Unforgiving
Rated M
Pairing:
Summary: Cold hard truth came out the night of forbidden scroll incident. Naruto learned more than he bargains for changing his views. With new powers he will do what ever it takes to reach the top. Dark and somewhat evil Naruto. Main pairing NarutoXHinata, NarutoXharem. Dracohalo117 challenge.
An: I like to thank Kyuubi123 for checking this over; Also Have you ever wondered "Who is the hottest, sexiest, most beautiful girl ever created in the world of anime?" Well now's your chance to vote for your own Top 10. Kingkakashi besides having a great story has set-up a poll about this very question on his profile page. Help answer and settle this issue once and for all. And Also I having a poll for this story if I should add one more girl to the harem, so vote for it.
CH.13
WITH KARI
Kari found herself searching around the village looking for the one man who could increase her training. She was still mad with mother after she finished her pre-exams.
FLASHBACK
"I will not have you walk down this path of darkness. Look what it has done to me!" Kushina yelled at her daughter.
"Great now you're going to be the concerned mother!" Kari remarked right back at her.
Kushina slapped Kari across the face very hard, but soon after she felt very guilty. She tried to reach out to her daughter but… "Don't touch me!" She slapped her mother's hand away while heaving her chest at her. "H-Honey I'm so sorry" Kushina tried to reason with her while crying.
"You're sorry, yeah just like you were when it came to raising Naruto!"
"I MADE A MISTAKE! I WASN'T RIGHT WITH MY SELF!"
"SURE YOU WEREN'T! IT TOOK YOU TWO YEARS TO REALIZED THAT, BUT GUESS WHAT MOTHER, NARUTO ALREADY BECAME A MONSTER!"
"NO HE HASN'T! THERE'S STILL A CHANCE THAT I CAN FIX THIS. I HAVE TO DO THIS FOR MY SAKE AND MINATO!"
"SCREW FATHER. HE'S THE REASON WE'RE IN THIS MESS! BECAUSE OF FATHER'S SIN EVERY CLANHEAD IN THIS VILLAGE IS EITHER JUDGING US OR TRYING TO KISS OUR ASS. FATHER IS THE CAUSE OF THIS MESS…" She didn't get a chance to finish because Kushina struck her again. Kari fell to the floor looking at her mother with tears in her eyes, while rubbing the bruise mark on her face.
"SAY WHAT YOU WANT ABOUT ME BUT DO NOT PUT THE BLAME ON YOUR FATHER OR BROTHER!" Kushina yelled at her daughter.
"I HATE YOU!!" Kari screamed out and ran out the house crying.
END FLASHBACK
"For the past two years all she would talk about is Naruto this and Naruto that. I'll show her and everyone in this village that he's nothing but a devil…There he is!" Kari mentally screamed out when she spotted Jiraiya peeking into the bathhouse except he was looking at the women's side.
"PERVERT!" Kari screamed out alerting not only Jiraiya's but a few of the women who were bathing causing them came out with theirs towel on. Before Jiraiya could say anything or try anything, these women ganged up on him and repeatedly beat him into the ground. When they were done, Jiraiya was nothing but a bloody mess; Kari laughed through all his beatings. Jiraiya would have yelled at the girl until he noticed the mark across her face.
"Let me guess you and Kushina had a falling out, am I right?" He asked her while dusting himself off.
"It wasn't my fault she still believes that Naruto can be saved. In fact everyone believes he can be saved." Kari said while her anger started to rise.
"Sometimes a person can be saved….but even the great toad sage is starting to believe that it may be too late for Naruto." He said remembering his talk with the elders.
FLASHBACK
"I sense great darkness within that boy but I sense something else, something that seems familiar that hasn't been seen in a long time." The Elder Toad said to Jiraiya.
"Surely it's some kind of mistake. this is Minato's kid we talking about here! Elder-sama you expect me to believe that Naruto is becoming what Orochimaru is!?" Jiraiya yelled out in protest towards the elder.
"No I sense he's becoming far worse than Orochimaru. It's small but his hatred is growing. The path he's walking on is diverging from the way of peace."
Jiraiya tightened his fists in anger trying his best to condemn his anger, but the attempt wasn't working. "No I refuse to believe that!" he shouted in protest.
"Jiraiya boy what the great toad elder is saying is that Naruto boy might be on his way to becoming darker." Said a small green toad standing next to Jiraiya.
"But Fukasaku-sama this is one of Minato's kid! His eldest for pete's sake!"
"There nothing you can do. This is Naruto's choice to fall into darkness or not, just like it was Orochimaru's choice" Fukasaku said trying to make Jiraiya understand.
Jiraiya still kept his fists close, except now he was looking down not trying to look anyone in the eyes. The elder toad sensed Jiraiya's troubled look and decided to tell him a story.
"Little Jiraiya I want you to hear a story. Maybe you might understand something."
"…." Jiraiya said nothing but kept his head down.
"Long time ago before this land changed there was a continent called Japan. This was before the Rikudō Sennin was ever born. Ninjutsu was very small, but a few ninja clans were able to pull some off. These were ninjutsus that aren't seen today, but during that era existed two clans: two rival clans of Ninja, the Iga of Tsubagakure and Kouga of Manjidani were engaged in a bitter blood feud that has spanned for centuries. The fighting finally ends when Hattori Hanzo the 1st succeeded in forging a cease fire between the two clans by conscripting both into the service of Tokugawa Ieyasu. Regardless, hostilities and bad blood remained between Kouga and Iga, ensuring a tenuous co-existence at best. Years later Ieyasu has retired from power and passed the torch to his son Hidetada. Unfortunately, a succession dispute has risen concerning which of Ieyasu's grandsons were destined to take up the reins of power when their father finally decided to step down. The various government retainers were beginning to take sides and the Tokugawa Shogunate was on the verge of tearing itself apart." Jiraiya looked up to hear more of this.
"In order to solve the problem before it spiraled out of control, Ieyasu ordered the no hostilities pact between Kouga and Iga canceled and promptly commanded each clan to send 10 of their best ninja to enter a ruthless and bloody competition of kill or be killed. Each clan would represent one of the two factions supporting Ieyasu's grandsons; the names of their selected fighters recorded on two identical scrolls were to be marked out in blood upon their death. The clan that slayed the chosen ten of the other will be given favor for a thousand years while the grandson they represent will be pronounced the undisputed heir to the Shogunate.
But not all parties involved were willing to seek blood in the name of ancient grudges. Prior to the conflicts renewal, Kouga and Iga's two young heirs were betrothed to each other in the hopes that their union would finally dispel their clan's long-seated animosity towards each other. Try as they might their dreams of trying to get their clans to stop killing each other wasn't going anywhere and they too were forced to fight each other to their death. Naruto is similar to that hatred because of Konoha and its people's hatred for the boy and because of that he has the potential to become the hero of peace or the villain of hate. But each day his darkness grows and grows. No matter what you want to do it will not help the boy except push him further away."
"…How do you know all this Elder San?" Jiraiya asked him.
The old elder sighed before answering. "Because I have witnessed the Iga and Kouga rise and fall personally. Jiraiya the wars this land has through been is nothing compared to what those two clans had accomplished. Kouga Gennosuke heir of the Kouga clan was born with the ability to reverse the homicidal intent of anyone who meets his stare directly effectively causing them to kill themselves. Iga Oboro adopted princess of the Iga clan was born with mystic eyes that had the power to neutralize the techniques of any ninja who met her stare directly. Both were in love, but were forced to fight to the death. In the end the hatred of their clans killed them both"
"But that won't happen to this day and time!" Jiraiya shouted in protest.
"Oh it won't you say? Than tell me little Jiraiya, if Senju Hashirama did not put a stop to the clan wars what do you think the world would have been like?" The elder toad asked Jiraiya with a serious look. Jiraiya could not find an answer to his question because in his heart he knew the elder iwa right. The elder toad did not stop there. He wanted Jiraiya to understand how serious this was.
"What I'm sensing from young Naruto is that he is following the same hatred path as the Iga and Kouga have many years ago. For now it's not a problem but sooner or later you're going to have to make a decision. I cannot sense the one you trust called Nagato, for some reason his mind is closed. Do you understand what you must do?"
"….yes"
"I hope so"
END FLASHBACK
" Even still…" He said softly to no one but Kari still heard him. "Even still what?"
"Uh-Uh it's nothing…don't worry about it. Anyway brat now that I'm recovered from that little stunt you pulled, what do you want from me?" He said knowing full well what she wanted but decided to act like an ass.
"Dirty old man, I need you to train me and no funny stuff!" She said looking him in the eyes and not in the mood for his naughty habits.
"Well here's my answer…" He said building her up. "No!" She fell face first into the ground and quickly got back up with a look of pure anger. "What do you mean No?!" She came off demanding towards him. "Like I said no…reason why is because you got me beaten up and wasted my research time." He said with a serious face which only got her to leave her mouth open like she couldn't believe what he said.
"You're kidding?" She asked him wondering if this was some type of a sick joke. But Jiraiya did not laugh; instead he kept a hurt look on his face. "Please the great toad sage of Myōbokuzan does not kid around when it's come to great importance" He said to her while doing a kabuki dance and stopped in a pose on top of a toad that appeared out of nowhere. Kari sweat dropped over what she just witnessed, but before she could say or do anything, Jiraiya made one hand sign and created a strong gust. "Thanks a lot kiddo; you're so much like your mother, ruining a man's fun". The wind was too much for her to fight against let alone try to scream out a protest. Jiraiya escaped during the confusion he caused. He hopped from one rooftop to the next, and his toad disappeared without any warning. When the wind died down Kari was on both her knees grasping for air. She stood up grinding her teeth and took off in the direction she believed Jiraiya went.
WITH KUSHINA
Kushina found herself outside walking around. She needed the air and decided to visit what was left of some of her friends she had within the village. During her walks she'd gotten cheers and greetings by a lot of civilians. The messed up part is that these people are the ones who gave Naruto hell and now acted like it was a mistake. But this wasn't what plagued her soul. These civilian were not acting like Naruto was the hero and not the demon they made him out to be; only a few people still hated the boy. Kushina saw this as attempt to get on her good side because she was the wife to the former hokage. Kushina didn't take their cheers instead she paid them no mind and kept walking. She tried visiting Teuchi and his daugther, Ayame, but that did no go well. Teuchi loss a lot of respect for Kushina for putting Naruto through the hell he went through and Ayame had to be held back for trying to stab Kushina with a kitchen knife. Kushina quickly left knowing her friendship with Teuchi was over. She visited Haruno Hikairi the mother of Haruno Sakura her oldest friend. Kushina even learned that even her old friend was guilty like herself when it came to making Naruto suffer. Hikairi was now just like all the others, trying to kiss her ass because now they knew Naruto was indeed the son of Namikaze Minato. Kushina didn't spend much time with her and left, but as she travelled around, she found herself in thought, "Was this really worth it?"
Kushina questioned herself more; she wanted to know if she was really under depression or just messed up in the head. She couldn't forgive herself of what she did to her own daughter by slapping her, but she had to at less admit that her daughter was right that Naruto may be too late to save. She was about to question if Naruto truly was becoming the monster everyone wanted until she saw Kakashi. She was about to get his attention until she saw his confession at the monument for those who were considered heroes.
"Rin, Obito…And sensei, please forgive me. I crossed a line I shouldn't have. I let my rage blind me into ordering Naruto's death. I just couldn't forgive the fact he would go so far to destroy everything you stand for. I fear Naruto is becoming more like Orochimaru and I didn't think of a way of saving him from that dark path." Right after he finished saying that he felt a strong killing intent behind him. He turned around quickly and saw a sight he wished he didn't. Right before him was a pissed off Kushina.
"KAKASHI!" She shrieked before charging after him.
WITH KARI
Kari finally found Jiraiya who watching the anbu and his sensei heading towards the Memorial site. "What the hell is going on?"
"Ah Ha I found you!" Kari said to him while breathing heavily.
Jiraiya shook his head and turned his attention away from his sensei, "Listen little lady I'm flattered that you have a thing for me." Kari screamed at him for that comment, causing Jiraiya to clean his ears. "But I got better things to do than baby sit you."
"How about I make a deal with you?"
"I don't know…" Jiraiya said to her while rubbing his forehead.
"If I get you naked photos of women will you train me?"
"Hah do that and you got a deal missy!"
"Fine me over in the forest that has the waterfall. Be there in thirty minutes." She said while running off in the direction where the hot spring was.
THIRTY MINUTES LATER
Jiraiya was pacing back and forth on the cliff next to the waterfall. He kept mumbling where is she and I shouldn't trust her, until finally Kari showed up and with the photo in her hands. Jiraiya like a horny dog snatched them from her hands, but his face went from a smile to a frown and finally disgusted.
"What the hell are these?!" He yelled at her.
"What don't like what you see?" She said innocently to him with a smile on her face.
"You said you would get naked women pictures!" He threw down the photos.
"Well I never said what type of women. Besides fat women and she-males need love too. Now jokes aside you said you promised to train me. Pay up pervy sage."
Jiraiya mumbled ungrateful disrespectful brat before he calm down. "Ok Kari a deal is a deal…show me what you got." He commanded her.
Kari got into a fighting stance and charged at him. She reached into her poach and pulled out thin ninja wires. She quickly summon out a couple of clones to distract (clone jutsu not shadow clones) him. The result worked only because Jiraiya allowed it. Kari was able to surround him with the ninja wires around his neck. The clones disappeared the moment Kari caught and started to squeeze Jiraiya's neck. A snapping noise was heard. Kari assumed she killed Jiraiya and released the wires. This was her biggest mistake because she relax edher guard; so the moment she turned around she noticed that it wasn't Jiraiya she caught but a log. Before she could move, she felt cold steel across her neck.
"Lesson one never charged in if the opponent makes it too easy for you, especially if your opponent is a shinobi. Lesson two never relax your guard when fighting a opponent, especially if your opponent has enough more experience than you. He said right behind her before pushing her forward. Kari turned around to witness that Jiraiya didn't use a kunai but his ring finger. "Man you're so much like Kushina. Ok I'll take you as my student but first tell me why you want me to train you?"
"Why? Isn't it obvious?" She asked him like he was joking. "I want to destroy Naruto."
"So you want to destroy your own brother, your own flesh and blood?" He said shaking his head slightly.
"Former brother!" She snapped back at him being reminded of that one piece of information.
"Regardless what he says, he's still your brother. You both have the same parents that won't change no matter how much anger he gets. Kari hate creates more hate, and if this keeps going on there will never be peace."
"But…" Struggling with her words and heart.
"Do you hate Naruto for a reason" Jiraiya asked her having an idea on why she was acting like this.
"I..I'm jealous" She said it so low that it was barely heard, but Jiraiya still heard it again.
"What's that? It sounds like a mouse said something" He said teasing her in a playful manner.
"I said I'm jealous!" She yelled at him while her face turning red.
"I'm jealous that he's supposed to be the hero of the village. The one who keeps the Kyuubi lock up. I'm jealous that he's gotten stronger since he's been beaten and abandoned by mother. I'm jealous that he has some friends who blindly follow him without seeing who he really is!"
"Who he really is?" He said to her knowing the truth.
"That he's just a guy that wishes to watch everything around him burn!...Jiraiya sensei, why is it everyone including my own mother, can't see the truth. Naruto is out for revenge and planning to use everyone to reach his goal; he even showed that he's willing to kill, but no it gets worse! He's even brainwashing people to join his cause!" She said remembering when Hinata attacked her in the council room.
"I will not deny what you said is true. Naruto is traveling down a long dark path. Hell even part of me believes he's becoming Orochimaru in some sense but I am his godfather just like I'm yours. Although I haven't acted like one for reasons I can't go into yet, let me say this to you. If it was you in Naruto's shoes what would you do when you learned that your life was a lie? That the reason you suffer is because your father decided to seal the Kyuubi in his younger child instead of the oldest? Or if your own mother was so much in grief that she refused to believe that you're her own child, or that you had everyone against you except for a small few. Tell me Kari would you still be right in the head?"
"…" She said nothing because that blew her mind open. A part of her felt she would have done the same as Naruto. Although she tried to be tough, her eyes betrayed her and tears began to rush out.
"You ain't the only one going through guilt. I'm going through it also for not being there for both of you, and my sensei's going through it for not living up to your father's request when it came Naruto. Your mother is the one who has it bad because she started all of this along with the villagers. The villagers don't care because they now see him as the Yondaime's son along with you as his sister. They only cheer for you so it makes them look good. My advice for that is to not allow them the benefit of kissing up to you and do not become like the Uchihas where you think you're above everyone else."
"Y-You're right." She said while wiping her eyes.
"Kari I won't deny this. I do believe Naruto is responsible for some people lately, vanishing within the village and is being trained by someone who is encouraging his evil deeds."
"Then why haven't you or Lord Hokage done something?" She questioned him.
"Because we don't have proof or even a trace to consider as evidence. My sensei wanted to bring him in so Inoichi can check his mind, but because of the chunin exams it would be disrespectful towards other nation if they get word that we interrogating one of own; it might give them a message that Naruto knows a secret that he shouldn't. And plus there is a invasion that's going to happen very soon."
"Invasion?"
"My sources tell me before the chunin exam that Orochimaru is gathering together an army. At first I didn't know how. But since he appeared in the chunin exam and demanded for it not to stop, and was seen with a sound headband it's safe to say he's the Otokage of the sound."
"Wait, have you at least captured those sound ninjas that were also in the chunin exams?" She asked him.
"No, as soon as the pre-round were done they quickly left, but we found a dead body." Jiraiya now said in serious tone.
"One of the sound?" She replied back to him.
"No… a Nara"
"It wasn't that Shikamaru fellow?" She start to get scared.
"No this one was a female young Nara around the age ten. The weird part is the stage she's in. She had multipliable stab wounds towards her own left chest with a message in her own blood saying if you touch my ninjas then I'll destroy this village. Clearly not Orochimaru's style in killing someone or making threat in someone's own blood." He said puzzled by this himself.
"What did the anbu and the medic say?" She asked him.
"I can't go into detail with that, forget it. Right now I got to prepare you for the hell that's coming. Naruto is trying to kill you and won't stop because he feels that it's one way of sticking it to his father as he can't get to the dead. And then there is the Invasion which most likely will take place during the final round. Ok kiddo as of today I'll take you as my student".
Kari smiled at him, "Sorry Kushina but even you got to see that Naruto doesn't want anything to do with Minato and that includes getting trained by me. But that young Nara's death was strange. The Anbu said she killed herself. I did a background check on her, she was A+ student and different from her lazy clan. I don't buy her death. Is her killing similar to the victims of Naruto? Are you behind this Naruto? Dear god please tell me you not working with Orochimaru!" Jiraiya thought to himself.
"Sensei?" She said while worrying over the look on his face.
"Sorry must be something I ate…" Then he heard women talking which was coming down the waterfall. He peeked through the brushes and saw naked women playing in the water. Jiraiya's eyes grew wide and he started to drool. Kari saw what he was look at and shook her head while getting pissed off. She took a big breathe and yelled out, "HEY YOU LADIES YOU'RE BEING CHECKED OUT FROM BRUSHES AT THE TOP OF THE CLIFF BY A DIRTY OLD MAN!!" Right then Jiraiya's smile went to horror as the women shrieked in terror and start pulled out their kunai(out of nowhere pun intended) and throw them at Jiraiya. Jiraiya never knew they are kunochi, but now he had to run away from the raging naked women looking to castrate him.
WITH KUSHINA
"UNHAND ME!" Kushina screamed out while being held down by the anbu ninja.
"KUSHINA CALM YOURSELF!" Hiruzen yelled at her.
"I WILL NOT! HOW COULD YOU KAKASHI! YOU WERE MINATO'S STUDENT!"
Kakashi was bleeding from his left shoulder and his jaw which seemed broken. His mask was already torn apart revealing his face (looks like his father) except there were some bruise marks. He put his head down while some medic ninjas whom happened to show up tried to fix him up.
"AND YOU ALLOWED THIS SARUTOBI! YOU ALLOWED HIM TO TRY TO HURT MY BABY!"
"Kushina settle down now or I'll be forced to something you will regret." He said to her trying to be calm. But Kushina signed her own death warrant. Instead of heeding his words, she spat in his face. Hiruzen wiped the spit off his face and issue his anbus to get off of her; the anbu did what he commanded. And to everyone horror he began to attack Kushina, he kept kicking her in the chest so hard that it would make Tsunade proud. "THIS IS HOW YOU REPAY ME FOR EVERYTHING I DID FOR YOU!"
His attacks kept going on until she could barely move and kept coughing up blood. He calm down and glared at Kakashi. Kakashi nearly shit his self because he knew he was next.
WITHIN THE LEAF VILLAGE AT A UNKNOWN LOCATION
"God this village is a shitty place. Well time to find this Shithead called Naruto" Said the red headed girl onto of a rooftop while looking down at everyone.
END CHAPTER.
NEXT CHAPTER: THE TRAINING OF HAKKYOU NARUTO
PS: Kari will show off her training results when she fights her brother.
AN: I have a challenge to issue out for those who are If anyone wants to accept then here my challenge:
A dark/evil Naruto
Main Plot: Naruto formed his own little village against the principle of Konoha beliefs
Sub- plot: I allow you to decide the sub plots but it must be believable and well play details. Minato and Kushina should be alive but I leave how you want to portray them on your hands, wither they be good or evil toward Naruto is on you guys. Should Naruto have siblings? Is an optional choice, should he have a bloodline is also optional but make sure it balances out and is not too powerful.
Pairing: It could be harem pairing but if also it can be a single pairing (no yaoi)
You should put Hinata in it even if she isn't the main girl in the harem pairing along with any girls of your choice including filter characters and OC characters.
But if you make it a single pairing with Naruto Let it be with these following characters: Hinata or Kin or Anko or an OC or an Iwa kunoichi or any female you fill fit the bill except for Sakura (There is too many of pairings with her and Naruto). Make the relationship believable with each detail that describe the up and down of the relationship or relationships (Harem).
AN: Have you ever wondered "Who is the hottest, sexiest, most beautiful girl ever created in the world of anime?" Well now's your chance to vote for your own Top 10. Kingkakashi besides having a great story has set-up a poll about this very question on his profile page. Help answer and settle this issue once and for all.