Hi, guys!
Okay, so normally I hate having these chapters as an author's note, but MAYBE it'll get your attention, hopefully.
First. I'm getting a lot of mixed feelings from you guys. AHH D: I'll start with Ash and Felix. Some of you guys said that they sound older than they are. However, keep in mind that the original flock (max, fang, ect) all sound older than they are, for two reasons. First because they don't know their EXACT age, so they may possibly be older than they are. Second, because didn't one of the books (SOF, I think) say that the flock had amazing vocabulary?
But this is no excuse for me, so please don't take it like that. So if you think they sound too old, I'll change that. Ideas on that, if you will? Thanks!
Second issue…romance. I'm trying to tone it down, and it WILL happen because something dramatic is going to happen in the next chapter…dun dun dunnnnnnnnnn. So, if it's too much, let me know, because being a girl without romance in her own life, I must subconsciously put it on my story. Hahahaha…
Third, updates! I try to write at LEAST one page a day, and I noticed my updates are about one to two times a week. I can update every two days, but I'd have to have about 1,000 word chapters. My last current three chapters were 3,000-4,000 words, so really, it's up to you.
Forth, Andrew. I'm going to try to put him in a bit more, but you guys were right about the whole "him being too young to be a main character" thing. So, thanks for you're help there, but for whoever submitted him, don't worry, he will still be in the story and I'll try to mention him at least a few more times per chapter.
And ONCE AGAIN, I am totally in love with your characters, and thanks so much for your kind and helpful reviews, I appreciate them a lot.