinko fearing for Alita, jumped off the branch to collect Alita from falling to her death. He grabbed her and safely landed on the ground and looked up towards where Bankosu lay.

"How about a temporary truce. You let us go and we promise we won't attack you again, what do you say?" He said attempting for a truce.

"Nah I think there's no need for that" Naruto replied back loudly with a kunai in his hand and ready to end the unconscious Bankosu's life. But Neji stopped Naruto, "We don't need to kill him"

"Are you nuts? These Iwa ninjas only came after me because of who I'm related too. By letting them live this may restart Iwa-Konoha war! Are you willing to risk it?" Naruto questioned Neji.

"Fate doesn't see them fit to die, besides I doubt they want to attack you again especially after what just happened today" Neji said explaining to Naruto.

"This guy and his fate beliefs, it's driving me insane. Unfortunately I need him for future plans, so I'll better play along." Naruto thought to himself. "Fine we'll let you live, but you better keep your word and listen well I am not a Namikaze. I too has suffered under their evil ways, remember that" Naruto said while taking off into the tree with Neji following him.

WITH KUSHINA

"Look at you Kushina, you're a mess. You need to get out more; maybe it's for the best that Minato can't see you like this" Jiraiya said to her while they sat in the park.

"Does it matter; I failed Minato Kun when I turned my back on our son. I cannot be forgiven for what I've done; Minato Kun must be rolling in his grave." Kushina said while wiping some tears from her eyes.

"I don't think Minato is dead" Jiraiya said seriously.

"Wh-What?" Kushina stuttered in confusion.

"This is just a theory I have but what if he planned that Naruto's seal might end up weakening? He's the only one who could fix it"

"But Minato Kun's body is dead so how could he be alive?" Kushina asked Jiraiya not understanding what she hearing.

"Well I said it was just a theory. Knowing Minato he always had a plan B. I wouldn't be surprised if he found a way to separate his soul in order to avoid death itself." Jiraiya explained to Kushina.

"Ok so let's say this is true where would Minato's soul go?" Kushina asked him.

"Well I have another idea on the where part. It's possible that he sealed himself inside his son just in case the seal ever weakened."

"But that makes no sense. If it is true what you're saying than how come Minato Kun didn't stop my son from using the Kyubi's chakra?" She asked him.

"It's perhaps that he witnessed what has happened to Naruto through his eyes." Kushina grasped and prayed that was not the case. "Or he set himself up to appear within Naruto when the situation gets too out of hand" Jiraiya finished saying.

"Oh god please no please no" Kushina said while crying.

"But that's the least of the problem" Jiraiya said getting Kushina's attention. "Since Orochimaru left the leaf village, I have been following his movements. He joined a group that is hunting all the tail-beasts, for what purpose is unknown. However there are seven members within this group perhaps even more. This group calls themselves Akatsuki or red dawn; each member is listed in the bingo books as an S-rank." Jiraiya said with a serious tone in his voice, while in his head he pictured seven shadowy men with long black coats with red clouds on them.

"My god they're after my son, aren't they?"Kushina said growing worried over this.

"Yes there's no doubt in my mind that they wish to get their hands on the Kyubi. So far I was able to find out two members of that origination. One is Hoshigaki Kisame the monster of the hidden Mist and former member of the seven swordsmen of the Mist; his partner is Uchiha Itachi slayer of his own clan. From what I gather they've been spotted somewhere in the land of fire"

"Then we need to protect my son from these people!" Kushina yelled out in anger.

"Don't worry about that, sensei plans to keep Naruto locked up in tight security" Jiraiya replied back with no emotion. "I agree to sensei methods dealing with Naruto"

"But why!?"

"Kushina…he's no longer the child we thought him to be. You and this village have pushed him too far, now in his place is a monster that no one wants. He cannot be saved. I've seen this with my own eyes to know he's a lost cause like Orochimaru." Jiraiya said with anger in his voice with himself and everyone else. Kushina stood quiet knowing he may be right but part of her was willing to disregard what he just said.

"I failed Naruto as a godfather but I will not fail Kari… you might as well come out…Mitarashi Anko" Jiraiya said calling her out of hiding. Anko shunshined in front of them from behind a tree. Kushina looked happy to see her and was about to go hug her until she felt a strong killing intent. Jiraiya stood in between them, shielding Kushina just in case.

"Anko Chan?" Kushina said with a puzzled look on her face.

"Don't you fucking Anko Chan me you fucking backstabbing bitch!"

Kushina's eyes grew wide that the very young woman before her, whom she saw as a daughter, was being hostile to her.

"Here I am walking through the park to relax and pray that my team makes it through the second part of the exam and what do I see? The evil bitch who claimed she isn't like the villagers who treats me like shit. No instead she abused her former son" Anko said with anger and hatred in her tone.

"Anko Chan please let me explain…" Kushina tried to explain.

"SHUT THE FUCK UP I DON'T CARE WHAT EXCUSE YOU HAVE, IT WON'T CHANGE ANYTHING!"

Kushina started to cry and look down. Jiraiya decided to jump in and tried to stop this argument before it became worse. "Enough Anko get out of here before I report this to the third hokage"

"Gladly…But know this don't worry about Naruto he's doing fine. I'll watch over him and give him the love he deserved from the beginning. And you, you're supposed to be his fucking godfather? You knew that he was being abused by both the villagers and his own mother and all you did was nothing but keep to your spy network? If you're like this I hate to see Tsunade at her worse. You two make me sick!" She shunshined away waiting to tell Naruto the news, while leaving those two in thought.

WITH NARUTO

"So that is your burden, your own father sealed the Kyubi within you. Then you're just like me. You too have a curse and burden placed upon you" Neji said while thinking through what he had just been told.

"Neji although you don't have a demon sealed inside of you, I know what it's like to be a slave against your own will, but that isn't what you call fate. You're not fated since birth, we all have paths and our actions decide our path. Neji you hate Hinata because of what has happened to your father?"

"…." Neji said nothing but listen to him.

"But how can you hate Hinata when it was the head of the hyuuga clan that decided what happened to your father and from what you've just told me your father always tried to oppose the main branch. I mean no offense but I think your father chose to accept death as a way to prove that there is no chain holding him. Hinata's dream is for her real family the second hyuga branch members to be free; she too has already turned her back on her real family. Hell I know Hiashi hates the idea that Hinata left her family for me, it was a good move on her part because she helped convince me to find a way that can set you and every branch members of your clan free"

"But why… What are you really after?"

"Straight to the point I like that. Ok I'll be blunt with you, Lady Hinata has turned her back on the main branch of her clan. She and I will create a new clan, where we stand for justice, but this new clan will need some support. All I ask is for you to pledge your loyalty to my clan, no tricks, and no seal controlling all your movement. Your people are free to do what you must but all we ask in return is become the protectors of Hakkyou's clan"

"I---I don't believe you" Neji said nervously to Naruto.

"Come again?" Naruto not liking what he was hearing but decided to keep his anger sealed up.

"As far I know this could be a trap from the main branch to make the branch family seem like the enemies and then it gets to use the seal on us. I refuse to believe Hinata would turn against the main branch and side with the branch family, she-she's too weak to pull this off and she's too frighten to get involved in a war that been going on since the main branch enslaved their own people!" Neji yells at Naruto.

Naruto stared him straight in the eye, not even blinking. He cleared his throat as he gathered what he was going to say to the pale eyed boy in front of him, "Is that what you tell yourself all these years? You believe my Hinata is weak just because you see her as a shy little pacific. Neji I'll make a deal with you…if either Hinata or I prove our strength to you in the finals than I want you to think real hard on who is the weakest between me and you or Hinata and you"

"Fine I'll accept, but fate has already deemed me the winner of this exam"

"Than fate is just a bunch of horse shit. My offer still stands but first me and Hinata are going to have to beat the fate out of you until you get with the picture. For now just wait for the finals" Naruto pulled out a flash bomb, while Neji eyes widen. "Farewell" Naruto threw down the flash bomb. The whole area flashed in a bright white light, even though Neji covered his eyes in time part of the flash still sting his eyes. After a few seconds of rubbing his eyes, Neji opened them only to find Naruto long gone. Nothing much he could do, he turned around and set off in the tree to find his teammates.

LATER THAT NIGHT

Deep within a cave, our favorite blond villain sat around on the ground looking at the hybrid scroll before him. All around him were dead unknown bodies of his fellow leaf ninjas; Naruto killed each of them brutally without sparing mercy. He slashed at each of their vital points and smiled in delight as he watched each of the emotions on their face died down. They couldn't put up much of a fight, for they were already tired from fighting to the death against other opponents out in the field. So like a viper, Naruto struck each of them swiftly not giving any of them time to put up a resistance. So now he sat on his butt studying the scroll before him, one thing he noticed…there was a lot of names on it but with a cross mark across them to show these people are dead. He bit his thump drawing blood and with his own blood he writes his name on the blank space. He waited but nothing happened.

"What! You're kidding me! That snake fucker bastard!"Naruto shouted in anger.

Right then his surroundings began to get much warmer; he narrowed his eyes a few feet towards his left. He saw a symbol formed on the ground and then it light on fire. A figure like person appeared kneeling within the flame. Naruto got a good glimpse of this being and what he saw made him gasp. This being looked human except it had a long tail, devil like horns on it forehead, black hollow eyes with no other colors, bat like wings across it back with sharp pointy ears, dark reddish skin, black long hair, sharp canine fangs and no clothing covering her body at all so her bare naked body was exposed which wasn't much to look at except as she had a average woman's body with a chest like his mother (she almost flat). Overall her height is no different from his own and yet he got the feeling she was no child.

"Who dares summon me, Akemi the fire pixie!?" She demanded in a serious tone as she looks at Naruto like he's a piece of meat.

"I have summoned you, Hakkyou Naruto your new master" He said to the fire pixie demon while standing up and placing the summon scroll across his back.

Akemi looked at him for a moment than laughed, "HAHAHAHAHAH…Once again another mortal thinks he can tame me one of the four hybrids"

"I'm not just any mortal I am a god among mankind and you will do well to respect me you little slut for a bat!" Naruto said while walking up to the very creature with no fear and looked it straight in its eyes. Akemi face became a darker red, whether a blush or anger no one but her would know. She stared back at him and finally opened her mouth again to speak, "No man calls me a slut and lives… you have guts child, I give you that. But if you wish to become my summoner than you must accept my challenge!"

"Very well if I must claim you through a challenge than so be it, by the end of the day you will call me Master" Naruto said with confidence.

"Oh child I hope you last much longer than the last man who tried to summon me"

"I told you I'm a god among mankind"

"We shall see mortal…Now for your challenge you must survive a whole night against my attacks but be warned you cannot use any other attacks against me except for water attacks, because it's my weakness and your only chance to fight back fairly. As for me I will do everything it takes to burn you alive, no matter who gets in my way I will kill them just to get to you. Do you understand me god among mankind?" She explained and mocked him at the same time.

"Let dance babe" Naruto said while getting in a battle stance.

Akemi didn't respond back in words, instead her body began to glow bright red with the surrounding temperature rising. Naruto eyes widened in realization of what she was doing and quickly took off heading for the exit. In mere seconds he jumped out of the cave ducking a wave of flames from behind. In response after the flame died down he quickly threw a kunai with an exploding tag at the front entrance of the cave causing a rockslide to seal up the cave.

"That won't hold her for long I better quickly make haste and wait until the sun rises before I'm toast" Naruto thought to himself as he got right back up on his feet and turned around to get away but was greeted by a team of waterfall ninjas.

"Well look what we have here, a lone blond leaf genin" Said the female waterfall ninja.

"Hand us the scroll and we'll let you live…maybe" Said another female ninja while eyeing his summon scroll across his back thinking it was one of the scrolls they need.

Naruto smiled and placed his hand up in surrender only for him to counter with a high round kick to the female genin that tried to approach him for his scroll. He quickly slid under the approaching other female and jumped on the male genin and rolled him into the same female genin he had slid under (think Ken from street fighter). Naruto took that moment to dash into the woods. The waterfall ninja got up and were about to chase after him until they heard a burning noise coming from that sealed up cave. Like the fools they were, they approached the cave wanting to see what was going on. Then flame melted through the rock like a supernova. Everything in front of it was smoldered by the flames. Only one genin wasn't turned into ashes. Part of her body was melted away leaving only her right side still intact, she screamed in agony while she bled to her death. Akemi flew out the cave and looked around for the blond self proclaimed god among mankind. Her search ended when she heard the scream of her burnt but dying victim. "Well it's no point in letting food waste." She said while licking her fangs and approaching her victim, whom could only scream in pain. It made no difference, Akemi tore into the victim's flesh with her teeth, chewing away at each available flesh and bones. It didn't last long until the girl stopped her screams. Akemi ceased her feast and wiped her mouth of the piece of flesh and blood, "Now time to go back to my hunt".

Akemi flew up in the air and began to look around, and then she closed her eyes and focused on Naruto's body heat. She found ten body heats that match Naruto's own. "Interesting…there are ten of you trying to get away. This is the work of the Shadow clones technique, such a pain in the ass technique. Oh well I do love it when a man runs away from my heat" She opened her eyes and blew out ten flame bats out her mouth. Each of the flame bats took off in the direction where Naruto's shadow clones are running off to.

WITH THE REAL NARUTO

Naruto's plan was simple, he was aware that he could not beat her face to face. Thus he'd wait till sunrise or she wore her out. But it was getting too hard for him to win this challenge; he couldn't stay in one place for too long. He learned that each time a clone of his was destroyed from behind. The info he got from his destroyed clones told him that she was near. So to throw her off he kept making more shadow clones having them run off again and once again they got destroyed creating a blazing fire at some part of the forest, those who were caught in its path were not spared. Naruto kept doing this tactic while pushing east; he kept this up for hours. Soon after he found himself getting very tired, his plan to exhaust her out was failing. He leaned up against a rocky wall which was near a small waterfall. He summoned more shadow clones only to watch them get burned away. He looked up and saw Akemi with fire breathing out her mouth like a dragon while descending down a few feet in front of him.

"God among mankind, more like coward among mankind. If this is what mankind has left to offer then your species doesn't have the right to live!"

Naruto in response heldhis right hand out and started to gather chakra in his hand until it formed into a small blue ball. "That's it? You created a small chakra ball that's not even made out of water? For a moment I thought you were different but I was wrong, you're just like the others all talk but no bite"

"Rule…number…one never underestimate your opponent no matter what" He rammed the chakra ball into the wall behind him cracking at the rock until cold water managed to break the weak symbol. The water poured out like a fire hose catching him and Akemi whom could not fly away in time. The force of water pushed both of them into a nearby river. Naruto stuck his head out the water gaping for air. Soon after Akemi did the same except she tried to flies away, but Naruto grabbed her and pulled her back down into the water and held her under while holding her in place in an attempt to drown her. She thrashed and struggled with him under the water, until Naruto pulled her up. As soon as they were up on the surface he pulled them to shore and the sun began to rise. "Y-You..ack…bastard!" she coughed out water, Naruto not liking her tone kept kicking her in the stomach because he hated her being disrespectful. "You lost get over it and acknowledge me as your master wrench!" He ordered her while he kept kicking her.

"Ack…gah…fine…you win…Master Kun" she said smiling which got Naruto to stop.

"In a true shinobi life there is no such thing as a fair fight. We shinobi are bred to attack from the shadows and use trickery to get our ways. This world has forgotten those times and I intend to make this land remember the true code of the shinobi"

"You speak of a time when ninja were real ninjas. Oh master my hybrid sisters and I have been around for many centuries and your vision of the lost code reminds me of two forgotten clans that fought each others to the death. The Kouga and Iga ninja were bitter enemy, at one time they could have been whole but instead their hate consumed them. Master do not become like them"

"I could care less for ancient history lesson, but you said sisters? Just what are you hybrids?" Naruto asked her wanting to know the mystery of the hybrids.

"We hybrids are a mix of animal with somewhat human forms and yes I have sisters. There are four of us with different elements; I am of fire while the other three are earth, water and wind"

"What no lightning hybrid?" Naruto asked her.

"Oh there is one but she isn't my sister instead she is my mother. One thing you must remember master, she has no human appearance she is what you humans refer to as a demon. If you manage to pass all my sisters challenges than you will meet her and I pray you don't anger her" She said warning him with a serious tone in her voice.

"How would I meet your others siblings?" He asked that question to her.

"The same way I appeared then one of my sister will make their entrance with their element, but only when you're deemed ready. To summon me you do this" She shows his what hand signs to use to make a summon, "First make sure you bite your thump and draw blood before performing the hand signs, then say my name Akemi of fire pixie come forth and I will appear."

Naruto smiled liking that idea but then his smile vanished, "Akemi can you find me a rare weapon?"

"What for my master?" she asked him while flapping her wings a little.

"I need to throw off a couple leaf ninja as I don't want them knowing I have a summon scroll just yet, otherwise they will try to steal the scroll away." He explained to Akemi who rubbed her chin a little and then snapped her fingers.

"Master back in the cave I found a couple of materials with some diamond, it may not seem it but I can make weapons. I'll be right back" She took off and headed back for the cave.

A COUPLE OF HOURS LATER AT THE FRONT OF THE TOWER

Team seven had arrived at tower with Kabuto who helped them through the forest. They have been through hell, since Sasuke went nuts in finding Naruto, He brought trouble for himself and Sakura. A trouble that took the form of Naruto, like a bat out of hell Sasuke attacked the fake Naruto when Sakura tried to warn him to stop. However Sasuke discovered the hard way that wasn't Naruto. He found himself in a fight of his life, Sakura was too afraid to face this opponent so she stood there shaking in fear while watching Sasuke try to fight back. The fight only lasted as long as it did because the unknown ninja taunted Sasuke by bringing up his brother's name. In the end the fight ended with Sasuke getting bitten on his neck, leaving him with a dark curse mark symbol that left Sasuke in incredible pain. The pain was too much for him and so he passed out leaving Sakura alone. The unknown ninja revealed his name as Orochimaru and he stated that if Sasuke ever wanted true power than to seek him out. But that wasn't the worse part; the next day after Sakura set some traps she had visitors.

Three sound genin ninjas appeared. At first they saw past her first trap demanding to fight Sasuke, however they walked into the second trap and nearly lost their lives against a huge tree. Sakura who wasn't experienced in the physical department found herself in a fight against the three sound genin, she even went so far as to cut her hair as a declaration of her change of attitude. As hope seemed lost, Rock Lee showed up and fought against the three genin but he made a mistake when he allowed one of the sound genin to use the same jutsu against him like he saw him use against Kabuto. Lee fell down unable to fight, Sakura ended up tackling one Sound male genin down while holding him down with her teeth to his arms. So he kept punching her in the head, this kept going on until she finally let go, he stood before her ready to kill her until Ino and her team showed up to make the save. It was strange they weren't there to save team seven but instead try to hold Naruto and Sasuke down while they target Sakura quickly and take the scroll, but that changed when Shikamaru reminded Ino who her best friend was. Team ten was able to hold them back and even managed to take out the female genin of the sound team but the male spiky sound ninja was too much for tem to handle. Then Sasuke awoke with the curse mark activate in its first stage. He quickly dispatched the spiky hair ninja by breaking his arms. Sasuke would have continued his onslaught if wasn't for Neji showing with Tenten. Sakura got her hair fixed by Ino and it seems they may have repaired their friendship, she also noticed Tenten looked somewhat heartrending; she could guess why, it was because Naruto wasn't around. Now Sakura waited with Sasuke for Naruto to show up, Kabuto already left with his teammates to unknown parts.

WITH NARUTO

The three sound genin arrived at another side of the tower to find Naruto waiting for them.

"Well well what do we have here, you guys look like shit." Naruto said with amusement in his voice while holding a huge sword with diamonds embedded it in.

"Look we don't want any problem we already left your two teammates alone" said the mask sound genin.

"What are your names?" Naruto asked them.

"What's it to you?" Asked the female sound genin of the team.

"Yeah why should we tell you our name…ouch?" The spiky hair male ninja said while in pain for both his arms wrapped up.

"I just want to know…let me guess you were ordered by Orochimaru to kill Sasuke because he said he was weak and convinced you that you'd be doing this for your village. One piece of advice if I may…Orochimaru was once a leaf ninja who lied and kidnapped people in this village making silly promises that he would never keep. So you think he just trained you hard for this exam to prove something to the world, what fool you're guys are. News flash he's a legendary sannin who fought in a Great War against legendary ninja, Hanzo of the salamander, don't kid yourselves. Knowing him he's only using you three for something far worse and like the good shinobi you are, you will dance for him until he says when you should stop"

They stood lost in their own thoughts, and then the bandaged up mask ninja decides to speak up. "My name is Dosu and that is Zaku; the girl with the long hair is Kin. We told you our names, now tell us what you really want to talk about"

Naruto smile and decides to take a chance with these three.

A HOUR LATER

Team seven waited a long while and was about to give up and walk into the tower until Naruto showed up holding the huge sword like the demon of the mist itself with his summon scroll across his back. He didn't bother to say anything but walked right in, Sasuke couldn't attack him because Sakura was doing a good job distracting him. (the event of Iruka took place the same way except Naruto wasn't happy to see him and acted normal)

Later in the night Naruto snuck away from his room undetected and followed the directions Sai gave him earlier. He found the hidden passage and made his way deep in the hidden lair until finally a voice told him to stand in the center of the spotlight.

"Hakkyou Naruto….we have judge your performance in your mission regarding with Orochimaru…you have passed" Said the voice.

"Good before I ask for my next mission, I believe there is a reward regarding one seal on my previous seal" Naruto said with no emotion.

"Very well…"

A Ne ninja appeared before Naruto. Naruto remembered seeing him the first time before, the same blond ninja fingertips glowed as he signals for Naruto to reveal his seal to him. Naruto wasted no time and pulled his shirt up, "Hit me with your best shot"

The Ne ninja ram his fingers onto the seal pushing Naruto back. Naruto stood back up and looked at the seal Jiraiya placed on him vanish for good. Finally he could use his gift again, and once again evil was reborn in the land of fire.

END CHAPTER

NEXT CHAPTER: Face down who face who?

AN: I have a challenge to issue out for those who interest. If anyone wants to accept then here my challenge:

A dark/evil Naruto

Main Plot: Naruto formed his own little village against the principle of Konoha beliefs

Sub- plot: I allow you to decide the sub plots but it must be believable and well play details. Minato and Kushina should be alive but I leave how you want to portray them on your hands, wither they be good or evil toward Naruto is on you guys. Should Naruto have siblings? Is an optional choice, should he have a bloodline is also optional but make sure it balance out and not too powerful.

Pairing: It could be harem pairing but if also it can be a single pairing (no yaoi)

You should put Hinata in it even if she isn't the main girl in the harem pairing along with any girls of your choice including filter characters and OC characters.

But if you make it a single pairing with Naruto Let it be with these following characters: Hinata or Kin or Anko or an OC or an Iwa kunoichi or any female you fill fit the bill except for Sakura (There is too many of pairings with her and Naruto). Make the relationship believable with each detail that describe the up and down of the relationship or relationships (Harem).