Dark soil flew in to her eyes as a shadowy rock smashed in to the ground in front of Hollyleaf. The light from the opening behind her was almost obscured by the falling rocks. She leaped over the boulder and tried to dodge another spray of silt.
A rabbit darted out of a hole in the wall in front of her, and let out a squeal, quickly cut off as a pile of dirt from the tunnel roof fell on it. Hollyleaf leaped out of the way and yowled as a rock crushed her tail. She turned and desperately tried to yank it out, but rocks were falling all around her. Another rock rolled into her and almost crushed her, but finally, with a loud crack and a burst of pain, she pulled herself free. Slipping around the rocks, she pulled her useless hind leg and tail around a bend. She couldn't outpace the collapsing tunnel.
"Quick! In here!" A shadowy form beckoned her in to a niche in the wall. Hollyleaf pulled herself over to it and then collapsed. She couldn't go on. Ice cold teeth sank in to her scruff as the darkness in the tunnel became absolute and she could see no more. She could feel her paws dragging along on the ground. She tried to shriek in pain whenever her injured leg went over a stone, but her voice was fading and she could only manage a thin moan.
Her paws were as cold as the cat that carried her. She felt the ground smooth out and then the cat carrying her simply vanished. Then there were voices all around, then quick paws feeling her fur, then nothing.
So... Yeah. Tell me what you think of it!