Hey everybody! Hope you're ready for yet more Teen Titanic amazingness, because here's the newest chapter! In this chapter, the battle resumes with the long lost Wildfire and the Thanagarian army eagerly taking part in the fray. But just how will this new development affect the battle's outcome now that the Entities are still out and about in possession of Wildfire's sisters? Prepare to find out in this epic new chapter! Here's to hoping you read, review, and enjoy!
A/N: But first, I'll just remind you that, with the exception of the Entities and their respective worshipper races, I do not own Teen Titans or anything else DC-based. Believe me, if I DID own Teen Titans, or DC itself, there would be a LOT of things that I'd change for the better (honestly, it seems these days as if every time Geoff Johns leaves, somebody else at DC (usually Dan Didio, amongst others) manages to screw everything up all over again!). But this isn't the time or place to rant about the current state of DC comics. This is a time and place to enjoy my fantastic Teen Titans fanfiction! So let's get right to that! ^_^
Chapter 16:
Sibling Warfare
Prince Wildfire of Tamaran narrowed his eyes as he watched from his position in front of the Thanagarian fleet. "It would appear I have arrived just in time." He came to a stop, the Thanagarians halting their own ships behind him in response.
"The battle has well and truly begun," he shouted. "My people and our mutual sworn enemies have joined and added their power to this mixture together! But now, let us join in alongside them! Let us complete the alliance our kin shared the last time this happened!" He pointed his finger at the Umbrosian fleet. "ATTACK!"
With a guttural yell, the Thanagarians all began firing their blasters at the Umbrosians. The shadowy beings had no time to react before they found themselves once again being massacred by a massive onslaught of blaster fire.
The Gordanians and Tamaraneans needed no further prompting, and they added their own ships' blaster fire to the onslaught alongside the Thanagarians. The Phosphorians also resumed their own attacks against the Umbrosians. As much as they had the feeling that the battle would soon forcibly come to an end, they figured they might as well make the most out of what time they had left to keep fighting their hated enemies before their conflict was forcibly ended and postponed yet again.
The Tamaranean who'd led the Thanagarians to the battle took one look at the two Entities and their vessels and flew towards them, his fists and eyes glowing green.
"Should we help him?" Beast Boy asked.
Robin narrowed his eyes as he gazed at the lone Tamaranean boy heading towards the two Entities. "Something tells me that he'll be able to handle himself just fine."
. . . . .
Wildfire came to a stop inches away from his sisters. He narrowed his eyes at the increasingly solid looking auras around them. Then he sighed, and hung his head. "Koriand'r," he stated. "Komand'r. It has been so long." He looked up. "I'm sure you and Galfore were wondering where I was for the last five years. But I am back now, and I know you're in there somewhere with those Entities possessing you. As your brother, I ask you to come back."
Starfire and Blackfire briefly felt shocked from their positions in the mental backseats. Then they found themselves feeling happy that it was indeed their brother floating before them. In that moment, they both wanted nothing more than to fly over and hug their little brother, cry, and ask where he'd been. The two Entities, however, had other ideas, and they were the ones in control.
"LEAVE US BE LITTLE ONE," said the Prime Entity. "THIS IS A MATTER STRICTLY BETWEEN THE TWO OF US, AND IT WILL END BADLY FOR YOUR ELDEST SISTER. STAY OUT OF THIS AND LET US HANDLE OUR BUSINESS OURSELVES!"
"YOUR SISTERS ARE GONE," the Black Entity snapped. "MY ENEMY AND I ARE ONLY MINUTES AWAY FROM ASSUMING FULL PHYSICAL FORM OUTSIDE OUR DOMAINS! ONCE THAT IS DONE, YOUR SISTERS' BODIES SHALL BE CAST ASIDE AS DROOLING VEGETABLES AS WE ARE RELEASED! BEGONE CHILD! LET YOUR ELDERS HANDLE THEIR OWN BUSINESS!"
Wildfire narrowed his eyes, clenched his fists, and shook his head. "No." He pointed at the two auras encasing his sisters. "Sorry, but I'm not going anywhere."
The Entities snarled. "FINE THEN," the Black Entity roared. "IF THIS IS HOW YOU'RE GOING TO BE, I'LL MAKE YOU GO AWAY!" It reared back and then thrusted its head forward, firing a blast of shadowy fire from its mouth at the Tamaranean prince. The Prime Entity had no time to react, and Wildfire was engulfed in the Black Entity's blast.
"RYAND'R!" Galfore yelled, his eyes widened in horror and his hand uselessly extended in Wildfire's direction as he helplessly watched the boy's apparent death. The other Tamaraneans similarly watched in horror alongside the stunned Gordanians and titans, smug Umbrosians, and resigned Phosphorians as the Black Entity seemed to destroy Wildfire. Starfire and Blackfire similarly felt horror, despair, and rage as they helplessly watched from their mental backseats. Only the Thanagarians seemed to be unperturbed by the matter, and this was enough for the Prime Entity to raise its 'eyebrow' in suspicion.
Sure enough, when the Black Entity finally ended its attack, Wildfire was revealed to still be floating exactly where he'd been, completely unharmed.
The eyes of all the other prior combatants widened, and the Thanagarians nodded their heads as if not surprised at all. The most stunned of all, however, were the two Entities and their respective vessels.
"IMPOSSIBLE!" the Black Entity screamed.
Wildfire shook his head, placed his hand against the side of his neck, and gave himself a crick. "Like I said, I'm not going anywhere."
"YOU CERTAINLY AREN'T GOING TO BE DESTROYED," said the Prime Entity. "NONETHELESS, I WILL NOT ALLOW YOU TO INTERFERE THE WAY YOUR ANCESTER DID ALL THOSE CENTURIES AGO! BEGONE!"
It fired a beam of light from its beak at the Tamaranean prince, intending to knock him backwards and as far away from it and its enemy as possible. This time, Wildfire didn't even allow himself to be fully engulfed by the attack. Instead, he lifted his hand and blocked it entirely with his right palm. Eventually, the Prime Entity shut off its attack out of sheer frustration. "NO FAIR!"
Wildfire shook his head, his eyes now closed. "Oh but it is fair. After all." He opened his now suddenly solid yellow eyes. "The dawn is neither 100% darkness nor 100% light."
The eyes of the two Entities, plus those of all the Umbrosians and Phosphorians, widened in stunned shock and horror upon sight of this detail. "A wielder of the dawn," the soldiers all whispered in unison.
Wildfire nodded his head. "I shall only ask you this once. Release my sisters, take your armies, and return from whence you came willingly. Refuse, and I will have no choice but to force you into doing so."
The Black Entity snarled. "NEVER! I'VE WAITED TOO LONG FOR THIS MOMENT! I'M NOT GONNA TURN AROUND AND RUN AWAY WITH MY TAIL BETWEEN MY LEGS! ESPECIALLY NOT ON THE SAY SO OF A WEAKLING LIKE YOURSELF! I DARE YOU TO TRY TO MAKE ME!"
"DON'T ENCOURAGE HIM YOU FOOL!" the Prime Entity roared.
"Wish granted."
The solid yellow light in Wildfire's eyes spread into the aura of green flames encasing his body, turning it bright yellow as well. He raised his hands as star shaped bursts of energy began to charge on them. Upon finishing his charging for the attack, he fired beams of yellow energy from his hands at the two aura's heads.
The two Entities howled in pain as Wildfire's beams crashed into the sides of their heads. They shook their heads to regain their bearings, turned to face Wildfire, and roared in fury.
The council members of their respective worshippers were similarly enraged.
"Destroy him!" yelled Nolfavrel. "He has struck the almighty himself!"
"Attack!" yelled the head councilman of Phosphoria. "His attack on the almighty shall not go unanswered!"
Both council ships fired a merciless storm of blaster fire in Wildfire's direction. Without even looking, Wildfire snapped his fingers, and a forcefield of yellow light emerged behind him that the blasts harmlessly slammed into. The two councils halted their fire, uncertain now of how to proceed.
Wildfire turned his head, eyes now blazing. He shut off the force field, drew back his right had and then swiped it forward, sending a small wave of shadowy energy flying at the Phosphorian council's ship. The shadowy attack slammed into the giant lightning bolt-shaped ship, sending it spinning around backwards away from the Entities.
Twelve of the Umbrosian council members, plus the pilots and underlings aboard the Umbrosian council's ship, sniggered and chuckled at the sight. "About time they got knocked from their high horse," the 12 council members thought to themselves.
Nolfavrel, however, was still paying attention to Wildfire' and his red eyes widened in horror as he saw what the young Tamaranean prince was about to do next. "LOOK OUT! HE'S ABOUT TO . . .!"
With an incoherent snarl of rage, Wildfire fired a giant beam of white light straight at the Umbrosian council's ship. The beam plowed straight through the front of the ship and came to a stop at the center, at which point it struck the main core and caused the ship to explode in an impossibly large burst of fire and light, killing all the Umbrosians on board.
Wildfire returned his attention to the two Entities just in time to see them fighting each other once more. He rolled his eyes. "Typical. Even when possessed, my sisters end up in petty scuffles with each other." He flew back in their direction.
. . . . .
The Black Entity spat out orb after orb of shadowy energy, hissing and snarling as it tried as hard as it could to gun down its sworn enemy. The Prime Entity similarly hissed and squawked in rage as it spat out its own salvo of orbs of white light towards its hated rival.
A blast of yellow energy slammed into the side of the Black Entity's head, and it howled in rage before turning its head to face Wildfire. The Prime Entity, refusing to let itself get distracted too easily, continued spitting out orbs of light at the distracted Black Entity. The Black Entity hissed and wheezed as it shook itself side to side in an effort to shake off the discomfort from getting hit by the multiple bursts of light.
The Prime Entity shrieked in surprise when it was suddenly grabbed by the crest and dragged backwards off balance. Its tail smacked into the Black Entity's jaw, sending the shadowy deity careening backwards.
The Prime Entity reached towards its crest with its tail, wrapped it around Wildfire, and then hurled him away. The Tamaranean prince came to a stop in the center of where the two Entities had earlier been battling. At the sound of roaring and hissing, his eyes widened as he realized that the two entities were charging from opposite directions straight towards him. He dove out of the way, and the two Entities crashed into each other headfirst.
The Entities shook their heads, snarling irritably. Then they roared down at Wildfire and fired their breath attacks in his direction in the form of concentrated beams. Wildfire flew as fast he could to dodge the blasts, only to inadvertently cause the Black Entity to get itself hit by the Prime Entity's breath in its efforts to lean forward to successfully blast him. This caused the Black Entity to howl in rage and pain before it then turned its attention to its enemy and blasted it on the side of its head. The Prime Entity shrieked in fury and turned its own blast away from Wildfire and into its enemy's face.
Then the Entities began wildly whipping their breath attacks around in all directions in furious efforts to kill each other, inadvertently massacring sizable numbers of each other's native troops and forcing the titans, Tamaraneans, Gordanians, and Thanagarians to hurriedly swoop their ships out of the way to avoid getting reduced to space ash. So focused were the Entities on trying to kill each other that they again failed to notice Wildfire flying back towards them once more.
Once he'd come to a stop directly above the dueling Entities, he sent a storm of golden star bolts raining down on them. They roared in shock at the unexpected attack, growled upwards at him with hate in their eyes, and fired their breath attacks at him. Wildfire dodged, making a point to blast the Prime Entity in the back with his eye beams as he dove downwards from behind it.
The Prime Entity shrieked, turned its head, and snapped its beak in Wildfire's direction. Wildfire dodged, and the Entity's beak clenched shut around empty space. It had just enough time to narrow its eyes and warble angrily at Wildfire before it was then blasted on the back of its head by the Black Entity's breath attack. Quick as a viper, the Prime Entity turned its head and lunged at its enemy, its beak snapping shut around the Black Entity's neck. The Black Entity howled, and uselessly snapped its teeth as it tried to turn its head around to bite at its enemy's own neck.
The Black Entity finally realized its efforts were not working, and it stabbed the Prime Entity in the back with its tail, causing its enemy to let go. The Prime Entity shrieked in pain and flew away.
The two Entities snarled at each other, and coated themselves in crackling auras of energy, charging attacks in the process. Wildfire noticed this, and flew towards them just in time for them to unleash their attacks. Giant shockwaves of shadows and light erupted from around the two Entities, knocking Wildfire and all the ships and soldiers backwards.
When the lingering energy from the shockwaves finally faded away, the two Entities were revealed to have made immense progress in their transition to full corporeality. In fact, their images now appeared so solid looking that a distinctively shaped glowing outline in their respective chests were all that could now be seen of the Tamaranean sisters they were possessing.
Wildfire's eyes widened upon catching sight of this. The titans, Tamaraneans, and Gordanians were similarly surprised by this.
"This doesn't look good," said Beast Boy.
The Black Entity grinned, its red eyes agleam. "YES! YES! THIS IS WHAT I LIKE!"
The Prime Entity nodded, similarly in approval of how close it was to rising above its need to have a vessel. "I WILL ADMIT, I AM LIKING THIS NEW DEVELOPMENT." It looked directly at its enemy, its blue eyes narrowed at the smug look on its face. "ONCE WE HAVE FULLY BECOME TRULY CORPOREAL AND CAST ADIDE OUR VESSELS, IT WILL BE ALL THE EASIER FOR ME TO KILL YOU!"
"HA! I'D LOVE TO SEE YOU TRY!" The Black Entity chuckled, and directed its gaze at the glowing red outline of Blackfire within its body. "SOON WE WILL BE ABOVE OUR LONGSTANDING NEED TO HAVE A VESSEL IN ORDER TO EXIST OUTSIDE OUR DOMAINS! AND WE HAVE THIS PAIR OF SISTERS DESCENDED FROM OUR PREVIOUS HOSTS TO THANK FOR IT! ONCE I HAVE KILLED YOU AND DEVOURED THE MINDLESS VEGETABLE THAT IS LEFT OF YOUR HOST, I SHALL RESTORE MY OWN HOST'S MIND AND LEAVE HER TO RULE THE VEGA SYSTEM AS MY FOLLOWERS PROMISED WHILE I CAST THE REST OF THE UNIVERSE INTO MY DARKNESS!"
"I'M AFRAID IT WILL BE THE OTHER WAY AROUND, MONSTER!"
"OH YEAH? PROVE IT!"
"WITH PLEASURE!"
"Not if I have anything to say about it!"
The Entities looked in the direction Wildfire's voice had come from, eyes narrowed in annoyance.
"YOU JUST DON'T KNOW WHEN TO GIVE UP, DO YOU?"
Wildfire narrowed his own eyes at the Black Entity. "You could say that."
The Prime Entity raised its eyebrow. "WELL YOU'D BE WISE TO LEAVE, WHILE YOU STILL CAN. WE ARE FAR ENOUGH ALONG IN OUR ASSENSCION THAT IT WOULD TAKE A MIRACLE FOR IT TO BE STOPPED WITHOUT KILLING YOUR SISTERS. FURTHERMORE, I CAN TELL FROM YOUR AURA THAT YOUR CURRENT CONTROL OVER THE POWER OF THE DAWN WILL NOT LAST TOO MUCH LONGER. AND ONCE THOSE POWERS HAVE LEFT YOU, YOU WILL NO LONGER HAVE ANY PROTECTION FROM GETTING BLASTED TO DUST BY OUR ATTACKS. SO GET OUT OF HERE WHILE YOU STILL CAN, AND TAKE YOUR ARMY WITH YOU."
Wildfire snarled, and flew to directly between the two Entities. "Like I told you. I'm not going anywhere. Especially not without my sisters."
The Black Entity raised its eyebrow. "WELL IF YOU'RE GOING TO CONTINUE BEING DIFFICULT, THEN I SUPPOSE I'LL JUST HAVE TO KEEP BLASTING AT YOU UNTIL YOUR CONTROL OF THE DAWN POWER FINALLY LEAVES YOU!" It opened its mouth, its breath attack charging up.
The Prime Entity sighed. "IF YOU WISH TO STAY, THEN I SUPPOSE I'LL PUT YOU OUT OF YOUR MISERY." It opened its beak, its own breath attack charging up.
Wildfire remained where he was, a determined look on his face despite his gradually fading dawn power, and he extended his hands and arms sideways, his palms directly facing the two Entities.
As this happened, all the soldiers watched in a mixture of intrigue and uncertainty. The titans, Tamaraneans, Gordanians, and Thanagarians were all very concerned and uncertain as to whether they should try to intervene on Wildfire's behalf. The still living Umbrosians and Phosphorians, on the other hand, were all very intrigued and curious as to just what this Tamaranean prince planned to do against their respective gods. Blackfire and Starfire, meanwhile, could only watch helplessly from their mental backseats.
"Ryand'r," Starfire thought to herself. "What are you doing? Get out of here!"
"Brother," Blackfire thought to herself. "Don't do this. For X'hal's sake, don't do this. I already have to lose my sister. I don't want to lose you to."
Wildfire tensed up, gritting his teeth as the charging time neared its end for the Entities' breath attacks. The Prime Entity released its breath attack first, the resulting beam of white light slamming against Wildfire's right palm. The Black Entity fired its own breath seconds later, the similarly massive burst of shadowy energy crashing against Wildfire's left palm.
Wildfire winced, and briefly faltered, as the two breath attacks pounded against his palms. It took all his willpower not to black out as he concentrated on using his gradually waning dawn powers to absorb the two blasts. The two Entities kept blasting away, trying desperately to overwhelm the boy and force his dawn powers to hurry up in their departure.
The onlookers' hearts leapt into their mouths when they saw Wildfire seem to become engulfed in tendrils of black and white lightning, and he let out an inhuman scream. The Entities, thinking themselves to be making progress in finally eliminating him, doubled the power of their blasts.
"FINALLY," the Black Entity thought to itself. "THE NUISANCE SHALL DIE!"
The black and white lightning tendrils began to have an effect on Wildfire's golden yellow aura, turning it a dark red with streaks of black and causing it to expand in size. As it grew bigger and bigger, the streaks of black also increased to the point that they almost completely overtook the red.
It wasn't until the aura had expanded into the size and shape of a planet that the two Entities finally shut off their breath attacks. However, as indicated by their now widened and horrified eyes, it was clear that their breath attacks' cessation had nothing to do with feeling triumphant. And as the various onlookers themselves took a close look at the state of Wildfire's aura, they too came to realize just why the two Entities were now likely looking so wary.
"Your excellency," said one of the Tamaranean Royal starship's pilots. "The prince's aura; it looks just like. . ."
"An eclipse," Galfore finished, his green eyes widened in shock and realization.
Greerak similarly was stunned speechless as he watched from his own specially reserved starship. "By Zog," he hissed in awe.
Even the titans were in awe as they watched the eclipse-like form that Wildfire's aura had taken. In fact, the only groups who weren't stunned by this development were the Thanagarians, Umbrosians, and Phosphorians. But while the Thanagarians merely nodded their heads as if they'd been expecting exactly this turn of events, the Umbrosians and Phosphorians all now looked terrified, and so did the two Entities.
"CURSES," the Black Entity hissed bitterly to itself in its mind. "IT'S HAPPENING AGAIN!"
The Prime Entity sighed, and nodded its head resignedly. "HERE IT COMES. IT WOULD APPEAR KORIAND'R THAT YOU GOT WHAT YOU ORIGINALLY DESIRED AFTER ALL."
The aura around Wildfire rapidly shrunk in size, and eventually disappeared into Wildfire entirely, revealing him to be miraculously still completely unharmed. Then he opened his eyes, revealing one of them to now be glowing red and the other to be glowing blue. He turned around so that he was facing the assembled armies, his palms now each facing the respective opposite direction from the ones they'd faced before. With a guttural scream, he fired bursts of energy from his hands. A giant burst of red light shot out of his left hand towards the Prime Entity and a similarly massive burst of blue light came rocketing out of his right hand towards the Black Entity. The two blasts completely engulfed the two Entities, who hissed and shrieked in a mixture of shock and pain.
"HOLY SMOKES," Cyborg yelled.
The two Entities cursed mentally as they felt their power weaken and their holds on their respective vessels rapidly fading away.
"DAMN YOU," the Black Entity hissed as it felt its hold on Blackfire's body and mind rapidly dwindle away. "BY THE UNIVERSE, DAMN YOU!"
"YOU GOT YOUR WISH KORIAND'R," the Prime Entity warbled. "BUT KNOW THIS, THE NEXT TIME MY ENEMY AND I DO BATTLE WITH EACH OTHER, IT WILL NOT END IN A DRAW!"
The last lingering strands of the Entities' hold on their respective vessels evaporated, and they had just enough time to unleash a final earsplitting hiss and shriek before they were forcefully expelled from their hosts in the form of serpentine clouds of shadow and light particles that went rocketing straight back through the very vortexes from which they'd arrived.
Mere seconds after the two Entities had thus forcibly exited the battlefield when tendrils of light and dark energy sprouted out of the respective vortexes, wrapped around the entirety of the Umbrosian and Phosphorian armies, and then rapidly retracted into the vortexes, yanking the two armies quite violently away from the battlefield and back towards their respective homes. The Umbrosian and Phosphorian soldiers had just enough to let off a despairing inhuman wail in unison before they all disappeared through the vortexes to their respective homes, which closed immediately after they'd all vanished through them.
With the vortexes closed, all that remained present on the battlefield were the various Thanagarian, Gordanian, and Tamaranean ships, the titans in their distinctive orange T-Ship, Blackfire's giant purple star cruiser, and the three Tamaranean royal siblings.
Wildfire took a deep breath, and then exhaled. He opened his eyes, now back to their natural green color. His golden yellow aura reappeared around him for a brief moment, and then started to turn dim before eventually disappearing altogether. As this happened, he felt the vast dawn-based power that had flooded him not to long ago finally finish departing from his system.
Starfire opened her eyes, looking half asleep and weak. Then she looked in Wildfire's direction. After several minutes of blank staring and waiting for her mind to fully reassert its own strength and presence, her eyes widened in shock and joy upon realizing that she was not hallucinating. Her long lost younger brother, whom she'd spent at least three years believing to be dead and another 2½ hopelessly wondering the whereabouts of, had indeed come to the battlefield and was even now still floating in front of her. The Tamaranean boy eventually noticed, and he chuckled nervously, rubbing his hand across the back of his fiery hair with a sheepish look in his green eyes.
Starfire sniffled, happy tears starting to well up in her eyes. "Wildfire!" She rocketed towards the boy, plowing into him and embracing him in a tight hug. Her brother's eyes widened in shock and he briefly grimaced in discomfort at the sheer tightness of his sister's embrace. Then he noticed his sister's head on his shoulder and heard her struggling to keep herself from crying.
"You're alive," she whimpered. "Ryand'r . . . you've . . . come back. Where . . . where were you . . . brother?"
Wildfire gulped, now feeling guilty, and he hugged his sister back. "It's alright Koriand'r," he stated. "I know its been a long time. I promise I'll explain everything as soon as I get the chance. But for now, I'm back. And for now, that's all that matters."
Starfire sniffled, and then started weeping in a mixture of joy and sadness while she and her brother continued to embrace.
Wildfire noticed that Blackfire was still floating around where she'd been at the time of the Black Entity's departure, clearly with full mental capacity, but looking uncertain as to what to do. In an impulsive act of brotherly love, he lifted his right hand off of Starfire's shoulder and beckoned lightly for Blackfire to come join him and their sister, turning his head to directly face her in the process.
The youngest and oldest siblings of the Tamaranean royal trio stared each other in the eyes. A silent conversation ensued between them.
"Come here," Wildfire indicated through his body language. "Come and join us. I know you want to."
Blackfire directed an uncertain look at her siblings, then grimaced awkwardly, and then hung her head. "No," she indicated. "I can't."
"Sure you can," Wildfire indicated. "Kori and I are right here in front of you. And I'm more than willing to let you hug me alongside her."
"Ryand'r," Blackfire indicated. "I really can't. I want to. I really do. But I can't. I don't even deserve it now. There are things that I've done since you vanished. Terrible things. You'd never forgive me for them if you knew about them."
"I don't care. You're still my sister, and I did not come all this way after all these years to properly reunite with only one of my sisters. I've come to reunite with both of them. Whatever happens to you after this on account of the things you've done while I was away, that can wait. For now, just take advantage of the time you have before then, and join us."
Blackfire hesitated for a couple seconds longer. But then her resolve finally left her, and she flew right over to where her siblings were, embracing them both in a tight hug of her own. As she added her own crying face to Wildfire's other shoulder, the Tamaranean prince closed his eyes and tightened his own embrace around both of his older sisters. He knew that the eldest of his sisters still had a lot to answer for. He also knew that he himself had a lot of explaining to do about his own whereabouts from the last few years. But for now, all that mattered to him was that the universe was safe once more, and that he was finally reunited once more with both of his sisters.
And just like that, another chapter done! I REALLY hope you like this chapter! I personally pretty proud of myself for how this one turned out ^_^. But if this didn't turn out nearly as good for you as it did to me, then don't feel ashamed to let me know (provided you do so in a constructive way as opposed to a 'flaming' way). All that said, again, I hope you enjoyed this chapter and leave a respectable amount of feedback (remember, this new chapter requires an exact minimum of 2 reviews before I allow the next (sufficiently edited) chapter to be posted). Have a nice day everyone!
Coming up Next: With the 'war' over and the Phosphorians and Umbrosians once more contained in their respective homes, the time has come to pass judgment on Blackfire and Cometbolt! What shall the verdict be?