Naruto Arise
Chapter 2
AN: Well, this is the second chapter and I hope you like it. There's going to be more characters in this one and more Kyuubi notes, I think or maybe not, who knows. Might be a bit of gore, not sure! NARUSAKU'S 1st KISS in flashback and surprises? WOAH! … READ IT AND FIND OUT!
Kidloco rant: I don't own the Naruto characters or music I may post here. The story is adopted from bah'an (that the right name? lol) who has given me permission to change the story to my liking. Thanks for the reviews and follows.
Kidloco.
Second Kidloco rant:
Only 5 review? That good for first posting in FF, after reviewing more than 100 fanfics I had read lol.
Thanks to all who favorited and are following my story.
Now answer the reviews -
Guest: Thanks guest for you review, I sure you will like the second chapter, I think had more dating and more talking and little drama inside hehe
Unyielding Wish: thanks you for you review, is sure is interesting but second chapter is more interesting to read, yes I adapte and change(mostly the second chapter, that why I get late to posting.. 6 changes completely, 2 times lost computer down and dint save it.. I hate that and lost hard drive (with other fanfic.. I hate that), so imaginative, beside work, work and hurricane Isaac XD (I'm living in Florida) thanks tell me about centered the chapters, I just did and look much better and like it :D
Yes is narusaku love! Powerful one
Yes can be fast but remember that may be after the pain attack and the four ninja war and the chaos, just trying to make cool and maybe later go with the manga in some part but I tell you, may go out of timeline of manga and anime, the one who stundered will Hinata, not more said because can spoilt the chapter XD, thanks for you review and you constructive criticism, oh maybe put my char in the fanfic but not in romance(like I had with another fanfic because I want do there good, you will see it in the future, yeah the one I get lost for the hard drive… now need write the half end again XD, again thanks for you review
Raphmaster14: thanks for you review and you forgiven lol, and yes is my first fanfic I post in ff but not the first time I do,.. most of my work are in notebook.. talking of that I need a new pen… anyway, I know I did that why I getting a beta right now and send that to fix that mistake and no.. I'm not Brazilian.. I wish… they had cool body.. and Brazilian girls.. :drool XD but I'm Latino :D just around where brazil are, so you know I'm sudamerican :D, yes is adopted but I making heaving changes, believe me, that why I had change like 6 times completely XD. Heh I sure will do good job in you fanfic I adopted (I really need make a list because I cant remember what I had adopted lol, but I may change some things… thanks for you review
Bah'chin: thanks you, you review help me much :D, second chapter will be more cool, I had change and move you will know what I mean hehe, but thanks :D
NaruSaku19: thanks for you review and yes I know had be difficult read the summary (dint had beta but now I had) so second chapter will be more easy to read and summary too :D nd hell yeah I am narusaku fan but I am naruino fan, narusakuino fan, sometime team 7 love fan (threesome and when teme is not a bastard) and the most favorite, kidlocosakuinonaru fan too (you will see soon) thanks again
Now the second chapter
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The 2nd Day
Naruto wake up very lighting (do you mean early?) that day on his couch, remembering the day before and the night mostly, the date and the make out. Looking at the ceiling, he smiled at the thought of another day with Sakura-chan but first he stop to the bathroom before he leave him apartment. He decided to walk to the hospital to meet Sakura-chan to take her out for breakfast – perhaps he'd buy something for her on the way.
Naruto smiled and thought, 'I like how that sounds.'
The day was beautiful and the villagers were busy with their daily business. Some villagers salute him, making Naruto salute back with a smile, but others just ignored him like always. They weren't as bad as they had been in the past, as Naruto had decided to change that and little by little he had done so. Some were still stubborn but he knew he could do it.
Naruto was walking at slow pace, thinking what gift he could give to Sakura, when he saw a jewelry store. A necklace! That's what he'd get Sakura-chan! As he entered, the store vendor said with a smile, "Good morning. How may I help you?"
Naruto brushed his blond hair nervously. "Hello, I'm searching for a necklace for my girlfriend."
The man nodded and asked, "How does she look, and what is her personality like?"
Naruto asked, "How come you need that to get a necklace?"
The vendor laughed. "Everything is about that. If you know that, you can know what a girl likes or what they think about... it's a lot of help."
Naruto nodded in agreement, and began to look at the jewelry displays in the window and cases. He went from one to the other, trying to find a necklace that Sakura-chan would like, the vendor watching him with a smile. None of them seemed quite right, until, looking around, he saw a necklace in the last corner of the store where the most unusual jewelry was kept. Strung from a fine gold chain was a cherry blossom pendant, its petals made of some pink gemstone, its leaves of emeralds, set in a filigree of diamonds. It was breathtakingly beautiful, the perfect gift for Sakura-chan.
"How much does this one cost?" he asked.
"That one? We have a special offer on it, just 200,000 yen." ($2554.280 in American dollars)
Naruto went white. "That much?"
"Yes. It is one of the special ones we have here. It comes from the border of the Land of Fire. The pink sapphires are rare and have to be treated specially with fire by a skilled jeweler. And the chain is 24-Carat gold, the purest gold there is. That's why it costs so much."
Naruto looked again the necklace and thought, 'Well,it is for Sakura-chan.' He drew a deep breath. "Ok, I'll buy it. It is perfect like my Sakura-chan."
Naruto pulled out Gama-chan and counted out the money he had saved from missions. The store vendor handed him the necklace in a beautiful little box, and Naruto left the store smiling. As he put Gama-chan back in his pocket, he felt a pang for how light his frog purse was, and promised in his mind to fill it up again when he got a new mission.
Naruto headed to the hospital where Sakura-chan would be at work. On his way, he met his old sensei, Iruka.
"Hey, Naruto! How is life?"
"It's good, Iruka-sensei. Are you taking a break from the Academy?"
"Yeah. Things are good, the new students will be good little future ninjas. It's sad there's nobody like you or Konohamaru - you two gave me so many headaches but you did make teaching more interesting. Now they're just a bunch of good kids."
Naruto laughed. "I was that bad?"
"Yes, Naruto, but look at you, you grew up so fast and now you are one of the best ninja we have."
Naruto gave Iruka a real smile. "Thanks, Iruka-sensei. You always have been like a father to me." He fidgeted a little, anxious to get to the hospital to see Sakura. "I need to go now – see ya later?"
Iruka nodded. "I'll see you for ramen, at Ichiraku. I'll have to head back to the Academy soon too."
Naruto grinned and hurried off. He'd see Sakura-chan soon, and take her out on their second date. He smiled as he remembered the first time they dated and where they went, but didn't continue with this train of thought because he could see the hospital. As he entered, looking around, he saw Sakura talking with another nurse.
Naruto smiled and walked to them. Seeing him, the nurse smiled, knowing of Naruto's crush. Sakura noted that and looking behind she saw Naruto. Before she could move, Naruto hugged her and kissed her cheek, making Sakura blush and the nurse giggle at the cute moment.
"Hello, sexy nurse," he said. "How is the most beautiful doctor of Konoha?"
Sakura smiled, feeling happy in the hug, and for a moment she let her head rest on Naruto's shoulder. Then she broke the hug and bonked him on the head playfully, making Naruto yelp in surprise. Sakura gave him that smile he loved so much, her eyes bright like emeralds.
"Only you, Naruto, can make everything bright. I had long day, but had some fun today too, that I can say."
"I see. Sakura-chan, when does your shift end?"
"Why, Naruto-kun? Do you have something planned?"
Naruto smiled. "It's a surprise, Sakura-chan."
"Awww, mean, my shift ends in 15 minutes."
"Ok, Sakura-chan, I'll wait for you outside then, if that's all right with you," said Naruto.
"Yeah, that's fine," said a playfully annoyed Sakura.
"Ah, before I go!" He grinned at her hopefully. "May I have a kiss?"
"Neh neh, you have to wait 15 minutes now," said Sakura, and Naruto made a face.
"Awww."
Before Naruto had a chance to try to steal a kiss, Sakura hurried off to finish her shift. The nurse giggled again. A quarter of an hour later, Sakura came out of the hospital and saw Naruto sitting waiting for her on a bench in front of the hospital.
"Oi, Sakura-chaaan!" shouted Naruto from the bench.
Sakura speed walked over to him. "Hey, Naruto-kun." She smiled as she said it.
"Are you ready for the date, Sakura-chan?"
"Yes, Naruto-kun." There was a moment of silence, then she asked, "Where you going to take me for the date?"
"I told you it's a surprise, but maybe we can go later where we went yesterday."
"Awww, you meanie, but I'm sure you know how to surprise me. You do it every day."
"Hehe, but I love you, Sakura-chan."
"Me too, I love you my Naruto-kun."
"Y'know we haven't kissed yet, Sakura-chan, and you promised me one earlier but you ran away."
"I know…" she said, leaning into him with him leaning forward. Their lips were almost touching, and then -
"Naru-to-kun, Naru-to-kun, whe-re are you?"
The romantic moment was lost. Sakura groaned while Naruto, annoyed, looked to see where the sound was coming from. Again came the shy calling, making Sakura realize who it was, and she groaned again. Naruto quickly turned back to her.
"Sakura-chan, you ok?"
"No, Naruto-kun, I didn't get my kiss."
Before Naruto could reply, Hinata appeared with a smile
"Naru- Naruto-kun, ho- how are you?"
"I'm ok, Hinata-chan."
Naruto heard a growl, but didn't know where it came from. It was Sakura, who had decided to stop what the other girl was planning.
"Hello, Hinata-san," she said as brightly as she could.
"Oh hi, Sakura-san. What you doing here?"
"How dare she ask that? The bitch!" Inner Sakura shrieked. Outwardly, she said, "Well, I've just ended my shift at the hospital and Naruto's come to fetch me for a date."
Hinata looked astounded. "Da... date?" she finally managed.
Before either Naruto or Sakura could say something, Hinata went on in a rush, "Sorry, but you can't go with her."
"Why can't he?" Sakura asked.
Naruto looked confused and a little alarmed. "Eh, girls? What's happening right now?"
"Nothing, Naruto-kun," Sakura said.
"You never liked him before, so why now?"
Sakura took Hinata by the arm and dragged her a little distance away from Naruto, where he could not hear them. "Hinata-san, that is not your business," she said firmly.
"It is my business! You were …"
"Don't go there. People change. Besides, you aren't any different."
"How am I not different? I never hit on that traitor Sasuke like you and the other girls."
But Hinata you never did something about him in the past, so there..
"Girls?" Naruto said, a little nervous. Looking around he could see not only the two girls talking alone, but also a Hyuuga chuunin coming their way, calling for Hinata.
"Hinata-sama, Hinata-sama, sorry for the interruption but you have an urgent meeting with your father!"
Hinata looked first at Naruto, then at Sakura with disgust. "Tal-talk la…ter, Naru-kun," she said in the most shy and cute voice she could make. Sakura ground her teeth in anger.
"See ya, Hinata chan." Naruto was still confused as to what had just happened.
Sakura rolled her eyes at Hinata as she left, then turned to a confused Naruto, smiled a little and walked back to him.
"Sakura-chan, what was that?"
"Nothing, Naru-kun, girls' things," she said with a little giggle.
"Oh, ooookkk…" ^_^'
"Hey, don't be like that, Naruto-kun," she laughed.
"Sorry, but now where were we, Sakura-chan?" said a blushing Naruto.
"I think I know…"Sakura said, leaning in to kiss Naruto. Naruto bent his head to hers …when suddenly a voice called "SAKURA!"
Sakura turned and yelled, "WHAT, FOR GOD'S SAKE!" then bit her lip seeing it was Tsunade. She was yelling down from the 2nd floor of the Hokage tower, her expression shocked at how her student answered, but she quickly dismissed it.
"Sakura, I need you NOW!" shouted Tsunade.
Sakura turned to Naruto with an apologetic look. "Go," he said. "She needs you." He added a smile at the end shortly; she nodded and quickly ran off, inviting him to come along and he did.
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"Sakura, I bet you're wondering what was so urgent I called you here in such an abrupt manner!" Tsunade said looking directly at Sakura.
"Well, actually I am…" Sakura calmly replied to her Sensei's question.
"As you know, Shizune is out sick today…" said Tsunade. "Well, I'm out of sake and as you know sake helps me get my work done faster so I would be thousands of years grateful if you went out and got me somewhere between two and twenty bottles of sake. Closer to twenty," she said with a slight smile.
"M'lady, I would, but I'm not old enough to buy alcohol," Sakura said timidly.
"You're not, but the young man hiding behind the door, with the Hokage pass of approval is," Tsunade said, and Naruto's jaw dropped at her confession.
"Naruto-kun can buy Alcohol?" Sakura said, shocked.
"Woah, calm down Sakura. I gave him the license so if I ran out of my sake he could run off and buy me some like the good little ninja he is." Tsunade had a silly little smirk on her face.
Naruto popped out from behind the door and scratched the back of his head, laughing nervously. "Aha, good little ninja? I'd prefer to be called a sexy ninja."
"Baka," Sakura said and Naruto slumped down, looking up with a comical expression. Sakura just blushed at the way he was looking.
"Well, you two hop to it!" Tsunade said.
The two headed for Shadow of Fire, the liquor store Tsunade liked to get her precious sake from. It was halfway across the village and right before they left she gave them enough money to buy 20 bottles of Sake.
About halfway there Naruto broke the silence. "Why do we have to have a sake addicted Hokage?" he playfully said.
"No idea…" she retorted in a playful tone. "Look at those clouds – it'll probably start raining before we get the sake back."
"Yeah"
As Naruto walked into the store, the manager looked at him and with a smile said, "Hey, Naruto. Shizune sick today?"
Naruto sighed and replied with a solemn "Yeah". He paused. "All this 20 bottle Sake running makes me look like a drunk." He chuckled with the last comment.
"Hah, don't worry, Naruto. I think everyone knows who you get it for!" Just as he said that Sakura ran in and just stood inside the door.
"It's raining outside…" she said in response to their surprised looks.
"Well it's gonna be fun walking back to the Hokage's tower in the rain." Naruto slightly snorted with a playful manner.
Sakura smiled, shaking her wet hair from her face. "Yeah I guess…"
As Naruto had the 20 bottles of sake rung up, still in the crates, he noticed that Sakura was slightly shivering in her wet clothes. He also noticed how her top clung to her body, letting him see her curves. Without a word, he gave her his jacket and bought an "Adam Samuel" umbrella to shield her from the rain.
"Wow, it's raining hard out here," he said, looking at her.
"I told you, baka," Sakura said in a playful mocking manner.
"Aw, I know," he said in the same manner as Sakura.
Back at Tsunade's office, the Hokage tossed Naruto $70 and told them to put the sake in the mini-fridge. "Mission accomplished," said Naruto. "Let's get some towels and dry off. You don't want to get sick, Sakura-chan."
A little later, once both were warm and dry again, they headed out. Naruto checked his cell phone watch and saw it was 5:03.
"Hey, Sakura-chan, are you hungry?" Naruto asked curiously. "Because if you are, I'll take you to dinner if y' wanna go out on a date." He smiled at her while looking at her, causing her to look into his big blue SEXY eyes, yet again.
"Of course I want to go on a date with you; after all, you are my boyfriend," she playfully said.
With a smile Naruto took Sakura's hand and started waking. She surprised when he walked passed Ichiraku's and even more surprised when he took her to a very, very fancy restaurant.
"Surprise!" he said when they walked in.
'Good thinking, Kit,' remarked the Kyuubi.
"Wow…Naruto-kun this is… nice." Sakura ooh-ed and ah-ed at the restaurant Naruto had taken her to.
"I thought you'd like it," he said in a tender voice with a big fat smile on his face.
"Like it … I love it!" she said as the waitress came to take them to their seats. The waitress looked familiar, with her hair up in two buns on either side of her head.
"What can I get'cha to drink?" she asked them.
"Hm." Naruto was thinking.
"I'd like a green tea, Ten-Ten," Sakura said, hoping that it really was Ten-Ten. She couldn't be sure if it were her due to the dimness of the lights.
"Sakura I thought that was you!" Ten-Ten said smiling.
"Oh hey, how's it been, Ten-Ten? And, oh, I'd like Coca Cola cherry," Naruto said looking at Sakura, who blushed.
"Good, and if I may ask: what are you two doing in a romantic restaurant such as this?" Ten-Ten inquisitively asked the two with a devious smirk.
"We're on a date," Sakura said bluntly.
"Ohhh really?" Ten-Ten said with a devious grin.
"Yeah," Naruto said.
"Well, lemme get'cha your drinks."
Sakura put her hand on the table, shortly followed by Naruto putting his hand on her hand. They both blushed slightly at their hands touching so publicly.
Ten-Ten came back with the drinks and noticed their clasped hands. She grinned. "Here ya' go. Ready to order?"
"I'll have the miso ramen and dango," Naruto said.
"You and your ramen," Sakura joked. "I'll have dango, sushi and some sea-food medley."
"Great, I'll be back with your orders," Ten-Ten said and slipped away.
"Well, she seems oddly joyful…" Naruto said with a WTF face O_o like that.
"I agree, she's planning something, and I have no idea what!" Sakura said.
After about 15 minutes of small talk and laughing for no reason, their food came out. Naruto was almost drooling at the sight, and even Sakura was surprised by how good it looked and smelled.
"Here y' are, guys," Ten-Ten said with a wide smile on her face.
"Thanks, Ten-Ten. Wow, it looks great!" Naruto and Sakura said at the same time.
"Wow, do you guys have a cue for that? Or is it just the sign of being soul-mates?" Ten-Ten said with an impish grin while the two of them just blushed. "Oh by the way," she added, "you two have been holding hands this whole time!" She hurried off, grinning, before they could reply.
The 2 just blushed and started eating quietly. After her first mouthful, Sakura exclaimed, "Wow this is delicious!"
"Agreed," Naruto said, eating his ramen while thinking, 'Oh Kami I hope Ichiraku doesn't find out I'm cheating on him!'
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"What's wrong Ichiraku?" asked his daughter Ayame.
Ichiraku replied, "There's a disturbance in the force… Naruto's enjoying someone else's ramen… MORE THAN MINE!" He half yelled the last part while slamming his hand on a table.
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"Naruto?" Sakura asked nervously.
"I sense danger," he said, looking anxiously towards the door. "Ichiraku knows I'm eating ramen more lovingly than his."
"Naruto you're over reacting." Sakura sighed. ^_^;
"I guess you're right, I mean how can he sense it from 3 blocks away?" Naruto replied in relief.
Sakura only giggled at the though of Ichiraku screaming in agony at Naruto liking other ramen.
After they finished eating Naruto paid the bill which was surprisingly low for this restaurant was really, really expensive looking (I bet tenten had something about that). It was still raining out, and even though the umbrella sheltered them from the rain, there was a cold wind, so Sakura cuddled into Naruto, whose jacket she was still wearing. Their hands were still intertwined.
After 3 minutes the wind blew the umbrella away. Naruto and Sakura looked at the direction in which the umbrella blew, then turned back to each other with expressions that said, "Are you getting it?"
"Well then…" Naruto said, pulling Sakura into him and looking into her beautiful emerald green eyes and feeling her breathe slightly on his chin while she was looking up at him; into his big blue sexy orb eyes.
They stood there for a few minutes just looking into each other's eyes; waiting, just waiting for any interruptions that might occur as their lips inched closer, closer, cloooser. Sakura could feel her heart beating with a wild excitement. Finally, their lips touched, and then they were kissing passionately. When they finally broke apart they stood there looking into each other's eyes with their foreheads pressed together as though there was "Krazy Glue" keeping them from parting their foreheads. At last, they both broke the silence and simultaneously said "I love you Naruto-Kun/Sakura-Chan."
Almost reluctantly they drew apart, and continued walking and talking.
"That was…" Sakura started out, then Naruto, almost as if he were in her brain taking her words, finished the sentence, "Life altering."
"Exactly," Sakura said, looking at Naruto smiling, mostly at the romantic kiss in the rain.
"Oh, the rain is clearing up," Naruto remarked.
"It is…" Sakura said, looking up to see the moon at the 9:00 point of the sky. "Hey, Naruto-Kun it's nine o'clock, right?"
"Yeah. How'd you know?" he asked, confused.
"Woman's Intuition…" she said bluntly.
"That exists?" Naruto asked mockingly.
"Yes! Yes, it does." Sakura playfully pushed Naruto as she said that. "As much as your "gut feeling" does." She walked a little bit faster, getting ahead of him, but not so much that they had to let go hands.
"Heh. Okay then," he said speeding up to catch up with Sakura.
After 5 minutes more of walking, giggling, playing, they reached Sakura's house.
"Well, Naruto this is my stop," Sakura said, looking at Naruto. She stood on the bottom step of the 3 stairs Sakura had leading to her home.
"Aww," Naruto whined as he stepped forward. "One more."
"No, what if my mom comes out or watches us from the window?" Sakura playfully whined as Naruto stepped forward to press his forehead to hers once again.
"Pleaaaassseeeeee," he begged, yet again.
"Ugh, fine, bak-" she said, cutting off her own word putting her lips to Naruto's, and Naruto returning the favor by interlocking his lips just as she was.
They shortly broke apart and stayed with their foreheads resting against each other. They both broke the silence and said, "I love you, sweet dreams, Naruto-Kun/Sakura-Chan" and with that they both parted ways descending in opposite directions like two pieces of leaf on top of waves.
When Naruto got home he went to take off his jacket, and, well… he didn't have his jacket because he left it with Sakura!
'I'll get it from her tomorrow,' he thought drowsily as he slipped out of his pants and into bed.
While Sakura slipped out her licras leavin her in her sexy panties and into the bed thinking about Naruto, they dates wiht the kiss and how nice naruto jacket smell...
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(that An will not had correction in te an because I change it what was in original so, no beta in here and is pure crude and raw lol) - AN: Okay Ladies and Gents, Lads and Lasses, sushis and Catgirls! Tell me what you think! Was good chapter I had make? Or need more? Like detalles or more action?
Tell me what you like! Chock full of DETAIL or straight to the point. More romance or lest? Some training or lemon right away? Oh and! I think they should Market some of the stuff in this like, "The famous Ino wink" and stuff like make promotions for it. Lol c:
Im writing already the next chapter and the four chapter too (don't ask, is like I cant explain what I had in my mind or do lol so I mean I change to much I don't know what im doing but in the end I do a good job in making good stuff :D) so that will come maybe one week or too, and maybe two chapter in same time, still need wait for my beta correct whne i send him the nexts chapters and he did good job with that chapter, believe me I bet was not a easy job hehe and Again thank you wlkwos for you help in fix every wrong turn I did, like spelling or grammar, thanks you and get ready for the next chapter because had surprise, mostly the four chapter :hehee, that's all
Till next time! Sayonara! Y vivas las catgirls
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