Xthereal-meX READ MY REPLY TO YOU ITS SO FREAKING LONG TOOK ME LIKE 5 MINUTES TO WRITE ! :P muzicoftheheart READ MY RELY TO YOU ITS LIKE SO LONG :P ALL OF YOU READ MY REPLY TO YOU CAUSE I TOOK MY TIME TO WRITE THEM ! :)
leoshunny1985 : Thank you so very much :)
muzicoftheheart : Thank you! && i know! he is so evil :O && yeah that would be horrible if something got broken :(
yea he is so sweet, i love writing him as a sweet character! && uh oh, i should change that then, like him being a big brother is a no no...like Smitchie i want! haahahahahaha! but hm maybe i can work that into my chapters, to get my storyline longer, (him being like a brother at first) hm you might have just gave me an idea for some chapters :D Yeah she pissing me off too! but yeah i need it for the storyline! :/ haha && yeah i agree on how Nate is! like i love writing his part in stories its so fun and cute! hahaa :) &&& Yeah Caitlyn is like that, the best friend everyone wants/ needs. Mitchie expecially. && yeah, thank you so much for saying that about the characters, cause thats how i want them to be, and so you saying that like you realize that makes me so happy! :) && its okay, cause this is a long reply now :P i love long reviews so its okay :D HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS CHAPTER
Xthereal-meX : HAHAHA Yeah when i look on my computer my reply to you didnt seem so long, but on my iPod i also said HOLY CRAP ! hahaha it looked so much longer than i thought it was! but hey your reviews are long so we are even ! :P && good i love long reviews! but that also means your getting a long ass reply ! :P && Thank you ! im glad you LOVE this story! && i LOVE your reviews :)
&& thank god you read every word of my review cause that took awhile to type! hahaha && yea not many people do reply :(
Yeah i love writing Nate's character cause its just so fun and cute to do! and Jason is fun to do, cause i like making him all funny! hahaa i wouldnt mind dating any of them boys either, they all boyfriend worthy x)
&& AW Thank you! thats how i want their friendship to be, so you saying that makes me feel accomplished with that!:D && i know she did have guts, like i reread it and was like WHOA! MITCHIE! DANG! hahahahaha!
Her dad is a huge ass i agree! Me and you shall hunt him down! **hahaha of course we really cant :P**
Yay! im glad you think the Smitchie parts where always cute, its what i am for, so once again you made me feel accomplished with that too! :D thank you! hahaha &Thank you soo soo much for overall loving it! :)&yeah who cares about errors! psh! :P&I agree with your favorite and least favorite parts :D && thank you for saying i wrote (your least favorite part) reall well, it was hard to write, cause i never been abused to i dont know what happens, but im glad you think i wrote it well :) && you having a reaction too was cool! :P haha Much love ! :D And yeah sooooo loooong! but guess what you get a loooooong reply! sorry if i bore you x)
teamedwardakazanessarules101: i love how your name is sooo long :) && thank you very much :)
TheSunday: Right i made them so evil :O haha && thank you for loviing the shane and mitchie parts, saying they are sweet makes me feel like i have accomplished the smitchie parts for this chapter :D && yeah that part was really sweet i loved writing it :D Hope you enjoy this chapter! :D
Sunshinelishous : yeah her parents are both jerks :(
ANYWAYS ON WITH THE CHAPTER :D
few hours later.
shanes pov
i was sitting on mitchies bed playing her guitar softly and nate was on the computer and caitlyn was sitting on the window seat eating grapes.
mitchie stirred awake.
she looked around and slowly sat up. she saw all of us and smiled. she looked at me "you are here, and with them" she grinned
"told you i would be" i playfully stuck my tongue out at her
she laughed and stretched. "i feel so wide awake!"
we all laughed
her phone went off
she looked at it "mom" she sighed and didnt answer it
i took her phone "hello?" mitchie looked at me a little shocked
"Who is this?" her mom asked
"you do not need to know that" i said calmly
"Are you hurting my daughter!" she yelled
"I would never hurt your daughter." i said
i heard her sigh "why wont she talk to me?"
"because you dont believe her." i said
"because i dont believe he'd ever do that!" she cried
"but he did, i dont think mitchie would make that up, mitchie knows how much you love him. she wouldnt want to hurt you, but she wanted to let you know the truth." I told her still calm
i heard her sob "please just take care of mitchie for me. i dont think it would be best if she came home."
"I promise you, she is safe with me." i said
"thank you" and with that she hung up.
i gave mitchie back her phone.
"what did she want?" mitchie asked
"she wants me to take care of you, she doesnt think its best for you to go home." i smiled symapthetically.
she nodded and sighed. "i dont want to go home anyways." she shrugged.
"Well my mom says you can move in with me!" Caitlyn grinned
Mitchie grinned in return "really?"
"yes really!" we all laughed
friday
Mitchie pov
"lets go mitchie! we have to find amazing outfits for tomorrow !" Caitlyn pulled me into the mall.
see normally i wouldnt mind but i mean come on its freaking 9am!
we shopped for HOURS! and soon had dresses, shoes, jewerly, and just extra things we liked!
i plopped down on the couch groaning as i had just finished unpacking all i bought today. my cell phone rang, and smile gracing my face as the familiar ringtone played...the ringtome i had set for Shane!
i quickly grabbed my phone still smiling, oh if anyone saw my smile...yeah id be embarressed!
"Hey Shane!" i giggled
"Hey Mitch! how was shopping?" he asked with a chuckle
"UGH! man i love shopping i really do, but from like 9am to like 6pm is like too much ! ugh i am so tired!" i laughed
i heard shane laugh "thats caitlyn for ya, shopping means ALL day! did you get a lot?"
"YES! and i had to carry it all!" i whined "i should of bought you with me, you could held some things!" i giggled
Shane laughed "Wow Mitch thank you so much for that!" he faked hurt
i giggled "i was kidding shane its okay!"
"yeah uh huh sure sure" we laughed "so you got your outfit for tomorrow?"
"yes i do! to think id shop all those hours and not get an outfit for tomorrow is insane!" i laughed
"well sorry!" shane laughed
man did i love talking to him!
"so what are you up to shane?" i asked
"so bored!" he whined "Im sitting on my balcony, i just finished a song, well most of it anyways." he chuckled
"aw i cant wait to hear it !" i smiled even though he couldnt see, he could probably tell i was smiling.
"you will be the first to hear it! on Sunday, you can come over, and ill play it for you. sound good?" he asked
"yes! aw im excited now!" i giggled
he chuckled "im glad."
Caitlyn came bouncing in the room. "Mitchie!"
i rolled my eyes with a laugh "yes caity?"
"Im bored!" she pouted
"So is me and shane!" i laughed and she joined in
"oh tell shane i said hi!" she sat next to me
"Caity says hi!" i said into the phone
"Hey caity!" shane said
"Shane says hey caity!" i said to caitlyn
"ask him what nate is doing." she said
"Shane what is nate doing?" i asked
"i think he is playing video games with Jason" he said
"He is playing video games with Jason. shane thinks." i told caity
"oh okay" she got up and went upstairs.
"shes starnge" i giggled
shane laughed "i agree with you there bestie."
i smiled! ugh i like shane, a lot...wow...i just realized how much i do! no no no i cant! he is my bestie! ugh! i giggled "yeah i think we all agree "
shane laughed again "yes yes! so tomorrow we will be picking you two up at 6pm."
"oh alright awesome! so i wont see you for 24 hours! gasp!" i faked shock
Shane gasped "thats insane! that will be the longest weve gone!" shane said in a shocked voice.
"i know ! wow! " we started laughing.
OH everyone today is friday yes, we had no school due to teacher meetings, thank god! ahaha
"I miss you already Bestie, tomorrow we are going to have a lot of fun! kay?" Shane said
i smiled with a blush happy he couldnt see me! "I miss you too bestie S!" i giggled "And yes we will have a lot of fun i agree!" we laughed lightly
"well sad to say this, but i have to go, got to help my dad, with...i have no clue with what, but he needs my help, much to my annoyance." he whined
"aw shane dont whine! you go help you dad! tell him i said hi too! we will talk later or tomorrow k? or just text me also! so go go! " i giggled
"fiiiiine, gosh, your so bossy!" we laughed "ill text you! love ya bestie!" i heard in his voice a smile across his face
i smiled "love ya too bestie S!" we hung up.
Okay me and shane say we love each other in a best friend way. I always imagine it as a boy friend girlfriend way...but i dont think he sees me as ever being more than a best friend, which is sad. it hurts. i really like him, but i cant tell him, it would so ruin the friendship we have, and i dont ever want to ruin that, expecially not by admitting my feelings, where he wont feel the same. So ill stick to hiding those feelings.
I got up and went into the kitchen where i saw Caitlyns mom.
"Hey Annie" i smiled
"hello mitchie, how was your day?" she smiled
"it was good, tireding but good. how was yours?" i asked sitting at the island
"the same! like work is good, but so tireding!" she laughed
i laughed with her. "yeah, im dreading getting a job" we laughed once again.
"would you like some coffee?" she asked
"yes please" i smiled
she made me some coffee the way i liked it and placed it in front of me
"thank you very much" i took a sip
"No problem mitch" she smiled and made her cup.
Caitlyn came running in with a grin.
me and annie laughed "whats up?" i asked
"Uhh...nothing?" she giggled
i stood up smirked grabbed her arm and pulled her outback. "whats up?" i asked her again
"Nate asked me to be his girlfriend ! " she squealed
i grinned and squealed with her ! "THATS AWESOME" we jumped around and then laughed
"im so excited and nervous to see him tomorrow. OMG i have to look amazing!" she started skightly freaking out
i laughed "its going to okay cait, you'll look amazing and take his breathe away!" we grinned and she hugged me and then we walked back inside.
the next day .
i woke up around 12:30pm.
i groaned and sat up while stretching and yawning.
My phone was blinking indicating i had a text
i got up off my bed and picked up my phone.
1 new text
Shane
i smiled and clicked view
Good Morning Bestie ! :) -S
Good Afternoon Bestie S! :) -M
Dang Mitch! did you just wake up? -S
maybe... xP -M
Hahahaha wow usually you're up mad early! ;) -S
Ha. ha...i know ! lOl! but idk today i just slept late! && now im really hungry cause i missed Breakfast -_- -M
haha i ate ;P -S
Shut up! when i see you im going to throw somthing at you! :P
hahahaha ill be prepared! :) -S
whatever loser ! :) -M
Hey want to go out for lunch? or do you have to take the next 6 hours to get ready? :P -S
my heart rate increased as i grinned.
Your so streotypical! :O hahaha but i do want to go out for lunch! :) -M
Alright be ready in 10? -S
yes yes, ill be ready! :P -M
alright bestie see ya in 10 3 -S
okay bestie S! 3 -M
I got up and grabbed a pair of black skinnies, and a baby blue layered flowing tank top, that stopped right at my waist. I then put on baby blue flip flops, and brushed my straightened hair and put on little makeup.
i heard the sound of my phone, i ran to it, and answered "Hello?"
"Didnt check caller id?" shane laughed
"oops! sorry! HI BESTIE S!" i giggled
shane laughed "Hey bestie! im outfront! so lets go Missy!"
"Okay okay geesh so bossy! im on my way now!" i said while grabbing my purse
"alright, see ya when you get in my car!" he hung up.
i put my phone in my purse and ran downstairs. while running to the door i yelled to caitlyn who was sitting on the couch watching tv "going out for lunch with shane! be back soon!" i heard her say okay! as i walked out the door and rushed to shanes car and getting into his passenger seat.
"Hey!" i grinned
"Hey!" he grinned while turning back on the car.
"Im so hungry!" my stomach growled
shane laughed "well lets get going" he backed out the drive way and drove to our favorite cafe.
at the cafe
we managed to get in without shane getting noticed and took a seat at our favorite booth.
while we are eating
"Why is a driveway called a driveway if you park there?" Shane asked with an adorable confused look
i shrugged "why is a sandwhich called a sandwhich if its not sand and not a which?"
"ah touche" he chuckled
i giggled and took a bite of my burger.
"So, Mitchie your my date tonight." he smirked
i blushed and looked down, trying to hide my blush.
Shane laughed and i threw a fry at him. "shut it!"
he laughed harder. "Sorry" he said between laughs, its just so easy to make you blush."
i threw another fry at him.
he lifted my face with his hands, and looked me in the eyes. "Its okay, dont be all shy" he chuckled "im glad and super excited for you to be my date. It'll be a lot of fun."
i felt the butterflies erupt in my stomach, and a blush creep to my cheeks, i bit my lip, with a smile on my face.
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