A/n: I've discovered something, I am better writing from the top of my head than anything else really, because by then, the plot of that chapter changes. So, I can't look it over for mistakes, or it changes from what I intended. So, without further stalling, Chapter, 10? I think it's 10.
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After a few minutes of Kagome's list of reasons on why the wire should not exist, which resulted in a few trees' destruction, they continued the search for the source by running on the ocean. It was a rather long wire and the trip was in complete silence for 15 minutes. It was then, that Kagome felt different, like, she was on, she can't explain it, but it didn't have that… feeling she had when she was on the land and the waters near it. She's never been this far away from land on the ocean. The air felt, less pure, and more contaminated then before, the water, it didn't have that clean shine it had not even a second ago. She didn't even realize she stopped, until Deidara waved his and in front of her face, the mouths were closed, so she only saw a normal palm. "Oi, Kagome, why did you stop? Hm." She snapped back to reality, "You can't feel that?" she asked. Deidara gave a confused look, "What are you talking about? Hm." Kagome stared at him, before answering, "Nothing, I guess I imagined it, but, I don't know, it just doesn't seem, right, the air feels, dirtier, and the water doesn't have that, clean shine to it, it just feels, different I guess." Deidara thought about it for a moment, before answering, "You're right, the water doesn't look the same. It looks more, inkier, if I had to describe it." Kagome nodded. Then she noticed something, like oh, maybe they fact she couldn't see land from the direction that they came in! "Wasn't there a mass of land behind us not to long ago?" Deidara looked behind him, seeing that there was no mass of land that was behind them not to long ago. "Shit" was all he could say. To which Kagome nodded in agreement. "We might as well find an island or something. It is getting late after all." Kagome said after a short period of silence. And indeed it was, the sun was already setting, with that, they took off in a different direction, and behind them was a line of American ships. How the hell they missed that, I will never know. The poor crew, then later had their eyes checked, and with nothing wrong with them, they chalked it up to a hard day, nerves and lack of sleep. They swore they saw two… somethings on the water.
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A/n: how was that?! Good? Bad? A meh?!
Nata: I gave you an idea early, now, where is the cake?
Me: oh, uh, this is an old idea, just more… words, so no cake for you!
Nata: …damn
Me: review please! It might get her working, leave a suggestion, which may also work.