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i nodded quickly and threw myself at him, my arms wrapping tightly around his neck as i cried into the crook of his neck. his arms wrapped tightly around my waist and he buried his face into my shoulder.
we stayed like that for a few minutes until he pulled back and took my hand. he had tears on his cheek that he wiped away with his other hand.
"come with me" he lightly pulled me so id follow him. he led me to a room i wasnt shown too before. it was a music room, and there was a huge grand piano in the middle of the room. other instruments everywhere around the entire room. on stands on the floor. hanging on the wall just everywhere! this room was HUGE! there is also couches and chairs.
Just then Caitlyn, Denise, and Jason came in. They smiled at us, and took a seat on the couches and chairs that i just saw. hahaha .
Nate led me to the piano and sat us down.
he opened the cover to the keys. the lights dimmed, and i looked over and saw Denise had dimmed them and returned to her seat.
I looked back at Nate, and he smiled small.
"this is a song, for you Mitchie" he set his hands on the beginning keys. I smiled in shock, that he wrote a song for me! He started playing and the music was beautiful. it was that song i heard him play in his room!
He then started singing, his beautiful calming voice filling the room. I grinned as i watched his face while he sang.
"She walks away, colors fade to gray Every precious moment's now a waste She hits the gas, hoping it would pass The red light starts to flash, it's time to wait
this was way sweet already!
i went from looking at his face to the keys as he sang
"And the black keys, never looked so beautiful And a perfect rainbow, never seemed so dull And the light's out, never had this bright a glow And the black keys are showing me a world I never knew, no World I never knew"
as he sang on he shocked me
"She hates the sun 'cause it proves she's not alone (my head immediantly shot up and i looked at his face with shock on mines, he looked at me and smiled.)
And the world doesn't revolve around her soul, no ( i giggled as his smile grew bigger)
She loves the sky 'cause it validates her pride Never lets her know when she is wrong"
a grin appeared on my face, i had told him i didnt know why i loved the sky, and he figured out a perfect reason as why i would. tears filled my eyes as he bumped shoulders with me and winked before looking at the keys
"And the black keys, never looked so beautiful And a perfect rainbow, never seemed so dull And the light's out, never had this bright a glow And the black keys are showing me a world I never knew, no Yeah, and the walls are closing
Don't let 'em get inside of your head Don't let 'em get inside of your head Don't let 'em get inside of your head Don't let them inside
'Cause the black keys, never looked so beautiful And a perfect rainbow, never seemed so dull, oh And the light's out, never had this bright a glow And the black keys are showing me a world I never knew
Don't let 'em get (Don't let 'em get)
Inside of your head, no Don't let 'em get Inside of your head
Don't let 'em get (Don't let 'em get)
Inside of your head Don't let 'em get, no Inside of your head
Sometimes you find It's better black and white "
as he finished he looked at me and tears were down my cheeks and everyone started clapping and i threw myself at him again, once again wrapping my arms tightly around his neck as his went tightly around my waiste. i felt his tear hit my shoulder.
"Nate i forgive you, i really do! i love you nate, you are like my twin, i dont know what id do without you! you mean so much to me too!" i cried into the crook of his neck.
"thank you so much mitchie! you have no idea how happy that makes me!" he chuckled slightly as it was muffled from my shoulder. i pulled away, and he wiped my tears.
"your like the best nate" we laughed lightly.
"you too mitchie, you too." he smiled
"i cant believe you used what i told you and wrote a song! i cant believe you would even write a song about me! oh my god! thats why you stared at me at the lunch table!" i laughed
nate started laughing. "i was in song thinking mode. your words really hit me. they are meaningful and it was total inspiration. "
"aw nate!" i hugged him again as he hugged me. "thank you so much!" i whispered
"Its no problem at all. And again im so sorry!" he sighed
"I forgive you nate, i really do." we then felt someone wrap their arms around us.
"you guys!" caitlyn awed. it was her.
we laughed and moved so we were in a group hug.
When we finally pulled away, we wiped our faces.
this was such a memorable moment, it was defiantly one of the best moments in my life.
I looked over and saw Paul with his arm around Denise, cameras in their hands, and tears on her cheeks.
She was smiling as was paul. i looked and saw Jason with a grin on his face, and on the other side, stood ... SHANE?,
and that girl...that girl from the magazines! WHAT!
i looked away and smiled at nate and caitlyn.
"this is the best moment of my life!" i grinned ignoring shane and that...that girl!
they grinned also "i was so nervous you would be so mad and not listen, or not like it!" Nate said with a sigh of relief.
i laughed "im glad i wasnt so mad, it was way to good to miss! and nate...what you said...yeah it was shocking, and it hurt. but its true...and i was being a bit dramatic. but no matter what i forgive you." we all grinned and had one last hug before walking over and plopping on the couch together.
Denise and Paul walked over to us smiling
"i got it on video, and Paul got it in pictures" Denise grinned "that was so amazing and sweet! i loved it and it had me in tears"
Nate blushed "thanks mom" we all laughed as i laid my head on his shoulder and then sat back up.
"You should record that song!" Jason came bounding over
I grinned "Oh my god Nate you should! dude thats so going on my ipod!"
Nate laughed "okay okay fine!"
"we could make a music video for it" Paul grinned as did i
"aw! this is so awesome! a song dedicated to me become a video and recorded!" we all laughed
"Ill make a video, if your in it Mitch, it would be weird to sing it to some other girl" Nate looked at me.
i squealed "of course"
caitlyn covered her ears "ow!" we all laughed
"well, once we leave Hawaii we can get everything handeled and planned out" Paul smiled
i nodded with a grin and sqeauled queitly.
they laughed and walked away.
i caught sight of shane talking to that girl, and i sighed. "he bought her here" i whispered
"huh?" Nate and Caitlyn followed my eyes and saw them, and they both frowned.
"who is that?" Caitlyn asked, and me and nate shrugged.
"im going to go talk to him." Nate stood up and walked over to shane. i sighed and shane caught my eyes, and i glared before standing up and walking out the room, before anything crazy or embarrasing happens. i didnt want anyone or anything to ruin the mood i was in.
Nate pov
i walked over to shane "hey bro, whats up?"
"ah nothing much, what about you?" Shane asked
"oh nothing, just had a crazy few days, and wrote a song for Mitchie and such." i smiled
shane nodded "it was good."
"thank you. so whose this?" i turned to the girl.
"this is Sabrina, Sabrina this is nate" shane introduced us with no good details as of who she is!
"Nice to meet you Sabrina" i stuck out my hand.
she smiled and shook my hand. "you too Nate"
"So...like...you his friend or girlfriend or something?" i asked
she laughed. "no, im shane's sister!"
my eyes widened in shock! his sister! WHAT! "what?"
she looked worried, "um yeah, im shane's sister..." she said awkwardly
i nodded "yeah i know! but wow! i havent seen you in SO long !" i chuckled
"ahhh, i see."i smiled, then frowned and turned to shane. "dude you need to go talk to Mitchie, like ASAP!"
he looked confused "why?"
i looked at them awkwardly "uh just uh youll figure out from her, just talk to her man."
"alright, alright." he turned to Sabrina. "ill be back...soon. just be yourself and chat with everyone." he smiled and rushed out.
Mitchie pov
i played around with keys on the keyboard and had my eyes closed as i started playing one of my songs, i was humming the lyrics when i felt arms snake around my waist. i jumped, and heard shane speak against my ear
"Hey Bestie, i missed you!" he whispered.
as much as i wanted to be mad at him, in this moment, i couldnt. i grinned and jumped up making him stumble back as i turned in his arms and threw my arms around his neck and hugged him tightly and squealed lightly. "Shane!"
he laughed and hugged me tightly "mitchie!"
"oh my god dude i missed you!" i giggled and buried my face into the crook of his neck.
he kissed my head "i missed you so much mitch!"
i grinned "good!" we laughed.
then i sighed and pulled away. "shane..."i started
"whats wrong?" he looked worried.
"i know this is going to be weird, and might make things so awkward, but i really need to ask" i looked into his eyes.
"ask me anything mitch." he looked back in my eyes.
i sighed and took a deep breathe. "shane do you...like me? like like me? like a lot?" i looked down.
it was silent for a few seconds, and i started to believe that he doesnt. i felt his hand touch my chin and lightly push it up till i was looking in his eyes.
"Mitchie, i do. i like you A LOT! its crazy, i have liked you since we admited it to each other that day i showed you my secret hide out, and everyday since then, my feelings have only gotten stronger." he said seriously and with a soft voice
i smiled then frowned "but then who is that girl downstairs? the girl you are in magazines with? them saying thats your new love interest!" i almost whines..it was more of a confused defeated tone.
Shane chuckled "thats what nate was talking about" he mumbled. "mitchie thats my sister Sabrina."
blush appeared on my cheeks as my eyes widened and then i ducked my head embarassingly. "im sorry" i whispered
he laughed and hugged me "its okay mitchie!"
i buried my face in his chest and sighed. "dude, i have been so worried about you possibly dating someone else! and that someone else is your sister ! im so emabrassed!" i whined
shane laughed " mitchie really its okay, you didnt know that was my sister. you didnt even know i had one. and the magazines and televisions take pictures and make up lies. its okay. " he said softly
i smiled "and shane i like you a lot too! my feelings have gotten so much stronger!" i whispered
i felt him hug me tighter, before pulling away and holding my face between his hands, as he smiled. "thats good to know" he said before leaning down and capturing my lips in a kiss. it was our first kiss, and my frist kiss ever. and omg was it amazing! i felt sparks fly through me, as i went weak in my knees, his lips so soft and gentle.
he pulled back as grins appeared on our faces. "mitch, will you be my girlfriend?" he bit his lip. which was HOT!
AHHHHHHHHH! "yes of course!" i giggled with a small blush.
he chuckled and kissed me again, and i wrapped my arms around his neck as his went around my waist.
i smiled into the kiss before pulling away, and we leaned our foreheads against each other. Me, Mitchie Toress is finally Shane Grays girlfriend! Is this all real? ( title! hahahaha :P )
downstairs.
we ran down the stairs, since shane was chasing after me trying to tickle me. i screamed and ran into the living room where sabrina, caitlyn, jason, and nate where. i ran around the couches they were sitting on shane chasing me.
everyone laughed. "whats going on?" Caitlyn asked
"He. trying. to. tickle. meee!" i squealed as shane almost caught me.
they laughed again.
I was getting tired and got tackled by shane onto the empty couch as he started to tickle me.
i screamed bursting into laughter as i squirmed around "stoooooop!" i laughed
he laughed along with me and everyone else..
"we now have the two besties back together!" Nate cheered and we laughed
"stooooooop shane!" i laughed
"okay fiiiine" he stopped and i caught my breathe as he sat down.
i sat up and stuck my tongue out at him. he stuck his out in return. and i giggled as he chuckled.
he then stood up and motioned for Sabrina to stand up and she did.
he took my hand and pulled me up and led me over to Sabrina.
he smiled "Mitchie this is my sister Sabrina, Sabrina this is my girlfriend mitchie"
"GIRLFRIEND!" everyone jumped up and looked at us in shock. Sabrina only grinned.
DID YA LIKE? LOVE? This is honestly my favorite chapter ! i was planning like all these chapters to lead up to this one ! like this was what i was looking forward too! if yall didnt like it i will be sooo sad ! but be honest! and CLIFF HANGER !
AND SABRINA IS SHANE'S SISTER ! AND SMITCHIE HAS FINALLY HAPPENED 17 CHAPTERS LATER ! AHAHAHAHAA :P
BUT WAIT IF SHE IS SHANE'S SISTER, IS SHE RELATED TO NATE AND JASON? IF SO HOW? AHHH I KNOW THE ANSWER! AND YOU ALL WILL FIND OUT SOON!
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