So glad you guys are still with me. You rock for your great reviews and for adding me to your alerts. I would like to point something out, though, something I should have pointed out earlier. Lily had a distrust of men, but Jerry made her change her mind...the true vampire has the power to manipulate his or her victims into trusting them before they decide to strike. It's commonly called "Venus Flytrap Syndrome", because the vampire has the ability to charm people into things. If you think it's unrealistic, then so be it...this is fiction based on fiction...it's not supposed to be entirely realistic.
Second of all, I know my writing style is a bit dry and chock full of useless information...but I'm a firm believer in putting in as much information as I can so that people can get a better grasp of the story.
I'm also a firm believer in letting everyone else write the way they want to. I don't see it as a problem on here if someone writes a certain way that some people don't like, I see it as a refreshing thing...so, fellow fanfic writers, write away! I look forward to reading and reviewing your work!
I sincerely apologize if you are offended by this rant but I had to get this off my chest. I love you guys! My next chapter will be posted soon! Please stay tuned!