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You sill child. Do you know what a threat is. Obviously not. She will soon pay for all the wrongs she has done. I told her not to start a family and she goes off gets a husband a little kid and is pregnaunt. This will not do. I told her and she didn't listen. I will have to remind her of the last time she didnt listen to me when I gave her an order. Its like she is deaf and stupid.

"How far away are you from getting that man here?"I asked one of the goons working for me.

"As soon as we can sir, he's hard to track down when he never leaves any traces of where he has been or will be." He replied.

People now a days are so stupid, you might aswell do the work yourself.


This is a really small chapter because I need your help. I am currently writing a new story which is alot better than this and was wondering if you as the readers would like me to continue with this story or start my new one. This is a preview of the new one:

Hi, My name is Bella and i'm Schizophrenic. Schizophrenic is a mental disorder characterized by a disintegration of thought processes and of emotional responsiveness, it most commonly manifests as auditory hallucinations, paranoid or bizarre delusions, or disorganized speech and thinking, and it is accompanied by significant social or occupational dysfunction. You see I am no ordinary child. I go to a normal school, i'm a normal target for bullies and I have normal parents.

A lot of the time people don't understand that people who are Schizophrenic are normal. Yes we may seem out of it most of the time and yes we may speak to our self. However its not something we can help. We should be ourselves and not pretend to be a person that other people want us to be.

My story is like another fairy tale. You've got the prince charming and the evil character and then the poor girl hoping to find ture love. Except this story is about how the evil character is my best friend Jessica. Prince Charming is Edward and then there is me an average normal plain girl who is just trying to get by. Not looking for love just wanting to get by.

So this is how it all begins.


Okay so could you leave a review please on which one I should write. It would be really helpful if you did.

Thank you (: