Ok so I finally have a review! Thanks keisurz! The rest of you are peasants. -_- This one will e longer, I'm shooting for 1,000 words, but no promises. Please review, don't own one piece. (sobs)

Chapter 3

"I'm going to be King of the Pirates!" I shouted, posing on top of the rock we were climbing on.

"Really!? That's so cool!" she said looking down at me from a ledge above my head.

"Yeah and I'm gonna have the best crew ever! With a navigator and a cook and a sharpshooter and a swordsman and doctor and a musician and EVERYTHING! And we're gonna have the coolest boat EVER!" i cried, as i scrambled up behind her a she leaped to another ledge to make room for me. "And when I become King of the Pirates, I'll go find Shanks and give him this hat." I took off my straw hat, which was still too big, and showed her, watching her eyes wide.

"Wow Luffy!" she replied, giggling and swinging her legs. "and you have a devil fruit power. You're so cool!"

"How about you?" I asked. "What's your dream?" She looked down, and was silent.

"I-I don't have one. I've never really had time to think about it." she lied,but Luffy didn't know that.

"Then you could join my crew! You are my friend after all!"

"You would do that!?"

"Yeah!" I grinned, and she couldn't help but laugh. We spent the rest of the day fantasizing about the crew, the boat, the adventures they would go on. Then came night. Then came departure.

"See you tomorow!" I said, waving as I headed back to town.

She came at midnight. Throwing pebbles at my window. And when I came down she explained eerything.

Only varying parts made it through my shocked brain. " shock shock fruit...family captive...town murdered...slave...waru waru fruit...bandages...to kill you...but I can't kill a friend...my mother will die, but that;s what she wants by now I'm sure...tortures us...I'll be punished...but i have to kill others to...tobe freee...to complete my dream...to save them"

"Who is he!? Where is he!?" I yelled. "I go-we'll go and kill him! And set you and your whole family free!"

"Luffy! Weren't you listening!? He can't be killed! He can't! He'll just kill you!" She was crying now, and she walked towards me, hitting my chest. "He can't be killed! Don't waste the life I'm taking for yours! Don't! DON'T! Promise me that you won't, PROMISE!" And then her strength gave out, and she leaned against me, crying.

"Ok. I promise. But you have to promise me something in return, Tomi."My nickname for her made her look up at hme. "When you're ready, you have to come find me and join my crew ok?"

"Ok." She smiled, and wiped her eyes. Then she hugged me. "Thanks for being my friend Luffy." Then she walked into the shadows.

"Goodbye Satomi..." I whispered, as she disappeared.

"I'll kill whoever ate my food!"

"Those were the last words I thought I would hear you say. I guess I am a monster."

"Remeber when we were kids. You promised me that I would be able to join."

"You don't remember me...instead of a friend."

"He'll punish me tonight... Goodbye Luffy. From Satomi."

"Satomi!" I ran after her, now 17. A blue light leaked out of the shadows, her screams rang in my ears. As I was enveloped by the darkness, I smelled blood. "Satomi! Come back!" I found her, laying, bleeding, crying. Slowly being sucked into the shadows. I reached her, tried to pull her up, but we were sinking fast. Evil laughter filled my head as ropes of black silk bound my arms, pulling me away. "Tomi! Satomi! NO!"

Sat up, sweating. He was in his hammock, which was now swaying wildly. But...I was in the storage room...how did I get up here? And where did everyone go? Luffy got up and went out to deck, the dream fading from his mind with each step. But he remembered last night. He remembered her eyes. On the deck he found his friends, messing around as usual.

"Hey you're up. " Nami said as she saw him. "What all the commotion last night?" you were with a whole unch of broken crates and stuff.

"We have a stowaway. " He said simply.

"WHAT!?" the whole crew replied in unison.

"Is it a woman?" said Sanji with heart eyes.

"They better not have touched my swords."

"IS IT A MONSTER!?"

"IF THEY LAID EVEN ONE FINGER ON MY TREASURE!"

The crew continued with their complaints-or fantasies in Sanji's case. Luffy just stood there. Zoro was the only one who noticed. "Luffy?"

"I don't know who it was. But She certainly knew me." And he spilled out the story.

They spent the rest of the day searching every inch of the ship for the stowaway, with no success. But the stowaway had other plans. While they were tearing the ship apart, she was going to eat a snack.

Satomi actually hadn't eaten Luffy's food, he had, the night before, giving her room to fit in just the bottom half of the box. She hadn't eaten in days, and now was her chance. She headed for Nami's tangerine trees. The weather had been colder lately, so she had wrapped them up in tarps, to shelter them from the harsh elements. Tomi crawled inside of one of the tarps, which were surprisingly warm. She plucked a single tangerine from the trees, wincing at the noise it made, and at how the branches poked her newest and still healing wound.

The tangerine was delicious, the best she'd ever had. And all of a sudden she was tired. Tomi hadn't actually slept in a month. Tomi rested; she didn't sleep, because if she did she wouldn't live to see another day, so sleep was rare for her. Finding a comfortable nook in the branches, she curled up and went to sleep.

I told you this chapter would be longer. yay. review please although i have low expectations for you guys. well anyways. I'm gonna go cry over LuNa arlong park feels now. oh and waru means evil in japenese.