Okay, so I'm back with a new chapter of Rotp, Litf. I'm sorry for keeping people waiting, but my dad stayed home for a week, so I couldn't get any work done. Also, I got my first flame. Congrats to you flamer.

To the guest 'f' who wrote this review:

okay, i'll say right now. If you want readers with more than two brain cell, then no idiotic japanese names. You're writing this in english, so fucking stick to english. Human forms are something that turn a serious story into an idiotic childish moquery of an story. the type change...meh, it's boring, but that's your bussiness, but with his pokemon strong enough to wipe competition, there's no need for overpowering. Try larger chapters, try to improve your writing style, since it's blunt, lacks details and fluity. For example, what the fuck was he talking about not knowing his feelings for Joy? Of course he doesn't, they just met you imbecile.
in any case, this chapter felt like it was forced, if that was the case, then just abandone it now that it's barely starting;

There is only one thing I have to say to you: GO FUCK YOURSELF! This is fucking fanfiction, and it's MY story, NOT yours. You want to complain, fine. I'm not going to sit here and listen to you complain like a fucking PMSing bitch (no offence to the female audience since I understand what you are going through. -Shudders- Never want to mess with my older sister when she's like that). If you don't like how I'm writing my story, go make your own fucking one. Now as I've said in my other stories: GO SIT IN A CORNER AND THINK ABOUT YOUR MISERABLE FUCKED UP LIFE!

Sorry about that, I don't usually let reviews get to me (mainly because I honestly don't care about the flames (unless its constructive criticism)), but that one was crossing the line. I will not have my writing be talked like it was fucking cow crap. Anyways, here's the next chapter.

Disclaimer: I don't own Pokemon, and quite frankly unless the owner is here then no one owns any of these shows/movies/etc.


The bright morning sun broke through the curtains that were in Ash's suite. Pikachu was sprawled above his head with an empty bottle of ketchup. Next to Ash was a pink haired woman, who we all know as Nurse Joy. She was wrapped protectively around Ash's waist as her head was on his chest. Ash groaned as he awoke from his dreamless slumber. He looked around the room before his eyes landed on the Pokemon nurse. His eyes widened and he almost shouted, before he remembered what happened the day before.

'That's right,' Ash thought. 'We went to dinner, and after it...those thugs...'


Flashback:

"Hey honey," a masculine voice called out as several of them came out of an alley way. It appeared that they didn't care or didn't see Ash as they ignored him. The man who spoke was one of those stereotypical masculine thugs who loved to be in gangs. "Why don't you ditch the loser and come with us, for some 'fun'." The way he said 'fun' made Ash see red.

Ash was currently wearing a black tuxedo, with a red t-shirt and a black tie. His hair was slicked back and he had a standard rose on his tux. He also carried three Pokeballs on him that contained Samurott, Tyranitar, and Pikachu (though he didn't like, he wanted his friend to be happy).

Nurse Joy was in a stunning red dress with her hair in a double pigtails. She also had on two Pokeballs, which contained her Chansey and another Pokemon.

Ash stepped up and spoke. "I don't see why she has to go with you when we were finishing our date," Ash said as he leaked out some of his aura. His eyes gained a light blue color in his iris as he stared at the intimidating thugs. Several of them stepped back, leaving just the boss.

"Oh yeah, and what's a runt like you gonna do about it," the thug asked before he felt as if he saw his death. Ash glared at the man with utter hate in his eyes. He HATED when people try to use power to get what they wanted.

"I suggest you leave, or I'll make you," Ash said as his hands glowed blue, but only lightly. The thug was about to leave, but then shook his head.

"Well I don't wanna," he said defiantly. "I'm not leaving till I get that hot piece of ass and make her my bitch." Silence was brought on by that statement. Ash then stepped back as he glared at the man even harder.

"Very well then," Ash said as he grabbed his Pokeball. "It seems I have no choice. Let's go Samurott!" The big and blur water type came out as he glared at the thug as well. Pikachu popped out of his ball and climbed his arm. Good thing his Pokemon could see the outside world through the Pokeballs. "I suggest you leave, or else." Ash let the sentence hang as Nurse Joy ran up and stood next to Ash, slightly afraid of what was to happen. He had already told her everything since he disappeared to now, including him being with Latias. It was a bit fast, but he said that if she was to go out with him, that he needed to be entirley truthful. She knew that he could beat them no flat, but couldn't she just worry a bit.

"Heh, a Pokemon battle eh," the boss thug said as he grabbed a Pokeball. He threw it up and out came a Tropius. "You can't beat my Tropius, since its the strongest Pokemon of all."

Flashback End


After that, Ash completely destroyed the Tropius with a One-Hit KO. Ash then took Nurse Joy back to the center/hotel where she insisted on her staying with him in his suite. Nurse joy was slightly afraid of staying alone after what happened, so of course she would ask something like that. Ash remembered after their little date, that Joy said she would think about everything he told her. He smiled at that, since she didn't insult him or anything for him being with a Pokemon.

Ash decided to finally get out of bed, so he quickly and carefully got Joy off of him. Ash then went to the kitchen and made a very delicious breakfast for the both of them. He would feed his Pokemon around now, but the B-Poketch had an interesting feature for that. Apparently, the feature can feed their Pokemon with just a push of a button. Ash was brought out of his thoughts when the Pokemon nurse was at the table eating his food. He chuckled at that, and was glad that he could think about things while his body never stopped reacting. Nurse Joy heard the chuckle and looked at Ash.

"Why good morning, Red," Nurse Joy said as she used Ash's alias. "What are you gonna do today?" Ash thought it over.

"I'm probably going to train some more, though I don't really need it," Ash told her. She looked up in thought at that. "If not, I'll explore the place. Gotta know my way around, ya know." Nurse Joy nodded at that. Ash got up and took their now finished plates to the sink before he washed them. Nurse Joy left the room to change into her uniform for work. Ash had just finished when she called out.

"I'm going off to work Ash," she called to him from the doorway.

"Okay, be careful," Ash called back. Nurse Joy gave a quick 'Okay' and left. Pikachu had woken up by now (don't know how he slept through that) and climbed up his partners shoulder. "Hey Pi. Wanna do some exploring today?" Pikachu nodded before the two of them left the room.


And I leave it at that. I know its not much, but next chapter I'm starting the battles. As for the whole to fast thing with Nurse Joy, don't flame. Constructive Critisisim is allowed, but if your gonna flame, think about it, then decided whether or not its worth me ranting on you. If you don't like it, make your own story.

Also, I know that I said I was gonna update Android Infinity, but I had some problems and couldn't finish it. I have half of it done, so I should be able to finish it within two weeks.

Anyways,

Thank you and Goodnight

(bows and exits)