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Unleashed Part One

Three days later on earth.

Xavier POV

Fire blew across my bare chest. I let the blood fall from my hands as the wall pierced threw my raw skin in the attempt to keep me imprisoned. I let out a fierce snarl. I leaned in to lick my hand tasting my own blood to moisture my dry throat. The orange flames grew above me, licking the sides of the pit where I was being held. The warning flames nearly missed my escaping body but the next set hit my chest. I climbed through the pain of my own burning flesh. I couldn't release my hands from the jagged wall or I would have dropped a hundred feet to my demise. My muscles tightened at the last stretch of vertical wall. I gripped my bare feet in the groves firmly before taking a hold of the flat ground above me. I pulled up letting the last of my strength collapse on the forsaken ground.

My ragged breaths came out like flames themselves. I beat the confinement pit now I was one steep closer to showing Keeran what I can endure. "Well that took you fewer years then many before you. Are you ready for the next test?" I nodded. I could make out only a blurry figure above me. My eyes were damaged in the pit. I stood up to show Satan that he couldn't break me that easily, if at all.

"That was impressive Xavier." I knew that voice.. I could never not even after years of trial and lingering misery forgot the voice of the one I served, Keeran. My eyes settled on the male figure that had appeared beside Satan. I stood there listening to the two superior beings haggle about something. I knew it was about me. I paid attention to the negotiation.

"Keeran, my old friend, you told me I had him to assess for a centaury. It has been.. Thirty-seven years.. Why take him when he finally is getting somewhere in his tasks?"

"I have unfaltering knowing that you have done your worst to him. He has stayed strong for this long has he not?"

"Yes. I suppose he has so far, but he has only done some of the many trails set up."

"I ask for him back, to borrow him if you will, to complete a task of my own. He will be given back for the completion of yours as soon as he is finished." They went on back and forth. I remained perfectly still even as the blisters burst from the pus that swelled past reason. My charred skin was hardened and black where the fire went ablaze. My oldest wounds were faded, the scars on my body showed the many battles I had finished off before starting a new; with another that tested aspects that made you forget your humanity.

I clenched my teeth as an eager hand gripped my upper arm where an unknown time ago I had taken to a beast's mouth to stop it from consuming me. The two reddish-purple spots under the bottom layer of my skin, appeared to be bruises to the naked eye, but the beasts venom pools still remained. I felt the pull of disappearing then the feel of a cool breeze. I shielded my eyes unable to see in such a slight glow. The lights dimmed to where I could only make out the profile of my master.

"I have a mission for you Xavier." His voice unyielding, yet soft. I choked out a raspy "yes". I haven't spoken for so long I clutched my throat in pain. My body reacted in torment with the swift movement. My arms stung and my chest felt like it was burning again yet, I held my head high and replied again "I will do as you command."

The sweet water tricked down my throat as I reached for handfuls of grapes to put into my ravenous body. I ate most of the lavish meal that Keeran had made appear before me. I got to my feet for his instructions. I nodded when he was finished his required mission. "Are you ready for this?" His eyes bore into mine but unlike the many times before I didn't lower my head. His cold hand was in place at my center, the heart, and with the other on my forehead, the controller. I let out an elation of noises as his power imbued my every cell. Charging me with all his powers. My eyes blackened instantly. When he pulled away a sneer came to my face as I immorality whispered "I will finally be unleashed."


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