Unforgiving
Rated M
Summary: Cold hard truth came out the night of forbidden scroll incident. Naruto learned more than he bargains for changing his views. With new powers he will do what ever it takes to reach the top. Dark and somewhat evil Naruto. Main pairing NarutoXHinata, NarutoXharem. Dracohalo117 challenge.
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An: This chapter takes place before chapter 13; also expect some time skip in the next chapter. My newest poll is up and will stay up for two weeks and so far Kurotsuchi is winning by 45 votes, wow that one tough Iwa kunoichi.
Ch.14
Pairing:NarutoXHinataXAnko. Naruto Harem
AN: For reason it won't show the rest of the pairing names, so I say this Tenten and Shion are apart of the harem.
TWO DAYS AFTER THE PRE-ROUNDS
A boy was breathing heavily in the dark room with some bodies lying around him. "Again" ordered the voice of Danzo. Two more Ne shinobi came from the shadows, one in front of Naruto and the other from behind. Both of them began charging after Naruto, who had his eyes closed and was holding the very sword he stole from the anbu he killed in the alleyway. In the blink of an eye, Naruto quickly rushed for the one in front of him. He swiftly jumped over his first attacker before getting behind him before he could plan a counter. Naruto rammed his whole body intent on pushing the would be attacker into the other attacker. However the first attacker had Naruto's sword sticking out of his chest from his back. That very sword pierced the second attacker through his neck ending his life very quickly as the blood in his throat drowned him to death. "Enough!" Danzo called out to Naruto. Naruto stopped moving, waiting to see what Danzo would do next.
"I have seen what I needed. Tell me, what will you do in the chunin exams?"
"Nothing except beat my sister, unless you have a different order?" Naruto hated being submissive to this old man, but he knew he must if he wanted to get the power he needed from Danzo. During his training with this man, he'd been watched by him very closely, except when he talked to Danzo's loyal Ne like Sai, Fu, Torune and another one called Tera. So far there was no harm with his talking with them. Only Fu felt uneasy around the boy, nevertheless they couldn't deny that he was getting strong. Sai and Tera were beginning to looked up to him more and more. As he was the son of Minato a hero who saved their lives and their village from a lot of threats, this only increased the respect they had for him. While Naruto may have hated his father they realized that he was still loyal to Konoha. So Danzo never suspected Naruto to be talking to some of his loyal servants, and they never mentioned anything to him about Naruto.
"During the invasion I want you to move with stealth. Stop the sand's jinchuriki by murdering him during the invasion if the need arises."
Naruto stood quiet not liking that idea, but Danzo continued on. "Orochimaru is the one we cannot fully trust. Yes he will help me in my quest but at the same time he will go back on his word if the opportunity arises, Fu!"
Fu appeared in front of Naruto and handed him a piece of paper. Naruto looked at it and noticed nothing was on it. "That paper is an element paper. By applying your chakra into that, we can tell what your element is and get to work on it right away." Danzo explained to Naruto, who wasted no time and applied his chakra into the paper. "If the paper crumbles your element is lighting. If it gets wet then your element is water. If it is sliced in half than you're a wind type. If it burns than you're a fire type, and if turns to dust than you're a earth type. Minato Namikaze was a wind type user and Kushina was water type user. Usually a child would inherit one of their parent's elements but there have been cases where the child would inherent both or neither. With any luck you will inherit wind for my type is wind along with Fu, but if it happens to be water than I'll have to call in one of my servants who is currently far away on a mission." Just than the paper sliced in half and Danzo looked on not even smiling. "Good, Fu you will train Naruto in learning how to use his wind element and how to apply it to a weapon. I want good results, do I make myself clear!"
"Yes Lord Danzo, your will is all I know." Fu replied back while bowing to him.
"Very well, remember we only have three months to make this work. All must be for Konoha and her people." He finished saying while taking his leave for urgent business.
"Naruto this will not be easy. Wind release is a powerful thing to learn, but it's also the hardest to master. I hope you're ready." He explained to the boy.
"I will not falter one bit. Like Danzo -sama said all must be done for Konoha and her people." He lied but hid his deception very well from Fu.
"Very well…let us begin."
A HOUR LATER
Naruto and Fu were at a waterfall within Konoha during the night. The reason for this was so they could have privacy. Naruto did as Fu ordered him to do and summoned up a couple of shadow clones. And with each clone including himself, they were trying to split the waterfall in half using their chakra. Torune was there watching was his job was to make sure he places a chakra repression seal on him just incase if the Kyuubi's chakra started to leak out. It happened very quickly and Torune had to place the seal on him twice, for it to descend back into the seal from which it came. Naruto had been doing this for an hour and started to get tired. It wasn't that he didn't have a lot of energy. The problem was that his chakra was being drained too many times while trying to apply wind element into his hands and trying to cut the water crashing down on him and his clones. But he would not give up and saw this as another challenge in his quest to control this land.
ANOTHER HOUR LATER
Sai showed up along with Tera. They watched Naruto and noticed he was tired but still fighting on.
"Such determination…" Tera said amazed by Naruto's will not to give in.
"Although I don't quite understand, I see that he is destined for great things." Sai said to Tera.
"He is what we Ne stand for. He is the will of fire." Tera said more to himself than he did to Sai.
ANOTHER HOUR LATER
After finally being hit by the force of the waterfall, Naruto and his clones managed to cut the waterfall in half. Everyone there was impressed by what they saw. But before any congrats could be issued out by the others, Naruto passed out and his clones vanished. The waterfall turned back to normal and the force of the water crash down on him. Sai and Tera had already begun to run and jump into the water. They swiftly tried to reach him before he drowned. They were successful in saving his life. Sai who read a book about CPR, was about to give Naruto mouth to mouth until Naruto spat up water in his face, "Ugh…I…did…it." He said with his breath before passing out.
"Mission successful. Let's take him back to our base and wait for him to rest up." Fu said while picking up Naruto in his arms. Everyone shunshined back to their base to wait for him to awaken.
WITH HINATA
Hinata found herself being alone in their little hideout. She hadn't see Naruto in days and she was starting to worry. Lately Naruto began to keep more and more information to himself. Not just him but also Shino began to seclude himself as well. Lately she began to feel like everyone was purposely keeping her out of the loop, well everyone for Anko. Anko, who shouldn't have, was training her in secret. She and Anko had gotten very close with each other and didn't mind one bit anymore about Naruto wanting Anko to be one of his wives. Hinata trusted her more now. But Tenten was a different story. Luckily Anko who witnessed Tenten's affection for Naruto, told Hinata to give her a chance.
FLASHBACK
Hinata met with Tenten at her home. Taking Anko's advice, she decided to see for herself if this was real love or just a fangirl crush. She found Tenten in the forest near the Hokage's mountain, training with a spear in her hands.
"You know this isn't fair. If you're trying to start something or trying to check out your possible opponent, than you better stop where you are." Tenten said to Hinata without turning around and kept practicing her spear thrusts.
"I didn't come for either of those…I came here to talk about you and my betrothed." Hinata said to her.
"Betroth?" Tenten said with a puzzled look on her face.
"Yes Hakkyou Naruto formerly of the Namikaze-Uzumaki clan, is putting together a clan with true justice. One that doesn't play around or treat others unkindly. I am his first betroth and I may not like the idea of the Council forcing the CRA on my beloved, but if he agrees to this so will I."
"But" Tenten said knowing there more to this.
"I will not allow any fan girl to join me and my betroth, so for your sake you better not be one of those fan girls looking to prove something, because I have no problem crushing it out of you!"
"Is that so? Neji was wrong about you. You're no mouse at all. Ok listen princess I worked my ass off everyday to show this village that I am a true kunoichi and for you to accuse me of being a FAN GIRL is an insult. You're pissing me off and I think I should put you in your place before the final.s"
Hinata got in the hyuga's fighting stance and Tenten got in stance her own with the spear pointing right toward her.
FIFTHEEN MINUTES LATER
Both Hinata and Tenten were breathing heavily. Their surroundings were badly damaged .Weapons littered the ground and there a lot of crater holes. Both Kunoichi were sweating a lot until both of them cracked out laughing, "My god you're good really good. Neji doesn't have a chance against you. I never knew a hyuga would fight like that." Tenten said while crackling a smile.
Hinata giggled a little before answering, "You're good yourself. I take back that you're a fan girl. No fan girl could fight the way you fight. Fine if my beloved desires you than so will I."
Tenten blushed a little unsure on how to reply to that, "Thanks…I think…But?"
"But if you break his heart and my trust than you're dead, do I make myself clear?!"
"Both of them stared into each other eyes without blinking, "Clear!"
FLASHBACK END
Hinata sighed once again wondering where beloved was. She lay down on his bed and closed her eyes prayed that she would see him soon.
WITH SHINO AND TEAM DOSU
"Naruto may give you three a chance but don't think I will." Shino said to the three before him.
Naruto had fill Shino and only Shino in that these three had betrayed their village because of the soon to be invasion. Naruto have gave them his old apartment with Dosu as owner to the apartment. The only price was that Zaku and Kin had to henge when people came looking for Naruto, and Dosu had to unmask. The two sound genins never saw him without his mask wrapping, so they had to admit, Dosu was very handsome. Now Shino was here to make sure they knew what their job was and to keep an eye on them.
"What's wrong bug boy, you don't trust us?" Zaku said while grinning towards him out of hate.
"Trust is to be earned; you three had not betrayed your village but one of the deadlier sannin, Orochimaru. You may betray us as part of an act." Shino calmly said to them.
"You bring up a good point. You may never know if we're really betraying Orochimaru or not. But let say that we didn't. Do you think that we would give information and agree to go into hiding with just one leaf genin watching us." Dosu said to Shino.
"… You have a point."
Kin walked right up to Shino and kept staring at him.
"Yes" Shino asked her.
"Why do you wear sunglasses all the time? What's with your eyes?" She asked him thinking there was something special about his eyes.
"I don't see why that so important…but on to what you three must do. If this invasion starts I want you to protect the Ninja academy."
"What about the training? My teammates need to be ready for the finals." Kin said to Shino while she turned toward her teammates, "And you two better win and kick that lazy bum's ass! I still cannot believe he tricked me!" Zaku and Dosu gulped out of fear of Kin who was generating enough killing intent to cause even Shino to raise an eyebrow.
"No Zaku and Dosu will not appear at the chunin exams." Shino calmly said to them. Zaku protested along with Dosu, while Kin slowly turned her head towards him. She lifted her hand up in a sign for her teammates to shut up. "What do you mean no?" She asked him with a serious tone. Shino did not flinch at her at all, "I said no"
"And I said what do you mean no!?"
"No" He replied back to her angry tone of voice.
"WHY THE HELL NOT?!" Kin yelled at him while scaring Zaku.
"Because if Orochimaru or Kabuto sees you three or any one of you, he will capture you and you three will be dead."
"But that's not fair. I entered this exam to prove to everyone that I'm not a weakling who…" Zaku never got to finished because Kin interrupted his rant. "Zaku shut up! Now Shino I get what you're saying but you can't expect us to stay in this apartment for three months! What about food?"
"You will henge into someone and travel with me to get more food, but only if it's running low. As for training that's a no, but maybe in the dead of the night you three could do light training. However, I have to be present to make sure you three don't attract too much attention." Shino calmly said to Kin, and Kin looked like she was ready to explode until finally she sighed. "Fine we agree to these terms but we expect more from that whiskered boy." Dosu said to Shino.
"I'll be sure to tell him." Shino calmly replied back to him.
WITH ANKO AND HER TEAM
It was late at night and Anko was drinking herself silly. The reason for this was that she too hadn't seen Naruto and began to worry. Her genins never knew that Naruto was the one she was worried about. All they knew was that it was about some guy. Sachi and Kira hated seeing Anko like this, while Renji wasn't paying attention because he was too busy flirting with Sasame to notice.
"Burp…That bastard don't he…know how much I…care for him! Watch…when I find him…I'm going kick…his ass burp." She passed out from drinking.
"Seriously I got to know who this guy she's dating. It's because of him we have not gotten any training!" Sachie said out loud with her hands on her hips.
"I agree whoever this jerk is, he's not only making her more crazy but he's cutting our training time short because she's constantly worrying over this guy. Did she say who he is?" Kira asked Sachie.
"Not a damn word. I wish Hinata was with us right now. She might have an idea who it is." Sachie replied right back.
"Hmm…Well it's getting late. Let's take her home…Hey Romeo and Juliet, help us take Anko home."
"Huh" Both Renji and Sasame said at the same time. "Lovebirds he said to help us carry Anko Sensei home!" Sachie yelled at both of them while Kira sighed at both of them.
WITH NARUTO
Naruto was resting in one of the Ne hidden bases. He kept tossing and turning, with a dream like no other.
IN NARUTO'S DREAM
"Where am I?" He said while looking around until he saw something that caught his eyes. "They look like shinobi, yes they are shinobi. But what are they going to do against those three ninja." Naruto said to himself while getting closer.
"HYAA ATTACK!" ordered an ugly man with long hair and hair coming out of his nose.
"WA-WAIT, NENKI! DON'T RUSH THIS!" Yelled another man trying to keep a couple shinobi from attacking.
Naruto eyes went towards the shinobi charging towards one man. This man dressed in a traditional Japanese outfit with a vest, and long hair in a ponytail. Naruto thought this man was a relative of Rock Lee because of the fuzzy eyebrows. But this very man had his eyes closed than opened them. What Naruto saw scared him. This man's eyes were golden just like his and what happen next scared him more. The attacking shinobis attacked and killed themselves instead of him. Body parts began flying everywhere including one guy's upper face flew pass after having it cut off by himself. "Kyougan? He has the it too, but I should be the only one who has it!" Naruto yelled out while watching this and two other guys. A tall bald guy and a short guy with his eyes closed but a smirk on his face.
"WHO THE HELL ARE YOU!?" Naruto yelled at him but no one could hear or see him.
"In the entire Iga clan… There's only one ninja who could stand against… Kouga Gennosuke…" The same man who tried to warn the ugly hair guy said out loud.
"Kouga? Kouga Gennosuke?" Naruto said to himself not understanding who he is.
DREAM ENDED
"KOUGA GENNOSUKE!" Naruto woke up shouting that name.
"Who?" Sai said to Naruto.
Naruto started to calm down realizing it was just a dream, "It..It was nothing but a dream. So what do you want?"
"Ahem…Yes well now that you're awake. I was assigned to let you know that Fu said that the training will continue at midnight again at the same spot so don't be late." He said while vanishing into the darkness of the room.
Naruto got up and decided to head over to his old home first before heading to the hide out spot.
TWELVE MINUTES LATER
Naruto climbed through his window when he noticed nobody was watching. As soon as he got in he was almost ambushed by Dosu. "Oh it just you, I've got a bone to pick with you."
"Where are the others?" He ignored him.
"That bug boy left I think. Zaku's on the cough sleeping and Kin's in the room asleep. Listen what's the idea…"
"Whatever you're going to say it can wait for another time. From what I gather Old man Hiruzen is trying to find you because of your connection with the snake sannin. Trust me he doesn't want you to live after that."
"Then what do you suggest that should be done?" Dosu asked Naruto.
"Get dressed. Me and you are going to get the old man to back off of you and the others." He said with no remorse in his voice.
"What about the others?" Dosu asked him.
"Let them sleep I'll only need you. Now hurry!" He ordered Dosu.
"You don't have to tell me twice." Dosu went to go change from his pjs and into his outfit.
TWO HOUR LATER.
It was about 5:30am and Naruto was heading into the room in the hideout. He saw Hinata lying on his bed in her bra and panties asleep. Naruto gently slid next to her not trying to wake her up, but karma was being a bitch and she woke up and noticed Naruto behind her. She wanted to say something but decided against it for now. For now she decided to go back to sleep leaning more onto his chest with a blush on her face.
WITH OROCHIMARU
Orochimaru was on the rooftop of a building with Kabuto. They were watching Gaara on another rooftop. "He's been up all day. Doesn't he sleep?" Kabuto asked his lord.
"Gaara's an insomniac. It's forced upon him by the fear that the demon inside him would eat away at his soul if he were to fall asleep."Orochimaru explained to Kabuto. "Did you find them?"
"No my lord they have vanished." He said while expecting him to be angry but instead he laughed at him. "It's probably Sarutobi-sensei's doing."
"Should we send him a warning, because I would love to be the one to do it." Kabuto said with a smile.
"No it doesn't matter. There is nothing he can do to stop me now." Orochimaru said to him. "When the invasion starts spare little Naruto. Such a shame that Iwa doesn't want to get involved."
"Forgive me for saying this but their leader fears that another yellow flash will emerge. I mean there is Naruto and his twin sister."
"Naruto is against Konoha."
"My lord, how can you be sure? There something about him that's not right…"
"Enough Kabuto! First you don't trust my choice in Sasuke and now you're doubting Naruto. He is a Jinchuriki and like all Jinchuriki he knows true hell; all his kinds want is vengeance against all those who have wronged them. The seed of hatred is strong in their kind, especially when they are used as weapons for villages that hate them." He said while never taking his eyes off Gaara.
6AM
A woman's scream was heard throughout the Nara's manor. The oldest members including Shikaku rushed toward where they heard that noise, and when they reached the woman they saw a shock they couldn't get over. A young female Nara around the age ten with multiple stab wounds lay on the floor in a puddle of her own her blood. A woman screamed out calling her name, refusing to believe her child was dead. Shikaku noticed something on the wall near the dead girl, a message in her own blood.
Shikaku read the message out loud for everyone to hear, "If you touch my ninja then I'll destroy this village…This is very troublesome."
END CHAPTER
NEXT CHAPTER: NARUTO IS STILL TRAINING, MEETING TAYUYA, AND ANOTHER HYBRID SUMMON?
AN: I have a challenge to issue out for those who interest. If anyone wants to accept then here my challenge:
A dark/evil Naruto
Main Plot: Naruto formed his own little village against the principle of Konoha beliefs
Sub- plot: I allow you to decide the sub plots but it must be believable and well play details. Minato and Kushina should be alive but I leave how you want to portray them on your hands, wither they be good or evil toward Naruto is on you guys. Should Naruto have siblings? Is an optional choice, should he have a bloodline is also optional but make sure it balance out and not too powerful.
Pairing: It could be harem pairing but if also it can be a single pairing (no yaoi)
You should put Hinata in it even if she isn't the main girl in the harem pairing along with any girls of your choice including filter characters and OC characters.
But if you make it a single pairing with Naruto Let it be with these following characters: Hinata or Kin or Anko or an OC or an Iwa kunoichi or any female you fill fit the bill except for Sakura (There is too many of pairings with her and Naruto). Make the relationship believable with each detail that describe the up and down of the relationship or relationships (Harem).
AN: Have you ever wondered "Who is the hottest, sexiest, most beautiful girl ever created in the world of anime?" Well now's your chance to vote for your own Top 10. Kingkakashi besides having a great story has set-up a poll about this very question on his profile page. Help answer and settle this issue once and for all.