I do not own Naruto. I want Oc's as allies for Zale and Kurumi if you want to explain how they got their powers. I want a description of them, where they grew up, their personality, and what they can manipulate.
Kurumi's blood froze as she stared at the man with shark like blue skin, and the pin wheel eyes of the sharingan spinning, but this time instead of falling victim to it she turned back to the blue man. "Well, look at that this cute little thing knows who we are." Kisame said smiling at her rather horrified reaction.
"That is not of our concern Kisame we are here to get the boy and nothing else, but be wary of his new abilities we have been informed it's something to be wary of." Itachi said looking at the girl with cold dead eyes, and he grabbed her chin with his fingers. He spun the sharingan Kurumi unable to look away as the hypnosis started to set in.
Except this time something odd happened instead Itachi jumped in shock holding his eyes which were bleeding. "What the heck." Kisame said looking at his partner who was holding his eyes. "That was a neat trick brat, but, OW!" While he was talking Kurumi slammed a vase on his head. "You will pay for that brat!" Kisame yelled grabbing the handle of his sword.
"Eeek!" Kurumi squealed running back inside of the room the large blue man following after her.
"I was planning on being nice and only chopping off a limb or two, but you're going to die now." Kisame said stomping into the room his chakra and killer intent trying to scare the girl.
"Kisame beware there's something about this girl that is off." Itachi said walking into the room; it was large enough that they had to look a bit. "No normal girl could do that to a sharingan user."
'I've been alive for thousands of years and watched countless wars played out with ever dirty trick in the book I can handle two people.' Kurumi thought to herself watching the two look around, since she had virtually no chakra as long as she stayed quiet they wouldn't be able to find her. 'Okay I have some shoes, string, and Zale's kunai and such.'
"Damn it girlie get out here!" Kisame yelled out kicking over a sofa and growling. "Well the kids right there so that means we could just take him and get out of here." Kisame said walking toward the sofa and he hit a string breaking it. Instantly shuriken came flying at him, but his sword took care of those. "That is a terrible and pitiful trap."
"Never mind the girl now if she's worth looking into we'll get her later, let's just get Naruto." Itachi said, but none the less he was a bit irked.
"What's going on?" Zale asked waking up rubbing his eyes to see a blurry Itachi and Kisame who glared at him their arms reaching out to grab his still drunken for.
"The toad sage is in the building!" Jiraiya said coming in out of nowhere a girl on his shoulder.
Sorry for the short chapter, but I have writers block.