Here is Vanessa's pov=) I hope you like it... and don't think that Jack will let this slip by! He will get his payback.

Thank you so much for the reviews psycho! It means a lot to me and i am so happy that you like this version as well!


We rode rides, had laughs… I couldn't remember having so much fun with somebody without using a knife or gun.

"This is the first time I'm actually having fun at an amusement park" I giggle as we walk through the park.
"Really… what a coincidence, it's my first time having fun at one of these too" He chuckles.
"Oh Jack lets get come cotton candy!" I squeal.
"Like I said doll face, I'm your clown now and always" He says with a grin on his face. My heart melted inside. Jack was sure one of a kind. As we waited on line, we talked about the rides we had yet to ride. I wanted to ride the pirate boat; he wanted to ride the thriller roller coaster.
"The thriller roller coaster…?" I ask, half nervous.
"Yeah… what's so bad about it doll face?"
"That looks high Jack…" I said as I looked at the roller coaster.
"Come now, you're not scared of me yet you're scared of a little roller coaster?" He chuckles.
"I'm not scared…" I snap.
"Then prove it to me doll face, after all I'll be there to hold you" He teases.
"Fine… as soon as I get some cotton can-"
"It's no wonder why you didn't show up at the mall today" Chris suddenly says.
"What do you want Chris…?" I said, rolling my eyes.
"Just here… isn't this a free place?"
"And what doll did you bring here… or should I say what little action figure?" Jack cackles.
"You're testing my sanity Napier…" Chris mutters in anger.
"It's a gift…" Jack says with a smirk on his face. I couldn't help but giggle.
"Why did you come here to talk to us in the first place Chris?" I ask in an annoyed voice.
"What are you blind…? What the fuck do you see in this clown?" he snaps.
"What are you a jealous boyfriend?" I ask.
"Hey Chris lets go on the…" A blonde girl says and adds, "Oh Jack so nice to see you" She says, looking at him in a flirty manner.
"Same over here… I could just die with your presence" He says sarcastically. Either way, I could not help but feel angry.
"Who is she Jack…?" I ask.
"A girl from my English class… Chelsea Vincent" He responds.
"And the girl you spent time with all last week" She teases.
"You see and here you are following this creep like a lost kitten… I almost feel sorry for you" He chuckles.
"What don't tell me this is the girl you like?" Chelsea asks.
"Yup… Vanessa Castillo" He says with a smirk on his face.
"Don't you dare pronounce her name like that" Jack says in anger.
"Oh and what are you gonna do about it Napier" I walk up to Chris in anger and kick him right where it hurts everyman.
"What the fuck was that for…?" He struggles to say.
"And you better watch it too pretty girl" I said to Chelsea in anger. I look back at Jack who just stood there. I couldn't read what he was feeling at the moment. But I wanted him to feel my pain. To think that I actually thought that Jack and I had a chance! Boy was I an idiot!
"Say something doll face" He says.
"Jack I never wanna see you again!" I said, almost in tears. I decide to run away from the place. The least thing I wanted was for Jack to see me in tears for him.
"Let her go Jack… you're too good for the runt anyways" I hear Chelsea say in laughter. She definitely just bought herself a ticket to the graveyard. As I run, I couldn't help but feel like a total fool. I had promised myself that I wasn't going to let this feeling get to me, and I did. Suddenly I hear the sound of thunder. Drops of rain began to hit my face. Great…
"Where are you going doll face…?" I hear Jack say. I stop walking…
"Jack what do you want…?" I respond, without facing him.
"Did you think you could just get away from me like that?"
"Isn't Chelsea your girl?" I ask.
"That bitch, come now I have better taste than that" He says. I turn my gaze towards him.
"Then why did she say that…?" I ask.
"Do you really care that much…?" He replies.
"No…" I snap.
"Then why did you just react like that…?" He says with a smirk on his face.
"Chris got me angry" I pout.
"Chris or me…?"
"Both of you… men I swear" I say in disgust. Jack walks up closer to me.
"I was with her this week, but it's not what you think" He whispers as he looks at me.
"What were you doing with her then?" I ask.
"I can't tell you anything just yet, but believe me… I wouldn't go out with that tramp even if her father paid me a million dollars" He says… could he be telling the truth.
"Do ya mean that…?" I ask. Boy was I acting pathetic!
"Of course doll face… the only one I have eyes for is you. This clown is all yours bunny" He chuckles. He wraps his arms around my waist and pulls me closer to him. To my misfortune, he pulls me into a kiss. From that moment, I was his and his alone. My heart and soul would belong to no one, but Jack Napier. Vanessa you just bought yourself a one way ticket to hell…