Hey so this chapter was a bit rushed, I'm not feeling as inspired by this one as my other stories but still want to continue it. If the quality goes down then that's why, I'll still do my best to make it a good story of course, but, I'm going to focus on my other stories that I do feel a creative spark for.
Anyways onto the reviews!
ThunderClaw03 chapter 7 . Jun 5
Great job keep it up. Anyone who actually got to know Adriane would love to teach her and help her in anyway they could. Imagine if you brought the rest of her teachers from the time chamber to come to the reading. I imagine that they would love to teach Adriane and her friends everything they taught her in the time chamber. Update when you can
Me: I already have a lot of characters in this story that I'm trying to make react but those are good ideas.
Beth5572 chapter 7 . Jun 5
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too. Keep up your great works of art. I also hope you come back and write more soon.
Thank you and Please,
Terri
Me: Thank you so much for you're kind words. These are the reviews that make me feel so glad I decided to write fanfiction.
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That was all I got for last chapter but once again thank you all for loving this story and loving my other stories as well. I've seen several people review on this story and my other ones, I'm glad you like my writing so much. I try to be creative and original with ideas or take a used idea and add a bit of a twist to it.
Now for what you've been waiting for, the story!
To everyone's surprise, Grinlast was the one who picked up the book to read next, he ignored all the looks he got and started to read.
Adriane was shown the way to Grinlast's office, again; it took less time getting there than the last time she had been here, they might've taken a detour then.
Walking inside the room, she saw that it was full of several different people. When Grinlast saw her, he stood up giving her a nod, "Hello, young Adriane, I see you have gotten yourself some new garments that suit your taste."
Adriane gave him a small smile, "Yes, I have, Grinlast and I really must thank you for helping me once again." Grinlast waved her off to the surprise of several people, "It was no problem young Adriane, in fact, it was my pleasure to help you."
Adriane sent Grinlast a smile and he sent a nod in return with a small smirk.
"Still, thank you anyway, I wouldn't have gotten anything done if it wasn't for you and the Goblin Nation, you are, and will always be, my favorite goblin though." Adriane smiled a little as she and the rest of the room were treated to the rare sight of a goblin blushing- who knew that they blushed green?
Everyone in the hall was treated to the sight of a goblin trying to hide their green blush behind a book, Adriane giggled sheepishly. "The book's right though, he'll always be my favorite Goblin."
Bruce chuckled when he noticed Grinlast's ears turned a bit greener.
Right when Grinlast was about to continue, the door was kicked open by a woman, who then walked in the room like she owned the place, to the shock and slight horror of everyone else.
She had spiked hair in a pixie cut that was purple with gold highlights, her eyes were different colors, her right eye being gold and her left eye being purple. She was wearing a long hooded dark black trench coat over a dark purple t-shirt, some jeans, and had on some purple trainers. She had a rather large chest that some of the males in the room had to look away from.
Grinlast let out a groan to the surprise of everyone, "Grinlast are you okay?"
"I am fine Adriane. I know this woman and I just know she is going to throw a small fit at us asking her to tutor someone."
"Okay short stuff, where's the little brat that you decided to fucking blackmail me into training?" She said as she plopped down in a chair and put her trainers on Grinlast's desk. Everyone stared at her and Grinlast and tensed, wondering just how brave (or stupid) she was to say, and do, that to a goblin.
But to everyone's confusion, Grinlast only sighed, "Everyone, this is Miss Clara Hill, the Goblins' pain in the ass- and I did not blackmail you, I called in on a favor, Hill." Clara snorted, "You call it what you want and I'll call it by what I want, okay shorty?"
Grinlast let out another sigh as almost everyone stared at the book in disbelief.
"Who is this?"
"Clara Hill apparently, that's what the book says anyways."
"How is she still alive?"
Grinlast glared at Clara before looking at Adriane, "She will be teaching you how to control your strength, mostly fighting and wielding weapons to help you get used to knowing how much of your power to use at one time."
Adriane was a little skeptical about how strong the lady was, but didn't want to be rude; it must have shown on her face because Grinlast chuckled and continued, "Everyone here has signed the contract saying you are not allowed to speak of what you learn in here, correct?"
"This book will keep us from speaking of things in it to anyone not hear to I guess that works as well." Grinlast smirked.
Fudge glared at Grinlast, he knew that this stupid book would cause problems, he couldn't even do anything about it.
He waited until everyone nodded, or gave a thumbs up in Clara's case, and he looked at copies of the contracts before proceeding, "Okay, now the reason she is able to do this is because she is a Nekomata." There were gasps of shock around the room at this. "and she has four tails, so try not to make her mad in the next seven years."
Adriane may not know that much about Nekomatai, but she did know that they were considered super strong and, as such, could help her learn how to control her strength.
"A Nekomatai?! I thought they were exctinc!"
"Obviously not! Four tails, remind me not to piss this woman off."
"What's a Nekomatai?" That last one was Hermione who was looking around surprised at everyone's reactions.
"You don't know?" Neville asked shocked, "A Nekomatai is one of the strongest magical creatures in the world! They are said to bring chaos and distruction wherever they go."
"Even non-magicals have legends of Nekomatai, they are said to be demons who like to eat and kill humans that live near special mountians. I'm assuming this is wrong along with the theory that they only have two tails?" Bruce said sounding surprised and confused.
Grinlast nodded, "Yes, Nekomataos are descended from demons but they do not kill and eat humans, they are able to grow more tails the stronger they are but most only have two. Clara Hill is the strongest Nekomataos in the world at the moment, she is able to transform into a small black cat but prefers to stay as a human most of the time."
"So kind of like Kitsunes?"
"A kitsune is considered to be the cousins of Nekomataos, they are simmaler but very different."
"Now, some of the goblins in here shall show your teachers to the time chamber, but if I could talk to young Adriane alone for a moment- we will be done soon." As soon as everyone, except Grinlast and Adriane, left the room he pushed a button that made it so no one could hear in the room, even though Adriane didn't know that.
"Now, Young Adriane, the reason why I asked you to stay behind: it is about Clara Hill. You must not tell her that you are a Potter, replace Potter with Evans if you must, but Hill has a long-standing hatred of all things Potter- somewhat like your professor Snape- but she has a reason, though she shall not be telling anyone anytime soon."
Adriane groaned great another person that hated her because of her Dad, who was next? How many people hated her because of her family? Well on the bright side, Clara didn't know who she was, so that was good, Adriane supposed.
Adriane groaned like her bookshelf and hid in her cousin's side. Why did people hate her because of who her parents were? She couldn't believe that another person would hate her just because she carried the name of Potter.
"Thank you for telling me, Grinlast," she sighed, "I just wished that people wouldn't hate me because of James Potter being my dad- adopted dad, yes- but dad either way."
"I understand young Adriane. Now, we should be meeting up with them, but remember, you are not a Potter." Adriane nodded and used her, frankly small, control over her metamorphmagus skills to move her scar to her thigh, no one could see it there.
Adriane lit up a little, she hadn't realized that she could move her scar with her metamorphamagus skills! She focused and moved her scar to her thigh like her in-book self had.
It took a few minutes to get to the chamber, but soon enough they were walking into a beautifully elegant-looking living room. Honestly, Adriane wouldn't expect anything less from the Goblin Nation.
It had light cream-colored walls with soft medium brown hardwood floors, on the floor was a light brown colored carpet. There was a loveseat and two chairs that were all a light creamy brown color, the love seat had a few pillows on them that were a dark brown, while the chairs had pillows that were medium brown.
There was a coffee table in front of the loveseat made out of some dark oak wood that had a small plant on it. There was a fireplace on the wall with some small trees on the edge of the top.
All in all, it was amazing, it wasn't even the entire place and Adriane already loved it here.
"This is the living room, you each have your own bedroom and bath, there is a kitchen and dining room along with some classrooms, a gym, a sparring arena, and a room that has been made up to resemble the outside world, so you do not go crazy from being inside for so long."
Everyone was looking around the room approvingly, including Clara, "Have to say midget you've really outdone yourselves this time." Clara whistled, "Might have to see about hiring you to do my pad up like this place"
Grinlast smirked, that was a huge compliment coming from Clara.
Several people were talking to each other in surprise about how good the Goblins were at interial decorating.
"I thought you once said that you would never take decorating advice from people who hang weapons in our offices Hill?" Grinlast had a small smirk on his face when Clara blushed slightly, though she played it off.
"That was then and this is now, also I said might have to, that doesn't mean that I'm going to do it."
Adriane held back a small laugh and instead made it look like she was inspecting the loveseat.
Adriane hid a smile behind her hand at the back and forth between Grinlast and Clara.
"Now, I would like you all to introduce yourselves to each other so you know each other's names; young Adriane, would you like to go first? Tell us the name you are going by, something you like to do, your favorite food and color, along with your blood status. And, if you went, your house in Hogwarts."
Adriane nodded, taking a deep breath, "Okay, uh, my name is Adriane Kenna Dive P-Evans" She saw Clara's eyes narrow a little at her slip up and she gulped a little. "I like flying because it feels freeing, my favorite food is Treacle Tart, and my favorite color is a light blue, and I guess I'm a half-blood." She didn't say her house and let them all assume that she had either gone to another school or was Homeschooled.
One of the men went next, "I'm Anthony Berlin. I am to teach you Math, Chemistry, and both Magical and Muggle Law. My favorite food is Shake 'n' Bake pork chops and I like the color green I am a muggle-born that didn't give up their muggle education, unlike most." He frowned a little at the thought of anyone giving up on education. "I was a Ravenclaw while in school."
"I remember him, he was a hard worker. I never knew he kept up his muggle education." Professor McGonagall said surprised.
Hermione looked horrified that anyone had worked harder than her at their studies, it was probably because this person had kept studying muggle subjects along with magical ones and Hermione had basically given up her muggle schooling.
Adriane couldn't help but feel some pleasure that Hermione was learning that she wasn't the smartest person around.
Next up was the younger-looking male, "Hi, my name is Calvin Dalton and I'm going to be teaching you Geography, Science, and Astronomy. I like spaghetti and the color Yellow. I'm a half-blood that was raised in the muggle world." By this point, Colvin was smiling big, "I was a Hufflepuff in school."
Then the no-nonsense-looking woman was next, "I am Ericka Falcon and I'm going to be teaching languages and proper muggle and Pureblood etiquette. I like the color Purple and my favorite food is Ramen. I am a pureblood and was a Slytherin while in school."
Adriane was relieved that she would be learning more about proper etiquette, since she was a lady she would need to know it even if she didn't follow it one hundred percent.
Next was the other woman who was smiling brightly, "I am Garnett Holliday and I'm here to help Adriane adjust to whatever she needs help adjusting with. I like the color yellow and I like strawberry ice-cream. I'm a Half-Blood and was in Gryffindor."
Clara then spoke with a boring look. "As you all know, my name is Clara Hill and I am going to be teaching Adriane here how to fight and control her strength and speed. I am not telling my favorite foods or color because as that midget would say, 'I'm a paranoid bitch who doesn't trust easy'."
Adriane wondered if Clara and Bruce would get along, they were both paranoid and didn't trust easily.
Then it was time for the three goblins the taller of the three (Not that that was saying much, it was the size of about a six-year-old human) walked up, "My name is Gorgor and I am to be teaching the girl Charms and Transfiguration. My favorite color is Blood red and I am partial to Liver from a lamb." Short and to the point, just like most goblins.
The second Goblin spoke next, "My name is Luggit and I will be teaching the girl Potions and Arithmancy. I like the color teal and my Favorite food is dragon heart when one of the dragons die of old age." Adriane winced a little at that, but was thankful that they didn't kill the dragons to eat the heart- and oh god, she had to stop thinking about that or she was going to be sick.
Grinlast let out a small chuckle with a smirk, "Dragon Heart is not for everyone."
Adriane just made a face, she wasn't normally a picky eater but there were just some things not even she could stand to eat.
The third and last goblin spoke, he sounded older than the other two by a long shot, "My name is Kragrak and I am to be teaching the Human Ancient Runes and the History of both Muggle and Magical worlds. My favorite color is gold and I take a liking to something the Humans call 'Pizza' and don't get to have it often." Adriane was surprised that a goblin had even had pizza, let alone liked it, considering it was so greasy. She decided to make everyone their favorite meals throughout the month they were together, to thank them for everything, even if they were being paid to do it.
Clark chuckled, "Not all Pizza is greasy Adriane."
She just shrugged in response, "Every pizza I've seen is, then again the Dursleys liked fast greasy food so I shouldn't be surprised."
Clark had to hold back a frown at the mention of the monsters that hurt Adriane.
Adriane decided to take the time to look at her teachers for the next seven years. Anthony had short Brown hair and hazel eyes, he was wearing a long-sleeved grey shirt, with black on the collar and cuffs, some black slacks, and some black loafers.
Calvin was wearing a yellow, black, and grey plaid long-sleeved button-up shirt, some ripped/faded muggle blue jeans, and some yellow and black muggle sneakers. Calvin had sandy blond hair and light grey eyes.
Ericka was wearing a medium-sleeved black blouse with a black and grey long-sleeved sweater over it, a long skirt that went down past her knees and almost reached her ankles, and some black, short high heels with a buckle strap on it. Ericka had raven black hair and onyx-black eyes.
Adriane liked Garnett's outfit the most- she was wearing a simple red dress with some red flats that had a pink rose stylized on the toes. Garnett has light brown hair and caramel-colored eyes.
The tallest goblin, Gorgor, had light green eyes- similar to dried-up grass, but less yellow- and his skin was a light puce color.
The second tallest one, Luggit, had similar colored eyes, but they were greener than Gorgor's, and his skin was greener than Gorgor's. Basically, he looked like a smaller, greener version of Gorgor.
The final one, Kragrak, was the shortest. His skin was the whitest by far, it held less green and more white- and more wrinkled- than the others, and his eyes were a whiter green than the others.
"They all sound really put together."
"Yeah, Ericka sounds hot as hell!"
"I liked Garnets discription more."
"Calvin sounds super cute!"
Then Garnett handed her a timetable for the next year:
Monday
5:00am/6:00am: Wake up/get dressed/Bathroom/Shower.
6:00am/6:30am: Morning workout.
6:30am/7:00am: Clean up/shower
7:00am/8:00am: Breakfast.
9:00am/9:30am: Charms with Gorgor
9:30am/10:00am: Potions with Luggit
10:00am/12:00pm: Gym with Clara
12:00pm/12:30pm: Lunch
12:00pm/1:00pm: Ancient Runes with Kragrak
1:00pm/2:00pm: language arts with Ericka
2:00pm/3:00pm: Math with Anthony
3:00pm/4:00pm: Geography with Calvin
5:00pm/6:00pm: Dinner
7:00pm/8:00pm: Free time.
9:00pm/9:30pm: Shower/bed.
Tuesday
5:00am/6:00am: Wake up/get dressed/Bathroom/Shower.
6:00am/7:00am: Talking with Garnett.
7:00am/8:00am: Breakfast.
9:00am/9:30am: Transfiguration with Gorgor
9:30am/10:00am: Arithmancy with Luggit
10:00am/11:00am: Law with Anthony
11:00am/12:00pm: Lunch
12:00pm/1:00pm: History with Kragrak
1:00pm/2:00pm: Etiquette with Ericka
2:00pm/3:00pm: Chemistry with Anthony
3:00pm/4:00pm: Science with Calvin
5:00pm/6:00pm: Dinner
7:00pm/8:00pm: Workout.
9:00pm/9:30pm: Shower/bed.
Wednesday
5:00am/6:00am: Wake up/get dressed/Bathroom/Shower.
6:00am/6:30am: Morning workout.
6:30am/7:00am: Clean up/shower
7:00am/8:00am: Breakfast.
9:00am/9:30am: Charms with Gorgor
9:30am/10:00am: Potions with Luggit
10:00am/12:00pm: Gym with Clara
12:00pm/12:30pm: Lunch
12:00pm/1:00pm: Ancient Runes with Kragrak
1:00pm/2:00pm: language arts with Ericka
2:00pm/3:00pm: Math with Anthony
3:00pm/4:00pm: Geography with Calvin
5:00pm/6:00pm: Dinner
7:00pm/8:00pm: Free time.
9:00pm/9:30pm: Shower/bed.
Thursday
5:00am/6:00am: Wake up/get dressed/Bathroom/Shower.
6:00am/7:00am: Talking with Garnett.
7:00am/8:00am: Breakfast.
9:00am/9:30am: Transfiguration with Gorgor
9:30am/10:00am: Arithmancy with Luggit
10:00am/11:00am: Law with Anthony
11:00am/12:00pm: Lunch
12:00pm/1:00pm: History with Kragrak
1:00pm/2:00pm: Etiquette with Ericka
2:00pm/3:00pm: Chemistry with Anthony
3:00pm/4:00pm: Science with Calvin
5:00pm/6:00pm: Dinner
7:00pm/8:00pm: Workout.
9:00pm/9:30pm: Shower/bed.
Friday
5:00am/6:00am: Wake up/get dressed/Bathroom/Shower.
6:00am/6:30am: Morning workout.
6:30am/7:00am: Clean up/shower
7:00am/8:00am: Breakfast.
9:00am/9:30am: Charms with Gorgor
9:30am/10:00am: Potions with Luggit
10:00am/12:00pm: Gym with Clara
12:00pm/12:30pm: Lunch
12:00pm/1:00pm: Ancient Runes with Kragrak
1:00pm/2:00pm: language arts with Ericka
2:00pm/3:00pm: Math with Anthony
3:00pm/4:00pm: Geography with Calvin
5:00pm/6:00pm: Dinner
7:00pm/8:00pm: Free time.
9:00pm/9:30pm: Shower/bed.
Saturday
10:00pm/12:00am: Astronomy
Sunday
Free day
Adriane was happy with her timetable; it even gave her free time! She would have the rest of the day to explore and get used to her surroundings, so she went off to do that.
"At least I'll have some free time." Adriane shrugged with a smile, she was really thankful that she was going to be able to have good teachers in the future. Maybe she would even learn a thing or two about potions.
Hermione was glaring at Adriane, it wasn't fair that she got to learn all of those things with proper teachers while Hermione was stuck in Hogwarts with substandard teachers in several things. Adriane would get to learn so much and wouldn't share any of the knowledge with her!
Dumbledore was panicking at the thought of what Adriane would learn if she went through with this, he wouldn't be able to erase her memories.
What was he going to do?
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