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Derpy trembled as the door creaked open. She scurried to the kitchen cabinet and opened the door a little in case it wasn't a threat, a large stallion walked in her house. It looked like her Daddy, then again it wasn't, he doesn't smell like magic, like he usually does when he returns from the Sparkle's. Derpy looked at the stranger as he crept about her peaceful home. He was wearing all black and he was sneaky as he walked. Derpy was scared, but she gained courage when he left the room and went to Mommy's room. Derpy climbed out of the cabinet and followed the stranger.
"Hey! Mommy don't like it when ponies are in her house, or room. She gets really angry when ponies are in her room. "Hey, filly, where's Derpy, I was sent to kill her."he said. Derpy blinked as she swiftly focused her eyes then squeaked with fear. "I don't know who that is...you must have the wrong house."she lied. "Okay...thanks kid..."he said. Derpy began to sweat holding in her focused eyes. "You should come with me Derpy..."he said.
He knew who she was, now she had to escape before he gets her. She jumped then flapped her wings as hard as she can. "Come back here you worthless crossed eyed freak!"he yelled. Derpy shed a single tear as she crashed into the wall causing dishes to fall on his head. She flapped harder to fly faster smashing into things and landing objects everywhere.
Suddenly she made a mistake, she dropped oil on the turned on stove, making fire spread before her suddenly focused eyes. The stallion rushed out and closed the door behind him. Derpy was trapped in the fire house and everything was going crazy. She was so confused of what was going on, she began to step back from the orange flames that was coming close to her.
She sat on something warm and she screamed. "Daddy! Help!"she yelled. No answer, no movement. The house started to fall down on top of her hurting her back. She screamed in terror everytime something heavier fell on her. She cried and screamed louder, the smoke quickly was breathed in and choked on.
Derpy couldn't breathe, her back is broken and no one could hear her underneath all of tha debris. She managed to hear hooves going across the floor. It was Mommy she looked down at Derpy and smirked, the stallion returned in the house and she gave him a huge, big sack of bits.
"Pleasure doing business with you ma'am."he said. Mommy laughed and she followed him out the burning house. The day was ending soon and Daddy still isn't back from work. Derpy wanted to die now, she can't take the pain from the ceiling leaning on her. And the smoke doing nothing but filling her lungs up with toxins. Derpy was doomed.
Twilight, Shining Armor and Cadence was walking a block from the house. "Okay, I have another question for you guys, ready?"said Twilight. Cadence giggled cheerfully. "I am always ready Twilight Sparkle."she said. "Okay, okay...(cough) why is that house on fire!"she yelled. Cadence gasped when she realized who owns it.
"That's the Doo/Hooves house! We have to rescue them!"she said flying to the roof. Shining Armor carried a big rock and smashed it through the ceiling carefully making sure it wouldn't hit the floor, dragged it out and tossed it far. Cadence jumped inside and coughed. She used her magic to make a helmet to protect her from the smoke. "H-hello? Is anypony alive in here?"she said.
Derpy couldn't speak her throat was sore from yelling for nobody to hear it. From the corner of her eyes she saw bubbles, she reached for it and blew them with what's left of her breath, she passed out afterwards. Cadence was desperately looking for anybody alive, she wanted to at least find one pony to be present. She noticed a school of bubbles floating around.
"Twilight! Are you blowing bubbles? I'm sorry honey but we have no time for that. Maybe later."she said. Twilight and Shining was popping them and laughing gleefully. "I didn't blow them Cadence, somepony in the house did."she said happily. Cadence followed where the bubbles were coming from and saw the liquid spilled on the floor with Derpy's motionless body.
"Oh my goodness, Derpy is in here! Shining come here please!"she shouted. Shining Armor transported himself to where Cadence was located. They both carefully lift her out the house and laid her on the ground. "Whoa, is she alright, why would she be in that house all alone, and while its on fire."said Twilight using her magic to skip rope.
"My guess is as good as yours Twily."said Shining. "Really? Then I think she was left alone, then she spilled something to cause the house to go ablaze. And her mom visited her while she was in need of help, paid an assassin to 'take care of her' then left her helpless. Do you think my guess is right?"she said. "Twilight, Mrs. Doo, loves her little Derpy like how I love you.
A mother would never, ever do anything to hurt her precious child. I'm sure you've mistaken."she said. Shining and Twilight both looked at each other. "I don't know Cadence, that sounds pretty accurate. Me and Twilight been visiting Mrs. Doo more than you had, and she is bonkers. I mean, does it ever cross your mind that Derpy's last name is no loner Doo? My mother said she didn't want her last name to be close to hers."said Shining Armor.
Cadence's ears lowered and so did her eyes. Derpy began to cough and scream out: 'Mommy! Please help...don't leave me here..." Twilight's horn began to glow and she went to Derpy's mind. She saw everything. "Oh my goodness! I was accurate, how uncanny! I gotta write this down."she said getting her stuff pony and mini notepad.
Cadence rubbed Derpy's mane and she opened her eyes. "Are you...alright?"she asked. Derpy coughed out smoke and picked her head up. "I think we should bring her to the hospital, and call the police."said Shining Armor. It began to rain heavily and stormed. "Great we have to walk now, what perfect timing."said Cadence.
Twilight hopped around happily. "You'll love walking Cadence!"said Twilight. "We need to find shelter until the rain stops, the hospital is very far, far away. I haven't learn the transportation spell because I was foalsitting you Twilight...what are we going to do?!"said Cadence. "I can send us there with my magic."said Shining.
"Big brother, you never learned that spell yet, remember? I tried it and succeed when me and Derpy went to the hospital the first time"said Twilight. "Did you know where you were going when you did it?"said Shining. "No, but it worked."she said. "That's dangerous Twilight, you could've went to the moon or somewhere very far away and might not be able to return home."said Cadence hugging her. Twilight pouted and crossed her hooves.
"Okay...we will go make a shelter, but I want to choose the destination and design it!"she said happily. Her horn glowed brightly as they traveled the foggy streets. Shining and Cadence carried Derpy carefully with their magic as they followed Twilight. Suddenly they bumped into her went she stopped. "Uh, Twilight, this is a good spot and all, but we can't hangout in the streets we could get hurt."said Cadence.
"Look! That's Mrs. Doo!"said Twilight as her ears lowered she backed up each time Mrs. Doo walked closer. Shining and Cadence's ear lowered as well as backing up each time she came close. "Anon! We have to hide the filly and myself!"said Cadence as she threw mud on her face. Twilight and Shining helped Cadence disguise herself.
"Unicorn or Pegasus."said Shining. "Uh, whatever surprise me, she's coming!"she said. Twilight pulled a blanket out of her bag and wrapped Derpy in it. She dug in the mud and rolled around in it. "Is this enough?"said Twilight. "Perfect! Oh! Here she comes, go under Derpy and be the stroller, remember you have to be quiet."said Cadence. Mrs. Doo walked by them and stopped.
"Why hello there, what happened to you guys, your all covered in dirt."she said. They all gasped as Mrs. Doo walked towards them. "Uh...yeah...we um...help me out guys."whispered Cadence. "We saw your house on fire and rescued Derpy!"said Twilight underneath Derpy.
Cadence gasped loudly and covered her mouth. "Excuse me?"she said quickly taking her hoodie off. "Oh, its nothing...our stroller is very talkative today."said Shining. "Its okay...um...I had a hard time listening straight. Hey is that a foal in there? Can I have a peek?"she said. Cadence and Shining looked at each other. "Well, honey do you think she should see our baby?"said Cadence.
"I don't know dear, what do you think?"said Shining. "I asked you first darling please don't make me answer."said Cadence forcing a smile disguising her being nervous. "Sweetheart, I wasn't letting you answer I was letting you decide for me then I will kindly agree with whatever decision you have for me to agree...to...so that makes your theory of letting me letting you decide invalid."said Shining making Cadence nervously giggle.
"Basically, sweetie, I am not invalid of what I say, I see what your trying to do. Your throwing her question for me to answer it is obvious. How stupid do you think I am?"said Cadence getting angry slowly raising her wings. "Whoa, mare are you a Pegasus or a Unicorn?"said Mrs. Doo. "I'm an Ali- no no wait."she said closing her mouth. "Pegasus." "Unicorn.""Pegasus." "Unicorn" "Pegasus."said Cadence and Shining mixing the answers together.
"I'm a unicorn..."said Cadence smiling. "So can I see the foal?"said Mrs. Doo."You both are obviously wasting her time, just answer the question say anything!"said Twilight. "Your magical talking stroller is correct, i have a body to find and bury, then arrange a funeral for."said Mrs. Doo putting her hoodie back on.
"You mind telling us?"said Cadence. Mrs. Doo wiped her cheek as if tears were present when they weren't. "Yes, I was told that my foal was trapped, bound and helpless in a fiery flamed house. And I'm here to pick her body up."she said grinning afterwards. "Oh my, I am so sorry for you, I terribly sorry for your lost."said Cadence.
"What will the father think when he finds out you didn't help your foal from the fire!?"yelled Twilight. Cadence and Shinkng kicked the 'stroller' and smiled at Mrs. Doo. Mrs. Doo's eyes were widen and she gave out a nervous chuckle. "I'm sorry, I been hearing voices of guilt I...I have to go."she said running past them. "Why did you kick me for?"said Twilight rubbing her hind legs.
"Do you know what be quiet means, we could've got caught with your big mouth, tell me why did you do that, why do you want me to get in trouble?"said Shining Armor. "Its simple actually, once somepony do a deed so horribly like she did, you start to hear voices of guilt just like what she said, so in other words her mind plays tricks on her."said Twilight. Cadence smiled and used her magic to clean everybody off.
"You are a smart filly you know Twilight, that's why your my favorite."she said. "We better get going, its almost sunrise, and I'm tired."said Shining. "Over there! We will rest here for tonight."said Twilight. From afar they heard running hoofsteps coming closer.
"Its Mrs. Doo! Hide!"they said running into a cave. "I knew those two hooligans have my foal, and that means she's alive! Noooo! Ugh! I have to find those ponies and kill them. If it takes all night ti find them I don't care."said Mrs. Doo. "Your right, she's not all there, we have to get a move on, Derpy, are you okay?"said Cadence rubbing her head.
"Where am I? Princess Cadence? Is this a dream? Where's Daddy, he always wanted to meet you princess!"said Derpy weakly. "Shh, I will meet your father, we need to find the castle you'll be safe there, and I will foalsit you and practically raise you and Twilight. You seem to be good friends."said Cadence. Derpy frowned.
"D-don't let Mommy find me, I tried running away before but I missed my daddy."said Derpy nervously. "Are you feeling okay Derpy, you look green."said Twilight. "She needs the hospital, letting toxins in untreated can lead to death! I could try to use my temporary wings trick so we could be able to get there faster."said Cadence as her horn glowed letting out magic. Twilight flew up and spun around.
"Yay! I have wings!"she said. Cadence cradled Derpy and flew towards the hospital followed by Shining and Twilight. As they reached the hospital Mrs. Doo was in front of the building. "Oh no...she knows we're trying to help her, what to do now?"said Shining Armor. "Uh...Oh! Let's fly to the castle!"said Cadence starting to fly towards it. "Auntie Celestia! Auntie Luna, please open up!"said Cadence.
"What hath happened Cadence, I am the guardian of night and I shall not be distracted."said Luna. "Okay, that's night let me talk to Celestia!"said Cadence nervously stomping her hooves on the floor. "Why is it my favorite niece Cadence-"said Celestia but Cadence ran inside. "We need you to heal Derpy and keep her in custody until she is old enough to live on her own!"said Shining Armor.
"Please sign this paper of you agreeing with this!"said Twilight as she levitates the paper to Celestia. "Um...where is her mother? Is she well? Am I allowed to accept her in the palace?"said Celestia. Mrs. Doo bust open the door. "Stop! Your not giving my foal away!"she yelled. "Cadence, you foalnapped a foal? I am surprised at you."said Celestia. "No, its not what it looks like, you can't give Derpy back to that psycho!"said Cadence.
"And why not?"said Luna. "Who are you calling a psycho, I don't go around stealing everypony's happiness."said Mrs. Doo. "Oh, your happiness, eh? Is your pleasure is attempting to kill Derpy makes you happy? I don't know about you but if I was royalty I would personally take her away from you."said Shining. "I don't know what your talking about, I l-lo- I ugh, I want her back your not taking her away from me."said Mrs. Doo.
"I'm sorry Cadence, but she has to go with her mother, I have no right to take Derpy from her."said Celestia. "No! She wouldn't even say she love her, if she ever heard of that word before. Princess Celestia if you do this, you would be guilty after you visit her funernal she was planning when she thought she died."said Shining Armor.
"That is enough! Cadence for this behavior of your s is going to get you sent to the moon!"said Luna. "T-the moon?! But we're not lying! I made an oath when I was born, a princess shall never lie, and I am not lying! Please auntie you must believe me because I am your honest niece!"said Cadence begging.
"Come here Derpy! We're going home."said Mrs. Doo. Derpy didn't move she stared at Mrs. Doo with a sad look. "Go on now Derpy, your mother was very worried."said Celestia pushing her towards her mother. "No!"she yelled holding on to Celestia's leg. "Derpy, your siding with them?"said Celestia staring into her teary eyes. "Yes Princess...I believe them..."said Derpy.
"How dare you lie with those monsters!"said Mrs. Doo as Twilight, Cadence, and Shining Armor growled. "Your the only monster in this room!" said Cadence. "Screw you, come on Derpy stop this nonsense, come home daddy is waiting."she said as her eyes twitched. Derpy began to go in her direction and tears were left behind her. Twilight walked in front of her and pushed her away.
"Derpy, we care about your well being. We cannot let you go with her. Tell the princess what happened last night."said Twilight. Derpy wiped her tears. "But...I won't see daddy again if i stay with you guys."said Derpy. "You will, I promise...now tell!"said Twilight. "Okay...princess I have something to tell you."said Derpy.
Celestia chuckled and rubbed her head. "Don't worry about it, I was waiting for you to choose if you really want to save yourself instead of always worrying about your father, you must always think about you and no one else. That is extremely dangerous, and for telling the truth you are to be taken under my wings. You can stay in the castle until you are old enough to be on your own. You are very special Derpy never forget that. If your mother wants to treat you like you are nothing, then use that strength to make you more confident in yourself."said Celestia.
"You don't think, I'm a freak? My eyes don't bother you?"said Derpy. Celestia smiled and ran her hoof through her mane. "They are gorgeous, now go to sleep, its rather late."she said. Luna stomped her hoof on the floor.
" , you are a failure of a mother, treating your filly like trash, just because she had a little accident back the hospital. And instead of confronting the doctor, you though right away she had a birth defect, and for that you are banished and will have your wings removed also forever live in the Everfree Forest, do not ever come out again or you will be sent to the the moon, would you like that?"said Luna as Mrs. Doo lowered her ears and sadly nodded 'no'.
"Good, now LEAVE THE ROYAL CASTLE!" she yelled. Mrs. Doo couldn't hold it in, she began to cry uncontrollably. Derpy ran up her mother and hugged her. "Mommy, even though you hated me, I want to let you know I never hated you"said Derp
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Mrs. Doo looked down at Derpy and wiped her tears. "I didn't know what happened at the hospital that wonderful, magical day and may never will. But it caused me to loose my precious foal, and I will be guilty for how I treated you. I am sorry Ditzy Doo..."she said as she hugged Derpy and continued to walk off. Twilight, Cadence and Shining Armor lowered their heads. "I feel bad..."said Twilight. "Its too late for that Twilight if she was a good mother she would never ever let this happen"said Cadence.
Derpy began to cry and lay on the floor. She was clutching her back, and jerking violently. She screamed and looked as if she was in pain. "What's wrong with her?"asked Twilight feeling scared. "We need to take her to the hospital, her spine gave in after the ceiling fell on her."said Shining Armor. Twilight ran to the phone and called the ambulance.
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