another chapter ! yay ! so no one agreed with Zemi -_- LOL! but yall did agree that Joe needs to shave! :P
who likes Jelena ? Justin and Selena!
what was yalls opinion on Miley smoking?
and who believes that Demi has a sex tape? and who believes she sent rude emails to Ashely Greene? -_-
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I groaned and crossed my arms over my chest as I looked up at Shane.
He walked down the stairs and came up to me. "hey" He whispered
"Hi" I said softly
"Look Mitchie, I am so sorry! I was just...being a jealous boyfriend, and I trusted you! I always have and I still do of course! But it was just Breon I didn't trust" he said
I looked at him confused "why?"
He sighed "Breon has always wanted to be in these like competitions with me, he always wanted to either have my girl, or find someone he thought was much better than her. He has stole a few of my girlfriends in the past, and we finally were getting over those issues, until I caught him almost kissing my last girlfriend, and thats when I stopped trusting him when it came to girls, I mean I trusted him with everything else because he was a trustworthy person when it didn't come to girls, he kept all the secrets I ever told him and such, but when I realized that it was you a Breon who were not down in the kitchen with the rest of us, and Nicole said you were in that small room in the closet it just set off my worrying and jealousy, and nervousness. So then when I saw him chasing you and you laughing I got really jealous and angry, I thought he was going to steal you from me, like he has done with some of my exes. so I thought you all laughing, I thought that meant he was succeeding. so I blamed you, and him, but since you were the one to talk to me, I just took it out on you, I didn't mean to, and I'm so sorry! I really am! please Mitchie forgive me! I can't...i can't live without you!" he begged.
I had tears in my eyes, as I saw his pleading, sincere eyes. I nodded eagerly and threw my arms around his neck and buried my head into the crook of his neck as his arms tightly wrapped around my waist pulling me closely too him, so that our bodies were touching and he buried his head on my shoulder.
"I love you Mitchie" He whispered
I smiled happily, touched, in a dream state, as I stood on my tip toes to tighten my hold on him, "I love you too Shane!" I whispered
I felt his arms tighten around my waist. as he kissed the bare section of my shoulder.
DEMIDEMIDEMIDEMIDEMI
me and Shane are currently sitting on the couch in the living room with cait and nate on the other couch, just watching movies relaxing. it was so cute, Caitlyn and Nate kept flirting, which i haven't seen much do to all the stress and drama, and them being shy around others.
Nate poked Caitlyn in the side which caused her to squeal and start laughing as she hit his arm. He caught her hand, and took the other one, holding her hands in one of his using the other to start tickling her. She screamed and burst into a fit of laughter.
"Stttttoooooooop!" she squealed
ante laughed as he continued to tickle her. She fell onto her back laughing, he hovered over her as she squirmed around laughing tears falling from her eyes.
"st-top!" she screamed in laughter
Nate laughed and stopped as he bent down and kissed her. I was holding back my 'awwww' as I grinned at the two tacking out my phone and taking a picture. I heard Shane chuckle from beside me. I looked up at him with a grin. He kissed my forehead. I giggled and put my phone back in my pocket after taking one more picture.
when they sat back up they grinned at each other as Caitlyn laid her head on Nate's lap and he ran his hand through her hair, which she relaxed closing her eyes. Sabrina walked in and when she saw them she grinned and looked me with an "aww adorable" look! cause she hasn't seen them act all coupley either. I nodded with a "i know right" smile
she giggled and sat down on my other side. "guys I'm bored!" she whined.
we all rolled our eyes "poor poor you riri" Shane chuckled
she glared at him "well aren't you a great brother" she said sarcastically
"yeah I really am" He grinned and we all groaned as he laughed.
"I feel like a 5th wheel" she pouted
"get a boyfriend ri!" Shane said with a duh voice
I gave sabrina a 'tell him!' look
she sighed and nodded "I have one for your information!"
Shane looked at her shocked, as did Caty and Nate, but not as shocked as Shane. "what? who?" he asked
"uh...Justin Bieber" she whispered as a blush crept to her cheeks.
Shane, Nate, and Caitlyn's mouth dropped open as I grinned at her.
"WHAT?" Shane asked in shock
"almost 6 months" she whispered
that caused my mouth to drop open!
"wow" we all whispered
"well hey I approve!" Shane grinned and we all laughed as relief washed through Sabrina.
"thank you shane" she grinned
"but hey if he hurts you he will so have to deal with me!" Shane said in his protective brother voice, and we all rolled out eyes
DEMIDEMIDEMIDEMIDEMI
Jason was dancing around the room with his electric guitar in his hands, blasting through the speakers.
I was laughing hysterically on the couch
It was only me and Jason in the house, and we were so bored, so we decided to rock out.
I picked up the electric guitar that I had put down laughing. I stood on the couch and started to join the music whipping my hair back and forth as Jason bopped his head up and down and slide across the floor on his knees.
I giggled as I jumped to the other couch "start singing!" I shouted to Jason
"you too!" and we sang the lyrics to the song we were rocking out too, singing off the top of our lungs laughing at points.
When we finished we fell to the ground laughing like crazy.
"That was fun!" Jason laughed
I nodded as I couldn't speak due to my laughing fit.
we then heard the door open and people walk in and the door closed.
we were still laying on the floor guitars ontop of us.
"why are yall on the floor?" denise laughed
me and jason burst into laughter once again.
everyone looked at us confused but amused expressions on their faces.
i stood up taking the guitar off me and laying it on the couch as i put my hair in a messy bun. "we had a rock out session!" i grinned
jason stood up placing his guitar on the other couch "and it was hilarious! and really really fun!" he grinned lik a child on christmas day.
they all laughed at our excitment. "sorry we missed it" paul laughed
i blushed "it would have been embarassing" everyone laughed
shane came over to me and wrapped his arms around my waist from behind me as he rested his head on my shoulder. i smiled as i turned my head and kissed his cheek. he smiled brightly at me.
"so what did yall do?" jason asked
"did some shopping and such. it was tireding" nate pouted
Caitlyn kissed his pout "your so silly" Nate winked at her
me and sabrina "awed" which caused them to blush and everyone else to laugh
"Oh! Denise, Paul, me and Mitchie need to talk to you about some important stuff!" Caitlyn remembered as i sent her a glare.
"oh? alright when shall we talk?" Denise asked
"um right now?" caitlyn asked
they nodded "come on, lts go somewhere else." Paul said
Shane slowly let me go as he sent me a confused look. i smiled sheepishly at him "tell you later babe" i kissed him before following them. oh how nervous i am! what if they say no? what if thy think its a horrible idea? waht if they send me back home? oh my god! i bit my bottom lip nervously.
Caitlyn took my hand and squeezed it in a way to tell me everything will be okay.
We walked into Paul's office room and they shut the door behind us. and we all took a seat.
"so what would you two like to discuss?" Denise smiled
"well, you know, in september we are all going back on tour, leaving senior year and getting taught on the road, which means we will be leaving Mitchie, which we dont want to do, because that means she will have to go back to her house, which we all know is not a good thing at all. So i was wondering if Mitchie could come on the tour with us? she could help out with whatever needs help with, please! i really dont want her going back to her house! we cant just leave her like that! she really depends on Shane, and she needs all of us! so please can she come on the tour with us?" caitlyn looked so hopeful, as if she would cry if they said no.
my heart pounded in my chest as i saw denise and paul look at each other, and then back at us, and they sighed. oh my god, is that not a good sigh? oh man! please please say yes!
"Mitchie...i cant make any promises, its not only up to me, but i think that there is definitly a high chance that you can come on tour with us, and i know your situation, and i dont want you to have to go back to that, and i know how much you depend on shane. so i of course has no problem with you coming on tour with us." Paul said as me and caitlyn grinned
"i agree completly, but some word of advice, its not always so good to become so dependent on someone. espcially on someone who tours, and has a huge job, and might not always be able to be there." Denise smiled sympathetically.
i frowned at this. what is trying to say something ? like is there a hidden message behind that? i cant not depend on shane, i need him, he knows how to calm me down, and he makes me feel safe! i sighed as i nodded slightly.
they smiled and we left the room.
i walked up to my room slightly confused, and i knew caitlyn could tell something was up.
Caitlyn pov
i watched mitchie walk upstairs with a slight frown on her face. i knew denise's words really hit her. why did denise have to say that? that really aggervated me! i walked into the living room and saw shane watching tv with his brothers.
"shane!" he looked at me. "can you go talk to mitchie?"
"what happen?" he stood up with a worried expression
"your mom said something that really like hit mitchie, and i dont want her stressing over please." i frowned
he nodded and ran upstairs.
Shane pov
what could my mom had said? and why would she have said it?
i walked towards mitchies room and saw the door cracked open, so lightly i pushed it open and saw her curled up on her bed, her eyes closed. i queitly walked over to her, and laid down behind her, wrapping my arms around her. i felt her jump slightly. "hey babe, whats wrong?"
she shook her head slightly. i sighed "mitchie, you can tell me, and i want you too."
she sighed "your mom..." she whispered
"what did my mom say?" i asked softly
"she said shouldnt be so dependent on somene who tours, who has an important job, and wont always be able to be there." she whispered "and she's right."
"babe, its okay, you can be as dependent on me as you want, i want you too, i want to be there for you, i always will be. yeah i might not always be able to be there, but id be a phone call away, and id catch the first plane possible, or take the jet, to get to you whenever you needed me. " i said serious
she turned in my arms and buried her head against my chest. "shane your too good to me"
i chuckled slightly "you mean the world to me babe."
she looked up at me with a smile "i love you shane"
"and i love you mitchie" i bought my hand to her cheek and rubbed it lightly
she smiled and kissed me which i immediantly kissed her back. she pulled back slightly her eyes still closed "me and caitlyn we asked your parents if i could go on tour with you" she whispered as her eyes opened slowly to look in.
i grinned "why didnt i think of that?"
she grinned and giggled "your not so smart" she joked
"" i laughed sarcastically "very hurtful"
"loser!" she kissed me as i smiled into the kiss.
"so what did my parents say, other than what my mom said?" i asked as i pulled back a little
"your dad said its not fully up to him, but he said he wouldnt mind me going, and he wants me too cause he doesnt want me to go back to my house." she smiled
i smiled happily "and your mom agreed. so i guess they're just going to have to talk to your tour people, and then give me a final answer"
"they better say yes, or ill be sneaking you on the bus" i kissed her
she giggled against my lips "your amazing" she whispered in between kisses
"mm you too!"
she gripped onto my shirt pulling herself closer to me, our lips not breaking apart once.
DEMIDEMIDEMIDEMIDEMI
Mitchie pov
me and shane are walking on the beach holding hands, them swaying slightly back and forth, as we laugh at some silly jokes. i think everything we been through had brought us closer. we only have a week left in hawaii and then we are going back to LA.
"when do you think your parents are going to find out if i can go on tour with yall?" i asked after a moment of comfortable silence
"mmm i dont know, but probably they will know by the time we are back in LA." he said
"so like...when is the tour?" i asked
"a week after we get back to LA." he looked at me
"and for how long?" I whispered
"a few months." he said softly
I nodded with a sigh. I really hope they let me go on tour! 3 weeks till the tour.
I looked around at the beautiful beach. the sun setting, i loved the colors! a lot of people sat on the sand as they watched the sun set. me and shane just strolled the beach. if we stopped people would probably come up to him. he didnt want that. after the sun set me and shane went back to the house, with small conversation. mostly we just njoyed each others company.
the day before leaving hawaii
Paul was on the phone talking in a serious tone as he paced the living room. Shane looked at Nate confused, and he only shrugged with a also confused expression.
"but-...no!...you dont-...fine! i guess thats the better than not at all." he sighed and you could tell he was annoyed. "yeah goodbye!" he hung up and groaned and when he turned and made eye contact with me he frowned, and right there i knew it was bad news, and i wasnt going to like this.
"whats wrong?" i asked, with a nervous feeling.
"mitchie, i am so sorry-" caitlyn cut him off
"whats going on?" she demanded. she just wanted him to get straight to the point as did i.
"they wont allow you to come on tour with us for the first month. but after the first month you can join. they think the first month is the most stressful, and you will only be a distraction, especially to shane, since you have no specific job in the tour. " his voice full of sympathy.
tears filled my eyes, as did caitlyns. Shane wrapped his arms around me, from behind me, as he buried his face on my shoulder with a extremly sad sigh.
"im sorry mitchie" Paul frowned.
Jason walked in "whats with the sad moods?" he asked confused
shane stood up straight and shook his head. i just pulled out of shane's grip and ran upstairs.
"Mitchie!" he shouted and ran after me.
I was going to update sooner! but I couldn't ! i had so much school work! i just finished a 7 page paper, and a history essay! i have a test tomorrow, and i have projects due this week! So im sorry! but im updating now then going to study! OH and i got 20 reviews! that made me SO freaking happy ! thank you all so much!
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