Chapter 8 ! YAY ! hahaha :)
i honestly dont think this is the best chapter...idk just ... ehh!
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NOW ON WITH THE CHAPTER :
i woke up a few hours later
i was in my room at Caitlyns house.
i sat up, i felt very tired even though i had just slept. i realized i was still in my dress from the party. Everything came back to me. i started panicking. i looked at the clock 3:39am. It was raining outside, and my windows were open causing the blinds to blow. i sat up against my headboard pulling my knees to my chest. Lightning flashed followed quickly by thunder. i jumped and my hand flew to my mouth covering my scream. I put a pillow ontop of my knees and hid my face in it, tears coming down my face. Honesty time, im terrified of thunderstorms. ever since i was little. the sound always scared me, and the sudden flashes. it was a phobia i have not gotten over. i heard my door open and i screamed looking up, and it was pitchblack i couldnt see who it was.
i started crying. "please dont hurt me, please dont hurt me!" i screamed.
"Mitchie! Mitchie! its only me Caitlyn!" she rushed over to me turned on the light next to my bed and hugged me. i cried into the pillow, shaking in complete fear.
i sobbed and i felt so embarrased.
"shh, shh its okay. whats wrong? i heard you scream" Caitlyn was worried, and seemed so clueless of what to do.
"im scared on thunderstorms" i whispered through my cries.
"oh, its okay! dont worry!" she tried calming me down, it worked a little, not as much as i wish it did.
She got up "ill be right back, okay?"
"No, no! please dont leave me in here by myself!" i cried. Ever since my dad texted me, i was scared he would find me anywhere. the thunderstorm not only scared me cause of my phobia but scared me due to the fact these nights were always the spookiest.
"Mitchie, its okay, ill be real quick. okay" she asked
i nodded even though it wasnt okay.
She quickly left the room
my breathing once increased as i tightly closed my eyes.
quickly Caitlyn was back in.
she had her phone with her.
Caitlyn pov
i clicked on shanes name knowing he fell asleep with his phone on loud
SHANE! get over here NOW! Mitchie needs you! i cant calm her down like you can! -C
about 5 minutes later
COMING ! -S
i put my phone on the table next to mitchies bed
"Mitchie, everythings going to be okay, Shanes on his way." i rubbed her back as she stayed crying. it got less, but not stopped.
about 10 minutes later
1 new text
Open your door! -S
okay! -C
"mitchie, ill be right back, i have to go open the door for shane." she nodded not lifting her head and i ran downstairs and opened the door, and saw shane shivering. he rushed inside. "In her room" we ran upstairs and into mitchies room.
shane pov
i ran into mitchies room and saw her crying into a pillow. her body shaking. "Mitch!" i rushed over to her and hugged her tightly. Feeling her body shaking. It was so sad, and broke my heart to see her like this."shhh, mitchie its me, everythings fine, whats wrong?" i asked
she turned in my arms and threw her arms around my neck and cried. "I-i have a p-phobia of thunder s-storms!" she cried, "and im scared because t-these are the s-spookiest nights, and h-he might find m-me since he f-found me at the p-party" she clung onto me tighter.
i stroked her hair, and kept my other arm tightly around her, rubbing her sides a little. "He wont get you, i cant promise he wont find you, but i promise that he wont get to you, ill be here, and i wont let him touch you." i whispered into her ear
Mitchie pov
i relaxed having shane here. i believed that he wouldnt let my dad near me. so i nodded and loosened my grip, as thunder roared and i jumped. shane took my head in his hands and stared me in the eyes. "the thunder wont hurt you okay?"
i nodded and tried to hold back my jump as thunder boomed. but i cringed.
shane rubbed my cheeks. "come on lets go to sleep" he yawned
i suddenly felt to bad for having to make him come here at 4am. "im sorry" i whispered
"for what?" he asked confused.
"its like 4am, and your" i jumped at the sound of thunder "here" i whispered
"Mitchie, its okay! you can call me at anytime, no matter where i am. ill always be here for you" he said softly
i smiled as tears of kindness filled my eyes. "thank you" i laid down with him, and held onto his shirt, tightly. he rubbed my back and hummed softly.
i relaxed and soon was asleep.
hours later
i woke up and saw shane asleep next to me. i looked at the clock. 11:32am.
i sat up and yawned and stretched. i rubbed my eyes, and sighed. why did i have to be so afraid! why did all this ever even have to happen to me? as much as shane said that he didnt mind being here for me, i still felt really bad, for feeling so...needy? I try trusting Caitlyn, and im getting there, she calms me down, just not as much as a shane.
i looked at shane, he looked so peaceful. I wonder if his family even knows he is here. Do they think im crazy? i feel crazy!
i stood up and walked out into the hallway. I slid down the wall. i need to deattach myself from shane, from counting on him so much. I looked at the pale white wall infront of me. it was silent except for a light snore coming from caitlyns dad. he was back from visiting his family. I stood up when i heard my phone ring. i rushed in my room, and saw shane stirring in his sleep. i grabbed my phone.
Nate
"hello?" i whispered as i quietly left my room closing the door behind me.
"Hey Mitch! is Shane there?" he asked
"yeah, he is here." i kept the reason why to myself.
i heard him let out a breathe of relief "Oh good! phew!" he chuckled "thanks mitch."
i giggled "its okay nate."
"we all should hang out today!" he said with excitement in his voice
i grinned "totally! we all definatley need it!" i giggled
he chuckled "Yeah! well ill text you in about an hour. okay?" he asked
"totally! talk to you then" i said
"talk to ya then. later mitch"
"later" we hung up and i put my phone in my pocket.
i walked in my room to see shane right back asleep. i smiled and placed my phone on my desk. i walked over to my closet and chose an outfit to wear. i chose a dark purple cute summer dress, with black sandals. i laid them on my chair and found some accessories to go with it.
i grabbed everything and went into my bathroom and took a quick shower. i got out, dried off and got dressed. i let my hair dry wavy and put on my black bow headband. i then applied little makeup and put on my sadals.
i walked out my bathroom throwing my dirty close in the laundry.
i walked over to shane and shook him lightly. "wake up"
he groaned but still woke up. "whats up?"
"you need to get up." i said
he sat up and rubbed his eyes, and yawned
"you should go home" i said for some reason so serious
he looked at me a bit shocked in confused, but stood up anyways ,and nodded "alright ill go"
"we are hanging out later, all of us." i smiled small
shane nodded "see ya later then" and with that he left
i sighed mad at myself.
i grabbed a pillow and screamed into it. i then threw it back onto my bed and went downstairs.
i grabbed a bowl and poured some cereal into it, and then some milk.
why was i so...rude to shane! he is my best friend! he is always there for me! at the craziest times! yet i go and do that! ugh! i dont want any more drama ! i just want everything to be okay! i will fix this with shane later today! i will !
i sat at the table, and ate my captain crunch.
1 new text
Nate
Mitch Mitch! :) ready to hang out? we are about to head to there, and pick up you and caity! -N
Natey Boy ! :P im ready! i just finished some cereal x) && alright ill let caity know! -M
i will get you ! you know i hate that nickname :( and alright awesome! see ya in about 10 minutes -N
:P alright see ya then ! -M
i got up and ran up the stairs and to caitys room. her door was open and she was sitting at her mirror, fixing her hair.
"Cait! They boys are going to be heree in about 10 minutes!" I smile
a grin spreads across her face and she squeals "yay!"
i laugh and run to my room grabbing my bag and put my cell in it and head back to caits room.
we sat there chatting till my cell rang
nate
"what up Nate boy!" i giggle when i hear him groan
"we are outfront Mitch!" he spat out my name
i laughed "alright be right out" i laugh again and hang up.
"lets go!" me and caity got up and left and got into Jasons truck.
Jason was driving, shane was in the passenger seat, nate and caity where in the seat behind them, and i was in the one in the way back behind them, by myself. i put my purse next to me and buckled up.
Nate turns towards me with a glare "you, missy! are going to regret the nickname you gave me!"
i start laughing "i dont think i will" i stuck my tongue at him.
"oh-oh just you wait" he smirked
i shrugged with a giggle.
i stared out the window as nate and caitlyn chatted and cuddeled and flirted infront of me. shane and jason chatting in the way front, and the music playing through out the car, filling my ears, that werent being occupied by any of my friends voice.
i would probably be sitting with shane back here if i hadnt been rude this morning. I wish he sat back here, id feel better, and i wouldnt be so bored. but of course this is all my fault.
my loud ringtone fills the car, since the radio wasnt so loud.
i look at the screen.
Mom
i click ignore. my phone rings again.
mom
i once again click ignore.
again!
mom
i groan and see everyone looking at me. i click ignore once again!
and guess what
mom
"what the hell!" i say kinda..loud! i blush as everyone looked at me again.
"just answer it mitch" caitlyn giggled
i faked a smile, "yeah smart idea isnt it?" i said kind of sarcastically, regretting it cause it sounded harsh.
once my phone rang again i answered
"what!" i asked annoyed
"took you long enough!" my mom sounded frustrated
"ever think, maybe i didnt want to talk to you?" i said angry
"well guess what, i want to talk to you whether you like it or not" her voice rising
"well i dont like it" i said rudely.
"well deal with it, you answered didnt you?" she said in the same tone as me
i sighed "what do you want, seriously?" i asked calm
"wondering when you are coming back?" she asked
"mom, i dont want to go back. i have no intention of going back. i will freaking buy my own apartment and live on my own if i have to. i will move out this state, or country, by myself if i have too. but i am not going back to that house" i said with a humorless laugh at the end.
"mitchie, your being so...so..delusional! your father did not cheat on me!" her voice rising again
"He did mom! he did!" i said almost in tears "he cheated on you! and he abused me! "
it was her turn to laugh humorlessly "oh mitchie, you've gone crazy!"
"I hate you!" with that i hung up and sighed shakily
"everything okay mitch?" caitlyn asked
"everythings peachy!" i said sarcastically as a tear rolled down my cheek.
Caitlyn sighed and shared a worried look with Nate.
i saw Shane looking at me and we made eye contact, another tear rolling down my cheek i looked away.
i just wish all this drama would go away. i wish i could get away from it for a little while. its all i want.
SO! what did y'all think? like it? love it? hate it? what was your favortie and least favorite parts?
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