CHAPTER 12 BABES!
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Today has been one of the worst days ever ! my family is so stressed and worried and its all so crazy! i was trying to not cry on my way home from school! only shed a few tears! phew! i was listening to depressing music while i was all depressed, that was a BAD idea! hahahaa! BUT OMG i got 12 reviews on my last chapter! that made me SO happy! hopefully i get more on this one? PLEASE!
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Xthereal-meX : YAY long review time! hahahaa Yeahhh its crazy ! YAY! and right like just EWWW! yeah i loved Jemi and i was also hoping for a Jemi 2.0 ! :( && aw think more positive! but okay fine i agree sadly :( hahahahhaa wow your bestie is CRAZY! hahaha i only think he is cute! ... when he doesnt have facial hair! hahaha! and like really! so freaking immature! if i was Demi i would have told him off! or well really have wanted too! hahaaha yeahh she was ! and i guess it did, that plus everything else in her famous life, way too much to handle!but hey i respect her! she took responsibilty for her actions to that girl and everything, and like got to respect that! well i already did, so i guess i now respect her more! and admire her!:D hahaha RIGHT! OMG they were so adorable ! all when they wouldnt admit their feelings and be all cute about it. but yeah Joe...man ugh! honestly my opinion is when they started dating her...he didnt seem SO into her...like those pictures of them at the store, her trying to kiss him..idk he looked kind of...ehhh. :( yeah i dont think Demi would go for nick either, but i mean they have gotten closer! did you see their tweets to each other ! OMG! hahaha and i agree she should ! but like you said its all Joes fault due to awkwardness ! BLAH! and it really does all come back to Joe ! GOSH! JOE MAN! GRRRR! hahahaa awww thats sweet! i wish i had a bestie like that! my bestie is a boy! hes awesome! hahaha OMG i hope you love the Nitchie parts when they come up soon! or i will cry! but you have to be completly honest ! hahahahahah!
I LOVE THIER FRIENDSHIP TOO! hahahah :D and aw yay! i didnt think i did a good ob explaining it! since ive never been in a house like that...HAHAHA and aw yay thank you! and muahahahahaha its secret :P Hope you like this chapter ! or love it!
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ON WITH THE CHAPTER
later
i was sitting with shane in the backyard on the grass next to the pool. "tomorrow what do you want to do?" he asked
i shrugged "Mmm what should we do? go the beach?" i smiled
he chuckled "its up too you. so beach?"
i nodded with a grin
"we can go the beach, then go out for lunch, and walk around a bit. then head back to the beach?" he looked at me
i was still grinning "sounds awesome"
he grinned "So, what time do you want to be up to get ready and go?
"um, get up at 8:30? and leave when we are ready?" i looked up at him.
he smiled and nodded "alright. dont be grumpy either!" he smirked
i laughed "no promises."
we laughed
later that night.
i was sitting in the middle of my bed writing down some lyrics that came to mind.
my phone beeped
1 new message
Holly
Hey Mitchie! whats up? -H
Hey Holly! im in Hawaii! writing down some lyrics. what about you? -M
OMG! your in Hawaii! your so lucky! i was talking to my mom about going there this summer! she said maybe! omg how long you there for? maybe we can hang out if my moms answer is yes! -H
yeah! its freaking beautiful! and thats so awesome! i think im here for most of the summer! you should beg your mom to say yes! we could totally hang out if you do! -M
AHHH that made me more excited! hahaha and awesome! ill go ask my mom if she came up with an answer yet! and yay! -H
hahaha awesome! let me know! :D -M
totally will! :) -H
i put my phone next to me and looked back at my lyrics.
i heard a knock on my door. "come in!"
Caitlyn came walking in. "hey mitchie torres!" she giggled
"wow, hey Caitlyn Gellar!" we started laughing and she sat next to me on my bed.
"what are you up to mitch?" she picked up my paper and looked at it
"writing down some lyrics" i snatched it back. "nothing good" i sat on it so she couldnt get it.
"aw come on mitch let me read it!" she whined
"NO!" i giggled
"ill get nate in here, he is planning revenge on you for the nickname!" she smirked
"didnt he get me back in the car?" i asked confused
"that was just the beginning" she smiled and stood up.
"DONT GET NATE!" i looked at her panicky
she laughed. "let me see the paper"
"nooo" i whined.
she stepped back. "dont!"i whined
"paper or i go get him" she took another step to the door.
"fiiiine!" i pouted and handed her the paper.
she grinned and sat on a chair and read it.
i stared down at my hands.
"oh my god" i heard her whisper.
"what?" i mumble
"mitch..." she whispered
"is it that bad?" i looked up at her
"no! not at all! mitch...its amazing!" she smiled in awe.
"thank you." i smiled taking back the paper, and putting it under my pillow.
"so, you and shane." caitlyn smirked knowing i didnt want to talk about my music, i get so embarassed hahaha
"caitlyn stop!" i pouted
"you two so totally like each other! its obvious!" she grinned
i stared at my hands. "the first day we met, we confessed we liked each other."
she gasped "then why arent you two dating!"
"i dont know if he still feels the same. i mean come on my life comes with drama!" i frowned
"But mitchie, he has stuck by you, and is your best friend! he hasnt stopped being there for you through it all. and you know that! if he didnt want to be involved with your drama full life, he could have chosen to walk out of your life already. but he hasnt! so if you two dated, what would be any different with that? he already is there for you always. He still will be if you two dated. you know? he's your best friend and is there for you. He can be your boyfriend and be there for you. His feelings if anything, have only gotten stronger, and we can all see it. " she smiled
i sighed "you really think so?" i smiled a hopeful smile
"i know so" her smile got bigger
i grinned "thanks caity"
"aw no problem!" we hugged then she stood up. "ima go get some food. see ya around, this HUGE house." she laughed
i laughed and nodded and she walked out. i walked to my the balcony and put my hands oon the railing thing and smiled out at the sunset view.
i felt to strong arms wrap around my waist, and a chin go on my shoulder "hey bestie" shane whispered
i giggled "hello bestie"
"how do you like it so far?" he asked softly
"its very relaxing. oh and" i put my hand in my pocket and pulled out my phone. "my phone"
he pulled away from me. "ahh, i forgot." he reached into his back pocket and pulled out an iPhone. "here." we exchanged phones.
"oh can i add Hollys number into this?" i asked
he smiled and nodded "yeah"
"can you read me the number?" i asked as i went to add new contacts.
"course" he found hollys number and read it to me and i saved it.
Hey Holly, its Mitchie, new number for the summer, text me on this one! :) -M
Oh awesome ! ill delete the other one for now -H
alright :) -M
i put the iPhone in my pocket then hugged shane. "thank you" i whispered.
his arms went around me "for what?"
"everything, and taking me here. away from all the drama back at home" i hugged him tighter.
he rubbed my back and kissed my head "my pleasure"
i pulled away and smiled at him
he smiled in return and moved the hair that the wind blew onto my face away.
this sweet moment, as we stared into each others eyes...got interrupted.
"Yo mitch-" Jason stopped as we jumped apart, blushing. "uh, oops." he laughed nervously. "uh ill just uh go now." he ran out with a grin.
we looked at him confused.
shane then scratched the back of his neck and coughed nervously. "uh um..im - im going to ... go talk... to nate" he said nervously.
i giggled and nodded, and he rushed out. aw he was nervous and such! i giggled and walked back into my room after one last look at the sky. i walked downtairs and found the kitchen.
i saw nate and caitlyn sitting at the island eating grapes.
i walked over to them quietly put my face near the ears and said "BOO!"
they both jumped and turned to me. i starte cracking up laughing. "oh...my...god...your faces!" i said between laughs.
they both glared playfully at me.
i lifted my knee and slapped it. "knee slapper!" they started laughing along with me.
"your so wierd mitch!" nate laughed.
i laughed harder. "oh...my god..."i slowly lowered to the floor laughing. "i cant stop laughing!" i said between laughs. they started laughing .
shane and jason walked in "what the..." the both said.
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this chapter would have been out sooner, but then came my family problems. im sorry!
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