hehehehe..so you finally read it huh? Well good for you. Glad you liked it. (Im feeling like such a badass right now listening to the one piece soundtrack on youtube and overtaken is the BEST!) Anyways, I still want reviews and would love to give you some! just let me know! ;P (Nami face) dont own one piece.

Chapter 5

Satomi walked back to the bedroom. She would get punished later for sleeping in a bed for so long... She carefully picked up Nami and set her down on the bed, then covered her up with a blanket. Then she went back outside. Waiting for the sun to rise. When it finally rose out of the waves, she smiled, and laughed a little at the shrieks of agony she heard in her head. They hate light. Satomi let the warmth seep into her bones, inhaled the clean ocean breeze. Then her stomach rumbled. She was still used to how much she had been eating in the tangerine trees. Oh well. She'd starved before, she could do it again.

A few hours passed, then the rest of the crew started to get up. She heard the sounds of Sanji cooking, and everyone slowly getting up. They were all surprised when Nami started screaming.

"HEY WHERE DID SHE GO WHERE IS SHE DID SHE JUST LEAVE IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT SHE EVEN LEFT HER CLOTHES HERE WHERE DID SHE GO!?" Everyone ran towards her room, Luffy with half a piece of bacon hanging out of his mouth.

She should probably stop this before it gets serious. Satomi walked up the stairs towards the group. "Looking for me?" They all stopped in the middle of their pointless argument to look at the girl, their mouths gaping. (?) "Uuuh...you guys ok?"

"Well yeah we're ok but we were freaking out I mean YOU WERE ABOUT TO DIE AND ITS ONLY BEEN ONE NIGHT AND WE HAD NO CLUE WHERE WHAT IF YOU HAD DIED!? WE WERE WORRIED ABOUT YOU!" Nami screamed. Frantically waving her arms to make a point. Satomi gasped.

"You were...worried about me?"

"Well...yeah" Usopp replied.

A tear slipped out of her eye and slowly made its way down her bandaged cheek. No one had been worried for her ever since...well for a long time people had only worried about how fast it would take to kill her, how long it would be before she killed someone else. But not for her.

"Well anyways we should all eat. I made some food especially for you and Nami!"

"What's your name?" Luffy asked.

"O-oh! My name? You can-call me Tomi."

"Tomi huh? Why were you crying?"

"I wasn't crying."

"Yes you were."

"It's just been a long time since people were worried about me, that's all."

"Well. LET'S GO HAVE SOME FOOOOD!" and he ran off towards the kitchen. She laughed in spite of herself, and went to join them. Zoro followed her. But when she reached the door, and smelt the food, she had to keep herself from vomiting. She leaned against the door frame, and put a hand over her mouth.

"Hey outta the way," said Zoro as he ran into her.

" I'm sorry I'm just a bit sick all of a sudden. " Tomi's stomach lurched and she almost threw up. Her shadows cackled with evil laughter. Oh. Right. "Excuse me I need to-" she cried out, and felt a trickle of warm blood run down her shoulder. Dirty little bastards.

"Hey you ok?"

"Yeah but could you excuse me for a min- AAH!" it felt like my stomach was bursting.

Don't take it personally dear.

Just following orders. They do need to pity you, and you need to be punished so...sorry.

"That doesn't sound like ok. You should get back in bed."

" I'm fine! But I think I'm gonna be sick," she ran outside, the blanket falling of her shoulders, she leaned over the side of the ship and retched out everything she'd eaten over the past four days. Nami grabbed the blanket and brought it over to her. "Usopp, get her some water!"

"Right!"

"You ok?" She draped the blanket over her shoulders, and noticed the blood on her arm.

"Yeah, I'm fine." Tomi reached up to grab the familiar sharp edges of her locket. She clenched her fist tight, the pain would help her focus. But her hand closed around empty air. "WHERE IS MY LOCKET!" she screamed, whirling around.

"Wha-what locket?"

"WHO TOOK IT!? GIVE IT BACK OR I'LL KILL YOU!" her hands cackled with electricity.

"AAAAH SHE'S A MONSTER ZORO HELP!"

Then Luffy walked out. "Is this what you're looking for?" he asked, holding up the item of question. "It's a mystery locket I found by the tree you were in."

"Give it back!" she leaped at him, but he moved out of her way. Tomi rolled into a summersault on the ground before coming up on one knee. Her fist closed and glowed blue, the sparks getting bigger. "I said, give it back."

"No,"

"Give it BACK!" Tomi screamed and ran towards him again, heading straight for the locket. He moved out of the way again and she smiled. Bringing her leg around, she kicked him in the head. Luffy fell to the floor but didn't let go of the necklace. "Not until you tell me why it's so important and why it's stained with blood. Or you can fight me for it."

"Why are you doing this!? Why do you want my locket!?"

"Because."

"THAT'S NOT AN ANSWER!" Tomi charged him again, running towards the locket. Luffy was preparing to move it out of her reach at the last moment again, but she surprised him. Just inches away, she changed course and grabbed his other hand, then kept running, stretching it out. Luffy stood his ground, but the she stopped. As she turned around, her hand buzzed to life with electricity that she sent running down his arm. It wasn't enough to kill him, but it definately hurt. He screamed and his body spazzed(?) out, at one point, his arm flew into the air, and his hand opened. It was the hand that held the locket.

"No!" Tomi screamed, as she scrambled up to catch it, but it was too far away. It was over her head. Over the edge of the ship. Over the water. Sinking. "NOO!" she ran after it and jumped overboard, plummeting into the cold water below. The water that hated her and was forever trying to steal her life. Tomi looked around, and finally found her treasured object. She grabbed it and held it close while she sank. At least I get to die with what's left of them... And she watched the bubbles come from her mouth and float towards the bright surface as the world dimmed.


"Is she dead?" asked Zoro plainly, breaking the minute-long silence.

"I dunno..." replied Luffy.

"WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT LUFFY DOING THAT TO A LADY WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU!"

"It was a test. I wanted to see if she was good enough for the King of the Pirates!"

"SO IT WAS ALL A TEST!? DID YOU SEE HOW IMPORTANT THAT THING IS TO HER? WHAT IF YOU LOST IT IN THE WATER!? WHAT IF SHE'S STILL LOOKING FOR IT DOWN THERE!?"

"Sanji calm down. Did you see the way she handled Luffy? She should be popping up any second now," said Usopp.

"The way she handled Luffy..." Nami muttered, deep in thought."*GASP!* Guys she has devil fruit powers! She can't swim!"

"Shit!" Sanji said, and hurried to take off his shoes and jacket, he then dove into the water.

He swam fairly deep, because she would've sank pretty far. But it was dark, and he couldn't see any sign of her. Eventually he saw a single bubble float up past his face. Then no more more came. Sanji looked down and saw a balck blod in the shape of a body slowly fade to nothingness as it sank deeper. He quickly swam down and grabbed her, pulling her back to the ship. His lungs were starting to burn, which made him swim even faster.

They were both pulled up on deck and immediately started coughing up water. Tomi needed some inspiration, but after at least a gallon of seawater, was fine and very pleased with herself. Nami, however, was not. "WHY THE HELL DID YOU JUMP OVERBOARD FOR A NECKLACE!?"

"I-"

"Because it's her treasure." Luffy said simply, cutting Tomi off.

"And YOU!" Nami began again, whirling around to face him. "YOU THE ONE THAT STARTED THIS WHOLE MESS! YOU JUST HAD TO TAKE THE NECKLACE ALL FOR A STUPID TEST TO SEE IF SHE WAS STRONG ENOUGH TO JOIN THE CREW!"

"To join the crew...?" Tomi whispered. He wants her to join the crew?

"AND TOMI! I LOVE MONEY, BUT I WOULDN'T RISK MY LIFE LIKE THIS! WHAT WERE YOU THINKING-"

"She was thinking about that locket, the same way I think about my hat Nami. It's her treasure, and she would die for it."

Everyone stopped talking, Luffy rarely had serious moments, and when he did they were actually very wise.

"He's right. I would be perfectly fine with dying as long as I have this. It's one my my most treasured objects in the world, beneath my family that is. But the only reason it is so important is because of what it holds." she said quietly, and popped open the golden piece, revealing a picture of six happy, smiling people. "I haven't seen them anywhere except in his picture for years, and without this I wouldn't even remember what they looked like. Or how things used to be..."

"What do you mean how things used to be?"

"Tomi, who are you?"

well chapter 5 is done. I still want reviews pleeeeaaaassssseeeee because this has like 100 something views but only 5 REVIEWS SERIOUSLY GUYS THIS ISNT FAIR