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&& Also this chapter is a bit crazy! but hey i was bored and had a crazy imagination at 12am! hahahaha! I wanted to update yall before dance class, so here ya go :)
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Okay and on with the chapter :
the next day
i woke up and for a few seconds totally forgot where i was. but suddenly it all came back to me, i was at shanes house in the guest room. i sat up and stretched. i checked my phone
Honey im sorry ! -Mom
answer your phone please ! - Mom
text me back ! - Mom
okay your being immature! first you lie now you wont answer the phone ! whats going on with you mitchie ! -Mom
alright i give up ! -Mom
i sighed and looked at my phone. It had some scratches from thrwoing it at the wall yesterday...oops.
i looked at the time it is 10:37am.
i stood up and put my phone in my pocket and ran my fingers through my hair, i then walked out the room, and went downstairs.
i heard talking in the kitchen, so thats where i went. When i got in the kitchen i saw Nate and Jason sitting at the table eating cereal and talking. Jason saw me first since Nates back was too me.
"Oh hey ! your mitchie right?" he asked in his excited voice
i smiled "Yeah, thats me. Hi" i said a bit shyly.
Nate turned around and smiled at me "hey mitchie!"
i smiled "hey nate!" i gave a small wave.
"whats up?" he asked
"uh nothing, i uh spent the night last night, i just woke up, came down here to see if anyone was up." i blushed
Nate and Jason chuckled. "want anything to eat?" Jason asked with a grin
"Uh yeah sure, please" i said in a quiet voice.
"no need to be shy around us Mitch" nate smirked
i stuck my tongue out as him as jason went and got me some food.
Nate laughed and stuck his tongue out at me.
i playfully glared at him as i took a seat at the table.
Jason put a bowl of cereal in front of me "there ya go" Jason grinned
i giggled "Thanks Jase"
"No problemo" he chuckled and took a seat back in his seat.
just then their mom walked in "Morning!"
"Morning!" we all said with a smile.
"How are you Mitchie?" she asked with a worried expression
i smiled "Im much better, thank you "
"Oh call me Denise silly!" she smiled "and thats good!" she then went to make some coffee
"what happened?" Nate asked
"some family problems" i said with a shrug.
"everything okay?" he asked worried. i love how this family is so caring! its what i wish my family was like.
"i dont know" i shrugged again "i havent talked to anyone yet." i frowned
"what happened with your family? if you dont mind me asking" Nate asked.
"my dad is cheating on my mom, i caught him. He doesnt know i did. My mom thinks im lying when i told her. we got into an argument about it, and so she hung up on me" i tried to smile
"Im sorry mitchie!" nate got up and hugged me
i hugged him tightly and then he sat back down.
we were eating and just chatting for a little while when shane walks in.
"Morning!" he said with a yawn and a stretch.
"Morning!" we all replied
Shane caught my eye and smiled at me. i blushed and smiled in return. He winked and then went to the fridge.
i blushed and looked at my cereal.
Nate chuckled and i looked up at him and he was holding back a laugh. i hit him playfully
"OW!" he pouted
i stuck my tongue out at him "you deserved it!"
he faked shock "i did not !"
"did too!" i argued
"did not!"
"did too!"
"did not!"
"DID TOO!"
"DID NOT!"
"YES!"
"NO!"
"YES!"
"NO!"
"Okay!" Shane laughed "you deserved it Nate end of argument! ta da!"
Nate glared "rude!"
i laughed and finished my cereal. i then put my bowl in the sink and my phone rang.
Home
i sighed and answered "Hello?"
"Where are you?" my dad growled
"You dont need to know where i am!" i said angry
"i do, i am your father!" his voice raised
"Since when do you ever act like my father! you never do! you said you hated me! and that i was horrible! dont go acting like my dad now! because you never did! so what i do, has nothing to do with you, and you dont need to worry about me!" oh god where did that come from!
"Michelle Torres!" he yelled "you DO NOT talk to me like that !" he sounded p...oed!
i laughed humorlessly "Your not my father in my head, or in my heart, you may be really, but to me you arent. so i suggest you leave me alone, because you never acted like my dad, and you had the decency to go cheat on mom!" i yelled
"w-what! i did not!" he lied
"you did, i saw you! did you forget that i was home when mom left! probably not because you and me do not exist to each other! i told mom you cheated on her...but she didnt believe me. But that doesnt mean i wont get her too, because i know you did." i said evilness dripping from every word
"Mitchie you cant!" he sounded scared
"But i can, and i am. If you didnt want to get caught, and if you didnt want her to know, you should have never done it in the first place. you have been for awhile, it explains all the late nights at work. And this time you were careless and stupid enough to take it to our house. Well guess what, i suggest you leave. because we dont need someone like you in our lifes, and once i prove to mom, what you did, she will agree with me. You dont love us, you said so yourself. so why dont you leave. it shouldnt be that hard...steve." i held back tears as i was way to angry to cry
"Mitchie im sorry! we can work this out-" he started
"WE CAN NOT WORK THIS OUT!" i yelled "You cheated on her! you said you hated us! we cant work this out! me and you have never got along ! in my 16 years of life we never did! and im not going to start trying now, because we have tried and it never worked! so it wont work this time! i can never forgive you for all the things you have done, or said! i cant! so dont go trying to act all father now, because its NOT going to work!" my anger bursted as a tear rolled down my cheek. "i cant talk to you, i dont even know you now, i never did!" and with that i hung up. i looked around and everyone, except their father, was there with a sympathetic look, having heard and been listening to what i was saying. i leaned against the counter and slid to the floor and put my head into my hands and cried.
Shane pov
i got up quickly and rushed over to mitchie and went on my knees infront of her. "mitchie?" i rubbed her arms.
"i dont want to cry! i dont want to be weak!" she cried
"mitchie, its okay." i said softly
"its not! ive cried to much! why should i be crying over someone i hate! someone who has done so many bad things to my family!" she sobbed
"because, you know he's your father, you wish he acted like one, and so all those bad things he has done to you and your family, hurt. you dont want the type of father you have, and so that hurts. you want better, and you dont have it. all of that is hurting you emotionally. thats why your crying, thats why your crying over someone who has done all those bad things to your family, and over someone who has done things to make you say you hate him, when really everyone wants a dad they can love." i said to her as i lifted up her head softly as she let me.
she looked me in the eyes, her crying calmed down. "you are intellegent" she giggled with a small sob.
i chuckled "thank you!" she laughed softly and threw herself at me her arms around my neck, she hugged me tightly. "thank you shane."
i hugged her around the waist tightly. "its no problem, at all"
she pulled away and i wiped her face. "you okay?"
she smiled and nodded "yeah, sorry that was embarrasing"
we all laughed lightly "its okay." i helped her stand up and she hugged me once more, and then sat back down.
i sat at my seat and finsihed eating
Nate threw a grape at mitchie "im so bored!" he whined
mitchie laughed and threw it back "thats your problem"
he playfully glared at her. "your evil!"
"yeah uh huh suuuure. im like a definate angel!" she smiled innocently.
Nate scoffed and then laughed "whatever helps you sleep at night" his phone rang "hello?...yeah!...hey man!...nah!...of course!...really?...defiantly!...alright!...awesome!...see ya then!...bye!..." he hung up
we all looked at him curiously.
"oh right, uh our manager just called, said we have to record some music this week, then we have a Connect 3 part on saturday!" he grinned
"awesome!" me and jason said with grins
mitchie giggled
the doorbell rang.
"got it" nate got up and went to the door.
i looked at mitchie "want to come with me to the party saturday?" i made a puppy dog face.
mitchie blushed and laughed "yes, id be honoured"
i grinned "thank you!"
"anytime!" she giggled
Caitlyn and Nate walked in
"HEY MITCHIE!" Caitlyn grinned
Mitchie grinned and stood up and ran at caitlyn "Hey Caitlyn!"
Caitlyn caught her in the hug and they laughed and pulled away. "so i just heard your going to the party! so am i! so we defenatly have to go shopping friday after school!" she grinned
i rolled my eyes "you girls and shopping" i mumbled
Mitchie grinned at caitlyn "totally!" and she also at the same time threw a banana at me
"hey!" i pouted
they all laughed and mitchie stuck her tongue out at me.
i pouted again.
she giggled and we all just chatted about this upcoming week and plans.
a few days later
it is now wednesday
i walked into school and saw mitchie at her locker chatting with Caitlyn, i grinned and sneaked up behind her signling caitlyn not to say anything
Mitchie pov
i was laughing at something caitlyn said when all of the sudden a squeal comes out of me as i jump! someone has poked me in the sides. i turned arounf giggling and saw shane.
i laughed and hit him in the chest playfully. "your evil shane!"
he laughed and gave me a hug "hey, how are ya?"
"im good thank you, and you?" i giggled looking up at him
"im great thank you" he chuckled.
i pulled away and shut my locker. i turned to shane "see ya later in class!" i smiled and gave him a hug
he returned it "see ya"
with that me and caitlyn headed to our homeroom.
at lunch
i was picking at my food "why is school lunch so disgusting?" i frowned
shane chuckled "they want to torture us!"
"its like a prison" i giggled
"exactly, they makes us work 8 hours with bad lunch and so blah!" i laughed
shane laughed also "we should like make everyone get together and fix this lunch!"
"Yes! expecially where you are Connect 3!" i teased
"hey even if i wasnt shane gray, id so totally be like so popular and get anything i want" he stuck his head up high.
"oooh, the big egos back!" i giggled
he stuck his tongue out at me. "im just stating the truth"
Nate laughed "whatever helps you sleep at night" hahaha nate says that so much!
Caitlyn laughed "agree with nate"
i nodded with a smirk
Shane playfully glared at all of us.
i patted his head "its okay popstar"
"not the hair!" he moved away from me "and its rockstar mitch!"
i laughed with caity and nate
i scooted closer to shane "I sowwy" i pouted
he grinned "is okay!" he kissed my forhead and ate a french fry.
i blushed and shook my head.
my phone rang
"what?" i said bitterly
"nice way to answer your phone mitch" my mom responded with attitude
"only to you" i said right back ha!
"nice. anyways you need to come home after school" she said
"yeah uh dont expect to see me!" i laughed humorless
"you. are. my. daughter. do. as. !" she was getting fed up
"No! okay no! you dont want to believe me, then no! good bye!" i hung up and threw my phone in my bag
okay let me fill you in. these past few days ive been staying at caitlyns. i would stay at the grays but i live right next door so my parents would see me. so i stay with caitlyn cause she lives a few streets away. i havent been home once. even though i miss a lot of my stuff! hahaha. i need to find a way to get in there when they are both gone, and grab everything important to me.
i sighed and shane made a face that says everything okay?
i nodded in return
he smiled small, and put his arm around my shoulders.
after school, we are hanging at caitlyns house.
"so what are your parents work hours?" nate asked. i told them my plan.
"uhm steve is 10 to 9pm. mom is 2pm to 7pm. depending on the day of week. " i said
"alright, so no ones home right now?" caitlyn asked
i looked at the clock and then shook my head. "they shouldnt be"
"alright well how bout we go right now?" shane asked.
"alright. and caitlyn you sure its okay im here?" i asked feeling guilty
"Mitch, its no problem i promise you my mom doesnt mind at all, she loves you!" she giggled
i luaghed and smiled "alright lets go" i sighed nervously.
we headed out and we all got in shanes car.
at my house. .
we all walked up to the front door. my hand shook slightly as i lifted the key to the lock. i got it in the lock and unlocked the door, and walked in the house. it was dark, very faint light shining in from the thin but dark curtains. i put my hand on the wall and felt for the switch. i flicked it on and motioned my friends in. they closed the door behind them. it was silent in here, and for some reason i had this freaked out feeling running through my body. they followed me up to my room and i shut the bedroom door behind us.
"okay we got to do this quick. we never know, one of them could come home at any moment, for some strange reason." i said as i walked to grab some suit cases out my closet. they all agreed and we got to work. i packed my clothes, leaving some to seem less suspisious. shane put my guitar in its case, caitlyn packed some jewerly and make up and hair things.
nate helped me pack my shoes.
once we were just finishing up, we heard the front door close. i cursed under my breathe.
"HELLO! WHOSE IN HERE! MITCHIE?" it was my dad.
"uh everyone, its steve, we NEED no HAVE to get out!" i whispered panicking.
"MITCHIE!" my dad screamed
we heard footsteps storming up the stairs. "uhh..." i opened the balcony door and looked down. "someone go down!"
Nate rushed and climbed down as i ran to my door to lock it.
i went back out "okay you have to pratically catch the things okay?"
he nodded. we heard banging on my door.
we all quickly grabbed things and dropped them down as quickly as possible without hurting nate. shane held onto my guitar and climbed down.
"MITCHIE TORRES!" my dad screamed kicking on the door.
"go caitlyn!" i said freaking out.
she quickly climbed down and i went to climb down when i heard my door unclick and slam open. i screamed and climbed over the railing. i went to climb down when my dads hand grabbed mines roughly pulling it causing me to slip. i screamed as a pain shot through my arm from my dad holding onto my arm, basically saving me from my fall. i caught onto the railing with my other hand.
"Mitchie!" caitlyn yelled.
shane and nate were putting things in the car.
"help caity!" i cried out as my dad pulled me over the railing roughly
"BOYS!" caitlyn screamed and they ran over
"wheres mitchie?" i heard shane ask panic clear in his voice
"he got her!" caitlyn cried
i was dragged into my room, as if i was a rag doll. i fell onto the floor when he had suddenly let me go.
i cried in pain.
"you B****!" he kicked me.
i screamed in pain blocking my stomach from another kick.
he had kicked my arms and legs a few times calling me all the bad names possible, when shane, nate and caitlyn burst in.
"stop!" shane yelled.
Shane didnt hesitate when he punched my dad, when my dad had a grip on my neck.
my head hit the floor as i coughed for air.
Nate held my dad away as shane and caitlyn ran to me, and made sure i was okay.
Shane helped me sit up. "you alright mitchie?" shane asked while helping me sit up."
"im okay" i cried
"come on we have to get you out of here" Caitlyn said while lifting me up with shane.
we all rushed out and into shanes car. i sat in the back with caitlyn.
"you okay?" caitlyn asked rubbing my arm
i nodded while tears went down my face without my approval.
"everythings going to be okay" Caitlyn said softly
i nodded looking out the window. this was the first time my dad has ever went violent on me. no matter how mad we got at each other he has never abused me before...until today. i leaned my head against the window closed my eyes and cried silently.
when we arrived at Caitlyns
they carried my things in as i walked to the couch and laid down, my legs bended almost up to my chest as i laid on my side.
Shane pov
"i so want to kill her dad!" i said as we walked inside
"we all do shane" nate said
caitlyn nodded "i think she isnt okay as she says she is" she sighed
"i know." i sighed also and we walked to the living room. the sight of mitchie, curled up on the couch crying, broke my heart. i rushed over to her and went on my knees and moved her hair from her face. "Mitchie, tell me whats on your mind" i whispered
she opened her eyes and looked in mine. "he has never abused me before" she whispered "never no matter how mad we were at each other, he never hit me. it scared me when he did it today, it hurt, and im shocked! i didnt think that would ever happen" she sobbed. "i was scared for my life, i didnt know if things were going to be okay after that first kick"
i rubbed her cheek with my hand. "im shocked he did that to you. we all want to just hurt him in return, but we need to be the mature ones. Are you sure you arent in pain?" i asked
she nodded "im a little sore, im just mentally and emotionally shocked and still scared" she whispered
"Your safe here mitch. me, nate and caitlyn are here for you, and one of us will always be with you. you wont be alone okay?" i continued rubbing her cheek
she smiled small and nodded "thank you"
"anytime" i said and kissed her head. "you should go upstairs and rest"
she nodded and sat up. she then walked over to the stairs but turned around. "come with me please?" she asked shyly as a blush crept to her cheeks.
i smiled and nodded walking over to her, and interlaced our hands. we smiled at each other before walking upstairs into her room. we laid on the bed as she cuddled up to me and i rubbed her back.
"your my best friend shane" she whispered
i smiled "and you are mines too."
she smiled. "i trust you shane, i really do. so if you say things are going to be okay, then i believe you." she said quielty
"im glad you trust me, as i also trust you." i said
i felt her nod and then she yawned "are you going to stay here till i wake up?"
"i am. ill be here when you wake up" i said
"thank you" her breathing soon fell even.
i smiled down at her and went to the computer in her room, and logged on facebook. i accepted her friend request, and updated my status.
Been a crazy day, but everythings going to be okay, ill make sure of that. :)
i then roamed the internet.
Nate walked in with Caitlyn "hey" they whispered
"Hey" i also whispered
"she okay?" Nate asked looking at Mitchie.
"Yeah, shes fine." i said. "she says she trusts me, so she believes everything will be okay." i smiled
nate and caitlyn grinned "awesome!"
"Im glad she's trusting someone. soon she will be able to trust all of us." Caitlyn smiled
"she said she has a hard time trusting people?" i asked
Caitlyn nodded
caitlyns pov
flasback
"i believe that we will become best friends, and that i will trust you. Just i cant right away cause i have a hard time trusting people. my mom always said life would be great, and that our family would be one of the best, one to brag about, and its nothing like that. I learned i couldnt trust them because everytime i counted on them or believed them, things turned out wrong, and the complete opposite. So i have a hard time trusting people. But i believe that i will trust you, shane, and nate, and maybe others." she smiled softly
i smiled and nodded "i understand mitchie, and i promise you you will be able to trust us, it may take time, but all of us are willing to wait that time, and not give up on you."
she grinned "thank you, means so much !"
end of flashback
"wow, her life seems tough" nate frowned
shane nodded in agreement with a frown.
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