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SUZU-POV again

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KONOHA

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"you realize their not going to let you adopt him cause your 'seven' right" Riko said "seven and half thank you and besides i'm way ahead my solution the HENGE" I said wile activating the jutsu, which made me look like a twenty seven year old blond, "i hope you know what your doing Suzu"said Riko.

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3 HOURS 5 ORPHANAGES LATER 3:00PM

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"ok this time for sure" When I walked in the building I saw many kids playing and having a merry time but I could not shake the feeling that it looked a bit too well played out, I shook the feeling to look for my target/son to be.

I got really put down when I did not see him amongst any of them 'dam how many orphanages do I have to go to before I find him I've been to like five of them and granted the others were more genuinely happy to see me unlike these kids like like' I thought then it hit me 'time to use my nose this time' I thought I got his sent almost instantly and once I did, the lady walked up tome and said "so are you looking to adopt miss" "yes I am but I don't see any I might be interested in" I said as she started rambling on who would be good for me, I focused on his sent making sure he was here and his sent, and well enough it was only minuets old in the room, I was irked at that "are you sure that this is every one who is staying here" I said wile unconsciously leaking KI. small but it was enough for her to shiver.

She gave in at that point "yes there is one more up stairs bu-" "great bring them down"i said as I cut her off, her face went through a lot of different emotion's, the main one's were fear, hate, then sorrow.

I noticed the rest of the kid's look defeated, when I saw him I wanted to do a happy dance but I thought that would be a bit much so I said "just the boy I was looking for" I said, to say every one was shocked at my words would be an understatement when I motioned for him to approach me he did but not eagerly but a bit skittish and fearful, i got down to eye level and retracted enough chakra to show my real eyes as soon as he saw them almost immediately changed his demeanor as if something clicked in his head of who I was.

I put my eye back under the henge and said "i want to adopt him" "take him here's the paper work the law the council made has made the other kid suffer enough and if your willing to take him then by all means take him and don't do anything I wouldn't do" she said with a devious smile 'oooo i'll be doing every thing you wouldn't and have not done' I thought with a smile.

I got done with the paperwork and at that moment Naruto Uzumaki in now Naruto Uzumaki Kitsune and at that moment for me is when it really hit me 'wow so this is what it's like to be a mom shit there's a lot of pride and nervousness in being a mom dam I salute to you mom's of the world' I thought wile turning in the papers "here's your final copy and here's mine" she said as she burned her copy with a lighter.

"Naruto say goodbye to your friends" many kid's gave him hateful glares and all who did got one from me which confused many as to why, after we got through the glare's and got to the door two kid's were waiting "you weren't going to leave with out saying goodbye to us were you Naruto" said a girl with two bun in her hair then I looked to the boy 'holy mother of all that is good and right how many eye brows did this boy steal they're huge they look like mini two by four's' I thought "Ten-nee, Rock-nii of course not I just couldn't find you" said Naruto (A/N I hope I got that right I need a suffix cheat sheet) "sorry about that Naruto we thought only in our wildest dreams you'd be adopted" Rock said "and we had gift's for you if you, I, or rock got adopted" said the bun girl, Rock gave Naruto some gantlets capable of modifications "these r for if you ever decide to become a ninja, and since I don't know what fighting style you will have so these have flexibility, I have a pair just like it so when on the battlefield we will fight as brothers" Rock said as he fist pumped at that last part.

The bun girl face palmed at Rock's antic's "i swear can you get any worse, some thing tells me I'm going to regret saying that" said the bun girl with a sigh "my gift is also for if you decide to become a ninja" she said as she handed him twin kodachi's "one has my name on the blade and the other has yours" she said with a smile then walked looked me right in the eye and said "take care of my little brother" she said in a serious tone "i will" I said also very serious, she smiled then Rock and bun girl gave Naruto a hug and said they're final goodbyes then we left.

When we were out side the building saw Riko shocked and relieved probably shocked that it worked and relieved that it was over "wow it worked I don't believe it" she said "yeah but now it's time to break the new's to mom and dad"i said as Riko started laughing "i can't wait to see the looks on they're faces" she said between heaves, Naruto just looked at her with curiosity just before he pounced on her hugging her tightly "ACK Suzu help me he's crushing me!" she pleaded "ok Naruto that's enough" I said with in a short wile he then put her down "air beautiful air" she said with mock relief, "Naruto is there some where you would like to go before we go home? I asked "Ichiraku ramen?" he asked "of course Naruto" I said, after a short walk later we arrived at a small stand.

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im all for gender bending in certain areas it makes it fun I think but at this point I need help choosing so I will use a poll so yeah

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