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And now there are three chapters!

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Surprise!

Eragon heard Saphiria before he even saw her. No from the batting of her wings or the sound of her roar, but it was from the mental scream she sent: Eragon! He had to admit it freaked him out for a minute. He was just swimming in the ocean when he heard Saphiria scream his name so loud it sounded like she bellowed right next to his ear. He nearly jumped out of his skin and drowned. What? he replied back equally as loud so she could understand how angry he was at the loud disturbance.

He thought she was just trying to aggravate him but instead he heard concern in her voice. Someone just scryed me, she said. While I was off the island. Have you felt anything? Eragon was about to reply no when he remembered while he was swimming about twenty minutes ago when he felt someone watching him. Actually, he replied, Yeah, I did feel like someone was watching me. Do you think it was someone dangerous? He could almost hear Saphiria snort. Who else would try to scry us? Yes Eragon, I believe whoever they are they dangerous and they are heading for the island.

Saphiria, no one can see the island remember? I put up defenses around it. Besides if anyone entered the island, we would both know instantly—He abruptly cut himself off when he felt a ward go off in warning as someone entered the island. We need to get to the city, now! he said. On my way, said Saphiria. I will be there in less than ten minutes.

Eragon swam to the shore and hurdled out of the water at no speed a human, Elf, Dwarf, or Urgal could contest. He sprinted onto the beach where he had warded his stuff, which consisted of his sword Brisinger, his blessed necklace that prevented scrying, and his clothes. After quickly disarming the wards, Eragon put on his cloths after changing out of his bathing suit, his necklace, and put on his sword with his belt just as Saphiria arrived. In one graceful motion he jumped ten feet in the air to land on Saphiria's back as so she wouldn't have to land.

Should we alert the city? Saphiria asked? No, Eragon responded. Let's take care of this ourselves so the city is not in panic when Arya and Firnen arrive. As Saphiria flew closer to the city so they could actually see it now, Eragon felt another ward go off. I just felt our house ward go off! he said to Saphiria. Someone has entered the tower! Saphiria flew even faster so they entered the city and felt the shimmering of the ward two minutes later. As they flew towards their tower, he said to Saphiria Fly low and slow down so whoever is in our tower doesn't see us. Also land really soft so they can't feel us. I am placing a spell on you right now so when you land and fly you will not make any noise.

Eragon finished the spell just as Saphiria approached the tower. She landed without any noise, and Eragon jumped down without any noise, since he had cast the spell on himself also. Saphiria stopped him before he went upstairs. Someone I met was here before. Eragon whizzed through his memories. Was it Thorn? he asked. I don't know. she replied. Then she jerked her head up high and said I got something Eragon! I don't know who it is but I'm going to follow it before I lose it. Eragon hesitated before saying Be careful. I love you. Saphiria looked at him in her big blue eye and said I love you too, before she flew off.

Eragon watched her leave and then turned to the stairs. He slowly went up the stairs slowly trying not to make any noise before he realized he couldn't because of his spell. He then hastened his pace to the top of the stairs and looked into the main room. Next to his mantle was a person who looked like a girl looking at one of his fariths. She had a cloak on so he couldn't see her head. He slowly took out his sword, Brisinger, and approached her. He pointed the tip of the sword at the girls back and touched her as if he poked her.

Whoever the person was, they didn't react. He took another few seconds to observe whoever the person was before saying in a powerful tone "Who are you and what are you doing in my house?" The woman seemed to relax when he spoke, which game him even more caution to her. The girl took off her hood and turned around, to which Eragon raised his sword even higher in case he had to fight. As he saw her face he dropped his sword.

Saphiria flew out from the tower to chase after her prey. No one would harm her city full of Dragons-in-eggs-who-still-need-too-hatch. She chased after her prey, who even though had left only a few minutes before, was already very far ahead of her. Could it be Thorn? she thought. That would be bad. She lost sent of her game but caught it again as the wind shifted and dove into the forest.

As she flew throughout the forest she kept on having an peculiar feeling, and couldn't tell if it was good or bad. She caught a stronger sent of her prey and flew even faster, prepared to fight for the city's defense. She almost crashed into a very-tall-tree when she saw her preys face.

Eragon could not believe his eyes. Standing in front of him was the most beautiful women he had ever seen. She had long raven-black hair and slanted green eyes. She was one hundred years old but looked like she was only twenty. She was Arya, daughter of Queen Islanzadí and King Evandar, and she was Eragon's concubine.

Eragon was speechless for a moment. Then before Arya could say or do anything Eragon stepped forward, grabbed her, and kissed her passionately on the lips. Arya kissed him back with even more desire, for which Eragon kissed back with more lust, until it became a passionate kissing war. They both stopped when they had to take a breath.

Eragon was the first one to talk, "Two days? Two Days! That was one! And let me tell you, me and Saphiria thought that we were being attacked. First someone scrys on us, then we feel the wards being breached, then we feel our tower being breached! What were you trying to do! Cause an assault? Why didn't you just come to me and Saphiria instead of coming here?"

Arya just smiled. "What's so funny?" he asked. She looked at him and said "Let me answer your questions. As it turns out, there was no wind; we deceived you. Two, we couldn't go to you or Saphiria since you guys were both in different places. And three, we wanted to surprise you." It took Eragon a moment to take it all in before he said "Surprise me! You nearly had us ready for war! It was sure a surprise!" Arya looked at him with a pleased smile on her face. "Was it a good surprise?" Eragon looked at her. "What?" "I said, was it a good surprise?" Eragon without a doubt then said, "It was the best surprise ever." Then he grabbed Arya and went in for another passionate kiss.

Saphiria couldn't believe her eyes. In front of her was Firnen, in all his grace and glory. He looks as handsome as ever, she thought. Firnen then noticed her. Saphiria! he called out. Oh my love how I have missed you so! Saphiria flushed. Suck a sweet-talker, Firnen. Firnen my love, come here, let me see you up close! Firnen came closer so Saphiria could see how he had matured.

On his mental side, his voice did not get any deeper but he did mature more. But on his physical side, it made him when he was younger look like Dragon crap! His spikes had grown in fully, and he grew double the size so he was just a little smaller than herself. His green scales also got darker, making his scales appear to be a leaf-on-a-tree.

You look beautiful Saphiria. I have longed to be with you for what felt like forever. But now you are here, and the world shines bright one more! Saphiria looked him up and down once more in approval, and said Well you don't have to wait any longer! She jumped, bit his tail and took off, as he took off after her in pursuit, deeper into the dense forest of trees.

Seeing Eragon again gave her a feeling she had only experienced one before when she admitted her love for him. Throughout their conversation, all Arya could think about is how handsome he is and all the things perfect about him. And when he passionately kissed her for the first time, she felt ecstatic. But when he kissed her for a second time, she agreed with the human phrase, it was a girls dream come true.

It took Eragon a few minutes with Arya to realize he wasn't in a dream. She was even more perfect. She and him talked a while before he realized how late it was. He was about to call for Saphiria but he let her be. If Arya was here then Firnen was too, so she would probably be occupied. He told Arya he had separate sleeping quarters for her, but Arya just grabbed his hand and pulled him towards his room. She slammed the door shut and one of the last things he remembered her saying was "I haven't seen you in a year. I need time to get to know you better, if you know what I mean." And the finest part was that she said it with a twinkle in her eye.