Hey everybody! I've finished chapter 4! I thought that I'd answer a question a reviewer asked. Melissamary asked how old Bella was. I'm going to say she's 17. Yeah, that means Charlie would've been 22 when she was born. You're right though, that is pretty young. I might change that eventually. Anyhow, thanks to everyone who has reviewed. I'm still asking for your ideas btw. Anyhow though, have fun reading chapter 4! : )

EPOV:

I flapped my wings for what seemed like hours. Thinking. Concentrating. Brooding. Trying to decipher the meaning of what I'd done. Crazy. It was fucking crazy! I landed on a tree branch to rest. I'd bitten many humans before, even completely drained them of life-giving blood. Not one of them had... spoken to me the way she had. It was almost as if... No. I would not allow myself to believe that this girl, this human girl could mean something more...

AHHHH! I took off again from the tree branch. I was frustrated. I'd allowed myself to think the impossible thought. It was crazy. It was insane! This was a human we were talking about. I couldn't l- 'DON'T YOU DARE THINK THAT WORD, EDWARD!' I screamed at myself. This had to be a trick, a false indication that this could be my... 'EDWARD, STOP!' I ordered myself. Then, more reasonably 'What you're thinking is impossible. Only another demon could be your-'

This thought calmed me for a moment. But why had I bitten her? It certainly was not to feed. A thought creeped into my brain. 'To mark her.' To mark her? I pondered this for a minute. Of course! I was in charge of her. It was me and me alone who could give her orders. And she had to follow them. But I'd never "marked" my victims before... Perhaps it was because I didn't care if my brothers tortured them as well. But why did I care now?

'Stop Edward!' I cautioned myself again. Perhaps I was overanalyzing this. After all, was it so wrong to want my own toy? One my brothers could not touch? The matter all boiled down to this: I was being selfish. I wanted her all to myself.

Now though, as the matter was settled, I realized that the taste of blood I had gotten had made me hungry. I flew off to find an unsuspecting victim.

BPOV:

I gingerly touched the spot on my neck where Edward had bitten me. He had definitely surprised me. He didn't seem like someone who would do this sort of thing, although he'd been very careful. In fact, it hadn't even hurt at all. The bite itself had seemed almost gentle, like he wasn't trying to hurt me. What was he trying to do? That's what made me wonder.

The weirdest thing was that he ran out so quickly. It had been as if he hadn't realized what he'd been doing; like he'd been taken by surprise too.

The bite had left me feeling a bit dizzy and out of breath, as if I'd been kissed. The strange thing was, it wasn't like when I'd kissed Jake. Of course, that had been all for show. I didn't even like Jake like that. But still, the bite felt nicer than any kiss I'd ever gotten. I can't quite explain it. It had... comforted me somehow.

Even now, running my fingers over the spot, I shivered a little. There were two perfect little vampire tooth marks on my neck made by a real vampire, and I wasn't in full freak-out mode. Instead, I felt fine. As if it were perfectly normal to walk around with demon drill marks in your neck.

I lie down on my bed and stared up at the ceiling. I wondered about Edward. Had he been embarassed? He must have been. Why else would he run away? Was he not allowed to bite me? Was it because my soul was in his care? A hundred different questions floated through my head. Just when I thought I had one answered, another would take it's place. It had been more than three hours since the bite, and I still wasn't any closer to an answer.

I jumped when I heard my phone ring. I picked it up. "Hello?"

"Hey Bell, it's me, Jake."

I groaned. "Yeah?" I asked. "What's up?"

"Well, I thought that maybe since you like me so much, we could go out this weekend."

"Jake, that's really-"

"My dad says he's okay with us dating, but no more of what happened tonight."

"Jake." I said. "I'm grounded."

"Oh. Well, maybe the next weekend?" He asked hopefully.

I rolled my eyes. "Jake, Charlie grounded me, but he didn't say for how long."

"Oh, well maybe some other time then. Bye for now Bell."

"Bye Jake." I said, then hung up. Jake was nice enough, and he was kinda fun to hang around with. I just couldn't picture him as a boyfriend.

As I settled back down into my bed, my thoughts returned to Edward. I touched the bite on my neck again, and drifted off to sleep.

BELLA'S DREAM

Bella is in her room, waiting for Edward. She is wearing a long white old-fashioned dress. Edward enters the room through the window, and sits down beside her. He stares into her eyes, mesmerizing her. "My love." He says. "I've been waiting a long time to find you. And now, you are mine. He leans over her, drawing closer and closer to her neck.

She feels his teeth on her neck. "Bite me." She whispers, wanting to feel his teeth sink in once more. "Bite me!"

Edward slowly sinks his teeth into her neck and she moans with pleasure. Suddenly, a large wolf enters the room. "Demons must die!" It hollers, then attacks Edward.

"No!" Bella screams.

END DREAM

""No!" I heard myself scream. Then I could feel my sheets under me. It had been a dream. I had just dreamed the whole thing. Edward wasn't here. And there was no giant wolf.

I walked into the bathroom and splashed some cool water on my face. After I'd dried it with a towel, I looked at myself in the mirror. I thought I'd caught a glimpse of a shadow, but it must have just been my imagination.

That's all for now. I'll try to make chapter five a bit longer. Anyhow, please review and sent torture suggestions.