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JANE POV:
I awoke with my head banging against something, and sore, so sore. I rubbed my eyes, and looked around, to see that I of all people was on a horse, why oh why? I turned around, to see that I was in front of a man, with long blond hair flying behind from out of his helmet. Eomer I thought, nope not him.
"My Lady are you alright?" asked the man. "My name is Howdain son of Haldane." The man told her concerned that she might have lost her sense of hearing from her injury.
I moaned. "Yes I think so, my name is Jane of-". I hesitated. Then remembered, ah yes. "Loth-Lorien." I affirmed, him, he looked at me in awe, well as best as he could while riding a horse.
"You are a woman." He said a little surprise. I rolled my eyes, duh. I am no man. Okay, well I am not one of the race of men. I smiled inwardly at my own joke.
"Yes, and a member of the Galadhrim." She said proudly.
He cleared his throat. " Excuse me, but I thought that they only allowed elves, er ellyn." He added. "My father enjoyed studying elves, he was from Gondor, my mother was from Rohan."
"There is always a first." I told him, why is everyone so sexist here?
"My lady I am sorry if I offended you."
I rolled my eyes "please do not call me 'my lady' just Jane. And you did not offend me." I assured him.
"Yes Jane." He said laughing.
Eomer looked up and saw four figures walking towards us, I groaned inside, she was still alive, how could this be? I started to hit my head against my sword yes I got it back.
"Excuse me Jane, but what are you doing?" Howdain asked me.
"Trying to give myself a brain hemorrhage." I stated plainly. He looked at me as if I had gone insane, well in a way I had.
"Well don't hurt yourself too much." Warned Howdain jokingly,
A thought crossed my mind, why did it seem like I knew the Sue? Oh no… I remembered a day when my sister and I were sixteen. We went to one of those online sights, and changed what we looked like. My sister is the Sue! Crap, since I was a writer, when I left for work that morning I wished she could be a Mary-Sue!
I ducked down, as we rode up to the group, this was going to be terrible. Shame, and anger coursed through my veins, I peeked out behind the horse's head, to see that she had changed back, thankfully. I sighed in relief, until I saw the horsemen eyeing her curiously.
We pulled up to a halt surrounding them completely, and sure enough there were six people standing and looking at up at us. Eomer climbed down from his horse, and walking over said. "What business does a man, elves, and a dwarf have in the Riddermark." He asked, I don't understand what he said was wrong.
"Our business is our own." Aragorn said. I nodded my head you go dude! I wonder what he would say if I told him that. Oh wait, he would think I was a ghost. Ha! That would be actually very funny.
I looked up just in time to see Eomer and Gimli doing there stare down. "Oh Crap!" I said jumping down from the horse Howdain looked like he was going to murder me.
"Okay cut the crap this is getting way annoying. Hey guys whats up? Long time no see." I said smiling. While walking up to my sister I glared. "You jerk!" I shouted as I grabbed her by the hair.
"Hi sis!" Vanessa said smirking, as she elbowed me in the gut.
"That's it, I have had enough from you, first the dog now this. And this is taking it to far!" I said rolling up my sleeves, and pounced on my sister. Clawing at any exposed skin, I was beyond upset I was angry. When I think about it, she caused more damage to me.
We were rolling around on the ground when I felt a pair of strong arms tear me away from her.
"Jane control yourself, and where have you been?" Aragorn said looking at me with pure disappointment, and confusion in his eyes. I looked down.
"It's a long story." I muttered. "She is my sister." There was a gasp, Legolas spoke up, "Jane how can you be Guinevere's sister, when you are mortal and she is not?" He asked. Still obviously under her oh so magical influence.
"I don't know the same reason that I am a member of the Galadhrim, well sort of… I was adopted. And the reason I am so mad is that this girl's name really is not Guin- whatever. It is Vanessa." I said plainly. "And she ran over my dog and killed it, a dog is like a, uh a uh, a uh hound." I told them.
That was when Eomer decided it was time that they left, he summoned three horses and told us to take care of them, with that he left, with the rest of the riders of the Riddermark. Howdain gave me a questioning look, which I just shrugged off.
Gimli gasped as soon as they had left and turned to Vanessa.
Vanessa POV:
"You killed a hound?" He asked utterly astonished. I bent my head in shame.
"It was an accident I was sixteen and was learning how to drive, I didn't know her puppy was on the driveway when I backed out." I said shrugging my shoulders.
"See, see there she doesn't even regret killing it." Jane said her voice a little higher than usual, her eyes bloodshot from her obvious lack of sleep.
I looked up. "At-at least I didn't wish my sister into a mary-sue." I cried feeling utterly terrible. "And I am sorry I impersonated you, I was mad and angry. But, how would you be, I disappeared an hour after your accident, and was not transported to your time here, I was transported fifty years ago." I said feeling rather downcast, and swallowing back the tears, as I changed my form back to my original short 5'2" stature, brown hair, and brown eyes, with a splash of freckles across my pale skin.
Jane looked at me, feeling rather ashamed and came and gave me another hug. "I am so, so sorry Vanessa, but hey look you are still an elf, short but still an elf." She pointed out smiling. I looked at her. "You know you are right, and you are still a red head, and very annoying." I said.
Jane pov:
I laughed, we hugged again and turned to look at everyone. "We come in peace." I offered my hands palm up. Gimli laughed. "Aye you do come in peace lass, the both of you." He said. I went over and hugged him, and everyone.
"Well Jane, why did you runaway?" Aragorn asked. "You had everyone worried. We thought you had died, we found your cloak with your blood on it." I looked down, this was not going to be easy, and no matter how much I wanted to make up a lie, I knew that they deserved the truth so I told them. I told them everything, almost , except the tiny detail that Gandalf is my father.
