So anyway, this chapter is going to get a little bit hotter. This is my first attempt at a sex scene, so please let me know if you like or hate it, and what you like or hate about it. Also, I'm a little shy about writing sex stuff, so if you don't like what I wrote, please don't comment too harshly. If you don't like it, I could redo the chapter. It's all up to you!
Also, many thanks to everyone who's reviewed so far. :)
-Vampiremoon22
BPOV:
Jacob drove me home later. I was going over everything he and Billy had told me in my mind. Edward was a vampire. I'd guessed that much. Jacob was a werewolf. Edward and Jacob were sworn enemies. Edward had marked me as his mate. And none of this worried me as much as it probably should have. Billy, Jake, and the others had told me I was in mortal danger, but I couldn't see how. Edward had made me do mean things, but he hadn't hurt me. I would talk to him about all of this when I saw him again. One way or another, we would straighten everything out.
Jake dropped me off at home and I walked inside. I looked around again to see if Edward was there. Nope. Deciding we could talk later, I got to work making dinner.
EPOV:
Even after I'd drained Jessica of every drop of blood she had I still was not satisfied. I craved something more. My mind wandered to the Swan girl. What was she doing now? I wondered if she was thinking of me. I wanted to see her. I needed to see her. I told myself that I would only be checking on her. I would make no contact with her whatsoever. I transformed to my bat self and flew to her home.
I found her in her room, sitting at her desk working on what must have been school work. 'That's my Bella, smart and studious.' I thought and perched on a tree. I watched her as she read aloud to herself from a textbook. Her eyes studied the page. Then she turned and wrote her answer to some question in her notebook. In doing this, a single lock of hair strayed from the others and fell across her eyes. Brushing it back, she turned and stared out her window. She must have spotted me because she stood then and walked over. Plucking me up from the branch, she began stroking the back of my head. She sat down on her bed and I let her continue this for a moment before changing back to my human form.
She leaned backward unto her pillows and suddenly I knew what she was asking. Slowly, I leaned over her, brushing her lips with my own. She moaned softly as I leaned in and our lips met once more. My hands, moving on their own, reached up and began to slide her shirt upward. She smiled up at me and in that same instant I knew her desires mirrored mine.
It was all so clear in this one moment: this was truly my mate.
BPOV:
I reached up to him, slipping his shirt up and over his head and shoulders. I let my hands run over his perfectly sculpted abs. God, he was hot! I pulled him closer to me. He was beautiful at this moment. I needed him. How had I lived for so long, never even dreaming he existed? I could not know. But right now, all that mattered in my world, all I wanted, all I needed was Edward.
I reached down to unbutton his jeans. It was obvious he needed to be free from their confines. I was getting wetter by the minute, anticipating what was to come for us. I wanted to feel him inside of me. I wanted to shout it out for the whole world to hear: I was Edward's mate and no one else's! Tonight would confirm this. I would officially be his forever.
EPOV:
Once her shirt was completely off, I had my first real glimpse of her full figure. She always seemed to wear clothes that were too large to show off her wonderful body. Perhaps tomorrow, I would have her wear something more... provacative. Yes, this would suit her well.
I reached forward, toward her full breasts to unhook her bra. It was a "cute" piece of clothing. You could unhook it from the front and it had a lace trim around the edges. For now though, and for awhile after, she would not require it's presence. I removed it and discarded it to a small pile of dirty clothing near her closet. Finally, she allowed me to remove her panties.
She was entirely nude now. And I swear to God, she was the most beautiful creature I had ever set eyes upon. I've heard that vampires can stare into human's eyes and mesmorize them. But looking at her now, I knew I was the one being dazzled.
BPOV:
"Edward..." I moaned. "Oh, Edward. Please." I closed my eyes. "I want you." I whispered into his ear.
I watched as his hand neared the spot I most wanted to be touched. Slowly, gently he inserted his forefinger, I gasped in surprise, but willed him to continue. While moving in and out of me, he reached up with his other hand and cupped my right breast. He gently squeezed the nipple. He leaned in closer and his tongue suddenly flicked out and over the place his hand had been.
Then, he pulled his finger out of me and spoke softly. "Are you ready?" He asked. I nodded. I was more than ready. As he slowly slid himself into me, he placed a hand over my mouth. "Ssh." He whispered. "This may hurt a bit at first." I nodded. I was ready. Slowly, he pulled out and back in again.
He pushed his erection further into me and I whimpered loudly. "Ssh." He said again. He brushed away some stray hair that had fallen across my face. Then, leaning down, he crushed my lips with a passionate kiss.
"Edward?" I asked. He paused for a moment and looked into my eyes. "Bite me." It was not a request. I was not asking him. I was telling him. I longed to feel his teeth in my neck. I knew it would feel just like the last time. I needed to feel that way again.
Edward's thrusts were getting faster, harder. I was getting closer and closer to... "Oh, Edward!"
EPOV:
I tried to concentrate on what I was doing. I could not bite her when my body was this vulnerable. If I lost control... It was too great a risk. I could not...
"Bite me Edward." She purred again. I looked down at her. In all my existance, in the many places I have been, I'd never seen a creature as glorious as the one before me now. I knew at that moment, staring into the precious emeralds that were her eyes, I could deny her nothing. She had some sort of power over me.
Closing my eyes tightly, I willed myself to back away. When I opened them again, I found myself inches from the scent of rich warm blood. I could control myself no longer. I opened my mouth, fangs bared and bit.
Seth's POV:
(A/N): Come on, do you honestly think Jacob would leave Bella alone, knowing there was an "evil" vampire on the loose? Also, I'm adding this part to this chapter to make it a bit longer. But I think SPOV will be a one-time thing in this story. Just to clear up any confusion. Sorry. :) )
I woke, yawned, and scratched at an annoying itchy spot on my back. Jacob had assigned me first watch of Bella and her house. My new wolf's instincts had me on high alert. I looked around, expecting nothing. My eyes ached. I would resume my nap in a moment, once I confirmed everything was okay.
It hit me as soon as I took a step in the direction of the house. A pungent odor assulted my nose. I sniffed around and soon discovered the source of the odor. It was wafting down from the open upstairs window. It was the strongest here. There was only one thing it could be. Vampire. I wrinkled my nose in disgust.
I had to alert the others. I called out to them through our mind link. 'Hey guys, I got something over here! It smells like it could be a vampire!'
'Stay where you are.' Sam called back. 'We'll send Jacob and Quil to back you up.'
'Okay.' I said. I heard sounds coming from inside the house. I listened harder. With my wolf hearing, I could pick up most of what was being said.
I heard, "Edward, bite me!" As well as sounds like someone was... Oh. My. God! 'Uh, guys? Hurry! I think he's...'
'Get in there NOW!' Jacob growled in my head. I could hear Sam trying to calm him down. Sam finally gave the order for me to go in alone. He said that he would be here in one minute.
I climbed a nearby tree and entered through the window. The smell of vampire was everywhere! I saw them, lying there on the bed. They were both completely naked. And there in my sight was the offending vampire. I watched helplessly as he bent down and bit her.
Then he sat back up, Bella's red blood dripping from his white fangs. He caught sight of me. I would have attacked, except he vanished then, down to the pitts of Hell where he belonged.
So, I'm almost afraid to ask. *closes eyes and braces self.* What did you guys think? Please don't be to harsh in your criticism, although I will appreciate tips and stuff. Thanks. Please review!
-Vampiremoon22