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Here's chapter 6!
"Where is Nina?" Fabian asked himself.
~Italy~
"Fabian Hurry!" Mara shouted. Patricia was unconscious, but the girls didn't know that. Amber felt water on her neck.
"Mara, next time say it, don't spray it. "
"Wh-" Mara felt a gush of water coming from the cracks on the elevator ceiling.
"What's happening?" Amber asked.
"It's raining inside the elevator!"
"Is that even possible?" Amber asked.
"Maybe..."
"I'M TOO PRETTY TO DIE!"
~Italy~
"What's going on in there?" Fabian shouted. He heard yelling and banging. Alright, he thought. Enough is enough. Fabian turned around and saw a table. There was a pen and a pad of paper on it. He opened the draw and saw scissors, a crow bar, and markers. Perfect. He grabbed the crowbar and put it between the cracks of the elevator doors. He pushed and pushed. When the doors finally opened, he let out a sigh of relief. Mara and Amber both ran out to hug him. Water came out of the elevator and onto the hotel's carpet.
"I thought I was going to die!" Amber shouted.
"Okay, Amber, you're getting me all wet," He said.
"Sorry, now lets go help Patricia!"
They all ran into the elevator and saw Patricia. Her face was covered in tears and was pale. Fabian looked at her hand and gasped. It was covered in blood and in an angle hands weren't supposed to be in.
"Someone go get Trudy!" he shouted. Amber ran to the staircase door and pulled it. It didn't open. She looked through the peephole on the door and saw Nina and Trudy soaking wet trying to open a latch on a big green door.
~Italy~
"Nina, you keep trying that door, I'll swim up and try the other doors," Trudy cried. Nina nodded, took in a breath, went under the water, and tried opening the door.
Rain fell even faster.
Nina still doesn't know how to swim.
~Italy~
Patricia's hand turned green and purple. She slowly opened her eyes and saw Mara and Fabian sitting next to her.
"Look, she's up!" Mara said. Fabian slowly removed Patricia's hand from the doors and put it on her lap.
"OW!" She shouted.
"What is taking Amber so long?"
"Nina and Trudy are trapped! They could drown!" Amber said, running into the elevator.
"What? How?"
"Don't ask me," Amber said, pushing her we blind hair out of her face.
"I'll be right back," Fabian said, running to the front desk of the hotel.
I can't just let the love of my life drown. I don't want anything to happen to my Nina. But what should I do? She knows how to swim...right?
~Italy~
"Okay," Alfie said. "Jerome, this has gotten, way out of line."
"Oh please, just watch the show," Jerome chuckled.
"Are you trying to kill them? Nina and Trudy Are about to drown, Patricia's hand is infected, and we're just sitting here!" Alfie stood up and walked towards the door.
"What the heck, mate! Where are you going?" Jerome yelled.
"To help," Alfie opened the door and slammed it shut behind him. Jerome let out a loud laugh.
"Stupid fool. Still doesn't know that your in it as well."
Review!
A Reviewing Reader: hehe, you made me laugh! Jerome basically hacked into the hotel's security system and automatically locked the doors. Victor and his crew did indeed kill the girl. They wanted to protect their secrets.
Izzi08: There just might be a little Jerome/Mara thing... If Mara doesn't find out about Jerome's plan... :D
Okay just telling everybody that: THE STORY HAS JUST BEGUN!
There is still things like:
Will Nina live?
If she does will she still go to The Drabio?
Will Patricia meet Joy?
Will Jerome date Mara?
Will you find out about what happened with Mara/Amber/Mick?
Will you keep reading this story?
What do you think?