My Saviour Is My Enemy.

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Okay, originally I was going to have three rapes fully detailed throughout the first few chapters. But I have decided to take a different path. I also wanted to say thank you to some of my faithful Reviewers.

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Oh and I thought I should tell you, I don't really have a detailed plan when it comes to my fanfics. Sure I have a rough idea of what's going to happen but most of the time… like with My Saviour is My Enemy, it just comes to me as I go. I hope you continue to read my story, because out of all my fanfictions including the three forming in mind, this is the most likely to be finished first… well aside from my one-shot song-fic… Oh and to clarify something Kagome and Rin were kidnapped on the same day but they were both unconscious for 2 days. Please enjoy.


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Warning: Read at your own Risk.


Chapter Five: A Saviour Too Late?

Naraku was not happy, not in the least. He had been sexually torturing Kagome for the past six days and the stubborn young Miko's resolve had yet to break. He continued to put her through immense pain every night and day, yet that damned barrier remained in place, and to be honest he was growing sick of Kagome. She never took part, except for when he threatened Rin, and she was almost as stubborn as that damn Hanyou she travelled with.

No matter what pain he inflicted upon Kagome she continued to remain strong, using all of her power to keep Rin safe, and this was greatly displeasing Naraku, he craved the young girl's blood, and desired to shatter the child that the Western Lord protected ever so closely.

However that fucking women kept getting in the way… As he sat there in a secluded room with Kanna, a wonderfully wicked idea came to his mind, and he stood swiftly leaving to room heading off to find the tools to help him with his scheme.

Kanna's emotionless eyes watched as Naraku walked from the room, a small feeling of pity entering her heart as she thought of the pain the Miko had been suffering through. She then watched as her sister entered the room, and quickly informed the wind witch of the situation. Kagura shook her head in sorrow before kneeling next to her sister and praying for the safety of the Miko and child held prisoner within the house.

Kagome winced as she sat up in bed; she had long given up using her powers to aid her body in its healing process. Instead she focused her powers on protecting Rin, and purifying her womb, after every mind shattering ordeal. She spent every Naraku free moment talking to Rin and reassuring her that everything would be all right; despite how much she knew she was lying through her teeth.

Kagome was beginning to lose hope in InuYasha saving her, and she had this ever livid fear that her friends were either in danger or already dead; however she gave Rin the impression that she was okay. After all Kagome had much practice feigning happiness. She had only been doing it for the past two years around her friends in the InuTachi.

Though she may have seemed happy to Sango, Miroku, and Shippou, Kagome was slowly dying inside. Every rejection from InuYasha tore another piece off her heart, and forced her to lose hope in ever finding love. Every insult he hurled, every cold shoulder, they slowly took away the young girls happiness, and slowly Kagome gave up on happiness.

Sure she had Sango and the others helping her, but she didn't want to burden them, their lives were complicated enough without having to worry about an annoying young girl from the future.

The only thing that kept Kagome strong was her determination to protect those weaker then herself, like Shippou in battles, or when InuYasha was being rude, than there was Rin, a young girl that she loved like a little sister or maybe even a daughter, but no matter what Kagome had to protect them, because they couldn't protect themselves.

A malevolent presence at the door brought Kagome out of her train of thought as Naraku entered the room. Almost instantly a barrier surrounded the sleeping Rin as Kagome sat up in her bed and glared at Naraku. Her eyes widened as she inspected him, in his hands he held two items, both of them equally dangerous.

In his left had was a 12 inch blade with serrated edges, and in his right hand there was a cat of nine tails whip, complete with glass shards imbedded into the leather straps. Kagome could not help as she glanced at the weapons apprehensively, then up at Naraku who had an extremely evil smirk on his face. And at that exact moment Kagome became terrified, because she knew that she would not be able to protect Rin any more, not with what she thought he was planning.

Naraku approached Kagome quickly, and she was surprised when she found herself being released from her chains; however she freaked out when he began to pick her up in his arms. In one fluid motion Kagome swung out and punched Naraku right in the face, her tiny fist barely making an impact on the spider hanyou.

Naraku narrowed his eyes and tossed Kagome on the ground, her arms instantly flying out to break her fall, her wrists shattering as she hit the cold hard floor.

She flinched as Naraku leaned over her body, only to glare in anger as he fixed new chains onto her limbs. Her wrists aching as he purposefully grasped them roughly in his hands. He then forcefully placed Kagome in a position where her back was facing him.

He then placed the knife in a sheathe, and unfurled the whip. A strangled gasp left Kagome's breast as the whip struck her back, Naraku's voice jeering, "So Kagome' where's your precious InuYasha now, probably getting on with his life now that he's rid of a useless wench like you." the glass shards tearing up her creamy flesh as if it were cheap silk, and his words tearing into her soul. Naraku pulled back the whip and struck her once again, a grin spreading across his face as she screamed in pain." I'm pretty sure he and that pathetic group of yours are overjoyed to be rid of a nuisance like you, the pathetic Miko who brought the jewel back into my time, and brought further pain to all of their lives. Have you ever thought about your thoughtless actions, had you not returned the young Kitsune's family would still be alive, the Monk would have defeated a much weaker me, and he would have been finally free from his families curse."

"The demon exterminator village would never have been attacked and her brother would not have suffered so. And your friend the wolf prince would not have died protecting the shards in his legs. Even Kagura and Kanna would still be alive; their lives never affected by a worthless half-blood such as I used to be before you returned the Shikon to our time. InuYasha would have remained bound to that tree, yet his heart would not have been torn by some useless, pathetic, worthless, human reincarnation, that continuously reminds him of the women he loved, and was betrayed by." Naraku taunted as he continued to whip, his words doing more damage to the Miko then the whip ever could.

Because Kagome knew that everything that everything he was saying was true. She could not help but weep as everything he said sank in, it was true all of it, Naraku may have been the original cause of a few of her friends pain; however she had been the reason why their pain was furthered. It was her fault…

Naraku continued to whip Kagome's back until there was pool of blood and chunks of flesh at her feet, and the only sounds escaping Kagome were strangled sobs as she leaned her forehead against the wall, her soul and morale finally shattering.

Naraku continued to smile as he dropped the whip and withdrew the knife. He then walked slowly towards Kagome, allowing his miasma to spread forth and infect her steadily bleeding wounds. Reaching forward he roughly sliced his blade through her flesh from her shoulder blade to her elbow, allowing her blood to flow down her arm, to where it joined the steadily growing pool.

He continued to slice up her body, a malicious chuckle escaping his lips as he watched her powers begin to attempt to heal her body, only to be met by his overpowering miasma.

After applying a few more deep malicious cuts to her chest and stomach he smirked evilly as he brought his lips down to Kagome's ear saying,"I'd like to see you continue protect the child, while your corpse grows cold on the floor." He then ran his blade across her throat, he then turned around and grinned as he watched the barrier fall around Rin, Kagome's power beginning to focus on keeping the dying Miko alive.

He then sheathed the knife once again as he began to stalk towards the horror stricken child who sat on her bed gazing at her dying protector. Who was struggling to breathe through the blood and the pain.


Kagome suddenly froze, a smile crossing her face as an explosion tore through the room, one of the walls caving in as a green whip tore through it in fury.

Naraku cursed in fury, Sesshomaru had come for too early, he should not have been able track him so easily. Naraku turned to attack Rin only to meet a shimmering blue barrier in fury. He then turned to Sesshomaru and snarled, his body shifting as his tentacles began to appear.

Sesshomaru merely narrowed his eyes as he withdrew Tokijin and calmly said, "Dragon Strike." An eerie blue aura surrounding him as lightning struck out at Naraku. Naraku shouted in fury as the attack struck him, the lightning tearing through his muscles and ligaments. He glanced up, only to jump away in fear as Tokijin struck where he had been standing just seconds before.

Naraku quickly covered the area in miasma, only to watch in terror as Sesshomaru continued to attack him, the miasma having no effect on the DiaYoukai. Naraku suppressed as snarl as he entered his energy ball form and fled, curses flowing throughout his mind towards the damn Inu-Youkai that had foiled his plans.

A calming wind quickly spread through the room, weakening the miasma, Sesshomaru's attention was immediately turned to Rin whose attention seemed to be frozen in fear on one section of the room.

As Sesshomaru turned his attention to where Rin's attention was a strong smell of blood offended his senses as his eyes fell upon Kagome's still form.


Hate me all you want I'm ending it here, flame all you want, but I like how this chapter turned out. The more reviews I receive the more I will be determined to update sooner!

Milana Despana