Hey Guys! Sorry about the wait! You can shoot me if you want, i've just been really stressed out and under the weather, and i had a huge fight with my family, i even made a book that i'm still writing about why my dads and asshole.

I'll warn you about the language in this chapter. It's a bit coarse, but it's nothing worse than what most of us use, so you'll live!

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They had all done their best to keep Susan happy, and it had worked for nearly 2 weeks.

Lucy had made the dufflepuds visible, Eustace was no longer a dragon and they had found one of the lords on Goldwater Island.

Caspian's POV

I was sitting next to her, stroking the radiant beauty's soft but strong hands. There were small calluses on her fingertips, from her bow, and her fingernails were smooth and round, with a kind of paint colouring them. She was still pale and still cold, but she was still smiling, her ruby red lips curled upwards. Oh, how I would love to caress those full lips with my own, ravish her, fe- "LAND AHOY" I heard someone shout, and my heart sped up. It could be Ramandu's island… She might be woken up! I rushed up to the deck, completely forgetting about keeping her happy.

"My king," said Drinian, bowing excitedly, "we have spotted what Her Majesty Queen Lucy believes to be Ramandu's Island! It appears to be about 1 day away!" he rushed off to tell the oarsmen to row more, but he didn't get too far before the ship jolted viciously , causing almost everyone to fall over. As I got up, I looked around wildly, and all I could think about was Susan, but the weather was still perfect, except for a big, green thing that was dominating the sky.

"Sea Serpent!" Screamed Lucy, and she hid behind the wheel, ducking down to get her dagger. The serpent was plunging its huge, brutish head into Susan's cabin, every time getting a bit closer to Her. I saw red. I heard a battle cry, and the world around me was a blur, but I felt like I was rooted to the spot. I wasn't going to make it. She would die. That. Serpent. Would. Eat. Her. It turned its evil head towards me and I could almost see it sneer before it rammed its head down again. Oh no. this was it. I was going to lose her. Forever.

I could feel my knees buckle, felt my head hit the floor, but all I could see was the wood smash into pieces above the cabin, saw the rakish head enter her resting place, watched as the head looked around. The last thing I saw was a figure jump over me and the serpent's scaly head fall to the ground, blood pouring everywhere.

Edmunds POV

"Sea Serpent!" I heard Lu cry, and saw her dive behind the wheel. Good. She was safe.

The crew was frantically attacking the serpent, but they weren't doing any good. A loud bellow blasted my ears, and a form dashed past me. I knew it was Caspian when he hit the ground once the serpent lunged one last time. He couldn't save her. I HAD to. I felt my legs pump, my arms reach for my swords. I jumped over Caspian and slashed wildly at that Bastard serpent's neck. That shithead was trying to get my sister. I was going to fucking kill him if it was the last thing I did. I felt my sword hit something, and I pushed the blade with more potency. If the blood running down my arm was any indication, I had just decapitated that mongrel. If I were to die now, I'd be dying a happy man. I had saved my sister.

Lucy's POV

I saw the head fall to the floor. Thank God. Ed was alright. Thank God. Susan was alright. Caspian was blacked out on the floor. If Edmund hadn't dashed out like that, su'd be dead. I hate myself, just hiding like that. I felt hatred and fury aimed at myself boil up inside of me. "I COULD"VE SAVED HER.I SHOULD"VE SAVED HER! HOW COULD I NOT SAVE HER! I COULD"VE THROWN MY DAGGER AT THAT FUCKING SERPENT! BUT I DIDN"T! SHE COULD"VE BEEN DEAD BECAUSE OF ME!" I noticed the crew staring at me, and realised I had been screaming that out loud and throwing myself around.

I noticed Edmund had disappeared, and I had a hunch that he was down with Susan, so I sat and gave Caspian a drop of Fire flower juice, then trudged down to Susan, only to be joined by Caspian seconds later. We sat for a while, staring at Susan, but the hush became too much to bare. "I hate myself! She could've died because of me!" I blustered, whilst Ed and Cas stared irately at their own hands.

Susan's POV

I was walking around a strangely familiar and silent wood. It was very peaceful, not a breath of wind or a rustle of a leaf. There were shallow pools everywhere. Then, it clicked. I was in the wood between the worlds. I could see a figure ahead and I knew it was Aslan. I walked up to him silently and sat down next to him. "My Child," rumbled his deep, soothing voice. "I suppose you are wondering why you are here, especially after I told you that you would never return." It was not a question.

"Aslan, I know that I am dead on Earth, but why am I still unconscious in Narnia? I have been given Lucy's cordial, have I not?" "you have, my child, but it is not your time to wake up. That time will come very soon. Why did you try to forget me, Child?" I felt my eyes widen, but I wasn't surprised that he knew. I could sense he wasn't angry, so I thought I might as well tell him. "Oh, Aslan. I hate myself for it! It was too much for me to bear! Leaving Narnia hurt sooo much! Every time, I'd become attached to something, and my heart would shatter when we left. I don't belong in End\gland. I feel so lonely and misunderstood there. My heart wasn't there, even before we came to Narnia. When we came here the first time, I was in love with everything and everyone in Narnia was important, and I could do well. Then I became plain old boring Susan Pevensie, who nobody knew, except for boys who only saw the outside."

"Then when we came back, I was in the country I loved, where people loved me! I could fight for my country! And I fell in love with Caspian and my home, and when we left, and you said we couldn't come back, my heart shattered, my very being screamed! You took my home, the only place I belong off me, and it hurt too much to remember, so I tried to forget instead."

I had finished dispensing my feelings, so I sat in silence. Aslan looked at me with his big, golden eyes and I knew I could never forget. He stood up and roared, a musical roar that shook the whole wood. He turned hi head back to me and spoke. "Susan, Do you trust me?"

I felt myself nodding, and I saw him flex his muscular golden legs. "Climb on my back, we have far to go before you can wake up." I climbed on his back and he charged, dodging trees that were coming towards us faster than I could see. We were riding for nearly 2 hours, so it seemed, when we finally came to a halt on the very edge of a cliff face.

I could feel a tug pulling me somewhere, and I knew it was nearly time, so I bade Aslan farewell and followed the tug. It led me over the cliff, and I shut my eyes, bracing myself for impact.

I shot up, and nearly collided with the face of an old man.

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excuse the crap at the start- writing jargon and gibberish helps me let off steam and think.

X- mel