I'm back on this very sunny, Australian Tuesday to present to you the next chapter of "The Flcok: auditions". I hope you are enjoying it so far!
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FangPOV
It seemed like hours before a tall man wearing a white labe coat and dark-rimmed, square glasses entered the waiting room. He held a clipbourd and started to read of it.
"Er, Miss Maximum Ride?" he lifted his head and all of us rose. Slightly confused, "any relatives?"
We all sat down except for Valencia and me. She turned to me, traces of a slight smile on her lips.
"It's ok, Fang," she said, "I've got it from her," I hesitated sitting down as she walked out the room with the docter.
ValenciaPOV
I was so scared. My two daughters, Ella and Max, meant the world to me. And if I lost either of them, my life would not be the same. The main reason I was holding myself together was for Fang. Fang, I thought, he cares so much for Max. He truly does love her. I could not prove that, but I could tell the connection between the two. I had promised not to say anything, but I think Fang knows that I understand. At least, I hoped so.
The docter guided me to the hallway. He stopped to the side out of the way of others to talk with me.
"She's ok, right?" I asked nervously.
He smiled, "she survived our treatment. She had an allergic reaction to a substance we cannot name at this moment of time. She is very, very lucky, Miss Martinez," I released the breathe I did not realize I was holding, "could you and those with Max in the past 24 hours please fill out this form to explain Max's ctons that ould have caused this type of problem to occur? It could help for future refernces," he handed me a single paged form from his clipboard.
I nodded, "oh, yes. And docter..." I said, he rose his head to me, looking me straight in the eye, "... thank-you,"
He smiled, "no problem, ma'am,"
He started to turn away before I asked, "when can we see her?"
He looked back, "one person for the moment. It could load stress," I nodded and he walked away.
FangPOV
The 15 minutes that Valencia was gone could have been the most stressful expierience of my life so far. I could feel my heart beating in my chest. My breath come harsh and uneven. It got worse when she entered the room. I sprund to my feet, rushing towards her.
"Tell me she's ok," I ordered the women.
She simply smiled and joy spread through my blood, the former cold feeling turning warm into one warm. I smiled widely, laughing. "She's ok," I whispered. I sat down, head in my hands. I cheered aswell as the others in the room.
"Thank, God!" yelled Nudge.
"I knew it, man!" said Iggy, high-fiving Will. I turned to Valencia, "what happened?"
"She had an allergic reaction. We need to fill in this form. Who has she been with in the past day that isn't here?"
Nudge replied, "only Angel and Sam, who she went to that sushi place with last night. I sent Angel a text earlier but she didn't reply at all,"
"Do you know where they are?" asked Valencia.
Will shook his head, "no idea,"
What Nudge and Will told me at the cafe this morning comes to my mind. I realize thats what they are thinking aswell.
"Whereever they are..." I said to everyone, "... they're together,"
We sent Dylan and Sarah out to look for the missing pair while the rest of us did what we had been doing since this morning: waiting.
Max's mother explained that only one person could visit her at the moment. I automatically assumed she would visit her, but she shocked me asking me to go.
"What, me?" I said, slightly stunned. She smiled, nodding. I mirrored her smile, "Thank you," I murmured.
I rose to my feet and found myself walking in the direction of the room Max was in.
After passing several doors I stopped at the one. I turned the handle, and the door swung open soundlessly.
I saw Max under the bed sheets, sleeping, but full of life. I walked slowly up to her, sitting myself down on the side of her bed.
"Thank, God," I murmured. I decided to lay next to her, stroking her hair and whispering meaningless things to her.
She started to stir. She rolled onto her side, coming closer, eye still closed, and snuggling into my chest. She fell back asleep, sighing and moaning.
I found myself saying quietly to my sleeping beauty, "I love you, Maximum Ride,"
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You didn't think I'd make Max die, did you? Hah! What do you take me for?
