Heyy Guys! Well let me just say first I'm sorry for threatening you guys, but it's juthathat I like to get feedback. If you are a writer then you would understand tht u want to know that u r a good writer. Thts wat I wanted. And to all the fanfictioners who commented on methreatening, you guys were so right. I'm not even gonna argue with you. But also understand my perspective of this to. So this chapter is dedicated to the fanfictioners: EmmaleeJ, panaricanchick, C.E.C, and fictiongirl212. This is dedicated to them because they weren't afraid to say what's in their mind no matter if it was bad. You guys are awesome. But Id also like to dedicate this chapter to fanfictioner Alekismine. She consecutively reviewed (with actual reviews) on every chapter. Alekismine, you are like so awesome. I cannot thank you enough for writing those long reviews. Thank you! Enough of the yapping and let's go on with the story...
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Chloe POV
I woke up to an empty bed. Alek didn't come in yesterday night I wonder why. I stayed in my bed for a few minutes not wanting to get up. After five minutes, I got up and saw a note.
My Dearest Chloe, I am sorry I was not able to stay, but I had to make certain preparations. Im taking you out on the best date of your life. I'll pick you up at noon.
With all my love, Alek
So Alek had been here last night. And that would explain why he wasn't here. I went downstairs not expecting my mom.
"Hey mom! What are you doing here? I thought you would have work," I said.
"Wow someone really does not want my presence," she said.
"Mom you know what I meant."
"Yeah I know. I'm heading to work don't worry. They just told me I didn't need to be there until ten."
"Oh ok," I said.
"So what are your plans for today? You and Alek planing to have another make out session while I'm gone?" she said.
"Mom!" I said blushing.
"Hey don't blame me. I know what it's like. Whenever your parent aren't home you call up the bf and then you makeover until your parents come home. I was a teenager to you know."
"Ewww mom that's disgusting. Now I can't get that image of you making out with someone."
"Well how do you think I feel Chloe? Me imagining my own daughter making out with another guy. Not the prettiest sight to see."
"Haha ok fine you win," I said.
"But seriously what are you doing today?" she asked.
"Well me and Alek are gonna go on a date but he wouldn't tell me where though."
"Oooh secret date. How romantic," she said laughing.
"Mom seriously?" I said.
"Sorry sorry. Ok kiddo I got to go. Enjoy yourself today," she said. She gave me a kiss in the cheek and then left. I looksd at the clock and it read 9:45. I had approximately two hours to get ready for my date. I headed upstairs to take a shower. By the time I got out it was already 10:30. Wow I take really long showers. After struggling at my closet for twenty more minutes, I decide to text the fashion expert.
To: Amy
From: Chloe
Heyy girlie! 911 fashion emergency
Not a second later I got a text back from Amy
To: Chloe
From: Amy
On my way girlie!
After five minutes Amy arrived with a gigantic suitcase. I was gonna ask what it was for but then she just entered and went straight to my room.
"So what's the fashion emergency about?"she asked.
"I have a date with Alek and I don't know what to wear," I said.
"You have a date with Alek?" she said screaming, "Since when were you two going out?" I totally forgot that no one knew about me and Alek. I spent ten minutes telling Any everything that happened and at the end she just started squealing. She have me a big hug and started rummaging through my closet. After what seemed like forever she came out with an outfit.
"That's perfect Amy. Thank you. You're the best friend a girl can have," I said. She brought out my dark skinny jeans with my red tank top and my leather jacket.
"Oh I know I am. Now try it on so I can see," she said. I put on the entire outfit and she later did my makeup and hair. She only put on light makeup and she put my hair into curls. Later, she found black ballet flats and accessorized me with a necklace, a charm bracelet and hoop earrings.
"Ok let me see my creation," she said.
I turned around for her and she said, "Its perfect now. Ok so Alek is coming to pick you up in 15 minutes. I want you to just sit down on the couch and drink some water but not too much that you have to go to the bathroom. Ok good luck." She gave me a good luck hug and left with all her stuff. I followed her instructions and Alek came at noon on the dot. I opened the door and absorbed what he was wearing. He was wearing almost exactly what I was wearing. He was also wearing dark skinny jeans and a tight white shirt with a leather jacket.
"Going through my closet lately?" I asked.
He let out a small chuckle and said, "You look beautiful, my Chloe."
"Your Chloe? I could get used to that," I said.
"Haha, ok enough jokes. Let's go," he said. I took his hand and then froze. That's why he was wearing the leather jacket.
Alek POV
I needed this day to be absolutely perfect. I wanted Chloe to remember this day for the rest of her life. I called everyone to make sure everything was good. I had so many surprises for her today and this was just was one of them. When I arrived at her house I was glad I gave a tip to Amy on what she should wear. I knew for a fact that Chloe was gonna ask for advice from Amy so I just gave her a little hint. But when I do he she looked HOT. Even better than I expected. She placed her hand in mine and just when I was ready to lead her, she stopped. I knew why of course.
"Alek, is that motorcycle yours?" she asked. This was one of my surprises.
"Actually, no. I borrowed it from a friend," I said.
"Ummm Alek is it safe?" she said nervously.
"Chloe, would I let you ride anything unsafe?" I asked.
"Well...,"
"Wow I'm offended. You really think I'd let anything hurt you?" I asked.
"I'm sorry," she said. I reassuringly took her hand. I got on the motorcycle and then she got on with caution. I laughed a little and we were off. I could tell that Chloe was nervous because the faster I went, the stronger her grip around my waist was.
"You know, we should do this more often. I'm liking where your hands are right now," I said.
"Oh just shut up Petrov and keep your eyes on the road," she said with her head buried in my jacket. I kept the speed as low as I could and occasionally I sped up just to feel her grip. When we got there I helped her off the bike and I saw her gaze in awe.
Chloe POV
"Oh mai gosh, Alek. It's so beautiful," I said. It was so perfect. Alek set up a picnic with lanterns and candles and we were in the perfect view of the Golden Bridge.
"Do you like it?" he asked.
"Alek, are you kidding? I love it!"
We sat down on the blanket and then I recognized all my favorite foods.
"Alek, how did you know?" I asked amazed.
"You just have to know the right people to call," he said with a smile. I loved that smile. If only he could do that more than his cocky grin and smirk.
"Ok let's eat," he said. We stuffed ourselves until we couldn't eat anymore. I have to say these foods taste so much better than the ones I've tasted. I wonder where he got them.
"Hey Alek, where'd you get all this food?" I asked.
"I cooked it myself," he said.
"You cook? The C.B can cook?" I said.
"Hey, there are some things you don't know about me," he said.
"Like what?" I asked curiously.
"Well your just going to have to wait and see," he said with a seductive look. I knew this would happen. I got lured and lost in his eyes. The next thing I knew, my lips were on his. It wasn't that rough, heated kind of a kiss. No, this was a soft, gentle kiss. One you could truly appreciate. One where you could feel all the love. Every kiss Alek and I ever shared always ended up heated. But this was so calm. I really liked it. Then, all to soon, Alek broke the kiss.
"I'm sorry, love. But I have a couple of surprises left up my sleeve," he said.
"Like what?" I asked. Then, I heard a booming noise. There were fireworks over the Golden Bridge. They were so colorful and bright. I loved looking at them. When the firework show was about to end, there was one more that popped up. It said,
I LOVE YOU CHLOE KING
- Alek
All of a sudden, I felt Alek wrap his arms around me.
"It's true, you know. I do love you," he said softly.
"Alek, you did all this?" I said.
"Yes, my Chloe. And there's still one more thing," he said.
"Really, what is it?" I asked.
"Get in the car and we'll go," he said.
Alek POV
I was so excited. I knew she was just going to love the surprise. I led her back to the motorcycle, when my phone started ringing. I looked at the caller ID and saw that it was her. I made the excuse that I needed to go to the bathroom. I could not risk Chloe hearing this conversation. I went as far as I could then called her back. The phone rang three times before she picked up.
"Hello?" she said sweetly.
"Mimi, why'd you call me before," I said.
"Oh Alek, it's nice to hear from you," she said.
"Cut the crap, Mimi. Why did you call me?" I said.
"Wow someone's in a bad mood," she said.
"Mimi, tell me now," I growled.
"Fine, just trying to be nice. Apparently you want that other side."
"Mimi, just tell me. I don't care if you say it nicely or mean. I just want to know!" I said. I was so ready to throw the phone and hunt Mimi down.
"Fine, remember our little deal? Well time's running out. You either break up with her or I kill Brian. And no, I won't take your word that you broke up with her. I want to hear you break up with her, and her crying pain. I want to hear both of you suffer," she said harshly.
"You're so evil, Mimi," I said.
"Now Alek, compliments won't save you or Chloe now," she said laughing.
"But remember you have until midnight, a second later, I kiss Brian and he's dead," she said.
"I need more time," I said.
"No. I don't want to keep stalling this. You have until midnight. Remember that, Alek. And I want to hear it. Good luck! Bye," she said. Then she hung up on me. I couldn't do it. I just couldn't. I promised her the best date ever, and I'm gonna have to break her heart. What was I gonna do? I made the decision in my head and walked back to the car.
I woke up to an empty bed. Alek didn't come in yesterday night I wonder why. I stayed in my bed for a few minutes not wanting to get up. After five minutes, I got up and saw a note.
My Dearest Chloe, I am sorry I was not able to stay, but I had to make certain preparations. Im taking you out on the best date of your life. I'll pick you up at noon.
With all my love, Alek
So Alek had been here last night. And that would explain why he wasn't here. I went downstairs not expecting my mom.
"Hey mom! What are you doing here? I thought you would have work," I said.
"Wow someone really does not want my presence," she said.
"Mom you know what I meant."
"Yeah I know. I'm heading to work don't worry. They just told me I didn't need to be there until ten."
"Oh ok," I said.
"So what are your plans for today? You and Alek planing to have another make out session while I'm gone?" she said.
"Mom!" I said blushing.
"Hey don't blame me. I know what it's like. Whenever your parent aren't home you call up the bf and then you makeover until your parents come home. I was a teenager to you know."
"Ewww mom that's disgusting. Now I can't get that image of you making out with someone."
"Well how do you think I feel Chloe? Me imagining my own daughter making out with another guy. Not the prettiest sight to see."
"Haha ok fine you win," I said.
"But seriously what are you doing today?" she asked.
"Well me and Alek are gonna go on a date but he wouldn't tell me where though."
"Oooh secret date. How romantic," she said laughing.
"Mom seriously?" I said.
"Sorry sorry. Ok kiddo I got to go. Enjoy yourself today," she said. She gave me a kiss in the cheek and then left. I looksd at the clock and it read 9:45. I had approximately two hours to get ready for my date. I headed upstairs to take a shower. By the time I got out it was already 10:30. Wow I take really long showers. After struggling at my closet for twenty more minutes, I decide to text the fashion expert.
To: Amy
From: Chloe
Heyy girlie! 911 fashion emergency
Not a second later I got a text back from Amy
To: Chloe
From: Amy
On my way girlie!
After five minutes Amy arrived with a gigantic suitcase. I was gonna ask what it was for but then she just entered and went straight to my room.
"So what's the fashion emergency about?"she asked.
"I have a date with Alek and I don't know what to wear," I said.
"You have a date with Alek?" she said screaming, "Since when were you two going out?" I totally forgot that no one knew about me and Alek. I spent ten minutes telling Any everything that happened and at the end she just started squealing. She have me a big hug and started rummaging through my closet. After what seemed like forever she came out with an outfit.
"That's perfect Amy. Thank you. You're the best friend a girl can have," I said. She brought out my dark skinny jeans with my red tank top and my leather jacket.
"Oh I know I am. Now try it on so I can see," she said. I put on the entire outfit and she later did my makeup and hair. She only put on light makeup and she put my hair into curls. Later, she found black ballet flats and accessorized me with a necklace, a charm bracelet and hoop earrings.
"Ok let me see my creation," she said.
I turned around for her and she said, "Its perfect now. Ok so Alek is coming to pick you up in 15 minutes. I want you to just sit down on the couch and drink some water but not too much that you have to go to the bathroom. Ok good luck." She gave me a good luck hug and left with all her stuff. I followed her instructions and Alek came at noon on the dot. I opened the door and absorbed what he was wearing. He was wearing almost exactly what I was wearing. He was also wearing dark skinny jeans and a tight white shirt with a leather jacket.
"Going through my closet lately?" I asked.
He let out a small chuckle and said, "You look beautiful, my Chloe."
"Your Chloe? I could get used to that," I said.
"Haha, ok enough jokes. Let's go," he said. I took his hand and then froze. That's why he was wearing the leather jacket.
Alek POV
I needed this day to be absolutely perfect. I wanted Chloe to remember this day for the rest of her life. I called everyone to make sure everything was good. I had so many surprises for her today and this was just was one of them. When I arrived at her house I was glad I gave a tip to Amy on what she should wear. I knew for a fact that Chloe was gonna ask for advice from Amy so I just gave her a little hint. But when I do he she looked HOT. Even better than I expected. She placed her hand in mine and just when I was ready to lead her, she stopped. I knew why of course.
"Alek, is that motorcycle yours?" she asked. This was one of my surprises.
"Actually, no. I borrowed it from a friend," I said.
"Ummm Alek is it safe?" she said nervously.
"Chloe, would I let you ride anything unsafe?" I asked.
"Well...,"
"Wow I'm offended. You really think I'd let anything hurt you?" I asked.
"I'm sorry," she said. I reassuringly took her hand. I got on the motorcycle and then she got on with caution. I laughed a little and we were off. I could tell that Chloe was nervous because the faster I went, the stronger her grip around my waist was.
"You know, we should do this more often. I'm liking where your hands are right now," I said.
"Oh just shut up Petrov and keep your eyes on the road," she said with her head buried in my jacket. I kept the speed as low as I could and occasionally I sped up just to feel her grip. When we got there I helped her off the bike and I saw her gaze in awe.
Chloe POV
"Oh mai gosh, Alek. It's so beautiful," I said. It was so perfect. Alek set up a picnic with lanterns and candles and we were in the perfect view of the Golden Bridge.
"Do you like it?" he asked.
"Alek, are you kidding? I love it!"
We sat down on the blanket and then I recognized all my favorite foods.
"Alek, how did you know?" I asked amazed.
"You just have to know the right people to call," he said with a smile. I loved that smile. If only he could do that more than his cocky grin and smirk.
"Ok let's eat," he said. We stuffed ourselves until we couldn't eat anymore. I have to say these foods taste so much better than the ones I've tasted. I wonder where he got them.
"Hey Alek, where'd you get all this food?" I asked.
"I cooked it myself," he said.
"You cook? The C.B can cook?" I said.
"Hey, there are some things you don't know about me," he said.
"Like what?" I asked curiously.
"Well your just going to have to wait and see," he said with a seductive look. I knew this would happen. I got lured and lost in his eyes. The next thing I knew, my lips were on his. It wasn't that rough, heated kind of a kiss. No, this was a soft, gentle kiss. One you could truly appreciate. One where you could feel all the love. Every kiss Alek and I ever shared always ended up heated. But this was so calm. I really liked it. Then, all to soon, Alek broke the kiss.
"I'm sorry, love. But I have a couple of surprises left up my sleeve," he said.
"Like what?" I asked. Then, I heard a booming noise. There were fireworks over the Golden Bridge. They were so colorful and bright. I loved looking at them. When the firework show was about to end, there was one more that popped up. It said,
I LOVE YOU CHLOE KING
- Alek
All of a sudden, I felt Alek wrap his arms around me.
"It's true, you know. I do love you," he said softly.
"Alek, you did all this?" I said.
"Yes, my Chloe. And there's still one more thing," he said.
"Really, what is it?" I asked.
"Get in the car and we'll go," he said.
Alek POV
I was so excited. I knew she was just going to love the surprise. I led her back to the motorcycle, when my phone started ringing. I looked at the caller ID and saw that it was her. I made the excuse that I needed to go to the bathroom. I could not risk Chloe hearing this conversation. I went as far as I could then called her back. The phone rang three times before she picked up.
"Hello?" she said sweetly.
"Mimi, why'd you call me before," I said.
"Oh Alek, it's nice to hear from you," she said.
"Cut the crap, Mimi. Why did you call me?" I said.
"Wow someone's in a bad mood," she said.
"Mimi, tell me now," I growled.
"Fine, just trying to be nice. Apparently you want that other side."
"Mimi, just tell me. I don't care if you say it nicely or mean. I just want to know!" I said. I was so ready to throw the phone and hunt Mimi down.
"Fine, remember our little deal? Well time's running out. You either break up with her or I kill Brian. And no, I won't take your word that you broke up with her. I want to hear you break up with her, and her crying pain. I want to hear both of you suffer," she said harshly.
"You're so evil, Mimi," I said.
"Now Alek, compliments won't save you or Chloe now," she said laughing.
"But remember you have until midnight, a second later, I kiss Brian and he's dead," she said.
"I need more time," I said.
"No. I don't want to keep stalling this. You have until midnight. Remember that, Alek. And I want to hear it. Good luck! Bye," she said. Then she hung up on me. I couldn't do it. I just couldn't. I promised her the best date ever, and I'm gonna have to break her heart. What was I gonna do? I made the decision in my head and walked back to the car.
Omigosh! I'm so evil leaving you guys on another cliffhanger. I rly am sry for not updating sooner. I'll try my best. Love ya guys! And remember...
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