Author Notes:
I usually do these at the end of chapters but today's different. So I've been swamped with work and also school is starting back up so I'm usually out shopping and don't have much time to write. I haven't updated like I want to and I can't really do that until maybe the near end of August but I will update when possible. I only have access to a computer at school and work.
BlueNeutrino: Thank you for the helpful criticism, I'm not being sarcastic. It helps to know what others honestly think. But also about her being all powerful I thought it would be obvious that she has two week spots. Jasper and her dad. Still loved hearing what you had to say.
Uhm. I think this is it.
Chapter 4
Jasper stands there with a wild look in his eye, while Peter and Char both stare at me. Char goes ahead and bites the bull in the butt.
"You're all powerful?" She asks looking a little sheepish, I bet because she's the one who has to speak up while her mate just stares at me as does mine.
"Technically. I do have a few things that can hurt me; my dad and Jasper." I tell her while walking towards the living room. Jasper suddenly growls and has me in his arms. "Jasper, I wanna go sit down." I whine while struggling to get out of his grip.
"I would never hurt you. Don't even think like that. Why would you say that?" He growls every word vehemently. He starts towards the couch and his "children" follow.
"I said you could hurt me. There's a big difference. But you are my biggest weakness. If someone was to grab you from behind or something I would be so worried that my powers wouldn't work. They shut down when I'm fearful or worried. Thus you and my father are my biggest and only weaknesses." I tell him like it's the most obvious thing in the world. And he just stares at me along with Peter whereas Char is nowhere to be seen.
"Now you listen here, my mate. You will never have to fear that. I am the God of War. Heck, even Jane Volturi fears me. You will always be safe. And for your sorry excuse for a father, me and Pete will take care of that for you." As he speaks of my father I see malice enter his eyes and can hear the suppressed hate under the look of love he is throwing my way. This is when Char returns.
"Boys, out! Go hunt and don't you dare come back before I say or I'll beat you!" She demands and let me just say, Char is scary when she threatens you. I like it.
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"Char why does Jasper act the way he does. I mean I know I said he was under Pixie's control but how come he doesn't smile or laugh the way the Major used to? I saw his past through my own eyes. It wasn't a fun one but it was still a past, one where he still had a sense of humor." I ask her while staring out the window they left in.
"Leyla, he's taking everything in. He's trying to understand how this could happen. He finds out he was being mind controlled and now his mate is someone else. He thought you were Isabella Swan in love with Edward Cullen and clumsy. Now you're someone he has never met before and he has no clue on what to do. Give him time. He'll come around." She tells me with something in her eye I recognize as what my mom would look at me with. Love. Good I needed a sister anyway.
"Hey Char, would you like to play hide and go seek?" I say trying not to jump up and down. When she agrees it's better for her to hide since I'm human she tells me to count to twenty.
"One" there's a rustle to the left of me. "Five" there's a creak up the stairs. "Ten" there's a bump in the kitchen. "Twenty" silence. "For a vampire Char you're pretty loud. I call out.
I look up the stairs, down the hall, her room, the kitchen, the closet, under the table, and anywhere else. That is until I remember how my friend's cousin would hide in the shower to scare passer-byers. Looking in the bathroom there seems to be a shadow but as I pull the curtain back there's a face I never wanted to see again.
"Hello, Isabella" Alice says. "I'll make this quick. You stay away from Jasper and I won't tell your father where you are. You leave him be and I'll make sure that I don't kill you. He. Is. MINE. Do you get that? Huh you stupid human?"
"Actually Alice please repeat that for me." A voice rings from behind me. Turning around there stands The God of War. Tall and strong. His eyes are completely black (and I mean there is no color there but black even the white is gone) and his clothes are disheveled, his hair is mussed from running and he looks to be completely angry. Good. "Leyla go to the living room." But I don't move. I want to see my mate in action.
Alice goes to hit him but he ducks and in a movement faster than my eyes can see he has her dismembered and I am standing there looking like a fool. Suddenly there's a gust of wind and there stands Edward. Jasper already had me in his arms so when Edward swooped in and took Alice's parts he could do nothing.
"I told you to go to the living room." Jasper says. "Why did you not listen?"
"I wanted to see you in action. I mean I have heard stories about the God of War but with how Alice controlled you I thought he was dead. But here you are and it's super ho-" I cut myself off and blush.
"Super what darlin'? I didn't hear that last bit?" He says with a wicked light in his eyes.
"Super awesome?" I squeak out.
"No you were going to say something else. Tell me." He says and I can tell he's enjoying this way too much.
"Uhh… I was going to say super horse…" I trail off realizing that sounds super stupid. "Fine! Hot!" looking up I see victory in his eyes. "I was going to say super ho-" But this time when I cut off it's because he presses his lips against mine in a loving but demanding kiss.
"Well lookie here…"
Sadly I'm leaving it like this. It is a little longer than the others so that's good. But today I need to go ahead and clean up my station then go shoe shopping. Look for an update on the 8th of August. I have a Dr. appointment on the 9th. There may be an update later today depending on two things.
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