Hi, I'm back. In this chapter, Eugene and Rapunzel are terrified to get a note from Gothel that makes it a matter for life or death. So they need a little help from the notes to figure out what they're up against.
Disclaimer: I don't own Tangled
The Ghost of Gothel
Chapter 5 Notes can give clues
"Rider, you told Rapunzel that I was threatening you. Smart boy. Because I think she should know that I'm planning revenge on you for stealing my daughter. So tell her that she needs to go to the tower in four days so I could redeem her. If she doesn't go, I will go to Corona, steal her back, and kill you. M.G. P.S. Don't tell the King and Queen because if you do, they'll be in danger too," was what the note from Gothel had said but Rapunzel and Eugene heard it in a different way.
"Eugene, you told Rapunzel that I was threatening you. Smart boy. Because I think she should know that I'm planning to kill you for stealing my daughter. So tell her that I want her to go to the tower in four days so I could steal her back. If she doesn't go, I will go to Corona, steal her, and kill you. M.G. P.S. Don't tell the King and Queen because if you do, I'll kill them too," was what Rapunzel had heard.
"Rider, you told Rapunzel that I was threatening to kill you. Smart, very smart. Because I think she should know that I'm planning to kill you again for stealing my daughter. So tell her that she has to go to the tower in four days so I could imprison her again. If she doesn't go, I will go to Corona, steal her, and kill you. M.G. P.S. Don't tell the King and Queen because if you do, they're in danger of being killed too," was what Eugene heard from his own voice.
"What are we going to do?" asked Rapunzel. "I don't know. I just can't believe that old bat is threatening us." said Eugene. "Shh…..don't call her an old bat." said Rapunzel. "And if we try to get help from your parents, they'll get killed also!" said Eugene as he felt the ice cold winds of death. Rapunzel knew he was right. They needed help, but they couldn't tell her parents because they'll be killed by Gothel. So not only will she be Gothel's prisoner again and Eugene would be killed, Corona would be left without a king and queen. Rapunzel realized something.
"Wait a minute. I think those notes we got might have clues." said Rapunzel. "You think so?" asked Eugene as he calmed down a little. "Here, let's read the notes again." said Rapunzel as she pulled out the note she got from Gothel. Eugene grabbed the notes he got from Gothel. They read each on carefully. They circled parts of the notes that gave them clues. The clues included: "my daughter back" "incorporeal being" "my flower" "kick the bucket" "planning revenge" "redeem her" "kill you" "in danger too". They looked over the clues.
"Okay, so the first clue is 'my daughter back.'" said Eugene. "So that means Gothel wants me back." said Rapunzel. "Also, 'my flower' is circled. That means we're up against Gothel." said Eugene. "We both know 'kick the bucket' means die," said Rapunzel. "What she means by planning revenge is killing you." said Rapunzel. "What I think she means by 'redeem her, kill you, and in danger too'?" asked Eugene when he saw those words circled. Gothel must not be after me. I think she only wants to kill Eugene. Thought Rapunzel for a second.
"Oops, you missed one," said Rapunzel as she pointed to one of the clues. "Which one?" asked Eugene? "Right there. 'Incorporeal being,'" said Rapunzel. "Why would she write that? Incorporeal being means ghost." said Eugene. Why on earth would Gothel write incorporeal being in her note….wait a minute. Thought Eugene for a second. Eugene was confused then his confusion turned into fear. He reread the postscript on the note. "P.S. 'if you're curious how I'm still back? Let's just say I'm an incorporeal being.'" said Eugene as he reread the part of the letter.
"Eugene, are you okay?" asked Rapunzel. "Um…Rapunzel." said Eugene. "Yes Eugene?" asked Rapunzel. "I think we're up against something worse than Gothel." said Eugene. "What?" asked Rapunzel curious what her husband meant by "something worse than Gothel." What could be worse than Gothel? She kidnapped me, trapped me in a tower, hid me from the world, and nearly killed Eugene. What can be worse than her? Thought Rapunzel for a second. "And what exactly is worse than Gothel?" asked Rapunzel scared to find out what it is. "The ghost of her." said Eugene in a tone of voice of a man who found out his girl was dead.
Uh oh! So now they know Gothel is a ghost. Do you think it was a good idea for them to act like detectives and find out clues in the notes? I think I jazzed up the story more because one of the reviewers said to jazz it up a little. I hope it's jazzed up more. Review please!
