Dawn Reads: My Dumped Warrior Stories

by alizarinn

Title says all. Follow me on a journey of re-reading my old Warriors writing as I point out mistakes and weird things that just shouldn't exist in a story. Swearing involved. Most of these stories are very short. My thoughts are written in bold.

2. Aspen Claws p2

WARNING! This chapter was never continued and is incredibly short. No, I didn't have the nerve to make a 200 word chapter, even in 2016.

Aspen Claws: Chapter 1

Aspen dashed through the forest as she chased a rabbit through the undergrowth. She leaped and pushed her paws down onto the creamy-brown creature's back, ignoring its kit-like squeal. Kit like? Really? Let it go. She killed it with one blow and settled down to eat it. Lazy catch amirite

It had been two moons since her kits had been murdered, and Aspen still had a plan to avenge them. get over it! Just have more kits with another cat! She had learnt from traveling cats thanks, random cats! Always useful! that there was a massive group of rogue cats, called the Legion. The cats who murdered her kittens were apart of it. what are the chances?

She had planned to join the Clans of cats nearby to strengthen herself, because apparently they allow loners to join them at this time is it CascadeClan from River's Shadow? They've added five loners just in a moon. They were excellent fighters, too. Then, she would join the Legion.

She will attempt to become a servant to the Leader, not by forcefully killing other cats, that part got completely ignored lmao but by making cats think she was weak and timid. She wouldn't be the helpless cat she was when she watched her kits being killed anymore, she was strong, silent and ready to avenge her children. Insanity overload.

Oh, Shadow. Are you working in the Legion now? Are you still my little daughter I always knew? Aspen thought. She may be turning her heart into stone, but she will always love her kits. what She shook herself and she dug into the rabbit.

Want the plot?

- Aspen goes to the Clans for 10-20 chapters

- She joins the Legion and finds out Night is their leader

- She pretends to be shy and jumpy so no cat will suspect her mercilessly killing cats

- She kills cats

- Aspen confronts Night and asks why he killed their kits

- Talking happens and Aspen reveals that she murdered his cats

- Aspen kills Night and becomes leader for like 5 chapters

- The cats of the Legion find out she murdered Night and exile her

- Aspen lives as an elder with her kit, Shadow, in BreezeClan.

I just found out there's a mini book based on this story, and it's in Night's pov. Oh God no.